Reviews by troberts
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is a humble young girl determined to prove she's serious about making art. Edward Cullen is the pragmatic debonair foreigner, focused on his career and duties. On the surface, Bella and Edward may have nothing in common, until a chance encounter in a hotel hallway sparks a mysterious attraction and a deep need to keep the connection alive. Will true love prove strong enough to overcome the secrets and challenges that lay ahead? Or will they succumb to the pressure and expectations of the people that think they know best? 

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Go check out my blog for teasers, outfits, pictures and more!
minawritesfanfiction.blogspot.com


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78741 Read Count: 29950
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2015
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: The Perfect Girl

How do i get to the album it says i need a password????  love the first meeting



Author's Response:

 

Go check out my blog for teasers, outfits, pictures and more. Here's the link:

http://minariveratwific.blogspot.com/

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: The Perfect Girl

OH no

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: The Perfect Girl

Love Cal he is a good guy Renee needs the crap beat ouy of her for the way she treats Bella.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: The Perfect Girl

He has responsebilitys but he should of got in contact with Bella at least to let her know he was alive.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: The Perfect Girl

So very sorry for your loss she sounds like a wonderful lady. Love your storys very much and willing to wait for you so take your time and take care of yourself.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: The Perfect Girl

OK now Bella is freaking out.  What is up with Renee???  So happy you are updating again thanks.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: The Perfect Girl

I was so excited to see you update this story I have been stocking your blog. I am so looking forward to them seeing each other again.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: The Perfect Girl

So excited to see your update thank you and then they meet I almost squeeled with happyness lol.  I cant wait for more.  Please do not have them related please.



Author's Response:

Hello, thanks for your review. I assure you that Bella is NOT related to Edward. I hope that gives you peace of mind! LOL. xoxox ~Mina

Human Pet by cullens_pet Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 213]
Summary:

Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!

 

 

Edward doesn't make it to the ballet studio on time. James has a fate in store for Bella far worse than death. One that she could have never imagined, even in her worst nighmares.

 

**This story includes graphic violence and sexual assault. If these topics offend you, please don't read any further.**


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49124 Read Count: 27784
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Jul 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It sounds interesting and you are doing a good job.

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Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow James is a sick sick fuck and the poor Cullens but how is Bella handling this poor thing.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

James is a sick fuck

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

James it truly fuck in the head

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

How are they going to function without her how are they going to find her???

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

What is James hunting to bring back to her???  He is one sick fuck.  Poor Bella she needs to shut down go find her happy place in her mind and stay there.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

The plan has to work they have to get Bella back before James turns her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

So James is in love with Bella this can not be good will this make her care for him????  Please say NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

God I hope it does not work I would have to bitch slap someone LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Thank goodness she called the Cullens and stood up to James

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I cant beleive Edward didnt rip the phone away from Carlisle.  I hope they get to her soon.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I want them to rip him apart and slowly burn him

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

James is crazy I was so hoping they would catch up with him and kill him but off to Italy and the Voltari did Alice see them killing Bella ???????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

James has finely meet someone that is more evil than him Aro.  I cant wait for more.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

That was perfect so glad to see that bastard go up in smoke.  I cant wait for more

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I think Aro is a total creep How are the cullens going to get away?????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I knew something was wrong but I was thinking because he feed on her and did not feed her she was just very sick this is a cool twist.  Aro is a sick fuck i would not want to guess what he will say.  Your kiding only three more chapters???

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I love what she did with her powers.  I bet Aro is thrild with her powers so far and they are doing what he wanted.  What next I cant wait.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

it was worth the wait

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Human Pet

Not crazy about the ending  but I am happy you are doing a sequel because if you werent then I would be pissed.  Will be waiting

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

OMG cant wait for more what is he going to do does he have enought money to bid on her and win??????



Author's Response:

Tee hee!  We'll just have to see won't we?!

More next week!

Thanks for reading and responding!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Decisions

How cool is this love so far.  Cant wait till they meet how shocked will she be



Author's Response:

So glad you're liking it.  We can always count on Bella to have quite a reaction, can't we?

Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Regrets

I cant wait till she sees it is really him.  Both pineing for each other and not doing anything about it.  will it work if I post 49 more times??? LOL



Author's Response:

You could go for it and see!! LOL

Glad to hear what captured your imagination.  I just love a good mystery. :D

Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...

