Reviews by kjoyp
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 310958
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

Twisted but believable.  Reminds me of the self-flaggelation of monks.  Yikes.  Keep it coming pretty please.  Thanks.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624470
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Carlisle right?  Yeah.  That's what I think.  Poor Bella.  :-(

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Aww.  I really loved this chap.  I'm so happy Edward was waiting for her and that she still wanted him after all that. 

 

Interest...I think Renee's story will be easier to swallow simply because she did get away and found someone else and was able to rebuild her life.  Esme's story is so full of tragedy and inner strength...so so hard to live and I'm sure hard to read.  I think I would cry my way through it if that's what you wrote.

Frisson by The Antimatter Rated: M starstarstarstar [Reviews - 73]
Summary: Past Featured Story

In a world where vampires rule, there are those who choose not to be ruled. Humans are running for their lives and trying not to get caught. Alice Brandon was one of them. Was. Finally caught, she is made a slave to serve a powerful owner. AU/OOC AxJ

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90973 Read Count: 14237
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start.  I like your premise and look forward to reading more.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116412
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yeah, I like possesive, dominating Edward too.  Keep it coming please.

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yeah, I did love this chapter.  Thanks for writing it.  :-)

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I read your chap (fabulous) and your AN.  People who complain about the length of time it takes you to write something they're able to read for free have absolutly no sense of gratitude.  When they pay your bills they can have say over how long it takes you to get something done. 

Personal opinion over chapter length.  I prefer chapters where something happens, gets done, epiphany realized, etc.  I know some chapters are just inbetween chaps but when possible I prefer something to happen.  I think you're doing fine.

Thanks for the great read!

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Nice chap.  Thanks.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171310
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Really loving your story.  It's good to keep some mystery about Bella's POV.  Thanks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153025
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: The Doctor's Home Life

Very nice job.  Thanks!

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995606
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Wow.  What a chapter!  And thanks so much for not splitting it up.  :-)

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Very good practice chapter.  I really loved the scenes they did.  Nice job.  I'm actually kinda hoping Alice doesn't get the nerve to tell Jasper by Tuesday cause that makes it more angsty, challenging for Bella.  To protect her friend and tell what she's afraid to.  Thanks!



Author's Response:

you naughty girl, you!  I will see what we can do to accommodate your twisted mind, okay?

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Very very nice job.  I think I would have preferred that Bella didn't collapse at the end.  She's wronged Edward and ought to try and be strong enough to comfort him and apologise rather than forcing him to comfort her through her own weakness.  Maybe she's not that strong, but she should wish to be I think.

 

Perfect punishments.  Sometimes the hard ones sink in best.  And that punishment fit the crime I think.



Author's Response:

thank you for your insight and review

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

wow.  Billy's pressing charges?  That should be a very easy trial for Bella to win I would think.  Stressful, but not difficult.



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review - sending you some special love :)PEOPLE LIKE US - OUTTAKE # 6

OUTTAKE - CONVERSATION BETWEEN JASPER AND ALICE

"Guys, I've got to go - Jazz please give this some serious thought and Alice, you need to stop being so fucking stubborn. I love you, Squirt!"

Edward almost crushed her in a hug. He slapped Jasper on the shoulder as he ran out the door.

 

"So... you talk about the size of my schlong?"  Jasper said.

Alice looked up at him with mounting excitement, "Well, it's quite impressive..." she said huskily.

Jasper smiled at her.  "Can we talk? I mean really talk; I've missed you Tink..."

Alice smiled through her tears. "I've missed you too Jazzy...."

Jasper looked uncomfortable for a moment and it bothered Alice.  She was used to Jasper Whitlock being decisive and in control.  Seeing him looking ill at ease was new.  There had been many disagreements in the Whitlock/Cullen home since Alice had moved in with Jasper two year before.

She had never lived alone, besides when she had gone to college and even then, she had attended Berkley, so that she was close to her family and Jasper.

Although over the years, they had learned to deal with Jasper's travelling for work and Alice's part time job as Edward's PA which had taken her away from time to time, through everything, including Alice's training as a submissive, their lines of communication had always been open and honest.

Alice had grown up in a house hold that was opinionated and not scared of voicing their points of view.  Esme and Carlisle had encouraged their children to have their own opinions and to share them.  They had also taught them to stick to their guns.

