Reviews by troberts
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311074
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow

Whow what a bunch of sick fucks

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

omg talk about some sick fucks  more more

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation

Never thought I would like Felix at all and I do you showed he has a little bit of a heart.  I cant wait for more

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth

OMG what a place talk about a mans world. Poor girl.  Someone needs to wax Aro and see if he makes a noise I think not ha ha.  Waiting for more

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

Aro is one sick Fuck no matter what.  So he wants to get Bella pregnut on her wedding day?? to Edward ???? His son by Esme???  He thinks he is GOD????????

I got my Alert

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining

So that explains why Carlisle would stay with them but now his eyes are seeing things clearer now.  What are they going to do when they find out about Bella.???

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

OMFG what a bunch of freaks.  Scrub her like an animal and he liked it

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Embrace

great chapter finely we meet Edward.  So Edward gave consent for Aro to screw Bella first?

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

The only way to find that fucker Aro funny in any way is if he turned out to be a cross dressing prostitue that would be funny.  I am glad that Esme and Carlisle were able to show her some kindness and a feeling of self poor little thing.

Thanks for doing what you said it was a nice surprise to see you updated so soon you are amazing

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

Wow what a twisted bunch Edward believes every word that sick Aro says.  Is Bella going to have to watch him get wipped because she talked to him how not right but nothing is right but it is a great story.  does that make sence?????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment

so they are giving her pills to make sure she is fertil when he take her????   poor girl having to pick out the punishment tool. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

So if Aro know that she is have memories will he have her killed????   I am happy she has Esme.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

You girls are demented and crazy and I am so glad you found each other. I love this sick world you have created.  Yes it is probly closer to reallity than we would like to think.  What are they going to do to help Bella to keep her safe from that sick fuck Aro I would be willing to bet Carlisle is not feeling a whole lot of love for right now.  You guys are on a roll with updates keep it up Thanks.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

OMG you just as well kill me and get it over with because I like to defile myself LOL.  This is so fucked up I love it.  Bella seen her mother????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

I hope Felix will feel bad enough and tell Charlie something but then Charlie would be in danger trying to get her out maybe Felix will help but then Bella wont want to leave Edward just a vicious cycle.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

Felix is who i think is watching her. it is good she has Alice.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

best wishes I just went to my Aunt and Uncles 40th it was great to see people together that long and still be in love.  I hope no one else seen Alice.  She has excepted the fact that she has to give her verginity to Aro???  She doesnt have a problem with this??? 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple

Blessed be you are fucking amazing and I would love more of the training school or anything else you write.  This story has some sick shit and I love it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey

Wow Aro is one sick fuck he enjoys making those around him miserable.  I hope the elders have more power than Aro thinks and I hope that others will figue out that Aro is crazy.  Please dont let him hurt Bella.



Author's Response:

I think his enjoyment and power comes from making other afraid of him.  I think of other dictators and cult leaders.. and fear is the surest way to ensure submission.  It is twisted.. but sadly not far off the map as far as cult freaks go.  We will be here for you as we work through these chapter... Never fear.. we are here..

Thanks for the review.  Have a wonderful weekend.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

OMG first I would like to say thanks for the update so soon love ya second I am dying to find out what Felix wrote to Charlie I cant wait for more

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

I think Edward is going to see some pics of a pretty girl named Bella.  Aro is crazy.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Aro is fucking nuts and those around him are not very stable either.  Please hurry Charlie and Felix.  Aro thinks he is God I hope the elder relize he is the devil.  I hate to say this but I am so sad that you write such good stories because I miss you so much when you do not update lol.  I know you guys have to so bussy so thank you for sticking with the story. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling

Phil is an evil prick.  Where is Edward???  What are they going to do to her????  What did Felix leave for Charlie and is Felix going to go back to the compound to try and get Bella out?????  I have so many ????  LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

How scary is that at least they are together.  Please tell me it is Charlie come to resuce her????  Happy holidays and I will be wishing for more before the new year.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning

So no one knows where she is but Aro and Phil are they trying to reprogram her again.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Seek the First

It has to be a set up no Edward dont go

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

He is so much more of a sick fuck than I thought you guys are disturbed LOL.  I cant wait for more and please tell me it is Edward breaking into Aro's house to get her out?????????   How is he going to try and convince the elders that him fucking the girls is the best way to go???

