Reviews by wuogkat
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Salix Caprea

Thank you Salix Caprea for the lovely banner:

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64699
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2010 Updated: 06 Aug 2010
Reviewer: wuogkat Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42-Something is Up With Bella

Oh no! nononononononooooooo...   ;-)

Reviewer: wuogkat Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47-The Proposal

Love it, babe.  ;-)

 

Immediate Action by TigerBoo2U Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 281]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Immediate Action Banner

 

Bella Swan, Senior Intelligence Analyst with the CIA has uncovered a plot to blow up the capitol, but there's a traitor in CIA HQ and they have their eyes on her. In order to protect the country she loves, she has to risk losing everything.

AH/Some OOC behaviour. Heartfail Warning. Character Death.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131170 Read Count: 36690
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2011 Updated: 19 Oct 2011
Reviewer: wuogkat Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue

Wow, you actually killed them, that took balls.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He didn't want this lifestyle anymore, he wanted love, marriage and a family. Could Bella, who had already raised a family, of sorts, be the answer? What does Bella want?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168155 Read Count: 143875
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: wuogkat Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow... you obviously have issues with pregnant women.

It makes your fic hard to read, because I kind of want to smack you around.



Author's Response:

Hi and thanks for your review...

I have, in fact, 5 children myself, so have no issues with pregnant women whatsoever and I actually miss being pregnant, but oh well.

I'm sorry you find the story hard to read, but I learnt long ago that I can't please everyone.

Thanks for the heads up for wanting to 'smack me around', I'll make sure I dodge.

All the best, Tammy x

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248473
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: wuogkat Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I don't mean to be a troll but:

Noooooo!

"all systems go"

Sorry, I really do enjoy this story, but this phrase originated with NASA.  It broke the third wall for me because it doesn't fit.  There are some anachronistic phrases you can get away with using in historical fiction, but this one killed me. 

This fic is one of my DEAR (Drop Everything And Read) fics though.  I really do love it.



Author's Response:

Hiya,

 

I am sorry that I used this phrase here, because it upset you, and I hate that but in fact, it was actually said in several reference books from the victorian times, thanks to it being the height of the industrial revolution. The first time I saw it was when they made the first steam locomotive. It was only made famous by NASA, thanks to the radio and television.

This is the downside, I suppose, to times before world wide communication. Unless it was in a world famous book, it was missed. Now of course, phrases etc... are made famous in the blink of an eye with the internet etc....

I hope this has explained why I used the phrase as I have tried to stay as true to the times as possible and I hate it when I slip up lol.

All the best and I hope you continue to enjoy the story xx

Reign by Ruthlessly Yours Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 689]
Summary:

Be gentle, be sweet, speak of womanly things, but above all else give your king everything he desires, Lady Isabella Swan of Devonshire does none of these things..."

 

"It was the reign of life, it was the reign of death, of love, of hate, of gold, of dust, it was the era of kings, it was the era of the common man, of truth, of deception, of war, of peace. It was the Reign of Edward and Isabella. #Kingward #Royalward"

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 107093 Read Count: 109440
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2014 Updated: 09 Jan 2015
Reviewer: wuogkat Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I started reading this story today and could not walk away from it. There's just one tiny baby hiccup with your grammar using thees and thous. Please pardon me for being so forward in pointing it out. I looked around for a reference that could help, this is the best I've found:

http://alt-usage-english.org/pronoun_paradigms.html

If you speak a foreighn language it could help to think of "thou" as the informal 2nd person form for English (like "ti" in Spanish).

I really love the story!