Reviews by troberts
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123471
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Christmas Break - The Third Year

OMG who was in her appartment James?????  I am so upset with Esme tisk tisk LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Third Year the Second Six Months

What is up Esme's Ass she needs to pull it out.  Shit is going to hit the fan in Forks.  This will bring Tanya out of the woods to try and cause problems cant wait for more.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months

So Esme is a sneeky old bitch I loved Bella telling her off.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months

Bella is a badass loved it James in the hospital priceless.  Is Esme ever going to pull her head out of her ass????



Author's Response:

Maybe - thanks for reading

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Christmas Break The Fifth Year

I love the way she told Esme about Tanya.  I love the fact that Bella punch Tanya after Tanya slaped her no sissy stuff for Bella.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months

They have themselves some fuck hot sex shit!!!  I would love to know what the fuck is up Esme's ass  I am sure it is not a frozen dildo lol.  I cant wait for more.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Outtake - Esme's Reasons

All the years she has hid her past she was so young Carlisle would of understood

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Sixth Year The First Six Months

It is good that Esme is truly working on her shit.  I was ready for a baby but 3 holly shit but I love it.  Great chapter just the right amount of everything.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months

I love these two and the kids.  I am glad Esme is getting better and Bella is an angle for putting up with any of Esme's crap.  Edward I just want to eat him up lol.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Ten Years Later

Thanks that is alot of things got caught up on I love the fact that they let the kids be who they are and love them that way.  Tanya is a waste of space and air and it sounds like her parents are that way also.  Rose and Emmett they are happy with each other as long as they get to play with others also.??  Love the fact of how in love Bella and Edward are.  Cant believe it is almost over.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Fifteen Years Later

I am sad that it is over but it was a great ride I enjoyed the whole thing even this last chapter that I cryed my eyes out.  I think they are the perfect Edward and Bella that had a very happy life together.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76150
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think it sounds great and cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Such a good story I have read what you already had on the other site but decided it was so good I better read it as you bring it over here hurry I cant wait for more

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Still love it second time read I dont know what I am going to do when you get caught up with ff and I will read through only once  LOL.  I love the playful banter they have



Author's Response:

Let me just say how awesome you are. You've not only already read this once, but you're taking the time to read it again. That means so much to me. To know that there are people out there who are really enjoying this. I am almost done with Chapter 10, so I hope to have that up soon. Sorry for taking so long. I've re-written so many times already. Its getting to the point where i just want to say to hell with it and post it, but I won't because that wouldn't be fair for the readers or myself.  Again thanks so much for reading, and for reviewing!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yes still as good as it was the first time.  Still dont like Lauran or Peter he is a dick.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

We are geting closer to being caught up I get so excited when i see you have updated. I think I said yhis before Peter is going to be lucky to keep his balls when Edward is done with him I am sure he wont try that shit on anyone else.  I had the same offer from a boss I had when I was still in Collage the bald headed fat little fuck needless to say I didnt work for him ant more. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Only one more and I am caught up.  Love the way she trys to ack brave when she is scared shitless.  Tanya I dont like her LOL.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Tanya thought she was going to have a hot kinky weedend she fucked up.  How much more confused can Bella get???  only one more chapter to go and I cant wait to read that one again and the the new one after that.  So in love with this story.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I think she is in the living room sleeping

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I am so happy you are back I have missed you I keep on checking both site to see if maybe you were posting on the other.  I cant wait to see what happen with these two and how is he going to get back with her?????? 



