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I love to read all the different stories.
After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!
AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297715
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Purple Nurple
I like hearing from both of them. Bella is going to freak out Edward had better cover his balls. LOL
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Mrs. Cullen
It is going to be a fun ride home. I cant wait for more.
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Road trip
I like his deal he is just not going to let her go. I love the you were to stay on your side I did no you probley pulled me on to your side. LOL. I cant wait for more and Charlies reaction should be priceless.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm still working on the reaction though ;)
Thank you for your review!
xx
Gelix
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Husband and Wife
I loved this chapter and the rules. I cant wait till Bella wants her first kiss to remember.
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Wedding
I loved Esme talk about sex that was funny. I felt for Bella about not having a memorie of her wedding or her dad to walk her down the ilse. It is amazing how patent Edward is with her. cant wait for more
Author's Response:
He's Edward and he's always patient! ;)
Thank you for your review,
xx
Gelix
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Breakdown
My heart is breaking for her and for Edward to. I am glad she is relieing on him. I dont know if I will be able to handle waiting till next Wensday boo hoo LOL. Great story
Author's Response:
We'll see if I am able to write the next chapter in time for Sunday, otherwise you will have to wait until Wednesday. Sorry ^^
xx
Gelix
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Time goes by
For one thing Thank you so much for your update I was planing on it for Wensday and so happy that you updated today Thank you. Two I try to review each chapter I think you should at least know I read it and either liked it or not there have been times that I have not been able to review either because taking care of baby or there has been a couple of time the site has not let me. I have been in love with this story and cant wait for more I would say if you are going to update once a week I would like Sundays.
“I’m not afraid of you.”
“Well, maybe you’re not afraid of me, but I’m sure you’ve thought about me naked, huh?” he asked, and waggled his eyebrows.
“Am I that transparent? I want you, I need you, oh baby, oh baby,”
10 things I hate about you ( one of my favorite movies)
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Goodbye
OMG how drumatic of an ending. I am not sure about the quote I know when I fiind out what it is I am going to hit myself because it will be so obvious. Loved the go fish strip LOL. I cant wait for more
Author's Response:
The quote isn't so obvious in this chapter because it fitted so well, so there isn't anyone so far who have gotten it ;)
Thank you!
xx
Gelix
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Past
Does it count to talk the quote from dirty danceing Nobody puts baby in the corner. lol The kiss what hot I would be willing to bet she wants alot more of them.
Author's Response:
No, sorry. I was looking for another quote.
I'm glad you liked the kiss :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Birthday
The puppy sounds so cute. I love that he is showing her how much he cares about her but he needs to watch out not to over do it by smothering her. I like all the kissing that is being done things are heating up. There friends will freak out if they find out they have not had sex yet. update as soon as you can but life must go on will be waiting Thanks.
Author's Response:
Thank you! (there is a picture of the dog on the goodies-side for the story if you want to see it!)
I will update on Sunday (I really hope!) :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Unknown
That was an interesting first intamint time . were in the hell is he going????
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Where would the fun be in me telling you that, huh? ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Leaving on a jet plane
I get so into reading your story I forget to pay atention to the quote from a movie. This would be to simple for it to be from Eclipse Take care of my heart I've left it with you. I was freaked out with her about him leaving I think there exploration is hot and I cant believe he didnt want anything in return sigh he is so cool I love him.
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Goals
That was good distance makes the heart grow fonder she knows how much she misses him. I cant wait till they see each other again.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
They'll see each other soon again! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: I love you
Love your story. the aunt flow statement is funny as hell and from some move but cant remember witch one. so glad she said she loved him. there was something wrong last week with the site pepole probly couldnt leave there review. cant wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
I know something was wrong because I couldn't access the site, I just didn't know it would effect my story that much! ^^
Thanks again,
xx
Gelix
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Date
OMG please let them go through with it how much foreplay can we take LOL
Author's Response:
We'll see what they are about to do tomorrow! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Together
I thought the sex scene was great I dont remember any talking during my first time and thank god I did not have that kind of pain. What is going on with Aro and Thanksgiving?
