Reviews by mybigteddybearemmett
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311074
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

Great job! I love the story so far.

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Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment

great job I imagine it would be hard to write scenes like that.

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Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

Great job!

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Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

Yay, great job! I love the website, it's my favorite to read fanfic on.

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Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Life

Thanks for posting we had a bad storm and I was in the middle of reviewing when the power went out. Great job!

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Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

Great job!

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Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

O Felix. Wonder whats gonna happen next. Great job!

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Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

Great job!

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Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Great job! Happy anniversary Amanda, my grandparents just celebrated their 60th wedding anniversary hoping you and your husband as much happiness as them.

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Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple

Great job!

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Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey

Hmm to get into the mind of Aro is interesting. Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.. It is a bit wierd to write him.. Both Mandy and I have been asked by our families if we have a personality disorder.  Our husbands just say.  "Oh.. your writing THAT again.. "  hahahaha.. Father Aro tends to take over. 

Thanks again for the review.. We love it.

 

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Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

Great job!

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

Hmm wonder what will happen. Maybe he'll meet Charlie. Great job!

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Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning

Great job!

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Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Seek the First

Great job!

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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

Great job, thank you for writing.

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Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Great job thanks for writing.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624932
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Yay! I love it so much. I originally read it on ff then took a 6 month hiatus and found it was pulled. I was so happy that you put it here on twcs. Great job!

Summary: Past Featured Story

AH/AU, OOC Bella is a famous actress and Edward is a host of a late night talk show. What do they whisper to each other when they greet each other on stage?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126443 Read Count: 90989
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2012
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Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great job! I love it.

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Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great job!

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Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great job!

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Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great job! I really love the story.

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Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great job!



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Great job, thank you for writing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116430
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great job! I love the story so far.

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Go Bella. Great job!

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Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow! Shes pregnant. Great job!

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Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great job!

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Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great job!

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Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oo can't wait for more. Great job!

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Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Great job!

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Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

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Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Great job!

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Great job, thank you for writing.

Summary:

After a bad break-up, Rose and Alice take Bella out to find her someone to have a little “fun” with so they head to La Push, a local college hangout, where she meets a certain 17 year-old looking guy with green eyes and sex hair. OOC. First chapter written for the NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-Shot Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38182 Read Count: 23676
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2010
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Perfect Gift

Great job! I love it so far.

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Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Too Many Opinions

Great job!

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Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue: Jailbait’s Double Standard

Great job!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373182
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath

I love it so far. Great job!

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Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Banished

Great job!

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Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War

Great job!

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Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: A Snake Hiding in the Garden

Great job!

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Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Christmas Eve Surprises

Yay, she gets to see her mother and brother. Great job!

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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Manipulation and Punishment

Great job!

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Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown

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Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: A Critical Choice

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Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Birth of Two Heirs

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Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Balancing Duties

Great job!

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Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

Great job!

Summary: Past Featured Story

whacw

What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43565
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

Great job! I loved the story.

Friends in Love by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is desperate to move out of his apartment with Alice and lands in the only campus housing available, a co-ed apartment with Bella Swan. Both have feelings for the other but are unable to voice them and find themselves in separate relationships. As the friendship grows in spite of deeper feelings trouble brews and Edward finds himself being pushed to his limits while Bella deals with some of her issues. So what can you do when you love your friend...read to find out! Be warned that this story deals with the subject rape and abuse.

 

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Banner by IllicitWriter

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119515 Read Count: 36671
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2011
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Center of Attention

Great job! I love it so far.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella, the beautiful, bi-racial, Director of her church's Afterschool Program, has been faithful to her commitment to remain a virgin until she is married. Tallahassee Police Officer, Edward Cullen's charm and sex appeal severely challenges her resolve. AU/AH Rated NC-17 Adult Content

Trust, Loyalty, Commitment Story Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 242523 Read Count: 16527
[Report This] Published: 07 Apr 2010 Updated: 09 Dec 2011
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: In The Face of The Unexpected

Great job! I love it.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  Glad you're sitll enjoying.

