Reviews by jaspersmate81
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Twilight retold. Bella has always felt that she was different. After moving back to Folks to live with her dad. Bella learns not only how truly different she is, and also the world around her AU/OOC Bella/Jasper*Rated NC-17 for Sex&Lang* A/E,Em/R,C/Es,P/C

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 279948 Read Count: 28910
[Report This] Published: 16 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2011
Reviewer: jaspersmate81 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I absolutely loved your story. It was amazing. That whole Resolute Connection thing was so creative! I wish that you'd consider writing a sequel. Maybe a war with Renee, Caius, & Aro wanting to kidnap little Joshua Whitlock for his talents & for revenge on Bella, for turning her back, on the Hippie Bitch. Lol. I loved that nickname. I never really liked the canon versions of Renee, Phil, Jacob, Edward, or Alice. I think Stephanie Meyer got it all wrong & should have made Jasper & Bella the main characters & the main couple. Doucheward & Malice the Pixie Bitch really would be perfect for each other just like the Major & Bella are. I mean in canon, how in the world would an empath be able to stand having the crazy energizer bunny, shopoholic, midget for a mate? It would drive him insane. I know it would me if I was in his shoes in canon. Anyways, keep up with the excelllent work! Yeah, Mama4dukes rocks, too! I know how challenging it wis to write a good fanfiction. I started writing a Twilight/Supernatural Crossover one  on Wattpad called "Crimson Apocolypse" by one of my pen names: "bellawhitlock81." In my story, Bella & Sam Whinchester are twins, trying to get Dean back out of Helll, while struggling with being forced by a possessed by Azazel, Jasper. Whom had been secretly, & unknown to Bella, force-feeding, an unwitting, while sleeping Bella, demon blood. Which caused both siblings addictions to become supernaturally chaotic and they head down a path of self destruction & insanity withtheir newfound powers and lack of self control over their shared addiction for demon blood. They spiral down, while heading to Bobby Singer's house to try to fiqure a way to get Dean out of hell. Meanwhile, Crowley, Rowena & Lucifer have their own psychotic agendas of controling the doomed duo, as future Vessels for the True King & Queen of Hell. Yup, my story is a little intense, but I have so many ideas for it, but I hate getting stuck with writer's block in which direction to take my story. I loved how you incorporated all the different characters' POV into your story and the whole Elven theme of yours fit so flawlessly, in with the Twilight Universe. Keep up your excellent work! You are an amazing writer. Thanks for writing your story. Please conider a sequel, I think it would be awesome to read one.