I knew she would freak out but he is hot so give the guy a break  I cant wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Second Chances

You wouldnt dare to replace Edward with Mike that would be just wrong.  LOL  Good the truth is coming out and I cant wait for the climax in the next chapter LOL.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth

I love you guys you are great and I will kiss anyones feet or there ass if they get this story to us early it is a good thing.  Yah I think Edward is over the top with lust at this moment and he better not go all pure on her.  That was very hot by the way I liked it wink wink LOL.  Yah I think I am funny.



Author's Response:

LOL You're great!  And you make me laugh! 

Granted, it's been said that I'm a wee bit easily entertained...

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Glad ya liked it!  I'm rather proud of it.  ;D  I'd be very disappointed in his Man-card status if he did turn back into the emo chicken from hades, but this is E we're talking about, so...

Gah, I'm in a devilish mood tonight! lol

Thanks for reading!!!  (And thanks for the giggle!)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True

Hell yes we love the lemons makes my life exciting lol.  I am pretty sure Bella and Edward are happy with the outcum LOL



Author's Response:

*mwhaha*  Ba-dump-bump! lol

Yeah, lemons tend to make my heart go pitter pat, as well! ;D 

And I'm pretty sure the "outcum" has just officially become their new favorite pass-time! *tee hee*

Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Morning After

Glad you are going to contiue for a bit I would like to know what happens once they leave the room.  What reaction will Emmett have to them being together????  Will he pay for her eduacation will they get married???  So many ????



Author's Response:

lol  That's where we're going next, some talking and future plans.  :D

Thanks for reading and responding!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

I loved it that was perfect she was there in the nic of time.  Emmett and Alice I can see it such opisits but so much energie.  I will be looking forward to the epi.  Happy holidays to you to and Thanks for working on this wonderful story.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be

You have got to be f@#ken  kiddin me he is not just going to walk away from her it will kill them both.  Hurry hurry cant wait to see if he is going to live or if I am going to have to kick his ass LOL



Author's Response:

Good news! We f@#ken wrote the next chapter already, so you won't have to stay pissed for long -- Edward needs a slap, but we'll leave his lovely little ass alone, can we agree on that?  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans

Poor Bella and Edward.  I loved that Edward spill to Alice.  Emmett priceless in purple tights.  Cant wait for more.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Outtake

That was to funny Alice is a riot if I was Bella I would of left her after the third box of condoms. lol



Author's Response:

Yeah, this Alice is loosely based on imagining if my own mother were in Alice's shoes! And, YEAH I would have left (probably by the second box!), too!!  ;D  lol  Delighted to hear it struck your funny bone, so well!!  *enormous grin*

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue

The story was worth the wait just like there love story was Thanks so much for finishing it for us.



Author's Response:

Thank-you so very much!  I can hardly express how much it means to hear your tremendously touching words!  TwiliteAddict should take a bow for getting out the whip to get this done!  ;D

Ethics Be Damned by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 489]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...

Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.

 Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?

Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 71569
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

OH my married what is she going to say I mean they just said they would be together forever so why not.????  Rose Rose Rose I just shak my head what the fuck that was not right.  I love how Bella did not back down to her.  Bella is my hero LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am for sure going to stick and read love it so far.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So Jasper meet Alice this is to cool bad teach lol.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I am so wanting more more more.  It is a wonder Edward was walk away sporting his hard on LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

So glad Edward came clean to Jasper.  Jasper is done for.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

OMG how hot are they?????  When is Edward going to find out she is 28?????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Thank God he knows now so I wonder does Jasper know???  Why didnt they just go in to Bellas room ??????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Busted what is going to happen now and who is Rose with????  Where has James gone for 2 days???

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yes double-standards yes indeedy.  Thing were going so well.  It was a good thing that Bella and Rose had there little talk cleared the air and now Bella wont be such a wimp around her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

OMFG  so much excitment going on you need a good slap on the ass for stoping there hurry need more.  Love Emmett! Now Edward will really be overprotective of her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Love Emmett such a great protecter one minite and such a kid the next.  So glad they got the I love yous out of the way. You did very good.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter12

I think he is going to plan to kill Bella but he is a sick fuck so he will want to have what he calls fun first.  James must die

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Very nice lemon cant beleive its your first LOL.  James is a fuckin freak what is Bella going to do.  The party is a trap isnt it????  Why didnt Emmett tell her that James seen them?  What is she going to tell Rose???  So many ??????   More

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Tanya the low down ditry bitch.  I was dying when Bella left and I was so happy when she came back and told Tanya to leave.  happy dance.  I hope she will figure a way to go to the gala.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I think I would like to hear from that sick fuck Aro and about his operation.  I want Bella to go to the gala not James party because that is a trap.  Victoria is okay with James messing with other girls because she is a fraid of him and she is a sick as he is.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Good to know more about Rose and why she is the way she is and I am glad that she is feeling protective over Bella and not just wanting to run her over somewhere.  I cant wait for next chapter.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I think James has been terrorizing girls as long as he has been able to get it up he is a sick fuck. 