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: A Time For Everything

Great job! I see this James being bad and to be viciously dumped.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  James is history, but not in a vicious way. ;)

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Imagined Secrets and Things Left Unsaid

Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Ain't Understanding Mellow

Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks, lady!

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Conquering The Demons

Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Crisis Aftermath

Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Can't Be Without You, Baby

Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 

B

xoxo

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: You and Me

Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Action In The Affirmative

Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Things Happen For A Reason

Great job!

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Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: To Err Is Human To Forgive Divine

Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks, bb!

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Passion and Synchronicity

Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks, bb!

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Wild Is The Wind, Part 1

Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks, bb!

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Wild Is The Wind, Part 2

Great job, thank you for writing. I hope the story has changed peoples views of couples of different races. I have always trouble with discrimination when i date outside my race.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I certainly hope it gives some people pause for thought.  I think people should be allowed to love who they want.

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: From The Inside Out

Great job, thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks for continuing to read, review and enjoy.

Bev

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

golf

 

Taking place at the 1956 US Open, 20 year-old amateur golfer Isabella Swan becomes the first women to ever compete at a professional golf event.  With local caddie Edward Cullen at her side as she makes her attempt at history, she will grow more in the span of this weekend then she has in her entire life as she plays against the best players in the world, battling gender roles and the boys club that is this “gentlemen’s game.”  Will she be able to pull out an against the odds victory, or will the prize she wins be even more valuable.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34179 Read Count: 3213
[Report This] Published: 14 Apr 2010 Updated: 22 Oct 2010
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Destiny in the Making

Great job!

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Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: A Haven in the Storm

Great job! I love it.

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue: A Life Well Played

Great job, thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you liked it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

A year ago, Isabella Swan was new at school and instantly gained acceptance. Unfortunately, a certain bronze haired new kid isn't so lucky. Hidden friendships slowly build and blossom into more. Will it be social suicide? Rated M for language, will eventually go up.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90319 Read Count: 21077
[Report This] Published: 30 Apr 2010 Updated: 08 Nov 2012
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great job!

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Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Great job!

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great job!

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297704
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Best birthday ever

I never fully understood that expression, but no, I'm not 'shitting' you. Rhank you so much for writing, I love the story.

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Scared of something beautiful

Great job, thanks for writing.

Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25372
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 May 2016
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Plan A

Oh I love it. You should totally continue this. It's pretty original. Great job!



Author's Response:

YAY!!! I'm so glad your reading Edroar. I smiled when I saw your name. *throws confetti* PARTY!!! Your review really made my day. I wasn't kidding when I said Edroar is a tyrant. I revised the 1st chapter 14 times! It's probably totally different from when you read it now...lol.  I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to write this story. Thanks for the support. It really means so much. :-)

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - What's in a Name?

Squeal! An update. Great job! I'm looking forward to more Edroar.

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - I Know You Are But What Am I ?

Loved the powderpuff reference in there. Glad you didn't made Jessica a mindless person instead of making her a vendictive bitch like others do. Great job!



Author's Response:

 

Thanks so much for reading and for the review. They are like delicious little pieces of heaven to me. I'm so glad you're enjoying my kooky little tale!!! Sorry I’ve been so horrible lately with my replies. It seems I’ve developed some sort of odd OCD habit that I can’t reply until I finish writing the next chapter and then I’m rushing to reply so I can post the chapter so I’ll stop tweaking it like the tweak h00r I am….lol. It’s madness really. Just know, I SQUEE over your review and value it dearly.  I just finished chapter 4 and can't wait to see what you think of it. I'm a spazzy poster. It's nerve wracking for me but I LOVE IT...lol. Thanks again for the support it really means so much. :-)

 

xoxo

Kelly

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 All that Jazz

And the craziness ensues. I love it, even without Edroar.Great job!



