Reviews by troberts
Summary:

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Banner by rpattz1990

Rockstar Isabella Whitlock seems to have everything but after an altercation with her agent, she realizes she needs to find her music again. So she goes back home and finds exactly what, or who, she needs. The question now is, will she let them in? NC-17 for lemons & language


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91606 Read Count: 117425
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2010 Updated: 10 May 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

About time now is he going to freak out or be cool with it?????  cant wait for more



Author's Response:

lol, thanks for both reviews:) More shall come:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

ABOUT TIME FOR THE TELLING AND THE FUCKIN



Author's Response:

lol, I know~!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

WOW the cat is out of the bag and what a way to wake up in the morning.



Author's Response:

Woulnd't that be a nice way to wake up?

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

So everything is almost to perfect now what is going to happen????



Author's Response:

Oh, I have plenty of twists and turns planned!

Summary:

Jasper helps Edward alleviate his concerns about his upcoming wedding night.   NC-17 SLASH  ONE SHOT


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1815 Read Count: 581
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2010 Updated: 13 Mar 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

FUCK FUCK

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: None

Sounds interesting .  I have been to forks kind of funny just to imagin something or someone like that there LOL

Summary:

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143773
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like what you got going I cant wait till things heat up.  Alice nows all LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Glad he showed up and showed her some needed atention.  What happens after he leaves

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

OMG I hate phones sometime so close so close  I like were this is going cant wait.  I love that Rose admitted that she was jeoluse.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

She still has not talked to Edward I am dying here.  How old is Renee??? 



Author's Response:

41 :)

And Bella's being a coward, LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

That was great what a way to meet Charlie and to be only 3 years younger than your girlfriends father I would be will to beat that Charlie is not that happy about this.  Yah I am clapping my hands cant wait for more

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

perfect how are they going to stay apart for three weeks?

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

sounds exciting Bella almost cruched she gets to drive his car how hot is that and then phone sex  WOW WHAT A GOOD DAY LOL.  Sex sceane with tanya bummer .

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Rose is going to be so pissed when she finds out.  So glad he is home and what a homecoming and comin and comin some more lol.  ya I think I am funny sometime.  They will not be able to keep things secret for long will they.  Should be interesting meeting Renee cant wait for more

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

buy a car to get away from press people wow  It should be interesting him meeting Renee.  Would Bella want him to give up his career for her or maybe she just need to come out of hiding and be his women.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Renee there is no other words for her LOL.  I cant wait for the ball I dont think they will be able to not touch each other.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Royce just doesnt get the idea when he is not wanted such a pig.  At least someone else knows about them now Rose is going to be pissed when she finds out.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Rose is very hurt but she will get over it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

What a dinner

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Sex with raspberry sauce sounds like a mess but fuck hot LOL.  Alice to funny.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Ya dont like Tanya but who does???  The Ball should be interesting.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Why did she go back to her apartment????  Jess what was she thinking yuck!  I love Bella's fistyness she is to cute putting people in there place.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Wow Tanya is a bitch only after what will make her look good.  All there mouths will drop open when it is made known that Bella is Edwards Agent..  Bella is taking the little seen alot better than I thought she would it is like she has found strenth.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I am glad Rose is being understanding and going to help. Giving Rose and Emmett a feel for how they sound priceless.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

OK RENEE SHOULD BE SO ASHAMED OF HERSELVE

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Alice is going to call and get in there shit about a wedding?????   Poor Bella . 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

What is James going to do?????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

OMG What is up with that creep James got in mind.  I think he wants Bella and is going to try to mess with her to get her to leave Edward That will never happen.                                                                                                                                                                                                                 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Love the Bella that can tell them what she wants and no backing down.  Love this story

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

That was great Tanya is going to shit her self.  It is fun to see them enjoying themselves

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Almost feel sorry for Tyler NOT!!!  I do feel sorry for Z at least she has given up on her feelings of him feeling the same way.

Summary:

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Thanks to Twihard Fics for the banner.

Edward Cullen is a man of routine. When a homeless girl knocks that routine off track, Edward discovers there is more to life.


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14418 Read Count: 1992
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2010 Updated: 31 Jul 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Peanut Butter Sandwich Man

I loved the timing that was funny.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Thanks I really wanted to know that Alice would be OK



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.

Summary:

Written for the Summer of Smut '09 one-shot contest. Has been rec'd and featured by the Perv Pack's Smut Shack.

On vacation, a beautiful woman is taken captive by a sexy bartender. They become consumed in a night of...ahem...fun. Rated NC-17 for mature themes, profanity, lemons, etc.

[created by me]

I ignored the cat calls that were flowing around me, leaving Rose to deal with them as I leant on my right hand, using my left to coax the bartender forward. He stalked towards me and swung my legs to his side of the bar, grabbing my hips to close the gap between us.