This was one of the many things that had attracted Jasper to Alice in the first place.  Although she was much younger than him when they met; he had always found Alice to be interesting to talk to and inevitably to argue with.  She was a spirited and enthusiastic young woman, with a warmth and energy that seemed to draw him in from the first moment.

Jasper on the other hand had grown up in a large family with two parents that had stuck together over the years because there was no other alternative for either one of them.  They were hardened by life, worn down by reality and for a reason that Jasper had never been able to fathom; they had decided to have three children of which Jasper was the youngest.  Eventually Jasper's father had strayed and a few years later, when Jasper was about twelve, he had suddenly come back to the trailer park where they lived with three small children in tow!

He had told Jasper's mother that they were his dead sister's kids, but after awhile he had confessed that they were his.  Jasper felt sorry for the three youngest children and when he had begun to make money from modeling and small acting jobs, he had made a decision to see that they would have an opportunity to further their education, go to college and make a proper life for themselves.  Although none of the children were really close or affectionate with each other, Jasper had stuck to his word and the three younger children had gone on to college.

Jasper couldn't believe that Ricky, the youngest of his stepsiblings had taken advantage of Jasper's generosity the way that he had!  Jasper had never asked for any compensation or payment for the money that he had given to his siblings or parents over the years; the only stipulation he had for continuing to support his mother and father was that the house that he had purchased for them remain in his mother's name.  Jasper was not close to his father and the distance had only grown when the man had abandoned his young family, leaving his wife to work three jobs to feed and clothe their three children.

Jasper had always thought that he would never find anyone to settle down with.  He didn't ever want the life that his parents had; tired, sad, disillusioned and settling for something because there was no time or money for dreams of something or someone else.  Someone better.

So the first step that Jasper had taken at the age of sixteen was to have himself emancipated.  He had tried to live in Los Angeles and he had hated every moment of it but as he begun earning good money, he decided to take classes at the local community college.  The first one was on finances.  Jasper wanted to know how to look after his money and how to make it grow.

He trusted few people and although people liked his quiet charm and whit; Jasper had a way of standing to one side and observing people that he found made him a good judge of character.  Jasper had come to rely on that instinct over the years.

It was an instinct that he could no longer rely on.  He had never thought for a million years that his younger brother would ever turn out to be the low life, perverted bastard that he was!  Every time Jasper thought of what Ricky had done, how Richard had betrayed his own brother by lusting, perving, salivating over his Alice!  His Alice!  Jasper wanted to kill Rick with a cold fury that he had never felt before.

How he had touched her, fucking forced himself on her when Jasper had been careless enough to leave her alone with him... FUCK!

Alice gasped as Jasper jumped to his feet.  His face was a cold, furious mask.

"Jasper please!  If you want to talk to me, then you need to calm the fuck down!  I can't reach you when you are like this!  If you are angry with me then just say so and let's get it out there!  If you think that I did anything to encourage your brother..." Alice cringed away as Jasper was suddenly in front of her with his hand clasped over her lips.

"Never - NEVER, EVER call that fucking piece of low down shit my brother!  I will kill him if I ever see him anywhere near you again!"  Jasper spat out as he held her.

Alice whimpered and she closed her eyes.  "Jazzy, you are scaring me..." 

This wild man wasn't her Jasper...

Alice felt the tears running down her cheeks and over Jasper's fingers.

Suddenly she was free.

Alice pushed a fist into her mouth to keep the sobs as quiet as she could.  Her whole body was trembling.

"Alice... sweet Jesus, I'm sorry... I didn't mean to scare you... Ali..."  Jasper choked out as he sat crouched clear across the room from where Alice sat.

Alice could see the anguish clearly on Jasper's face and she felt even worse than she had in the past few days.

This was all her fault!

"Come to me..."  Alice said, but Jasper just shook his head.

Alice slid off the sofa onto her knees and she crawled slowly across to where Jasper had slumped down against the wall.

Jasper could feel the intensity of Alice's gaze as he watched her moving slowly towards him.

"Ali..." he said in a half pleading, half warning.

"No.  You've spoken and now it is my turn..." Alice said when she was inches away from his face.

Her eyes searched his intensely.  The remorse and sorrow that Alice saw gave her the courage to move closer until her lips met his.

Jasper's head jerked backwards, but with nowhere to go, he hit the wall.

He cursed and rubbed his head.

Alice grinned at him, "Maybe that'll knock some sense into your thick skull!"  She quipped as she arranged herself between his outstretched legs; her thighs straddled his open ones so that he could feel her heated core through her jeans.