Author's Response:

I missed you guys as well! If I could write all day I would. I'd willingly let you guys glue my fingers to my keyboard! But RL calls for attention every now and then. :/

Thanks for your continued support!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So it has to be Jasper in Edwards Volvo???  Poor Bella so confused.  I am so glad you updated I thought you left this wonderful story never to return.  I cant wait for more



Author's Response:

I'm a bit slow on updates, but I will never let this story die away! I love it too much! We will find out next chapter exactly who was driving the Volvo!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: TPOV

Make me feel sorry for Tanya she is lost and doesnt know what to do because he doesnt look at her like he looks at Bella.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I would like to hear Tanya's POV.  Jasper is in deep shit with Edward not only for his Volvo but for getting caught.  What is going to happen with her ex-boss????  I was so excited to see you updated it has been a bit of time I have missed you.  I hope to get update soon Thanks. 

Match Point by emerald eyes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

 

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He is the world champion. She is the daughter of his sponsor. Edward Masen has to teach Bella Swan, but who will teach who in the end? If you think that tennis is a boring game you are wrong. White Polo shorts, skirts and a lot, lot of sweat...

Written for the Sport of Love Challenge.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6954 Read Count: 797
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2010 Updated: 26 Apr 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Match Point

I think it was great leave it to Jess and Lauran to mess things up. He daddy loves her and wants her to be happy.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I wanted to show that sometimes she got bad advice and for that I used Lauren and Jessica. Now, about daddy dearest he knew she was in love and he wanted his girl to be happy. Of course he didn’t know what our boy did to her…

I don’t think he would have been so supportive in that situation.

Thanks again for reading and the review. I’m glad you liked it!

Two Worlds Collide by Ezzy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 253]
Summary:

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Edward Mason is the leader of Mason Corporations. Isabella Swan is set to take over leadership of Swan industries from her ill father Charlie Swan. He wants Swan Industries, she wants Mason Corporations, but their Father's have a different plan for the two to get what they want...how will they take it and how will it all work. SOME CONTENTS ARE FOR THOSE WHO ARE, AT LEAST, 17 AND OVER.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Carlisle/Esme, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 237944 Read Count: 56504
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Oct 2022
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Introductions

good info



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Meetings and Unexpected, but welcomed Changes

wow



Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Just One More Condition

They are being so cool about this I think they both like what they see



Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 5: A Show of Heart

I would like a room like that



Author's Response:

oh its my dream room! :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Telling Alice and Jasper

I think she is in shock , Got to love Alice lol



Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Family Dynamics and an Unexpected Surprise

I am excited for what Bella wants to give him



Author's Response:

im sure you'll like what it is.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Gift Revealed

Dinner and a ring nice



Author's Response:

she is just trying to show the same setiment that he did as they both know that even if they never love each other there will be no one else for them....at this point of the story any way

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Best Goodnight Ever

He is hooked OMG



Author's Response:

He is a guy that knows when he has something good ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 10: A Helpful Gentleman

I am so happy for them both



Author's Response: thank you

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Breakaway Banner

 

Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Breakaway

That is a great start so is Edward going to start playing fair now????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: New Connections

Jake is a creep all the time he let her feel bad about making the chose of racing when he was screwing around.  Edward and Bella are warming up to each other nicely.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Attacking Walls

So Charlie heard him say that he loved her??? She is going to be just fine right???  Edward is going to rip Aro's face of for not letting them change the trhtal control????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Edward Shaped Hole

How sweet tell Aro were to go Edward it is because of him she had the wreck???  I cant wait till she relizes that she loves him to but she doesnt no he loves her yet does he??????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Sweet Awakenings

Love Monty Python but I also Love Benny Hill LOL.  Good to know his leg is just bruised.  I hope Bella isnt to afraid to race???

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: You’re Asking Me This NOW?