Author's Response:
Yeah, you were lucky. Everyone I've been talking to have complained about the pain. Aro is going to spend Thanksgiving with the Cullens :) It will all be further explained in the next chapter!
xx
Gelix
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Secrets
Your story is wonderful I love it I know on a couple of times I tryed to review but there was something going on with the site so I dont think it is us your readers I think it was a glich in the system. I am so happy that they worked these things out and sex was finely good for both of them Bella makes me giggle about lets do that again LOL. I cant wait for more I hope you have a good time in the UK and if you have to take something out so you can get you pc in just do it LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you SO much! I'm really glad you liked the chapter (and my story!)
Next chapter should be up in a few hours!
xx
Gelix
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Thanksgiving
Renee what a peice of work she is dont see your daughter for 4 years and start in on how she looks I dont think I like her. Love Edward can I have him PLEASE
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 31: New Body
Hot office sex oh bend me over fuck me like a dog please lol. I think Leah and Jacob should be godperants I think Bella needs the conection with them. Looking forward to next Sunday
Author's Response:
Yeah, but it's hard to have someone you basically don't know very well anymore. But thank you for letting me know what you think :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Letter
Renee is a wack job Bella needs to just act like Renee dosent matter and believe that she and Edward are ment to be together
Author's Response:
Yeah, but it's still her mother. But she didn't agree with her, that's a start ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Plans
She bit him poor guy but you are right poor Bella more. I cant decide i think a baby would be great i think they are ready for the resonsiblity but then i think they just more time just being the two of them and her mother will be a bitch about it.
Author's Response:
Okay, thank you for letting me know what you think! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Christmas
Bella new she could get an annalment all along she is a smart girl duh!! Not all test work they did only do one so I think she is pregers or at least I hope???
Author's Response:
Yes, Bella is a really smart girl! ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: New Year's Eve
I still think she is pregers. What is up with Jake he still doesnt trust Edward why is there something we dont know that he does. ??????????
Author's Response:
Jake was just being supersticious about why they're married in the first place. Just like he was at the wedding.
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Gelix
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Honeymoon
I still think she is pregers or at least I hope she is if she is not there is something bad wrong with her. So is it the 22nd already LOL I cant wait. I cant ever find the quotes because I am so into your story that is my excuse anyway.
Author's Response:
It's the 19th, so it's three more days! ;) They'll go by quick, though.
I guess the quotes fit in so well in the story that it's hard to find them. I don't blame you! ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A visit to the Hospital
That was great I new she was pregers and I got so excited when they were told. Poor Emmett he is in trouble I like how Edward tryed to get himself out of trouble before he was even in it LOL. As always cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
Yeah, most of you suspected that she was!
xx
Gelix
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Heartbeats
I am so excited about the baby. So glad she straightened Jake out.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: I forgive you
Poor Bella so emotional it is a good thing that Edward is a good guy and pays attention to her. I think she mit of forgiving him a little early for every thing. She has a lot of thing to think about.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Grandparents
I think they need to tell Renee before she finds out from someone else and really freaks out but I think she should just right her a letter and let her see how it feels to be so impersonal. Edward is the best at trying to keep Bella's self esteem up but I have a feeling it may be a tough job but he is a good man just like her father.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Blossoming Flower
I would love to have the directions on the mac and milk sounds interesting. Bella needs to breath instead of rip poor Edwards head off he is a real trooper to take it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! :)
Okay, so for the macaronis. It's very simple. You take the amount of macaronis that you usuall do and put them (unboiled) in a pot, then you add twice as much milk. Add some salt and then you boil it. But be careful and make sure to stir all the time because it gets easily stuck in the bottom if you dont! You boil it until it gets thick. Here in Sweden we add some ketchup on top, then it's ready to eat!
Good luck and if you have any questions feel free to ask! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Boy or Girl?
A girl I was hoping so and the name is perfect. I love this story I look forward to your updates Thank you. I want to try the macaronis need receipe I have not check facebook you probley have it there???