Jasper shut his eyes tightly and moaned as he tried to adjust himself.  Alice giggled and winked at him.

"We can get to that later, but first let's please resolve this ‘thing' once and for all!"  She said with determination.

"Gladly, Darlin'."

"Okay, I'm going first.  I need to tell you why I didn't tell you about... what was happening in the first place, but you cannot freak out on me!  Do you promise?"

Jasper could see how anxious Alice was and once again he was filled with remorse at his earlier behavior.

"I promise."

Alice took a deep breath, "I know that this might sound crazy to you, but when it happened the first time; I tried to just shrug it off.  I thought that perhaps I had imagined it or misread his signals in some way.  The next time it happened, your... well your father was in the room.  He, Rick grabbed my ass as I walked passed him.  I turned around as saw them looking at each other and Rick just winked at me and they burst out laughing... Jasper... you promised..." Alice broke off as she watched Jasper's eyes become dark and wild again.

Jasper felt as if he was ready to explode!  That no good, low fucking, good for nothing... BASTARD!  I. will. Kill. Him.

Jasper felt Alice's tiny hand stroking his cheek and he refocused on her anxious face.

He kissed her quickly, "I'm okay, Ali, I promise.  I won't freak out on you again."

Alice nodded slowly, "He apologized to me later - your father, I mean.  The next day he told me that he had too much to drink and that he had made Rick promise never to touch me again.  He begged me not to tell you and then he said that... some girls just have an ‘air' about them..."

SON OF A BITCH!

Jasper opened his mouth to speak but Alice put her fingers over his lips.

She continued. "I know better than that, Jazz!  I know better!  I was raised to know better than that!  With all their bullshitting and nonsense, my brothers have never, ever treated any woman including me with anything than the utmost respect.  You have never treated me like a whore, but at that moment, I felt dirty.  And I felt like a two bit whore, who didn't deserve anything better.  Rick kept touching me, stupid little insignificant ‘slip-ups'.  Every time he was around me, sometimes you were in the next room or you had your back to us... He would graze my breasts by pushing past me in a doorway, or he would rub himself against me if he were standing behind us..." Alice shuddered in revulsion and Jasper couldn't take it any longer.

His arms wrapped Alice in a vice like grip. "Never, never, never..." He said over and over again against her neck as he pulled her closer.

"Jazz..."

"No - it's my turn now... never, ever again, Mary Alice Cullen.  Promise me that you will never let anyone ever make you feel like that again.  Especially not me!  God, Ali, I love you so much!  Just the thought of another man touching you... Fuck!  It's too much to even contemplate!  Do you know how I felt when I found out that Rick was... forcing himself on you?  When we forced Bella to tell us and we did force her - she didn't have a choice really, I wanted to fucking kill someone there and then!  As you know, I sat up all night just thinking about what could have happened to you!  And about how I was going to take care of you this time!  I couldn't help you last time, Darlin'.  I wasn't able to stop that animal putting his hands on you... but I was going to make sure that Rick never ever touched you again."

Alice brushed the tears of Jaspers cheeks.

"I love you so fucking much, Mary Alice Cullen-Whitlock.  You own me mind, body and soul.  If I lost you, my life would be so empty... please forgive me for hurting you and dragging this shit out.  Please, please don't ever put me through this again, Tink, my heart can't stand it."  Jasper whispered as they held each other's faces and gazed with longing into each other's eyes.

"I love you, Cowboy; you are my everything... my lover, my best friend, my Dom, my love.  I am sorry too.  No more secrets."

Their kiss was a relief.  For the first time in almost two weeks, their lips were soft and forgiving.  Lips touched, brushed, nibbled.  Tongues dueled and teased.  Eventually they couldn't take it any longer and Jasper held Alice to him as he tipped her onto the floor and loomed over her, his knees pushing her thighs apart.

Alice panted into his mouth.  "Can I get my clothes back?"

Jasper smiled against her lips, "yeah, especially the underwear..."

Alice giggled, "can I get my car back?"

Jasper shook his head, "sorry, you will be driven around for a while..."

Alice groaned, "but I can see my Bestie?"

Jasper rocked back on his knees as he looked at the bright twinkle in Alice's eyes. "Mary Alice..." He said with narrowed eyes.

Fuck! He is so sexy when he does that... now I need to change my panties! Damn Cowboy!

"Hmmm... take me upstairs Jazz... I've missed you..." Alice uttered the magic words.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

An hour later, Alice lay sprawled across Jasper's bare chest.  Her eyes were closed but she was humming as Jasper played with her hair.