How sweet but come on let get some kissing going on. What does he have in store for Bella so she will be ready to race.????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood

So they are going to be neighbors why not room mate  wink wink  but they have not even kissed yet so I see neighbors.  cant wait for more.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Pushing Boundaries

WOW what a date that was so cool.  This is going to be hard to keep it cool and hands to there selves but why should they they are both grown ups and deserve a little relife. LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Schooling Cullen

Loved the fact that she could show him what she could do.  His is concerned about her but he better watch his mouth.  How are they going to survie apart now that they have spent the nights together.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Unexpected Visitor

OMG you are not nice today.  Please tell me that the blonde is is sister please.  They were getting so close and going so well I should of known that something would have to fuck it up LOL :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado

Tanya cock blocking LOL  So happy they told each other they loved each other.  Should be a fun ride.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Interruptus

Reallity check for Bella she need to understand she is not the only person to ever have these feelings.  I cant wait for more

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Sacrificial Lion

WOW what fun to have a whole fancy place to yourself how cool.  How long is it going to take before Bella decides it is silly to pay for a home she is never in???  I think Edward has relesed a sexual little beast LOL.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Helpful Wagers

that was great Tanya wants to be friend

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Additional Motivation

that outfit better be fuck asume poor Edward is going to be working really heard for it lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: It's Just Business...

Aro should be ashamed of himself but we all know he isnt.  I am glad that Bella and Edward are not going to go with what they want.  I cant wait for Edwards reward wink wink

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Rewards

That was one hot  night for a job well done LOL.  Poor Bella making herself crazy cant wait for more I am sure the family will love her????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Meet The Parents

Poor Esme she is alone what happened with Edward and Carlisle to make him so distant??????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Growth of Understanding

I am so happy Carlisle pulled his head out of his ass.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Trouble With Money

OH happy days that is asking a person to marry but not yet LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: One Hiding Amongst Them

It is a good thing Bella has a heart of gold or Ben would be talking out of his ass because his head would be shoved up it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: To Protect and Conceal

Why would someone be out to get Bella????  Ben is so lucky he is not sleeping with the fishys.  When is Edward going to ask her when when when??????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Home Stretch

something is up with that driver Cosma I dont think he is as nice as they say

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Waiting on the Edge

OMG So glad he is ok and Bella kicked James Ass LOL  what a tough girl. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Legal Eagle

Aro is pissed what a slim ball LOL.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Definition of Bad Timing

Another little race car driver how cute.  So glad those assholes are going to jail and Ben is not.  I cant believe this is almost over.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

Amazing wonderful and I am sad it it over but it was a great race to the finish Thanks

Summary:

Edward knew he loved Bella from the first day of pre-k.  Bella's loved everything pink and carnation since Edward gave her one for her birthday.  Remeber a simpler time when your biggest worry was getting your favorite crayon and our booboo's could be kissed away with the promise that it would be better before we got married.  Originally an entry for the Crayola Contest.  My crayon, Carnation Pink. 

Warning: this story is rated K for cavity causing sweetness!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 897 Read Count: 9077
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 05 May 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

very sweet I have 4 sons and one of them should be named Edward he is that sweet boy he is in second grade I am afraid of when he gets into high school and all the girlfreinds he will have hope he stays respectful of them and himself.

Carried Away by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

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Bella developed feelings for Pixie Slippers new VP of Marketing, Edward Cullen, from the moment he entered the office.  But he seems to be keeping her at arms length.  Will she break down his walls, or is she simply letting herself get 'carried away.'

 

Winner of the Office Romance Challenge

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3354 Read Count: 3078
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2010 Updated: 09 May 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Carried Away

He wanted her for his prinsess.  Thanks



Author's Response:

yup, he sure did.  Thanks again!

Summary:

Bella goes out for a girl's night out and ends up having a one night stand.

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Thank you to mkystich for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2526 Read Count: 1136
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2010 Updated: 09 May 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was not expecting the ending omg not a wife.  Are you going to contiue on with this

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Spies

Thank god he did not leave her.  They are both broken maybe they can help to heal each other.  Where is Jacob at???? Have a great time at the coast relax and get some good writing done.  I will be waiting



Author's Response:

Jacob will be back soon! Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review! I hope you like the next chapter, here’s a little teaser from it :) 

 

“Thanks man,” I say as I brush past him, wanting to find Bella even more now that I know she’s alone. I’ve gone through the building three times and around the outside as well, but I can’t find Bella anywhere. I have a rock in the pit of my stomach, and I’m scared as fuck that whoever she has been hiding from has found her. I stand outside the Mission, cursing myself for being late. 