Come join us on Facebook!

[created by me]


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6473 Read Count: 1588
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2010 Updated: 19 Mar 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Captive

He could capture me any time Fuck I would like some of that.



Author's Response:

You and me both *sigh* Thanks for the review!

- tanya xo

Summary:

stories/15495/images/MyBannerMaker_Banner.jpgEdward isn't The only one lusting for Bella's blood!

Carlisle has a few DIRTY secrets ,involving how he creatively quenches his thirst.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Carlisle/None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1980 Read Count: 3799
[Report This] Published: 20 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Apr 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Carlisle Cums Undone

I think you did a good job of writing it  is just desturbing LOL



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I love disturbing :O

Wow...sorry I missed your review before. Maybe better late than never?

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: The First Sip

That is just fuckin nasty and I dont think one cup is going to do him LOL



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Yes, it is disturbing(and fucking nasty,lol)...I just wanted to write something very out of the ordinary.

 

Summary:

It's 1879 Bella Swan has spent her whole life in the small mining town of Mineral Park, her life has always been quiet, uneventful until the arrival of the infamous Hennessey gang and a mysterious stranger.


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3458 Read Count: 341
[Report This] Published: 20 Mar 2010 Updated: 20 Mar 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was fun it is one of them when you know you know love at first sight



Author's Response:

Thanksfor reviewing, it was instanst attraction and me just liking the idea of cowboy Edward lol.

Chrissie x

Summary:

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Edward learns of his wife's infidelity in an un-conventional way 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Emmett, Emmett/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7991 Read Count: 768
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2010 Updated: 23 Mar 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that is why lust and love are not the same i am glad they stayed together and work on it

A New Normal by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella's perfect world is crumbling around her. She feels as though she's drowning when she meets an angry, broken Edward. Can he save her while living in an abusive nightmare of his own? Can they save each other? 

"Growing up is hard. It's hard for everyone,however, some are luckier than others. I always thought I was one of those lucky ones, but as I sat there, I realized how wrong I was."

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138890 Read Count: 29516
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2010 Updated: 03 Jul 2011
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The News

To have your whole world change with a trip to the hospital wow what a blow to a 16 year old.  So sad I cant wait for more

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Seeking Comfort

My heart is breaking for them.  great story so far I love it.  It is funny with Emmett not being Mr. Superstar and Edward is the bad boy that beats Emmett so sad.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Brown Eyes and the Crazy Man

Love Brown eyes meeting Green eyes  poor Emmett.  Alice is such a little firecracker she is priceless More more More



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review each chapter, the feedback means a ton!! You will learn a lot more details in the upcoming chapters, I hope you like them! :) 

Katie 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Girl's NIght

Letting someone know that you care and pitty is sometimes hard to tell the difference.  What is up with Edward and Emmetts parents????



Author's Response:

I agree, there is a fine line between pity and care, most people mean well I think. The next chapter is EPOV and you will learn a lot more about Edward. Thank you for taking the time to review :)

Katie 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Becoming Numb

Wow his parents are evil maybe not the mom but the dad oh ya.  So did Bella have an acident????



Author's Response:

Yeah, his parents will not be winning parenting awards, that's for sure lol. Bella did not have an accident, she is just there to be with her sick dad. Thank you for taking the time to review :) 

Katie

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Do you Want to Go?

It was nice time they had together to bad the rest of there life wasnt as good.  Emmett is lucky his head is still attached to his sholders and not shoved up his ass



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Emmett is safe now but not for too long, lol. 

I hope you like the next chapter :)

Katie 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Details

Cant wait for the dance.  Jasper is in for a suprize. Why is Edwards mom so controling is it because his dad controls everything she does.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing! Edward's dad is really not that controlling compared to the mom, he is just an angry, unhappy man and tends to make everyone around him that way as well including the mom. His mom you will learn is just controlling for the hell of it, she feels the need to be in control of everything. They are a very dysfunctional family :/ I hope you like the next chapter :)

Katie 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing! Edward's dad is really not that controlling compared to the mom, he is just an angry, unhappy man and tends to make everyone around him that way as well including the mom. His mom you will learn is just controlling for the hell of it, she feels the need to be in control of everything. They are a very dysfunctional family :/ I hope you like the next chapter :)

Katie 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 First Impressions and Second Chances

I knew Jasper was going to put his foot in his mouth but we all know that Alice will fix his Ass.  I am happy they had a nice time and Edward impressed the parents.  Shit is going to hit the fan with Emmett so sad.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing! Yes, Jasper is very good at making an ass of himself lol. I hope you like the next chapter :) 

Katie 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Friends No More

I knew Emmett was not going to take it well but grow up man and then to be such a pussy with his mommy covering his ass.  Edward knows how to man up and would his mom just jump off it would be one thing if she was concerned instead of just wanting to control.  Poor Charlie it is hard to see a man that has always been so strong to show weekness just found out today my dad has cateracts.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing! 