"Alice?"

"Yeah?"

"Supervised visits only..."  Jasper kissed her forehead.

"I know - but that's only for now..." Alice smiled to herself.

She wondered what Kate, Bella and Rosalie were doing on Saturday after the therapy session?  She had heard that Gap was having a sale....

Everything was right with the world after all.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

I hope that you liked it!

Love

Michele

Friends in Love by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is desperate to move out of his apartment with Alice and lands in the only campus housing available, a co-ed apartment with Bella Swan. Both have feelings for the other but are unable to voice them and find themselves in separate relationships. As the friendship grows in spite of deeper feelings trouble brews and Edward finds himself being pushed to his limits while Bella deals with some of her issues. So what can you do when you love your friend...read to find out! Be warned that this story deals with the subject rape and abuse.

 

FriendsinLove

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119515 Read Count: 36669
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2011
Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Understanding Nila's Reasons

Tie-dyed...I like it.  Being accident prone myself, and the mother of two little boys, that phrase will now become part of my vocabulary.  Thanks!



Author's Response:

your welcome...glad u like the story

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Of Finding a Job and Formulating a Plan

I love Bella's interactions with Carlisle.  It's fabulous for her to be working with him.  Looking forward to your next and getting closer to meeting Edward.



Author's Response:

She's getting veeerrryyyy close to meeting Edward.. won't say when, but it's coming soon.

Glad you're liking the B&C relationship - I'm having fun writing it.

Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Of Butting Heads and Birthday Parties

Ha ha.   That was so wrong Edward!  If he wasn't serious that's just hurtful.



Author's Response:

That Edward is a dirty cheater, isn't he? We'll see how Bella handles this little surprise in the next chapter.

Thanks for reading! :-)

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends

I've gotta wonder if she's just going to tell him "I love you" on accident at some point.  I know she's just bursting with it.



Author's Response:

Hmmm... that might freak him out a bit, wouldn't it? She better keep control of herself! LoL!

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Of Clearing Names and Coming Clean

I'm so glad Bella told Carlisle about Esme and the rest.  It gives him hope. 



Author's Response:

Yes... he needed some of that! :-)

Thanks for R&R!

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

Yea!  Wow, what a proposal!  Nice.

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

This is exactly how I thought it would be.  Why would I be outraged?

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

he he he.  I like Edward's solution to Bella's bed problem.  Too perfect.  So how much longer until Bella returns to her time?  Not rushing, just curious please.



Author's Response:

That's assuming Bella will return to her time... don't know that that's gonna happen. :-)

Looks like the story will be 34 chapters, plus an epilogue, if that helps.

Thanks for reading! :-)

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality

Yea!  I've been wairing for this chapter!

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments

Lovely job!

Summary:

Bella became convinced that she's destined for single life after she broke up with her first boyfriend, Edward Cullen, back in high school. Determined to be the President of her parent's company, she's prepared to do anything to have the job. However, what would she do if her parents only want her to do a simple thing; to get married to the son of their friends whose name just happens to be Edward Cullen?  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61689 Read Count: 41081
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2010 Updated: 30 Aug 2010
Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Reason Twenty-four

Very nice job.  I enjoyed reading this in the early morning hours as I nursed my baby.

Swing Me Home by fiberkitty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
Summary:

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Mourning the loss of her husband, a widowed Bella moves back to Forks. Fate keeps throwing recently divorced Edward into her path. Can they fight past the pain and form a life together or are their hearts shattered beyond repair? ExB,flashback BxJake


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60506 Read Count: 5841
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2010 Updated: 24 Jul 2010
Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: BPOV: Friendship

Nice chap!

Blind Faith by rmcrms5 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

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Karsyn McKenna grew up, sheltered and loved, in a small Texas town.  Chase Carter is the local rancher who has secretly loved her forever.  Gabriel Thompson is the stranger who comes to town with secrets of his own.  Caught in a web of deception and lies that lead to murder, she must choose between the man she knows or the one who holds her heart.  Will blind faith be her salvation or her destruction?


Categories: Original Fiction, Drama, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2357 Read Count: 683
[Report This] Published: 15 Jul 2010 Updated: 17 Jul 2010
Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You will post when you've got a book out in print so we can all buy it, right?  :-)



Author's Response:

No, I'm going to keep it a secret...lol!  Yes, everyone will know!  I'll twitter, facebook, scream and shout and twcs will advertise it.  It should be Oct or Nov.