 

I don’t know what to do. I feel sick. If something has happened... or some fucker has taken her - I don’t even fucking know her real last name to start to look for her. I’m pacing back and forth in front of the Mission, and the sun has set. I don’t fucking know what to do. I decide to go back to the motel room to get the money I have stashed and do whatever I can to find her.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ain't no Rest for the Wicked

Wow that is intense sounds like it is going to be a great story.  It was Bella that he rescued right but was she already attacked by someone else????? I cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Hey!

Thanks so much for reading! You will find out who the girl is next chapter ;) 

Katie 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Boogie Man

I love Miss E she is a women with a golden heart.  I cant wait to find out what has happened to them and how they will make thing work out please say they will work out.



Author's Response:

Hey!

So glad that you like Miss E, she is so awful in A New Normal I had to make her sweet in this! lol 

In time, you will find out about Bella and Edward's past, promise I will make it work ;)  

Thanks for reviewing, hope you like the next chapter!

Katie 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Careful Where You Stand

Well at least she is talking.  How is the creep in the ally????  Cant wait to find out what she is saying and who she is running from and why????



Author's Response:

Hey!

So glad that you liked the update! You will find out who the creep was very soon as well as why Bella is running. In the mean time a reader set up a forum at Twilighted to discuss theories on Bella and Edward's history, http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=9972&sid=42830f3777f98f41aa64bc7f89506a0f

Katie 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Heart Attack

I am so happy things are going well for them and the plan to stay in Forks.  They need to talk to the Cullens about needing to go to Portland I am sure they would make a little trip out of it but I am sure Edward wont want that.  He cant leave Bella?????  He cant go back by himself???  Emmett love him.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Voices of Violence

will she stay in one if he wont I dont think so.  James is a slim ball that needs the shit kicked out of him.  when are we going to find out who she is running and hiding from????



Author's Response:

Hey!

We will find out soon, it's just taking her a little bit to trust. Opening up about the money was huge for her. 

Thanks so much for reaviewing, hope you like the next chapter!

Katie 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Animal I've Become

So cool that they are living off the streets he has a job. Jake that is some scarry shit going from cool to how the fuck are you.  I have seen some people that are pretty scarry in that respect would not like to be in a room with them.  I think Bella is a run a way slave and she is afraid to say anything because they will find her.



Author's Response:

Hmmm, good theory. Her story will come out very soon ;) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Let It Be Me

They are just like a couple with missing peices.  I think she is a slave.



Author's Response:

Great theory! I can't wait to hear what you think of Bella's story!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Secrets

Poor girl I knew she was a slave (pat myself on back) LOL.  They need to find the Cullens or Charlie she thinks they hate her she needs to know that they have worried about her and miss her.  I cant wait for next chapter.



Author's Response:

*Pats Troberts on the back* Good guess! hehehehe

Thanks for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 I was Broken

he is going to take her home??????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The Only One

I cant wait till they get to forks.  I am so happy they admitted they have feelings for each other and kissed need more of that.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Flying High

What a nice trip the farry ride is a fun ride. So who sees Bella?????



Author's Response:

So glad you liked their trip! I can't tell you who was in the diner but the next chapter will, I hope you like it!

Katie 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The World at Large

OMG this is going to rip Bella up he needs to turn around and tell her that he loves her to NOW.  So where do you live I live in Montesano????



Author's Response:

Hey!

I was raised in Vancouver Washington, but I live in Bellingham right now for school :) 

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk

Edward takes care of those he loves.  She needs to be able to open up and tell what happened and help find that sick fuck that took her so he doesnt keep taking others.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Shelter

WOW at least someone else knows now Edward had to be very strong to tell Bella's story.  I love the Cullens they are good people and will take care of Bella and Edward but it will be tough for Edward to be taken care of????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling

So happy he opened up to her and told her what was the matter.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter!

