Reviews by snowball64
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514758
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

It's so great to see the psycho get his just desserts, let's hope that Aro finds a way to keep the pain coming for years and years and years. I'm waiting in anticipation for the final chapter, but I'll miss it when it's gone.

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Wow, I'm really going to miss this story as I love me some Domward.

Stripped by punkfarie Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 63]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward and Bella both nearly lose their lives when they lose their first loves. Can they find a reason to live in each other or will their relationship send one of them over the edge? OOC, ExB, AH. Rated M. COMPLETE

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 245482 Read Count: 20819
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2010
Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love your version of Edward & Bella so much; they have warmth and character and seem real to me. The rest of the Cullen extended family are lovely. We could all use a family unit like that, but I may have a few knee tremblies if I had a Carlisle of my own.

You are a natural writer with a great ear for dialogue and I enjoyed it from beginning to end.

Just one word from me after reading the full thing overnight - WONDERFUL!

Can't wait for other postings.



Author's Response:

thank you!

i'm glad you enjoyed it and wow! overnight! damn! haha

thanx again! 

Saving Bella by Mynxi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 330]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Jasper returns to Forks to apologize but was never prepared for what he found. Now he knows he needs to make it right. But how? Will Bella find love again?Lemons in the future! Non-canon AU New Moon.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281055 Read Count: 89652
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Nov 2010
Reviewer: snowball64 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I'm blushing like Bella!

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

YUM!

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Mmmm, what is Bella going to do that suprises Jasper. I hope that it's something I'd like to do to Jasper myself. LOL



Author's Response:

*giggles* Well I hope you you were happy with the suprise. Not what you were thinking I'm sure. :D

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing

xoxoxooxox
M & J

Summary: Past Featured Story

The story begins six months after Edward left Bella in the forest, but unfortunately things have taken a darker turn than our beloved SM wrote. This is the tale of how Edward and Bella eventually find their way back to each other, although it is a difficult road traveled. There will not be any reference to the events in Eclipse or BD.

Rating: NC-17 is for lemons sometime down the road!

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Much love to changedbyEdward and JustBiteMePlease for my awesome banner!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94477 Read Count: 29121
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jul 2010
Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Loved Emmett's otter hunt, made me smile. LOL. Please write more soon.



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it....more coming soon!! :)

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Yeah, Bella has a backbone and gives Edward what he deserves for once. Don't let him off the hook too easily. And if you can sneak in a hot affair for Bella with Jasper I'd be most appreciative.

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I love Emmett he's so snuggly, but I just can't think of Mike in any kind of sexual relationship..Eeww..he's just so vanilla it's a turn off.

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Yes, you made us wait for this, but that was a good Bella/Edward lemony moment.

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I'm glad that Bella is holding her own against Edward and not immediately submitting to him as usual. Can't wait to see what Evil Newton and his Ginger Princess are cooking up against the Cullens. MWAHAHA

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I suppose it had to be Angela that was taken as even though Bella would have been drawn to help Lauren or what's her name, Angela has always appeared to have been a good and kind person to everyone she knows so none of the Cullens would wish for her to be harmed in any way. Wish it had been what's her name though, backstabbing false bitch!

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Short but sweet, the stories really moving now.

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Glad the chapter ended on some romance after all the angst. Will Angela and Daddy Carlisle bond over their religious faith I wonder, or will she turn into a dirty girl and try to seduce Ben?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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AU/AH OOC Bad girl Bella Swan takes on a challenging bet to turn Edward, resident golden boy, to the dark side. Can one bet turn into a life time of love? Lemons and adult situations. Better Summary inside. Collab w/Luvrofink and Chartwilightmom


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64046 Read Count: 38007
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Apr 2010
Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: The Bad Girl Bella: I Wanna Love Ya

Yummy!

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: The Bad Girl Bella: Sweet Rewards

Yum, yum.  Edward naked from the waist up being inked - sigh. Your human Edward is turning out to be a naughty little oversexed fox isn't he! I can't wait to see what he does next.



Author's Response:

Oh an inked Edward, so sexy. =0 J

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Bad Girl Bella: A Punch In The Gut

Aw, you heartless woman! Fancy leaving tough bitch Bella heartbroken after her first love. Please let sexy, insatiable Edward stand up to his SOB Dad and make everything good again as I know there won't be any of your naughty lemons until they kiss and make up. Hurry, hurry, hurry!