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

OMFG I am having a heart attack here.  What the fuck hit that bastard in the head take the keys call the FBI, CIA, NBC, ABC, CBS, and who ever else to break this shit wide open.  OMG please hurry need to know what the FUCK is going to happen.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

Thank goodness Felix showed up I knew he was a good guy.  I need to know what is going on with Bella and Edward did Aro find them together????? 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption

I am glad Felix grab his balls and man uped and is telling Charlie everything.  I cant wait to find out who was coming in the room with Bella and Edward.  Happy New Year

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Volturi Order

Aro has lost his mind and has taken the elders with him why are they following him yet he is power crazy????  Poor Carlisle what is going to happen to them when they find out that Edward and Bella are gone????  So happy to hear from you I understand busy but please this story is a must read please dont be gone so long again PLEASE

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Exodus

Still so scarry Bella will never be the same Bella. 

Summary:

My entry for the Steamy Movie Crossover contest featuring the movie Serenity. Bella provides Edward with a distraction while the crew is away. Rated M for lemony goodness.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1678 Read Count: 3590
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 05 Nov 2014
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Welcome Distraction One Shot

lol

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514673
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I need more. I feel sorry for Carlisle and Esme they did not know they were doing anything wrong. The guilt they have to be carrying must be very heavy.  I cant wait to see what happens next.  I have tears in my eyes for Rose poor girl.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

Loving the new site still dont have the alert thing down not getting any e-mails but I am a stocker and have all the stories I am reading in My Fav's.  This story is one of my very fav's.  Victory has the chip in her still so James can track her that way???  Please dont let him be up ther with Vic when Bella goes up there after all the ohers have left.  Poor Carlisle I feel sorry for him he will be devistated when he finds out what all has been happening at the school.  It is funny how a person reading a story can get feelings for those I read about like I know them must mean you are one hell of a writer.   More More More



Author's Response:

Have you got to your Account info...and edit preferences to set up your alerts..just a thought...

And thanks so much.. We so enjoy bringing this story to all of you.

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

OH MY FUCKING GOD NNNNOOOOOO.  I knew that fucker was coming someone needs to rip hi nuts off and feed them to him.  OH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE HURRY PLEASE

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

FUCK FUCK FUCK NNNOOOOOOO..  He cant keep her what is going to happen nneeedd to know NOW lol   MORE MORE MORE

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24

OMG how much time has passed  Please help him OMFG I am going to have an attach of some kind LOL  This story is so amazing.  Hurry with more

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: The Training School Saga

OMFG THANK YOU I dont think i have ever worried about someone in a story before.  Please kill James painfully with the cock cage still on.

 

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

YES YES FUCK YES KILL THAT FUCKER NOW DONT EVEN THINK ABOUT IT.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

That would be cool to see what she was like before she meet fuck head.  I cant believe only two more chapters.  I was impressed that it was Bella that took him down.  I Love the idea of Aro getting James and what about a story of what happens to him with Aro WHAT YA THINK??????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

OMG it is so nice to see that James gets what he deserves.  I can not believe it is almost over I have enjoyed and looked forward to reading this story I get so excited when I would see a new chapter was up.  It is one of the best stories I have read one I would read again and yes again.  Thanks and looking forward to the next chapter and next project you work on.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

So sad to see it over but what a ride thank you so much.  Maybe you should do a short story of James life now I would like to see him suffer more. LOL   Good to see her healing and willing to go back to the life still that Edward and she really like

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624968
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

Love your story and I will follow you anywhere but I am glad that you choose to stay here.  I will be happy once I figure out how to navagate around this site a little better but I like the set up so far anyway.  So shit is going to hit the fan?????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

OMG cant he tell her what he has to do?????  I hate Carlisle he is such a creepy fuck

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Thank you I was thinking I was going to have to hunt you down and hurt you. Cant wait for more THANK YOU  It will be tough for her to be locked in a room with Edward lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: The Perfect Wife

So glad the creeps are gone well most of them anyway.  Poor Esme but she is right you can live through things you think you would not be able to.  Thanks for a great story. Please dont let Edward be a prick for to long .  When are all the boys going to tell Carlisle to fuck himself????????????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

OH My Edward to the rescue.  Thats the man.  So fuck face is steeling Bella without the blessing of Carlisle???

