Reviews by midstormynight
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: midstormynight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Life

A captivating first chapter! I'm already hooked. I love the co-dependant Renee buying into big bad controlling Phil's concerns. I swear, I just want to shake that woman. Poor Bella, her independence and happiness already being thrown away before the marriage. I shudder to think what will happen when Phil is legally tied to these women.

Something I really love is the way you're writing Bella. She feels like a real teenager, not a cliche carbon copy. All your characters have unique voices that are utterly fascinating. I can't wait to read what happens next.

Open Heart by starfish422 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

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Slash: Most of the tenants in Jasper's building were seniors who'd lived there for decades. Dr. Cullen was the exception; that alone was enough to pique Jasper's interest. The fact that Dr. Cullen was dead sexy didn't hurt, either. Sexuality.

Written for SubtlePen in the Winter 2009/2010 cycle of the Twilight Gift Exchange.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23171 Read Count: 524
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2010 Updated: 02 Mar 2010
Reviewer: midstormynight Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Open Heart

I adore this story. It's so beautifully written and utterly engaging. This is one of my favorite Jaspers. I already reviewed it over on the the twilight gift exchange but I couldn't resist reviewing it here as well. More people need to read this!!