Reviews by dacoops
Sight by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53868
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Oct 2014
Reviewer: dacoops Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Junior

wow, i love it! Bella, is confident, snarky and WONDERFUL! Give me MORE!! LOL 

Reviewer: dacoops Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Prove It

I like bella best when she's yelling at people! LOL 

The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 500]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

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This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60392
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: dacoops Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5. Meet and Greet - Bad Tanya!

Thats just wrong and disgusting. Jumping into her ass that way, no lube or prep he probaby tore her, not to mention he was shaking her so hard she started bleeding from the nose, no telling what damage he caused. Not sure if Im going to keep reading. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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It's been years since the Cullens left.  There's been tragedy in Bella's life; she will find love where she least expects it.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139798 Read Count: 20503
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Apr 2010
Reviewer: dacoops Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: GETTING ACQUAINTED

First of all i like the slow burns too, so keep it up! Secondly I also have a rabbit so no problems there! Thirdly, Edward will probably freak out, thats just him. I also think that when Bella is ready for them to know it should be a joint decision... Bella still feels betrayed by Alice at the very least! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the great review.  I'm glad you enjoy it...there is more too come.   :)

Reviewer: dacoops Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: INTERVIEW WITH A VAMPIRE

I just rewatched Interview with a Vampire and I saw alot of Edward in Louie too!! LOL 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Yay!  I'm so glad it wasn't just me!

Summary: Past Featured Story

She was born special and had a destiny that could change the world.  She is the Keeper! He will be the Overseer!  Together they try to save the Cullen's and restore the balance.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64270 Read Count: 26857
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Apr 2010
Reviewer: dacoops Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Digby, Elisabeth & Intruders

WOW, this is soo cool! That you are using all mythical creatures is especially neat. I only wonder who Bella supposedly 23 can be thousands of years old and have 10 kids all old as or older than Edward himself? Is this a Bella/Edward HEA or will he just have to suck it up? Perhaps there is another Bella out there, his Bella? 



Author's Response:

He will have to suck it up and live with his mistakes.

 

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: dacoops Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Deciding

Edward needs a mate, If he did I would think that things between Bella, Gabriel and Edward would be less tense. However, not until he lets her go of course! 

Summary:

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Pleasure or friendship?

That is the choice offered to Bella when she finds the one man that can bring her body to new heights, unfortunately he is already taken. By her best friend!


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/James
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3970 Read Count: 503
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 22 Mar 2010
Reviewer: dacoops Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: My Best Friend's Boyfriend

so totally not what i thought it was, Great Job!!! I'm usually hard to confuse. 

Summary:

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After Edward left Bella never had much luck with life: her mother gets pregnant and dies in childbirth and her step father doesn't want anything to do with them. Charlie dies from a car crash in Seattle and Jacob imprinted and left her at the alter.

Even 10 years latter Edward Cullen still haunts her memory, and what could happen when he comes to her school, and how is it she doesn't appear a day over 23? Good genetics maybe?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28148 Read Count: 12872
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2010 Updated: 31 Mar 2010
Reviewer: dacoops Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Funeral: Life is Beautiful

okay, im a stickler for at least TRYING to maintain a semblance of reality. babies two months early with underdeveloped lungs would be in a NICU Newborn intensive care unit where they would be under lights to keep them warm and oxgyen to help develope their lungs. They wouldn't be held at all and certiantly wouldn't be allowing people to walk around with two babies in their arms, its unsafe and a liability to the hospital. At a week old, especially premie babies won't giggle, doesn't happen, they barely smile before 8 weeks old. They may have awareness and possibly eye contact but they are't interacting. Oh, and your summary, bella is 17 when Edward leave, after ten years she would be 27, not a big stretch to "not look a day over 25,"??? 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Also I did not know all that about premie babies, as I don't have children or am around babies. I am only 17, so I wasnt aware but lets just pretend they are speciel...as for the age thing. She'd be 28 actually, and it was meant to say 23 not 25, sorry about that. Bella is actually 18 when he leaves as well, it was because of her 18th b-day he decides leave...overprotective fool.