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15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311120
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self
WTF!
What the hell did Renee get them into?! She's only fifteen and they're torturing her. I feel so horrible for Bella. And I'm really scared to find out what happens to her next.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow
I sort of hate Renee. She gave in so quickly and it seems she's going to be following all the rules because she truly does believe in this. I mean she told Phil she loved him and that she wasn't worthy of him. What about Bella? She seems to have already forgotten her.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name
This chapter really broke my heart. 5 WEEKS!? Bella is strong for having lasted that long, but its so horrible that they seemed to have finally broken her. Though Felix seems to be sort of nice since he was helping her a little. What does Aro want her though. He is just super creepy!
Great Story! I am hooked.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation
Interesting POV. I really liked seeing the situation through his eyes. He seemed to end up really caring for Bella. He helped her, but I don't think it redeems him. I completely agree with his opinion of Renee. I am so curious to find out what Aro is planning for Bella, but I'm scared to find out at the same time.
Loved it!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth
This is just so creepy, but I can't stop reading. Its just so good!
How weird and disgusting that Aro bathed her. Ewww....Poor Bella! She is completely brainwashed and just accepting all of Aro's BS. She has to wear a chastity belt and only Aro can touch her until he gives the key to her husband. Ewww...and does that mean she's supposed to have Aro's creepy spawn. He is just sick. Who was Alex though? Was he someone they brainwashed, too? Can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks for the update!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands
Holy Shit!
Aro is so fucking creepy! He is sick and twisted. There's finally a mention of Edward and he's Aro's son! OH MY GOD! Its sick that he has sex with all the girls first, but what happens if they don't get pregnant with his child? I'm really curious as to how Edward will be...will he be demented like Aro or does he want to get out of there? This was insane, but I'm still loving it.
Oh and I got my alert.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own
This is just all sorts of crazy. Aro is really intrigued by her, but he seems to have taken his frustrations out on her. I was cringing during that bath scene. That just sounded painful. Can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Embrace
First, Aro is really creepy! He gives me the creeps, especially when he says,"and allow me my right as your father to plant the first seed." ugh...that's so gross. So Bella is still remembering parts of her real life. Edward seems to be nice, as far as him being brainwashed. They both felt that spark and seem to be attracted to each other. Great chapter!
Happy Easter!
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement
I loved EPOV. I'm glad he likes her and felt that little spark too. How horrible that he was raised there and is brainwashed by Aro. Though it seems he's already disagreeing with some of the rules now that he's seen Bella. Aro is seriously twisted. He's going to make Bella watch Edward get whipped or something right?
Great chapter!
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment
I am so excited this updated. Aro still creeps me out! He is seriously a sick man. I really love that there's already a connection between Edward and Bella. So are the vitamins like pre-natal vitamins or something to make sure she gets pregnant the first time?
Great chapter!
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation
I am finally catching up with this story. I am so glad Esme is helping Bella.
I feel so sad for Charlie. He really loves Bella and is determined to find her. I can't believe he met Felix. He was so close to finding Bella. I think Felix will somehow help Charlie reunite with Bella.
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple
I am so happy Bella seems to be remembering and she knows that this place is just wrong.
I am glad Aro didn't have sex with Alice, but still cringed over how he took her virginity.
I'm so relieved that Carlisle and Esme are looking out for Bella. And I hope Charlie finds her soon.
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey
This is just more proof of how sick Aro is. I really hope that he doesn't have sex or do anything to Bella. I feel so bad for Alice and Jasper being separated already.
Still loving this story!
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....
Poor Charlie. He just breaks my heart.
I'm glad Bella had an impact on Felix because it could lead to the end of Aro. I think Felix's note will help Charlie find Bella.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will
Aro is definitely enjoying the power he has. The Cullens will have to very careful now since Aro has noticed they don't fully believe in this anymore.
I think Edward will run into Charlie or maybe see one of the posters Charlie has.
Great chapter!
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling
I knew Jane wasn't as nice as she seemed. And Phil is just as evil as Aro. I'm scared for what is going to happen to Bella now.
Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515191
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23
So everything is good...for now. At least they were able to leave Edward's house before James could get there. I mean he is going to find them eventually now that he escaped. He'll look for Victoria with the GPS and since they're all together he'll find them all. At least Jake is there now. Maybe he'll be able to help them out of this mess. And Bella told Edward she loved him. At least there is some happiness during all of this.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23
James has ruined so many lives with what he's done. Carlisle has to close the school and Bella and Victoria are in hiding. Carlisle is just so frustrated and exhausted, but at least he has people he can rely on. I really hope that Aro is on their side and will finally be able help.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23
The plot thickens! I thought Jacob would have gone a little crazy when he found out what had happened to Bella and just snap at her, but I'm really glad he didn't. And now he was involved at some point since Laurent seems to actually be the mastermind behind all that's happened. Carlisle is definitely going to flip when he finds out that Bella wasn't the only one forced to go to the school and that Laurent was behind it. I don't think James will be going to Edward's house since he can track Bella. It may have slowed him down a bit with them moving to the cabin, but it doesn't look good that its just the girls and Edward at the cabin.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
NOOOOO!
I knew they were going to be found sooner than later. Who was that though?! James? Laurent?
They were having such a great bonding moment and it just got ruined. The cliffie though...you guys are evil, but I still love ya
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
HOLY SHIT!!!
I knew the chip was going to be how they found Bella and Victoria. How did Edward not hear anything though?! They had to have made some noise in their escape. So Laurent was somehow connected to Aro...hmm? I am so curious to find out whether Aro is good or bad. Though I think James will definitely suffer for using Aro's name. Laurent got what he deserved for his involvement in all of this. How will Bella and Victoria escape now?!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Eek!
So they finally notice that Bella and Victoria are missing. I feel so horrible for Edward. So Aro was getting played, too. Though it seems someone would notice a private jet messing a lot sooner. Laurent is the link in all of this and he was a lot smarter than I thought he was, but since James killed him I'm curious as to what will happen next.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
OH MY GOD!
The situation is so horrible. Poor Edward is so heartbroken that he doesn't even realize he is the one screaming. At least James dropped his phone and it will give them a chance to find Bella and Victoria, but then what will happen if James realizes he lost his phone. This was amazing. I loved it!
Thanks for sharing!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James
OMG! So either Edward and everyone else came just in time to save the girls or Bella knocked James out. Either way...I think James is going to be sorry for all he has done. Great chapter!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella
Amazing Chapter!
I loved that Bella took charge and fought back. Jacob should hand James over to Carlisle. If he went to trial there's always a possibility he could get away with it. He deserves whatever punishment Carlisle and Aro have in mind.
And wow...only two more chapters. I'm sad to see this end, but its an amazing story. Thanks for sharing.
I would definitely buy the original work and I think it would be great to show Bella before James.
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76
James got what he deserved. I wasn't expecting another James POV, but I'm glad we got a glimpse of what he got.
This is a great story and I'm sad to see it end.
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
That was a great ending. Even though you did leave us hanging there at the end.
I'm glad they were all able to move on and get help. Victoria and the baby are doing well, Alice and Bella are going to school, the school was improved, and Edward and Bella are happy. Oh...and James is suffering somewhere for what he did.
I got the alert as I was heading to bed, but had to come and read it!
This was a great story and thanks for sharing it!
Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36897
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Charlie is definitely going overboard with his punishment. She messed up once and he's still holding it against her. And then Jacob calls and Charlie thinks he's the perfect influence for her since she's such a delinquent. I think Jacob has a hidden agenda and is maybe going to cause more trouble for Bella.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
That was a cute date and Jacob was being a gentleman, but I really don't want her with Jacob. Though this could make for an interesting love triangle. Maybe seeing Bella with Jacob will cause Edward to actually go after Bella.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
At least there's a reason for Edward being missing. I don't think Bella will be that understanding about it though. Charlie is definitely going overboard, but I think its something any dad would do. I want his mom...she is so cool and understanding. Great chapter and Thanks for sharing!
Bella and Edward had been together since the first day of school. Jasper also had his sights set on Bella since he first laid eyes on her in 7th grade. Constant flirtation over the years has brought Jasper to a climax. Is Bella going to feel the aftereffects?
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4294 Read Count: 2960
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I'm usually not a big fan of Jasper/Bella, but this was amazing!