I'm so sorry to hear about your dad, it's not fun to see a family member go through health problems :( 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 All Falls Down

Edwards parents are peices of shit and Bellas parents are a breath of fresh air.  Oh no what is going on with Charlie please make him be ok.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter! 

Katie 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Playing Nice

Emmett better not of hurt her or I will help Edward beat his ass.  Cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Well you may want to warm up if you plan to help Edward, he may need it next chapter lol 

Thanks for reviewing :)

Katie 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Seeing Red

OH Emmett is a slimmy bastard fake to the core just like his mom.  Jasper is a kick in the ass.  I love how Bellas family stand beside them and showing there support.  Public school should be interesting for Bella.  Hope the tansplant is a sucsess.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The Big Day

I really dont like Edward parents or should we say the sperm and egg donner they sure dont ack like parents.  That was funny as hell the gifts for Chuck that is funny to lOL.  Wow hot and steamy then he cock blocked himself lol.  cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Hey!

hahaha love your idea for Ed's parents lol. 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! 

Katie 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Summer Blues

I should have my son read this he thinks I am bad because I just want to know what he is doing and with who he is 16.  They are evil just plan evil.  I cant wait till he turns 18 and he can be done with them then they will be sorry for what they will miss in his life but then they can act like he has done them wrong.  cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Hey!

Your review made me LOL! Everything to 16 year olds seems pretty harsh and evil hahaha good luck with that! lol 

Thanks for reviewing!

Katie 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Killers, Frogs and Turkeys, Oh My

I think this is a great story.  I am so worried about Charlie and Edward.  Poor Bella is going to fall apart if something happens to Charlie and cant  have the suport from Edward because his parents are out of there minds.  Where has Emmett been???



Author's Response:

Hey!

So glad that you like the story! We will see how Edwards Thanksgiving went next chapter, as well as what's going on with Charlie. Emmett graduated, so he has been in and out. He's home for Thanksgiving and will be in the next chapter :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Breaking Point

Hs parent are fuckin crazzzzzzyyy.  He needs to reprt them tell about the abuse.



Author's Response:

They are super crazy! Thanks for reviewing, hope you like the next chapter :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Panic

His reality sucks !!  I am glad the officer lisened to him and tryed to help him.  I am afraid for him going back into that house.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Arms of Your Love

I think it was a perfect time for a storm lol.  His parent need to be shot or at least be made public the way they really are. I wish for Charlie to get well soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I hope you like the next chapter :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Christmas in the ICU

No please say he is ok maybe woke up not that he died someone would come and get her not just call her right?????  Love Alice she is a good friend and Jasper is just funny and Edward's parents are just plan fucked up assholes.



Author's Response:

You will learn about Charlie next chapter... and that will be up very shortly! Thanks for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Goodnight, Travel Well

so sad

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Pain

I love Edward what a man.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Aftermath

I am so glad they got there closeness that they both needed.



Author's Response:

I think that was important for them. Thanks so much for reading bb!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 When it Hits the Fan

His parents are fucking crazy and need to be put away and emmett is a big pussy.  Where is Edward going to go???  Bella is going to go crazy if he does not contact her.



Author's Response:

His parents are crazy, don't worry they'll get whats coming to them :) Hope you like the next chapter!

Katie 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Confronting

I am trying to do the tweetter thing not sure what i am doing I sent you a tweet about how I love your story. 



Author's Response: Hmmm I didn't get any tweets from Troberts, is that your name on twitter, or something else?

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Searching for the Truth

I loved Edward Sr being cuffed and stuff that was great.  Did they have Edward committed??????  Thanks for having Emmett admit he is a big pussy.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 You Have to Believe Me

Well at least Edward knows that Bella has not gave up on him and is trying.  I cant wait for the show down.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Uprising

Well I still think his mom is nuts but at least she is willing to try I hope.  I love the way Carlisle called them on there bullshit.  I cant wait till he sees Bella.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Pain and Promises

Thank god he is back my heart was braking for her sitting in his car missing him so much it was unbarable.  Why did he break in ????



