Reviews by lynard69
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514132
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

I must say that I was pleasantly suprised at how much I LOVED this story.  i was sure that it would be a lot of plotless sex.  But in fact that story would not have made sense without the sex.  I was pleased to see that all the scenes were a part of the plot and did not take over the story.  It was a beautiful balance of drama, smut and falling in love.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind coments.. We are really glad you enjoyed it. We are writing the original story to it.. which will be similar but a little different as a series.. we hope you like that as much when it comes out.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624459
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Okay, so let me start by saying....WOW!  I am floored my the plot and the impecible writing.  So funny story:

Like many female fans of fanfiction, my Husband just doesn't get it.  So of course the once time he sees what I am reading it is the part where Charlie is fingering Bella and saying Cum for Daddy.  So he shoots up and yells "what kind of sick shit are you reading?  Is this what you are into?"  So I calmly explain that although it is quite demented, it is a little like a train wreck.  You shouldn't look but you cannot pull you eyes away either.  So needless to say, I am so glad that I stuck with it.  Very much like The Training School Saga.  Although full of demeaning sex, it would not have been complete without it and to fully appreciate it you need to ride it out to the end.  I am one who has a hard time giving up on a story no matter how bad, but I really ended up liking yours a lot.



Author's Response:

Ha! I had to do a lot of hiding from my husband while I wrote this story. I often hide what I'm reading on ff from him also. He just wouldn't understand. I'm glad you stuck with the story and liked it. Please check out my other stories as well as my new novel available from TWCS Publishing House, Blind Faith.

Happy Thanksgiving!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153025
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 02 May 2020 Title: Chapter 25: Mom

I am glad you are back, welcome.  I will have to refresh my memory a bit though..

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 372980
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

That was such a sweet story!

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995606
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

This is the first story I have read that was not yet complete and now I know why.  I cannot stand the suspense!  This story, aside from the grammar and spelling errors, is very well written.  I have been moved in more than one way.

My only concern now is Angela.  She has never been a bad character and I have a feeling that she is going to be dead or in a coma or something.  That would be sad.  I was looking forward to hearing her dish on her new hottie.



Author's Response:

hey - thank you for the review. So yeah, you have picked up on the Angela thing - that just happened. When I was writing this story it had been playing around in the back of my mind - there are always stories within stories... as I am just finding out! These characters don't listen to ANYONE!!!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I would love for them to work it out, but there will obviously be troubles.  Not to mention the mess once the tabloids find out.  I LOVE the family dynamic.  They are so loving and supportive and protective.  I would love to see more of that.  The both need love and security.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I love this story! Greedily I wish you would update more than once a week, alas I know that life has other plans...

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

It may have been short, but it was filled with quality.  You covered all the big topics and the little.  Adjusting to a new lifestyle is difficult on all relationships, but you never glossed it over, you made it real.



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your kind words.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Just when it was getting good!  AAAARRRGGGHHHH!  I cannot believe I have to wait another week.  SO EXCITED!  This is gonna be good.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review - working on the next chapter!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I would love to know what happened with Alice and Jasper.  Maybe even a little flashback from their own ceremony.  I guess I am suprised that Ali ans Jazz are not yet married or engaged.  They should be and maybe would be nice after these last two weeks.  Only someone who really loves another gets that upset about what happened.  maybe a real commitment is what they need.  As for E & B, at what point is she going to get her head out of her ass and open up to him.  There is only room for one head in there and it is now definately not hers.  And if he is as big of a star as they say, Bella would have made the papers by now just from coming in and out of his house and hanging out with Alice, Rose and Emmett.  Will the fallout all happen at once or will it be a never ending series of events?  I can just imagine that her Mother will try to cash in on the fame.  Gosh I am so excite to find out what happens next, is there any chance of a double release this week?

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

please don not let her leave.  She is sometimes a lot to take and she really needs to stay put.  If she realizes he loves her, what is her problem now?  Some major protecting needs to happen and Edward needs to calm down and stop overreacting.

Aside from that, I am enjoying the story A LOT.  I only wish that either the chapters were longer or that there were more frequent updates.  Thank you for sharing your world.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I love this story, but I am selfish and wish there were at least 2 updates per week and much longer.  But like I said, I am selfish and cannot wait for the big shoes to drop.  Jealous Angela, greedy parents, vengefull Jacob and evil Jim.  Ooooooh the anticipation is killing me! ;)



Author's Response:

sorry but then you would get the finished story too quickly, and we don't want that do we? *winks*

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I was so glad that Bella's feelings were not just explained away.  But I am anxious to know when the drama that is James and Jacob will come to a head.  Will it involve Charlie and Christmas or will it be worse?



Author's Response:

now, now - stop getting ahead of yourself!! I bet you read the last page of a book too, don't you? Hmmm - I promise that I am not dragging it out, I just have to put it in where it belongs. And there will be a warning at the begining of the chapter - don't worry, you won't miss it, but for now, enjoy B & E and the others...