I am a foster mom and on Friday I recevied a baby girl named Lillyana and we call her Lilly. To show you how adicted to your story I am the first thing I thought about is that her name is the same as Rose's baby LOL I think I need to look for a Married to the Enemy anommou ahlolices meeting LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
And congratulations to the little girl!! The news actually made me smile even though I don't really know you! ;)
As for the macaronis, no, I haven't posted it on there, so I'm giving it to you here instead!
It's very simple. You take the amount of macaronis that you usuall do and put them (unboiled) in a pot, then you add twice as much milk. Add some salt and then you boil it. But be careful and make sure to stir all the time because it gets easily stuck in the bottom if you don't! You boil it until it gets thick. Here in Sweden we add some ketchup on top, then it's ready to eat!
Good luck and if you have any questions feel free to ask! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Surprise
How sad poor Bella what is Emily trying to tell her is it dont give up???? looking forward to your new story.
Author's Response:
We'll see what the dream meant in the next chapter! :)
Thank you!
xx
Gelix
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Babysitting
Glad Bella went and talked to the dr. Good to see Bella feeling sexy about herself. I cant wait for next week.
Author's Response:
Yeah, a lot of you wanted an explanation to the dream ^^
Thank you for your review!
xx
Gelix
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Stood up
So did he ever find out that Bella had the date planed???? It is so good that she knows she is so loved.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: A mother's touch
Glad Renee pulled her head out and decided to be a mother. Edward is just Amazing.
Author's Response:
He sure is! I'm in love *swoon*
xx
Gelix
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Best birthday ever
She needs to do her reading how scarry. Love the B-day presents ;).
Author's Response:
Yes, she does!
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Scared of something beautiful
I loved it he got to shave her kitty lol but no funny bussness poor guy. Jess is such a bitch I love to hate her. I cant wait for next Sunday the wedding she will remember.
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Starting of a new life
That was the best sweet and so loving.
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Emily Grace Cullen
That was go great thank for no complications and a perfect baby. I so love this story and look forward to it every week
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Coming Home
I love the sweetness of this chapter. I love babys
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: On our own
I love the fluff
Author's Response:
Yeah, me, too! ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Halfway to fifty
I dont ever want this story to end it is one of my fav's but so is your other one. Bella has came along way and Edward is every women's dream. As alway cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
Neither do I. It's going to be a sad day when I mark it as complete...
xx
Gelix
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Therapy
I hope your job is going well. I remember school as being about the same. I am glad that she told him the truth about him being to overprotective
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Alone Time
They needed to reconect that was great and you do a wonderful job with lemon's. Now we understand Alice thanks. Me and my husband were not able to have kids either so we got into foster care figuring that we would try to help as many kids as we could after adopting 4 boys and in the prosess of adopting our little girl the kids we wanted to help have helped us also. We have had a total of 20 kids placed with us and adopt 5 it is cool because some of the kids still keep in contact and call me mom still it breaks my heart each time one is either sent home or move to another family I hope each time it is for the best
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue nr 1
Loved it and cant wait for more. Edward is the most caring man ever please dont let him change. Have a wonderful holiday and I cant wait to hear from you next year.
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 46: S: First day in school
Edward is so excited want to make baby lol. Em sounds so cute. I remember first days and no matter how many I go through I think each one is the toughest day I ever had and I am usual heart broken because my baby had the best day ever. LOL
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 47: S: A Shocking Surprise
That was great I am happy she is going to have another baby and Em will be the perfect age when the baby is born. I wonder how she will take the news??? The reunion should be very interesting cant wait.
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 48: S: High School Reunion
I loved the way they put every one straight and how he appoligized to her in front of all of them. I cant believe it is almost over.
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 49: S: Father's Day
That was wonderful so happy Masen is here. Poor baby girl you never know what is going on in there little minds thinking she was going to be repalced. They are the perfect family
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 50: S: Epilogue
I really dont see a problem with this getting published it is a wonderful book and you should be very proud. I feel very privlaged to be able to read it and enjoy every minute of it. Thank you and I wish you the best and I am so happy you will be in the same state as me and please never stop writing. I look forward to all of your other stories. Your friend Teresa Roberts
Bella prepares for the moment she has been waiting years for. An autograph signing of her favorite actor is just the setting to make her fantasies come true. *Lemontastic*
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2551 Read Count: 1183
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
That was good a nice suprise.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I appreciate the review.