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

OMG he must set her free to see that it is ment to be she will come back to him.  That was a great way for Carlisle to die more pain would of been great but that was good. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Wow I love it and I would be interested in everything you write.  Love the end of the chapter.  cant wait for the epilogue.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

That was the perfect finish to an amazing story thank you very much.  I cant wait to read anything you write.

Summary:

Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36897
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

OK that was very sweet but what is up is Jacob in to the starodes or something like that???? Where the hell is Edward?  Need more

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Thanks for the update I thought you left.  I am so glad to find out what was going on with Edward I was getting pretty pissed at him.  I want to know what is going to happen when he finds out about Bellas date with Jacob???  How is he going to get around Charlie???????

Coffee Shop Angel by Jennmc75 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

This was written for TotallyObsessed82, the winner of my FGB auction. Edward is a broken man new to Atlanta. Will he find happiness with the angel in the coffee shop? Rated M for lemons. No Bella in this o/s.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/OC
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5233 Read Count: 537
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Coffee Shop Angel One Shot

That was a nice story.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)

~Jenn

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Today is supposed to be the best day of Bella's life but she is freaking out. When she revisits her past will she find that she has made a wrong choice? How will she fix it?

AH, OOC.

Rated M for my explicit language and future chapters.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17107 Read Count: 8851
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 01 Mar 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Awkward Attraction

another great chapter love the back ground That is a long time to love from afar poor Edward.  cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It is a long time but when you've known each other basically your whole life, it can be difficult to make the transition to more than friends.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- Another Side of Jacob

Love Love Love this is a cool story I am enjoying just girl talk.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I was afraid it was Jacob but thank Fuckin God she did not go through with it and finily tell Edward she was in love with him.   Thank You Thank You

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue

That was truly a wonderful little story Thank You

Broken by ysar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 103]
Summary: Past Featured Story

I wasn't like the women in those movies.  You know, the ones you catch on the Lifetime network when you're channel surfing over a pint of ice cream at two in the morning?  Everything was perfect.  My grades were good, my college was paid for, and the future of my dreams was set.  Until it wasn't.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33666 Read Count: 15692
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 13 Dec 2011
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Paradise Lost

I dont know if my post went through or not cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Summary:

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Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Another great chapter. Did he put her on a tall enough pedelstoll?  i cant wait for more

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

OH Fuck me what a way to be woke up but not if you are being melested.  She is fooling him or is she just fooling herself into thinking she is not falling for him.  When is she going to meet the girls so she can get some good guy insite about Edward.  Hurry need more Loving your story

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Go Emmett Go  what a guy love him and Jasper too I am in love with Edward but how isnt LOL   I am happy the boys showed him he was wrong in what he did even though she did  love it but that was not the point.  Poor Bella now in pain and feeling all alone but she was alone before i keep on controdicting myself because under different cercimstances she could feel like she had a loving family instead of kidnappers.  What is going to happen in the hospital??????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow he pulled his head out of his ass.  I cant wait to see what happens next please tell me she doesnt go back to her place.  I cant wait till they all get together so she can see what kind of a person he really is with the rest of the family.  Just face it I cant wait LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Please stay focused I am loving this story. I cant wait to find out what he is doing and to see there relationship grow.  I hope she stays in the house with him.  Waiting for more Thanks.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Please dont let anything happen to her she needs to go back to Edwards.  Hurry More More More

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Poor girl not again hope they let her go when Edward gives them what they want. Hurry need her safe and in Edwards arms.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

James is such a creepy bastard and Aro I dont know if I could stop if I started on him LOL There has not been any bad guys that a person could hate like these two.  Jasper good head on his sholders they will find a way before she gets hurt bad????????????  Cant wait for more.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

run Bella run omg get to her fast Edward

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I am so freaked out right now James cannot get a hold of her PLLLLease.  Why didnt Edward answer was he talking with Aro?????  More MORE Please soon

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I have missed your update.  I am excited to see what happens with them now.  Glad to see your blog.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

