Reviews by bjelaja
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373217
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: bjelaja Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown

Thanks for the wonderful chapter. For names:

female: Mary or Maria (because Bella's middle name is Marie, a reminder of her spanish origin would be Maria),  Anna or Anne (just because I love the name)

male: Thomas (because Tommy would be a reminder of Tony/Anthony), Oliver (like Oliver Cromwell), Arthur (reminder of the Great King), Robin (hey who doesn't like Robin Hood)

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40834
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: bjelaja Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: On the floor

Yeeeh, Tanya is a real bitch. And I'm so sorry that the E&B encounter wasn't a real one because Bella didn't see him. But I can't wait for the next chapter. Your writing is really good.

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: bjelaja Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You

Like it very much. Thanks for a great chapter. And your Rose and Tanya are really bitches extraordinaire.



Author's Response:

lol! They are...and persistent too. Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: bjelaja Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Physical

Daddy C and Mommy E are just awesome, but I think from this photos won't come anything nice...

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: bjelaja Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth

That was really hot, I want more!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76145
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: bjelaja Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great chapter again. love it. And Tanya is a bitch (once again). Is she really gone for good?

Reviewer: bjelaja Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Hi, thanks for the wonderful chapter. Do you put the banner online?



Author's Response:

Hey! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I just posted it right now. It was the first time I had ever tried to post a picture on this site, so I was a little confused. But I got it. (:
Once again thanks for taking the time in doing a banner!

-tench

Reviewer: bjelaja Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Thanks, it's so great to get another chapter. And I think it's understandable that she thinks that he is stalking her - it's a little creepy to show up at her classes.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 184002
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: bjelaja Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The harem

Hi, I just found your story yesterday and I like it very much. Please write on.



Author's Response:

I already told one of the reviewers that I need only one or two reviews per chapter to keep me going, so your wish will be granted.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.

Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?

Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.

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 Chocolate Brown & Leather Whips teaser trailer by Emily Bowden

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBsINM0Nu3Q

 

 Teaser Trailer #2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20q3OG5zRwQ


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318670 Read Count: 86080
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Jun 2012
Reviewer: bjelaja Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Sixteen- Russian Roulette

He is really pushing himself, but I do not see a balance in this relationship as long as he can't trust her to not really hurt him, especially mentally.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When a patient goes missing, what's a vampiric doctor to do?  Consult the celebrated detective Sherlock Holmes of course.  Story is set in the 1890s, pre-Edward.

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Categories: Sherlock Holmes (Movie), Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Crossover
Characters: Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Sherlock Holmes/Other Character
Genre: Mystery
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16060 Read Count: 310
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2010
Reviewer: bjelaja Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it, can't wait that the two great minds meet.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I couldn't imagine two more evenly matched (intellect-wise) companions than Holmes and Carlisle.  

Reviewer: bjelaja Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Holmes suspects something already, doesn't he. The nuts, the church...



Author's Response:

Oh yes, as you've discovered, Holmes is attuned to anything out of the ordinary, and Carlisle definitely fits in that category.

Reviewer: bjelaja Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I like the insight in Charlise's head and behaviour. Thanks.



Author's Response:

You're more than welcome.  I like writing Carlisle's POV.

Reviewer: bjelaja Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I really would have liked to get to know more about Holmes' investigation for the case but I see that the story is not about the "Case of the Missing Widow" but about Holmes finding out about Charlise. And I really liked his reaction and I really loved this story. You should have so much more reviews!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your reviews, and your kind words.  Since I kept the story limited to Carlisle and Watson's POVs, I couldn't include as much of Holmes' investigative processes as I would have liked.  I have a couple more Holmes/Carlisle centric stories posted at fan fiction dot net that are a bit more investigative.  I'm thinking of posting them here as well, but first I have this plot idea for a Christmas story...

Summary: Past Featured Story

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New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 131145
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: bjelaja Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Mr. Silk Pants a.k.a. Mr. Big Stuff

´Thank you so much, I just found this story and love it so much. Assholeward is great, ha! By the way it should be "Irina Denalova", -ivich is a masculine ending.



Author's Response:

Hi bjelaja!

Glad you are enjoying the story. I am so irritated with myself that I didn't look into the whole name thing. I usually check so many things out...and I'm a language teacher, so those kinds of linguistic errors really irritate me. So if Irina Denali is Russian and her father is named Boris. How would the whole name thing work? Would he be Denalivich and she would be Denalova? Or how would that work? I wanted to screw with the name "Denali" but I wanted to make it Russian. irina is also going to have a Russian accent next chapter. I hope that doesn't offend...

Anyway, hope to hear from you. I want to correct the error as quickly as possible and I'll put a not about it in my next chapter.

Thanks for the review. Glad you are enjoying. Thank you for helping me to fix this up.

-bannerday

Reviewer: bjelaja Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: From Bad to Unimaginably Worse

Hi,

someone has done her russian names homework! Sorry I didn't see your answer to my review sooner to help you with it.

Thanks for the chapter. And I love the chink in his asshole-armor - the dysfunction - haha.



Author's Response:

Hi bjelaja!

Yep, I did my Russian names homework. I learned all about masculine/feminine endings on patronymics and surnames. It was interesting. Again, thanks for pointing it out to me.

Glad you got a laugh out of Ed and his ED. LOL I couldn't resist. I had to go there. ;)

Thanks for the review. Hope you like chapter 6. It's posted.

-bannerday

Reviewer: bjelaja Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Aide-de-Camp Black

Hi,

you write a really nice Jake - I wouldn't mind to have him as big brother.

E is still an asshole and magic johnson??? really???