 



Author's Response:

Well, it might take a few, but Edward will eventually get there. Hang in there with us. =0 J

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: The Bad Girl Bella: WTF!

Ladies, you make my heart swell with glee; a clit piercing for dirty minx Bella. Let's get Eddie in a gimp mask and Jasper in a nice sweaty leather outfit and I can die happy!



Author's Response:

*laughs* Eddie in a gimp mask, that is great. Oh, this Bella is a vixen.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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You're in for one hell of a ride!  Bella and Jasper's worlds collide as they find solace and comfort in one another as friends.  However, as Bella's dreams begin to unfold and she begins gaining certain abilities...it seems that maybe everything that's happened to lead them here, was all part of an intricate plan.  Can road trips, fun times in Vegas, and a crazy Peter help them find their Heaven?

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215333 Read Count: 67840
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Oct 2011
Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Whew! More, more, more. I love naughty Jasper stories and yours rocks. Please, please, please post again soon, but keep the angry/jealous Fuckward contribution to a minimum, he spoils everyone's dirty, pervy fun.

 

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40831
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: snowball64 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Crush

Good story and the D/s scenes are quite raw and hot. I can't wait to see where you take this now that B&E have finally met up.

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Reasons

I know men are weird, but it turns my stomach to think that Carlisle could be attracted to Tanya. I hope for Esme's sake that he never acts on it even if it's just playing around in a scene.

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Awakening

I don't care if this chapter was lemon free, it was nice to see some less sexually overt tension between Dom and sub. Plus I had a good drool thinking of a naked whippedward.

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Under the canopy

Good job I'm a reader and not a writer as I honestly have no words after reading that delicious chapter. *gulp....sigh*

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Sushi

Wow! Whilst it's nice to see them forming a relationship and already having a wonderful start to their sex life, why does Edward always have to have an unfeasibly large cock? It's sure to make any of the (mythical) male readers feel inadequate and it makes me jealous that my beloved has a rather average sized dick. Please let Edward have a fault, even if it's a tendency to not floss daily or have smelly feet. LOL

Summary:

 

Bella Swan is given one night to experience being a Domme. But having Edward Cullen as her sub might be more than she can handle.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5443 Read Count: 1131
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Apr 2010
Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please carry on with the story, you've definitely roused my, erm, interest. LOL.



Author's Response:

I'm glad I roused you, um, interest. =0 J

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sequel to The Good & The Bad. Follow Bella & Edward as they mend their relationship & start their new lives in LA. Old friends & new enemies make life more interesting. With Twilight Records blossoming, Bella & Edward find their niche in the music industry.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55499 Read Count: 20188
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Nov 2010
Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Bad Girl Bella: New Beginnings & Old Feelings

Oooh you teasers what a cliffie to leave us on. Don't tell me that the sexin' was that good that Bella passed out!



Author's Response:

You will just have to wait and see on Friday. Hmm, that would be a good idea, Edward pounds her till she passes out. =0 J

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella struggles to survive on her own after Edward leaves her. A chance encounter with Jasper will alter life for both of them. BxJ. Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and eventual lemons.

  ***Thanks to christine30974 for the beautiful banner!***

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234838 Read Count: 38993
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: snowball64 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Oooh, are Edward and Victoria working together. I wouldn't put it past the dick!



Author's Response:

Everything will be explained next chapter, I promise!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

Must admit to sniggering a bit over Alice going a bit loopy, she was always my least favourite character as I find her very controlling. I'm finding your take on the OOC Bella very interesting and her back story is quite original. I love your lemonettes so far and can't wait until Jasper controls himself enough to slip Bella his enormous lovelength! LOL 



Author's Response:

Poor Alice!  I actually love her in the books and in AH stories, but I need her out of the way here!  Jasper is working on his control, not much mre waiting!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

Less reviews after a lemon...surely not. LOL. I love this story, so I don't know why you're getting so few reviews, I can't wait for each new chapter, I love Jasper and your Jasper is HOT!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  It really isn't about the numbers, I just love hearing what everyone thinks!  I'm glad you enjoy my take on him, but honestly, I've never read a Jasper that I haven't loved, lol!  Thanks for the confidence booster- it's much appreciated!

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

Jasper & Bella make a great team and ...hurrah, I'm happy, Peter's here to do his cool laid back thing.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you picked up on the team aspect of their relationship!  Much more Peter to come!  Thanks for reviewing.