Author's Response:

I know, writing the car scene made me cry (and that's not the easiest thing for me to do lol) You'll learn next chapter that he didn't really "break in" Bella was half asleep and panicked. I mean, I guess he did break in, but he didn't bust the window or anything, he just jimmied the lock. He was trying not to wake her... he just wanted to see here. He couldn't wait till the next day :)

Katie 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Moving Forward

So happy to hear from you.  I am so glad that life is moving forward for the two of them.  I cant wait for more

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 The End

I would love an Epi but I love how this ended so far.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Happily Ever After

What a wonderful life that have made.  Thanks for the great story I have loved reading

Summary:

Outtakes from Lustful Awakings. Find out what happened behind the closed doors between Peter, Charlotte, Charlie, and Renee,or William, Catherine, Carlisle, and Esme. Might even be some Emmett, Rose, Garrett, and Kate. Rated NC-17 for graphic lemons, slash, and language.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26618 Read Count: 27943
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2010 Updated: 09 Sep 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well they were getting to know each other better much much better. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

nothing like getting caught by your kids but to be swaping when caught that would be really weird if they were different kids. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow that is a whole lot of fuckin suckin and pushin the stool in LOL.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow look what Bella Alice, Edward and Jasper started LOL 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That is some hot momma and poppa loving going on.



Author's Response:

lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

So they say the family that plays together stays together lol



Author's Response:

And they certianly play together!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

That was funny



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I think they like it LOL

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40841
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Initiation

sounds interesting smut and lemons are good to LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: At the club

Hell I could never stop an orgazin dont get that many lol   at least she got relice in the end lol pun intended

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Flashbacks

WOw what a punishment 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Young Bella moving to town

good background

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: The meeting

I like a little stocking is good

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Bella's daydream and Carlisle's "punishment"

and everything changes just like that????



Author's Response:

Yep, it does. Of course there's more to it than that, but Bella's new desires are a big relief for Carlisle since he already has his eyes on a new sub, so he's more than willing to let her go.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chocolate coloured fantasy

Yes I liked I wondered if he took the thong nasty little boy. LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: New games at the club

Fuck spank me wipe me but I do reveiw.  I love how she turned it around on him good girl she made him so proud.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Soap cleans all

cant wait for next chapter I will not push for when they meet as long as I know that they will meet is good for me it will be explosive I am sure.  Very hot and steamy love it

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Edward's morning

Edward is learning about himself and he knows for sure he wants the girl with the big brown eyes poor boy.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Master Aro

Very interesting time with Aro and now moving on to Tanya.  When is he going to meet Bella.  Bella does work in his building?????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Mistress Tanya

That is very interesting his time with Tanya but his time is up I cant wait till he meets Bella

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: On the floor

Please dont stop just because so many people do not review alot of people read so that is a good thing.  I think a lot of it is that some do not like to admit that they find this very interesting and arousing there afraid.  I am loving it I think it is very interesting and stimulating .  I dont think the BJ thing was to much it is all about submiting and dominating and that is what it is all about.  Please dont stop.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: The job and harsh introductions at the club

Tanya is one sick chicken shit bitch if she wanted to go back to her old sub why not just say its not working out .  Wow how would they do two of them huge bastard the same time??  Thank god he looked up and seen Bella now the healing can begin.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Crush

I want to know what Carlisle is saying to that bitch Tanya what a cold hearted bitch just to dissimiss him like he is nothing I could rip her hair out.  It is a good thing Bella was taking care of Edward or she mit just rip Tanyas hair out.  I cant wait for more.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Reasons

Tanya is a fuckin freak.  I think Esme needs to live her life and tell her kids about the prick she was married to I am sure they knew all along.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Awakening

I love it going to her house and they did not even talk about it he just wants her so much.  I tell you these other fucks reading better review LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Under the canopy

I am glad you had a good vacation now get your ass bussy LOL.  I missed you. Bella is so sweet to Edward



Author's Response:

Yes, my ass is busy busy busy writing right now ;-) (I'm very talented, right? ;-) )

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Sushi

That is one hell of a way to get to know each other I am so happy that they both talked about when they first meet.

Summary:

After a new beverage tax is imposed on New York State, Bella is forced to stretch her pitiful college budgte to the max, until she meets a stranger who is looking for a home cooked meal.  Hilarity ensues.  Warning, this story is rated NC-17 for a reason...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1817 Read Count: 1195
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like so far so great. cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Wow...never thought people would want more like this.  If I continued this, it would be a long way off because I have a bunch of stories that I'm working on that are going up after I complete what's already going on here...but you never know?

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is a humble young girl determined to prove she's serious about making art. Edward Cullen is the pragmatic debonair foreigner, focused on his career and duties. On the surface, Bella and Edward may have nothing in common, until a chance encounter in a hotel hallway sparks a mysterious attraction and a deep need to keep the connection alive. Will true love prove strong enough to overcome the secrets and challenges that lay ahead? Or will they succumb to the pressure and expectations of the people that think they know best? 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78741 Read Count: 29950
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2015
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2011 Title: The Perfect Girl

So good to hear from you I am so excited for them to meet again.  So Jasper thinks she hurt Edward on purpose???

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: The Perfect Girl

im in line what an evil women.  im glad your mom is ok.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Pragmatic Gentleman

This sounds like it is going to be fun.  I feel sorry for Bella having to put up with all the bullshit from the school from her mom Her brother is a good guy that loves her.