Author's Response:

I always squee when I get your review. I'm so glad you liked it.  I’ve FINALLY finished Edroar chapter five. Sheesh…I know it took me forever. Let’s just say a certain Cullen was being a tad difficult… and it may not be who you suspect. I just gave the chapter to my beta and as soon as she’s finished with it I’ll post. YAY! I can’t wait. I’m so excited. Anyway, I just wanted to pop in to say thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my crazy little tale. Believe me I know reviews are never given lightly and they really mean so much to me. I hope you can forgive that it takes me so freaking looooong to reply. I have some strange OCD type affliction that I can’t seem to reply until I’ve finished the next chapter. What the hell is up with that? Perhaps I need to increase the meds…lol. Thanks again for taking the time to share your thoughts with me. Seriously, I can’t express how valuable a part of the writing process that truly is. I can’t wait to hear what you think of chapter 5. Gah! I always eagerly await the reaction and always fear the worst. Yes, I have some anxiety issues. It’s not pretty I tell ya. I’m SO Edroar Angela…sigh. If only I were as cool as Bella Swan.

 

P.S Jazz is thrilled with all the lovin he got from chapter 4. He said to make sure I throw some Darlins your way. Edroar of course is quite unhappy about sharing his readers with that southern charmer. He's just so darn possessive.

 

xoxo

Kelly

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Who Does That?

Hmm I wonder what was in that bottle. This not knowing is going to kill me. Great job! Loved the charades part.



Author's Response:

I FINALLY finished chapter 6. HURRAH! I can’t wait for you to read it. I just gave it to happymess to beta. I’m dying to hear what you think. This story is so fun to write and the fact that you took the time out of your day to let me know you’re having fun reading it means so much... YOU ROCK!!! :-) 

Xoxo
Kelly

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Hells Bells

Great job, thanks for writing.

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Great job! I love it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogpot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! Included this week are teasers for the next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco.

Also, today is the last day to vote in The Hidden Star Awards! Even if you decide not to vote for Parachute (Best Canon Category). stop by and support your favorite authors/stories that might be up for awards! Link is on my profile and up on the Blog!

XoXo

Shel


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"Good afternoon, Mr. Cullen," a beautiful brunette with ice blue eyes simpered, as she stood from her seat behind a large desk. "I was told you wouldn't be in the office for a few weeks." 

Bella quirked an eyebrow at the girl's blatant flirtatiousness. She looked over at Edward and noticed that his posture immediately straightened and his voice took on a cooler tone.

"Gianna," he nodded to the woman. "I'm only stopping by to grab a few things and to show my family around a little bit."
Bella's eyes cut to his face, surprised to have herself included in that statement. He smiled gently at her before leading her and Jack towards the large corner office.

"Family?" Gianna asked, confused. She didn't spare Bella a second glance, but her jaw dropped as soon as she got a good look at Jack. "Oh my God," she whispered and sat down quickly. As soon as Edward's door closed behind them, she picked up her phone and dialed.

"Jane? You are not going to believe who just walked in here!"    

 

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco, is looking to be up Wednesday at this point. I though it'd be up sooner, but I got sidetracked, lol.

Listen, I love you guys, which is why I take the time to reply to everyone who reviews and post the teasers and pics to the Blog. It's why I do silly little things, like posting polls and questions via Facebook and Twitter. I want you guys to feel like you are a part of the story. I hope I'm succeeding!

<3 Shel

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Bella laughed brightly during their back and forth banter, but noticed Emmett's stiff posture out of the corner of her eye. She bit her lip and decided that there was no time like the present to find out just what his problem was. She looked up into Edward's face and smiled.

"Do you think you could go check on Jack, to make sure he remembers his helmet and pads? He has a tendency to forget things when he gets excited."

Edward nodded and grinned before turning and heading up the stairs. When he was out of sight, she whirled to face Emmett and put her hands on her hips.

"What is your problem?"

"I don't know what you're talking about," he replied in a voice as blank as his face. She narrowed her eyes and took a step forward, so she wouldn't have to raise her voice.

"Yes, yes you do. I want to know what problem you have with me, that makes you feel the need to glower at the back of my head whenever you don't think I'm looking. Pretty soon Edward or Jack are going to notice, too, and I'll be damned if I let that happen. Both of them have already been hurt too much without adding you to the pile."

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Great job!



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I've been driving myself crazy trying to get my O/S for the All Hallow's Eve contest finished, so I wouldn't get your hopes up for an early posting this week, sorry! See you guys on Friday!