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282956
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Wow, what a revelation!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen was brought up in a world where responsibility to your family and class was everything. Tired of the endless pursuits of women he becomes more and more jaded. That is until, he meets his match…..

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113881 Read Count: 18881
[Report This] Published: 01 Aug 2010 Updated: 03 Dec 2010
Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: 2. Empty

Yea!!!  I couldn't really tell from the first page or summary but I'm so excited about your P&P/Twilight fic!   Perhaps you could do another jane austen twilight crossover.  My other favorites are persuasion and sense & sensibility.

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: 4. The Assembly

 

Very nicely written.

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: 5. Invitations

I like your choices for Edward's reflections and thoughts.

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: 6. Impressions

Nicely written.  I'm really enjoying your fic.  Thanks.

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: 15. Captivated

I think you've got a typo. 

 

At breakfast, Lady Irena announced she would be busy discussing matters with her parson and other tenants in need of assistance. Jasper was occupied with answering letters from the Major general. Luck was defiantly/definitely on my side

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: 17. Easter Part II

I stopped suddenly, hearing a barley/barely distinguishable sound.

 

Very nice job by the way.

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: 27. Aftermath

I certainly like the ending you gave Victoria.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I appreciated your reviews and the typo's you caught. I always felt despite how stupid Lydia had been she could have been so much more with proper guidence.

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238795
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Sweet!



Author's Response:

Thanks =)

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Couldn't Bella just let Carlisle draw her blood or maybe let Edward take it directly???  It would surely hurt less right? 



Author's Response:

I see you're thinking ahead. lol

Carlisle will try his best to intervene and take her blood but it won't be so easy for him to do so. The vamp gov't is very strict about blood donation protocol. Hopefully, Carlisle can take over in future chapters. And as for Edward....well let's just say that's where the bloodplay will come in. Not sure what chapter tht will be yet tho...

Thanks for reading/commenting

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I hope Carlisle explains what's wrong with the medicines and what strength or prescription would have been more appropriate.



Author's Response:

Carlisle will def. explain what's wrong with this medication.

Thanks for reading and commenting =)

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80452
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Yea!!!!!!!  I'm really LOVING this turn of events.

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

"But…I don't mind being touched," I told him. "I mean, no one's ever really…held me before. Not to make me feel better, I mean."

 

I'd really like to see a lot of this.  Bella learning casual, affectionate touch.

Summary:

wlahc

Bella and Edward have grown up practically hating each other. Friends and family will force them closer than ever before. Will they try to fight it, or give in? AH/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future Lemons.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 113597 Read Count: 27217
[Report This] Published: 22 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Happy fucking birthday

Aww.  Nice chap!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389383
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Super fabulous job.  I desperately want to know what was going on in Edward's head during the dinner and what happens next.  When can we look forward to another chap?

 

 

Pets: Bebe by Maren Smith Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 172]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Welcome to Bebe’s world, where for centuries human beings have been the focal point of the exotic pets trade.  But now, the government has declared humans an endangered species, shutting off the supply from the wilds of Earth and leaving only those who are born into captivity available as pets.

Meet Bebe, taken from her captive mother at a tender age, she is now the companion of monsters.  She has been pampered, loved and cared for all her life.  She has never seen Earth, never known the hardships of life in the wild like the humans living in the nature preserves.  And yet, life is change, and for Bebe, there is no escaping this one irrefutable, universal fact: An overprotective parent is a good pet’s worst nightmare.

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Fantasy, Erotica, NaNoWriMo, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 106 Read Count: 10838
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

Yea!!!  Finally!  Very well written.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I remain, Yours by momatu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 469]
Summary: Past Featured Story

i remain

After unexpectedly being given an antique desk and finding a letter written by Edward to his cousin over nine decades earlier in a hidden compartment, Bella, on a whim, decides to respond and starts them on a journey neither could have ever imagined. 

Perhaps there are some things we aren't meant to understand, just accept....

This story will eventually contain character death.

 

fs Banner Fictionators  Blinkie

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Can't wait for an update, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 419567 Read Count: 77495
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2012 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
Reviewer: kjoyp Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Nice chap.  I'm a little frustrated by a lack of progress, but then I suppose Edward is too.  ;-)



Author's Response:

The next chapters are set in Forks, and *someone* starts connecting dots!  Good things come to those who wait, I promise!  Thanks for reviewing!