Edward and Bella wow that was hot.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

OMFG I feel like bitch slaping someone dont get in my way LOL.  You are crul and inhuman.  So they know where he is go get her but he has to pick the phone back up so he knows were to go.  Hurry Hurry Hurry.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

That was freaky I wish she would of not let the presure off of that rope that bastard should be dead.  Edward almost needed to be comitted he is not going to let her out of his sight.  I do trust you and I cant wait to see where you are going.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I think they are off to a good start.  Is Rose freaking out??? 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I think Bella no answer was the right one at the momont to much at one time.  I cant wait to find out how it goes with Charlie and at his parents who is the old friend they will have dinner with (Aro)????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Aro i new it and he knows who she is???? 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Bella needs to punch Tanya

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I know she put him in danger now but I think he mit of lost his mind not knowing what was going on with her.  Aro is a creepy bastard.  I cant wait for Tanya to get her ass kicked.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Is she going to be able to talk Edward into going into protective custody????  What is Aro trying to prove that he can control everyone???

The Affair by funkymunky2511 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

AH E/B J/B For two weeks out of the year Edward and Bella pretended that what they had was real.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1914 Read Count: 504
[Report This] Published: 13 Apr 2010 Updated: 13 Apr 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Affair One Shot

Oh no Jacob going to get mean with her.  what did the note say???

Summary:

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Bella kidnapped by bandits?? Oh My! Sherriff Cullen to the rescue!

A romantically dark tale of Sheriff Edward Cullen who is out to stop an old evil from taking all he loves away from him. Set in the fledgling town of Forks, you will get a glimpse into the mind of a serial killer, and the wild love of Edward and Bella.

Melodramatic Spaghetti Western style adult fun for AmeryMarie’s birthday. Rated for violence, language and lemon cake finisher.  ;D

 

**---> Like a dork I accidentally deleted the first posting of this story!  if you reviewed before, I appreciate if you'd leave us the love again!!!  *quietly bangs head on desk*  <-----**


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6430 Read Count: 446
[Report This] Published: 14 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Apr 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I read this the other night and left my review but I will do it again just to let you know that I loved it and the banner is to die for.  I hope you continue on with the story.  Aro is one sick bastard and right out side there window have to know what happens. 



Author's Response:

Thank-you SOO very much for re-reviewing!  I felt like such a dunce! :D

GasawayAlley (Ape) did the banner!  I thinkit's beyond yummy too!

Ape is very motivated to continue the idea she initated and the rest of us had too much fun to not want to join in for more!  Can't leave a 'good' villian hanging, now can we?  Besides, there was more I wanted to do with the lemon, but ran out of time.  Can't have that !

Thanks for reading and replying!!!

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106345
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It is so natural and midnight meeting oh yah

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

The family figure out what is going on????  Do they get busted????  Love your story need more

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

OH thank god they both said it was more than a fling.  I cant wait to see were this goes and what a dick Jacob is.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Bella cant go through with being with Jake they are having an afair????  Kate OH NO what the hell does she want????  When is Bella going to get the message form Edward????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

OMFG NNNOOOOO Kate bad news.    Edward should of said something to Bella about Kate.  Love that she said nice to see you Jake Loved it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Edward needs to jump on a plane and go to her or Jasper needs to talk some sence into her.  Edward needs to be on gaurd of Kate all the time I dont trust her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I love Jasper such a wise man.  Glad she hit the green button but then I almost freaked when Kate answer his phone I thought shit was going to hit the fan.  I hope Kate means what she says and will be a good person but I dont think it is going to work out.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh thank goodness they are official out to all and all are happy I am so happy.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Kate must die that dirty rotten bitch how dare she take that baby from her daddy.  Kate knew that Emma loved Bella and she didnt love her so steel her not a nice lady.  Find her quick she needs her daddy and Bella.  By the way I would like to say this is a wonderful story.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