For the Under Her Thumb Challenge on FF.
Edward needs a Domme but has trouble truly submitting and has been labeled as trouble. At the club's anonymous play night he thinks he finds what he needs in a new Domme.
With no information on her how can he find her again?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7144 Read Count: 3156
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Anonymous Meeting
OMG fuck me sideways that is hot they were ment to be.
Bella becomes Edward's personal assistant. He is the chief-editor of EMC, the best fashion magazine, run by a man. And what secret does Edward have? Will Bella's past come to bite her? The movie, The Devil Wears Prada inspired this one. AH. AU.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185532 Read Count: 42717
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Pranks and going home
That was so sweet the first time she called him Daddy. He better not turn in to an asshole again.
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Christmas time and This or That?
Well good now they can work things out.
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Games and more games
Drunk Edward funny What a cool gift and I really liked the explanation of each charm.
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 New York and monsters caught
Wow drama the little girl is safe thank goodness. James and Victoria need to rot in hell.
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Reading and soul mates
So why did she let Jacob kiss her???
Author's Response:
Well, she's confused. She tries to forgives him, but she doesn't want him back like that, just as a friend. She still hopes to make up with Edward, which she will.
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Jerkward and monsters on loose
I am confused about what is going on with Esme???? Why is Edward really being such a dick and please tell me he is not going to fuck Tanya.
Author's Response:
Answering both your reviews, dogs smell trouble...well Jake knows Edward is trouble.
He won't be with Tanya and I will explain more in further chapters about his behavior.
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Jerkward and monsters on loose
I am confused about what is going on with Esme???? Why is Edward really being such a dick and please tell me he is not going to fuck Tanya.
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 A Hurt Angel and Bad Jake
So why does that dog hate Edward so much and why does Bella hate Jacob so much
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Funeral and complications
Wow lot going on is Tanya causeing problems for him is that why people are droping his magazine???
Author's Response:
No, Tanya is inoffensive, actually. It's the crisis as I mentioned before.
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Karma and insatiable Edward
I love the fun they are having together. It is a good thing Edward is turning away his old booty calls or Bella would kill him and them. LOL
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: The Devil Wears Armani
They need to leave and go to the hotel. Is Edward still in love with Char or is he really over her. Edward needs a little bunny to love all his own how cute.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Charlotte and Edward's past
I dont like Char and I am not sure what Edward was thinking even staying in the same house with her???
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Edward's past and his thoughts
At this point I am not sure who is crazy LOL
Author's Response:
I think I am the crazy one :-p
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: An old acquaintance and Rose's news
So much going on and now the wedding moved up. So when does Bella move in???
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: A 'calm' weekend
welcome to the lfe of parenthood lol. Edward needs some anger managment classes what a temper.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Misunderstanding
well that is one way to make sure the office knows they are together.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Rings and an old mistake
What the hell did he do or better yet what is he expected to do now. Please tell me it is not to marrie Aros daughter???? Need more hurry
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Edward's story BPOV
What a fuckin mess that was so the slut got to fuck him all day and that was payment to not marry her???? Did the bitch put a condom on Edward??????
Author's Response:
she put a condom, though I don't think I mentioned it....
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Edward's story EPOV
I am glad no more Renata she is one sick Bitch daddys girl. I am glad he showed Bella how important she is to him.
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: The presentation
Hell of a show
Banner by lanilani26
Edward suprises his ex with a vist on Christmas Eve. What will Bella think when Edward gets off the plane and not Alice? AH/AU *One shot, well, minific. LOL.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 629 Read Count: 1741
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
That was great they where silly.
Bella is not supposed to date a cop like her father, but when she meets Deputy Cullen, that all goes out the window. They try to keep their relationship a secret while they can't keep their hands off each other.
My o/s entry in the FML contest from FF.net that made it into the top 20. Originally posted on FF.net 1/31/10.
Awesome banner by Robrator for thetwilightawards.com
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4554 Read Count: 1355
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
lol I would love to know what happened next
Summary - All Human. Edward turns sixteen. Emmett forces him to go to a strip club for his birthday. Bella is dared to be a strip dancer for the night. What will happen to two virgins when they meet? De-virginizing Edward, never entered contest but now is longer than one shot.
