Reviews by JaspersMum
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123485
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: JaspersMum Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Who has imprinted on Bella? It's not Jacob or Sam as they were in the room with her, so is it Paul, Seth, Embry, Quil, ... ?

 

What a cliffy! Looking forward to the next chapter



Author's Response:

Very good! So many people just assumed it was Jacob without thinking thru the fact he's been in the room the whole night.  Now who could it be?

Breathe Again by ysar Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary: Past Featured Story

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

A BELLIE AWARDS NOMINEE!

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories that tell of Bella and Jacob during Edward's absence, Bella's start at college, and the Cullens' eventual return.


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards | Best Jacob Point of View in the Twilight Twins Awards


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9, Jacob Black Wins the Girl
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 163880 Read Count: 35938
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 12 Sep 2010
Reviewer: JaspersMum Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Perceptions: Jacob's POV

Nice idea using two pov for each chapter. I wasn't sure if it'd get too repetitive after a chapter or two, but you've managed to keep it fresh and interesting to read.

Reviewer: JaspersMum Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Distractions: Jacob's POV

Just re-found this story (how did I manage to lose it?) and am really enjoying it.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

 

(I found it via the 108.9 category)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: JaspersMum Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Cliffhanger ending!

Looking forward to the next twist.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: JaspersMum Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Evil Emmett... that's something you don't see often (or maybe I'm looking in the wrong places).

I'd love to read more.

 

Good luck with your original fiction - when's the publish date?



Author's Response:

Nope.  There are only 4 evil Emmett stories I've found anywhere and they're not even dark.  Everyone spends too much time making him out to be harmless that it was time to show what he's really made of.  By the way, I freaking love Emmett (not the idiot versions).

The new book should be out the end of Oct or first of Nov.