OMG I knew I was missing something I missed this chapter and read 10 first I was trying to figure out when Kate took the money.  Glad to read this chapter filled in the holes I was missing and the boby display sounds so cool not sure how I would feel about the babys  either.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OMG I thought things were going to work out quick when Emma seen the cop but I should of known better LOL.  They have to find the bitch before long she better not get ruff with that baby.  So glad Bella has stayed with him but where else should she be.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Kate needs help she is off her rocker please have Rilley come to his scences and turn her in.  Bella gona have a baby how cool but so sad at the same time because there is no way they can enjoy this as much as they could.  Evil Kate using the baby as a way to trick Emma into thinking they dont want her I would like to hurt Kate.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ya Kate was going crazy it is a good thing that Riley went with them to help keep Emma safe but he should of turned her in. Is Riley the one that turned her in???  Tacos 14 days in a row ya she is off her rocker.  I got chills up and down my arms when I was reading that they found her Thank god and then my heart broke for Edward when she would no talk to him that bitch Kate brain washing the poor little thing so confused.  Then Bellas parent thank goodness they went and pick her up but the way they were talking to Bella they sould be ashamed of themselves.  I would love to join you on twilighted but I cant seem to get on very frustrated  and it is not because of my age unless I am to old LOL  46

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

My heart is breaking for all of them that poor little girl so confused.  They do need to remember that Emma is not the only one that is affected by what happened.  Hope they can heal.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

OH no dont let anything happen to Masen.  I have a bird named MOJO LOL.  Emma needs help and Kate needs to be 6 feet under.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

She is young but this is her baby she should of called the doctor.  Please dont let anything happen to Masen.  I was so happy when Emma told Bella she loved her my heart melted.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Bring on the tissues that was so sad I am glad they are all OK and yes she was stupid for not calling the DR but she is so young and stuck in a house going stir crazy Edward should of been easyer on her yes mad but not mean.  cant wait for more

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

My heart is breaking for Bella not only does she feel like it was her falt that the baby was born to soon she has Emma telling her she doesnt want her as her mom and the post partum what a mess.  Edward is a good man and loves her.  Cant wait for more

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

So glad Bella got help other wise she mit have went in the wrong direction and fucked up her life.  I am glad that Kate wrote the letter and Emma knows that she is not betraying her bio for Bella.  This has been a wonderful story to read.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

This has been a wonderful story hot in all the right spots ;)   Thanks for writing it and I am glad you have more coming Thanks

Make-A-WIsh by rbsschess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Edward is the hot QB for the Pittsburgh Steelers.  Bella is the hot rising rock star.  In what seems like another lifetime he was everything to her.  When life throws them together again can they reclaim old feelings and build new ones?  Maybe!!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9810 Read Count: 1796
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Make-A-Wish

Finding his love straightened his life out I loved it

Summary:

 

Will geeky Edward ever be able to talk to his crush, star volleyball player Bella Swan?  Maybe his online friend can help...

AH one-shot written for the Sport of Love challenge.  Now expanded into a story.  :-)

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Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 175278 Read Count: 21016
[Report This] Published: 19 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2011
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was cool



Author's Response:

thank you for reviewing.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  :-)

Fantasy Fulfilled by Cass189 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Written for the Devirginizing Edward One-Shot Contest. He fantasized about her for years. Now, she'll make those fantasies come true. EXB, Lemons!

 

Rated M/ NC-17

 

Fantasy Fulfilled


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4116 Read Count: 1292
[Report This] Published: 19 Apr 2010 Updated: 19 Apr 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was great and she enjoyed teaching get them the way you want them. LOL



Author's Response:

She did! LOL

Thanks for your review.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123471
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

The most amazing vacation with the fairy tale twist but then have to come back to the wicked mother-in-law. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Be My Master

fuck hot

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Christmas Break

holly shit this stuff is hot and Tanya ia a whore.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Second Six Months

Tanya is a stupid slut and i hate her lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Christmas Break The Sixth Year

We had the 3 E's and now we have the 3 S's I love the names.  They didnt have much time to spare once they got to the hospital did they???  When is Esme going to pull her head out of her ass???



Author's Response: She is headed for a breakdown - thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: The Second Year - First Six Months

I loved the part when Bella told Tanya off at the restrant.  Edward is so luck to have her in his life to help with Emily

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Christmas Break - The Second Year

Tanya is such a nasty ho loser.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The Second Year - The Second Six Months

holly shit that was so loving and hot.  Tanya is one sick bitch

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Third Year - The First Six Months

wow so much happening poor dumb Seth I feel sorry for him..  what is Tanya up to???  Big Eddie lol i want one ha ha.