This banner is made by my very close friend in this fandom - Chynnadoll36
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2117759/chynnadoll36
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15046 Read Count: 5835
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I am positive this is going to be a great story. Rose and Alice tricked poor Bella but maybe it is a good thing.
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Danceing is impowering but I think she has taken the next step to soon. LOL
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Wow that was fuck hot. When are they going to find out that they are both just 16????
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
What a way to loss your inosence for sure not going to forget. So glad they know there name.
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
that was great i loved the letter
When the disarmingly handsome Edward Masen turns up as a new patient, the life Dr. Isabella Swan has carefully put together will be shattered forever. What will it take to put the pieces back together again? What does it take to heal?
Many thanks to fuzzyltlwingedthing for the new banner!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 334239 Read Count: 64023
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
Jake has to be freaking out right about now he knows there is something between them two.
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7, Pt. II
Is Edward the lawyer she is going to see??????? There is no way they can have a nondate LOL they cant even have a non spark talk lol
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Talk about freak a person out. I am loving this story. I left reviews already but they are gone what was up with the site it is still not right I am not geting my updates I feel lost LOL
Author's Response:
I Know!! All of the sudden I lost all of my reviews for the last chapter! The last chapter actually disappeared for a little while. Well, thanks for reading. Glad you like it. Let's keep our fingers crossed... bdc
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Love it so happy no cancer. Bella thinks he had a date not just lunch with Emmett. I cant wait for more.
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Rose is a riot his man parts LOL Bella needs joy like the rest of them do and that joy is with Edward.
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Good for him one down and just Jacob to go.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11
So she knows Jake has to go and the sex between the two didnt sound to exciting
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7, Pt. I
Emmett is a riot he would like him a little Bella LOL. The sparks are flying who called a stoped the spark????
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
Holly shit Jake needs to pack his bags he is just a friend poor guy but move on lol
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
I think Edward and Jake need to whip it out and see whos is bigger lol. Sorry Jake she loves you but not enough. I cant wait for more
Author's Response:
Hehe, I think that debate was put to bed in the first chapter. Bella had never seen one like Edward's before. Poor Jake. Thanks for all the reviews! M
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10, Pt. II
Did Bella add to his perscription??? Jake knows that Bella does not love him as much as he loves her??? I cant wait for more.
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12, Pt. I
James has found her????? They are ment to be together even J could tell that and he just meet them. Poor Edward and his one ball just got mashed by a little girl ouch!!
Author's Response:
Now why would you want to bring up the status of his junk like that? My man had cancer! Yep... these two can fight it, but I do believe they're meant to be. M
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 12, Pt. II
No he cant leave they were so close. She does need to end it with Jake and they all know it Jake can feel it coming?????
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 13
Holly shit that was a shock to poor Jacob but I am glad she did it Edward is in so much shit Bella is going to kick his ass
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 14
Kate is going to cause shit??? I am so happy a little office sex never hurt anyone lol
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 15
That song was perfect for this chapter and I am so happy that nothing bad happened in this chapter. I love that Bella trying to explain how she felt was happy .
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 16
Leah should be happy now she knows that Bella and Jake are not going to get back together. Bella told him she loves him
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 17
Rose thinks alot about herself and not so much about others yes she is protective but at what cost.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 18
I am so happy they have got to spend the time together. Is the treatment that Edward had make him 100% sterale or are there some live swimmers ;). I hope Rose pulls her head out of her ass before long. Where is Jake did he go back to fork or is he with Leah ya thats it he is with Leah?????
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 19
Shit I knew they were going to cause him shit but I didnt think it would be like this. He needs to start his own practic anyway and cut ties compleatle with Tanya and anyone related to the Bitch. Who was the women in the car???? I know wait and find out LOL
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 20
Shit who is this women and what does she want with Bella??? I am so happy he did not keep getting caned from Bella that would of been bad.
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21
So is it Jake at the door???? So how turned Bella into the medical board was it Tanya or was it Angela?????