Katie 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Ungodly Hour

Poor Bella so tramatice.  I feel bad for Edward and Esme for there pain of watching her go through it.   Edward ever going to open up to the Cullens?????  I cant wait for Alice and Emmett. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Crossfire

It is cool that Bella is starting to open up and feel like she is the person she use to be.  Edward is doing good and starting to trust others. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 The Church of What's Happening Now

It was good just to see Edward doing his thing and his interaction with Alice has shown that he is learning to trust others without even knowing it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Sing it Out

Love that he was there for her the hole way but not push his presents on her just let her do it on her own.  Cant wait to find out what all Charlie has to say and how he reacts to Edward.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Drown Out

Holly shit poor Bella what freaked her out did she see someone from her past ????  I know Charlie is worried about Bella but pull the stick out and lisen to what Edward has done for her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Runaway

So did she really see Alex??? I know you wont answer but I have to ask lol.  It is a good thing Charlie pulled his head out of his ass.  I loved the nurse she put Charlie in his place.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through

That was the most perfect date so sweet it was time for them to feel good.  I love the fact that Carlisle is going to teach Edward to drive.



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :) 

Katie 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Delicate

To bad they had to have the fight but I am glad they were able to work it out. I dont think either one would survie very well without the other.  I hope things go well in Portland,

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 The Only Exception

Big steps for both of them.  I hope it all doesnt turn to shit for them know. They trust and love each other so much.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Chop Suey

They need to get back to Forks after seeing Mrs E.  I hope they dont run into Roy and Jake needs help maybe he is in the right spot

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 The Best of You

I am glad you are ok I hope you didnt get hurt bad in the wreck.  It sounds like the rest of your life has been crazy I was just so happy to hear from you Thanks.  I am glad that Charlie is helping out with Jake he is trying to prove that he can be there for them.???  What is Roy's problem and please dont let him find them.???  cant wait for more

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain

That was amazing how wonderful to put things at ease he has worried so long about things he didnt need to.  That was so great that he is getting so much of his info and the rings so cool.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Dancing

I am so happy they finely got to this point of trust and love.  Bella has came along way and Edward I think is finding peace in his mind and heart it is something they needed each other to find.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Breaking the Girl

That was a great chapter I think Edward sees his future for the first time.  So great about Jake such a great thing that Charlie has done for him.  I am worried about who Alice is date I have a bad feeling about him.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break

Holly Shit he cant get away.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Worker Bees

His body and mind finely had enough now maybe he can heal also.  Where is the scum sucking creepy bastard hiding????  Poor Alice she feel so much to blame.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Karma Police

I am so happy that the slimy bastard was torchered and very glad they put a bulit in his head.  I think Bella is taking things very wee all things considered.  I cant bellieve that is the last chapter this has been a great story and look forward to every update thanks so much.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Dosed

A wonderful ending to a wonderful story I loved the ending and I would like to know about there future did they have kids.  thank you very much and I cant wait for your next story.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue

I am so happy for these two and so sad for there loss of Esme but they are there for each other and it is good that Jake is there and living life

Creep by All you need is Moz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Bella has no one, no family, no friends, she feels worthless and when the one person who had ever shown her kindness humiliates her it's the final straw. But what has Edward Cullen, another loner, got to offer her and will she be willing to accept?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3515 Read Count: 784
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 14 May 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Liking Jacob had nothing to do with it he need to be drained LOL.  I like your strange moods also look forward to anything you write.  Thanks



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing, i was feeling a little vindictive that day and took it out on jacob lol.

Chrissie x

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297715
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Married to the Enemy

This going to get good what is Bella going to do when she sees Edward is he going to know who she is?????



Author's Response:

You will find out later today when I post the new chapter! :)

xx
Gelix