What I thought it was fuck hot and I love the when can we do it again LOL.  Love Emmett telling Edward to shit or get off the pot so to speak.  Cant wait for what happens next.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I think James is near right???  I am glad they are staying close and are in love.  What a way to be possessed LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Please tell me that they are setting James up and that is not Bella in bed?????????  I am so happy you got over your writers block I will keep my fingures crossed that it doesnt come back.  That was one hell of a date and proposal how cool.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Thank god Kate is alive and James did not have his way with her.  Poor little Tanya.  I am glad that Bella agreed with Edward to go away and what some nice make up sex.  Take care of yourself and get better.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

It took along time to get this update but when we did it was well worth the wait uptill you evil mybabyblues left me with such a cliffy lol.  I cant wait for more or I should say I can wait but I dont want to.  I hope Kate and her baby sister are going to be ok.  Please tell me that the girls are safe????????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I loved this chapter I loved most that Edward beat the shit out of him that was wonderful.  I also love the conection that I felt for them once the treat of James was gone. Thanks cant wait for more.

The Letter by changedbyEdward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is superstar EC Velvet.  Bella Swan, professor of English Lit in Seattle, hears his velvety voice one day and it changes her life. She leaves her abusive fiance, Mike Newton, and writes a fan letter to EC Velvet.  Little did she know that fate was going to intervene and bring her together with this uber-famous hip-hop/rap star and turn her life upside down... or maybe it's right side up.  

fs

Disclaimer:  Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight.  I'm simply taking the universe she created and turning it inside out.  :)  All references to real people, real songs, or real anything else are for entertainment purposes only and only because if I mention it, it means I love it.  I'm not making any money off this story or any of the characters, names, songs, or anything else I might mention.  I'll leave the money making to the experts.  I'm only here to play.

AH/AU/VERY OOC - Rated for excessive language, mature themes, and lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148606 Read Count: 47777
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Mike is a dice Jessica is a ho Bella is sweet and has some very good friends and I think I am going to love it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Freedom

I am loving you you review whore.  To bad Emmett and Jasper didnt get to kick the living shit out of that chicken shit Mike and I do hope that Jess gets what she deserves.  Great letter very sweet and to the point nothing obsesive.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Illumination

Thank you so much for kicking Mikes ass what did Jasper say to him.  I am glad Jess left and no mater how much I dont like her I hope he did not beat her ass.  OMFG I cant wait to read what he said in his letter.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Venom

OMG love it great letters.

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Daddy

So Tanya is a nasty ho bitch that should not be allowed to be around that baby. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Tequila

That was cute even with a hang over she can get that excited for sure she likes him LOL

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Okhotnichya

Yes Tanya fucked up that is a good thing for Edward not for that baby though.  Bella is going to freak out about sending him a pic isnt she????

Reviewer: troberts Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Threshold

Run dont walk and take that baby away from that unfit mother.  Bella can go on tour with them and take care of Abby ya I like that plan

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Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Justice

He loves his baby girl or should we say girls.  Tanya what can I say besides I fuckin hate her.  LOL

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Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Infatuation

What a nice suprise she almost passed out

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Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Velvet

You are so funny.  So she likes all sides of him.  Emmett got to love him.

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Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Breathing

So what kind of shit did Mike say to her???  Someone needs to Beat Mikes ass again.   Edward gets to feel what it is like to have friends that just want to hang out that is cool he feels so comfortable.  I cant wait till Bella meets the baby girl.

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Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Mockingbird

I am so glad she went and that meet in abby went better than she thought it would.

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Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Fuse

A dream holly shit what a dream.

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Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Sailing

How much longer can they hold out and what a bunch of hot cloths wow.

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Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Decompensate

wow what a fucked up ex he has and what a self centered manager it is a good thing he has 3 good wemon on his side Bella,Abby, and Rhainne

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Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Redeemed

Wow Edward has a temper Abby is one smart little girl.  It is time they got a little closer.

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Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Superstar

Its a green light I think they have been thinking to hard about not doing it even though they just meet in person they have known each other since they got the first letter.

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Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Sacrifice

So Bella is going to meet the evil people and they are not going to like her because Abby loves her this may get nasty. 

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Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Butterfly

fuck hot is right

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Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Lucky

so what did that pig fucker Mike say about her??????

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Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Confrontation

Send Tanya up the river for a long time that was just not right and her family not one I would want.  who was standing in the lobby.

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Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Conundrum

Happy to see Mike get another beat down and good thing Bella is feeling better.  It was a nice suprise to see her friends witch are his friends now to. 

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Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Unstoppable

So what is going on is she going to be attact in the hearing???  The song was great thanks