<3 Shel


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Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.    

 

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Great job, and thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like!

Just a silly little note, I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is a ton of fun and very cool. Check it out if you get the chance! 

 <3 Shel

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Esme's eyes turned hard and her lips formed a frown.

"Well, then, I guess there's nothing left to say, is there?" She said in a cold voice.

"Esme, please. I'm not trying to hurt you," Bella replied softly. She had expected this reaction, but it still stung.

"It's a little too late for that now, Bella." Esme stood from her spot behind her desk and silently left the room.

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Great job, thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!

I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.

=)

Shel

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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.

She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.

Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.

"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Great job, thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog! (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

A huge thank you to everyone who sent their birthday wishes and/or nominated Jack & Parachute in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump up and nom an OC that you love, do eeet!


XoXo

Shel

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She watched her son carefully as he made his way downstairs, with Alice by his side. Something wasn't right. Sure, he was smiling and acting jovial, but there was something that was just off. Their gazes met and her worry increased exponentially. Jack's eyes were dull and missing his usual spark. 

She pulled him quietly to the side and whispered in his ear.

"What's wrong, baby?"

He smiled genuinely at her and shook his head.

"Nothing, Mom. I'm just a little nervous."

She narrowed her eyes and nodded, although she wasn't convinced that he was telling the truth, but starting an argument right now wasn't really an option at the moment.

Taking the Fork by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

One tragic night, the world changes for Edward and Bella Cullen.  The life they've struggle to build over the last decade is threatened and Edward is left with nothing but his memories as he tries to will his love back to him.  This couple has handled a decade of lifes bumps, but can they survive a fork in the road?

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13987 Read Count: 1723
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jan 2011
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Fork in the Road

Great job!



Author's Response:

thanks for the love!

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: It's What You Beget

Great job, thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review, I love seeing your name pop up in my email inbox letting me know that you've read my latest!

Summary:

FAGE entry written for afragilelittlehuman. Alice opens a letter that will change her life. Prompt: couple tries to avoid their old flames at their twentieth high school reunion.

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I pursed my lips, tapping the pen against the table. Of course it would ask me whether or not I had a husband and kids. As if the fact that I had neither wasn't painfully apparent enough. I sat up straighter, grinding the pen hard against the page as I wrote the word 'SINGLE' in capital letters, filling up the entire space.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward, Jasper/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12895 Read Count: 792
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Jul 2010
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Liberation

Great job! I'm lovin Jasper.

Blind Faith by rmcrms5 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

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Karsyn McKenna grew up, sheltered and loved, in a small Texas town.  Chase Carter is the local rancher who has secretly loved her forever.  Gabriel Thompson is the stranger who comes to town with secrets of his own.  Caught in a web of deception and lies that lead to murder, she must choose between the man she knows or the one who holds her heart.  Will blind faith be her salvation or her destruction?


Categories: Original Fiction, Drama, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2357 Read Count: 683
[Report This] Published: 15 Jul 2010 Updated: 17 Jul 2010
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great job! I think i love Chase already, swoon.



Author's Response:

Thanks. 

Summary:

Formerly the fat kids at camp, Bella & Edward return having shed the extra weigh & are ready for what the summer holds. Will the pressure of new-found popularity be too much for them to take, or will love win out? Written for Camp Twilight Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Young Adult
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8684 Read Count: 432
[Report This] Published: 30 Aug 2010 Updated: 30 Aug 2010
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great job! Would love another chapter for the second half of the summer.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you want the rest of the summer...I had fun with writing a formerly chubby BxE.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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28 year old English teacher, Bella Swan is dreading being dragged to her 10 year reunion with Alice; until a certain social networking site offers her a very welcome blast from the past... BxE, AH. NC-17 for lemons in later chapters.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126861 Read Count: 61889
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2010 Updated: 13 Aug 2011
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Great job, thanks for writing.

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great job, thanks for writing.

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great job!

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great job!

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great job!

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great job!

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great job!

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great job, thank you for writing.

Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great job, thanks for writing.