:) - Michele

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Per you last response, no I never read the end of a book first.  But I also do not put the book down till I get there.  Your story has me on the edge of my seat pining away for the next chapter.  Thursdays were always my favorite day of the week till this PLU entered my world, now Sundays, definately Sundays.  Oh Jake and Jim those naughty boys...Curiosity made have killed the cat, but satisfaction brought it back...As always, I'll be waiting impatiently for the newest drama.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

oh oh oh it is the moment I have been waiting for! Yay!!!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

That was fantastic.  So maybe now Charlie will see that jake is a monster and beliee Bella.  The trial should be interesting with such a public figure at the center.  I can just sense that Christmas will be special and loving.  Great Job!  I know Jake is not dead, but hmmm I wonder if James is?  Oh and Rosie so has to be pregnant!!  Okay, enough guessing for tonight.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

I love the longer chapters. This was a good one.  But now I am just anxious for Christmas and Charlie.  Oh what will happen.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review - I think Christmas will be ....different... to say the least!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Wow!  I did not see that one coming.  It was a great surprise, but I can just see the fallout of all this.  Bella is back in the spotlight because of the questions that Victoria asked.  Things will be tightfor awhile and the recovery long.  And DAMN they just got back in the playroom and he will be out of commission for so long.  The drama is good, but I hope the playroom doesn't suffer.  She has been mentioning kids a lot lately.  Will this experience make her want them sooner?  Cute little Bellward twins wouldbe great!  One boy and one girl.  Oh, and a little of the pap news of the wedding would be a nice addition.  Let the jealous harpy's drool.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Another good chapter!  And I love it when I get reccomendations.  One that i was very pleased with was The Training School Saga.  Believe it or not, the plot would not have worked without the sex.  Not many stories can achieve what this on did.



Author's Response:

Oh my that is a classic!  there are so many really great stories out there.  I read lots, although writing keeps me fairly busy too.

 

Thanks for the review

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

I loved the interview.  getting the viewpoint of others on the connection they share is fun to read about.  I like that you bring his celebrity status into their lives.  but they still seem so sheltered from the paps.  I am suprised that there is not more hype.  I suppose that you can compare his status to that of Brangelina and there is more on them than is done in this story.  It would be nice to get their take on the constant intrusion.  Plus her Mom.  I am sure she is chomping at the bit to sink her teeth into some of Edward's money.

Now I am excitedly awaiting for the play party.  Just the practicing was HOT.  I cannot imagine what will happen there.  Plus, do I forsee a pap taking photos of the den sex and posting them?  God I LOVE this story.  It is always so exciting and titilating.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45

I am so glad that Daddy and Bells got a chance to talk.  I loved the intermission from Forks.  And the Alice bit with the Christmas tree was priceless.  you continually out write yourself after each chapter.  Great Work!!



Author's Response:

thank you so much, to be honest, you all push me to just get better and better, so much so, that I am considering going back and re writing some of the first chapters - but I am so busy writing the new ones that i'm not sure when I will find the time!!!

Thank you for reading xoxo

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

This was a good chappie.  Transitional too.  I am looking forward to the interview, the gift and the play party next.  I am sure it would be a long one, but it would be nice to have it all in the next one.  I know, being selfish again hehehe.  Anyway, I just got to thinking.  Bella never told Angela who she was really dating.  Did her and Lauren ever find out and why have they not, especially Lauren, tried to cash in on the fame.  I am sure if she was turned down for being a friend, she could "cash" in with the paps on some slander.  Just wondering I guess.



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your comments and review

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Okay, so this was so not as bad as I expected.  Which suits how I feel about the story.  With their lifestyles, I can understand how they would be upset with the girls.  But for everyone else to be upset with them is a bit of a stretch for me.  But it still does not take away from the story because there are people like that all over.  I just hope this doesn't mess up plans for the play party.

As for the recommendations, I LOVE that you give them.  I have read A LOT of stories and most of the ones you request.  It is interesting to me what you feel about the ones I have read and a deeper insight to the ones I have been on the fence about.  Thank you!!!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

I am so pleased with the turnout!  I know that you said the last chappie had to happen for this to have turned out like it did and I agree.  I am so glad that Esme was called out on her bullshit and that Renee's true story came to light.  Now I want to know what is going to happen with Renee.  I know that something will, especially after the article comes out.  What claim will she try to stake for a few dollars?  And OOOHHHHH they will go to the play party! YAY!!!  I am so excited for every one of your chapters.  Oh, and why doesn't she tell Edward that Don is an idiot?  I like Anderson better too!



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your comments and review - hmmm Renee - she'll show up at the most inconvenient time - Don , well, there's just too much going on right now, but Andy's back soon. Play party? we'll see...

;)

Michele

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Definately did not see this coming.  When Charlie was fishing with Billy after New Year's I was thinking things were mending there too.  But this is a fun little development.  And I LOVE Paul.  You wrote him so well.  But I still think that Jasper needs a better ass woopin.  And where is Renee?  I am sure she would want something by now, even if to fake her kindness for Charlie's daughter.  Oh there is just so much....



Author's Response:

thanks so much - yes there is so much (one drama at a time,,)  

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

First, I hope that you enjoyed your concert.  Second, FINALLY!  Renee finally shows up and that was it?  She gets told off.  I sure hope that she does not disappoint and comes back for more.  But I am sure you have your reasons.  Just when everything seems calm and good you throw a curve ball that knocks us all out.  Last, that mid week romp in the playroom was HOT!!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Part of me hopes that this story never ends, but I know that is not likely.  I love these two and their story.  Next to Snowqueens Icedragon, I think you aretied for my most beloved authors.

Now, I know this is probably very far away, but I would love for these two to be married and maybe even engaged at the house in Italy.  Where it all began and continues.  Plus, I kinda miss the fun old lady that instantly liked Bella.  I am just blanking on her name right now.  Oh and I would love to see them have children and the chaos of giving birth with paps on the trail.  Oh, and when is the article coming out?  I am so curious and always excited.  Thank you for sharing your talent, I truely appreciate what you have given.



Author's Response:

Hey there - thanks for the review and comments. The article will be out in the chapter after next. (54) and who knows ... they might just do all that you suggest and more...xoxo

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

This one was a rollar coaster, but I would like to know what happens with Car and Es.  Like what was she thinking???  Oh and what does Car do to punish her?  I bet this can be as hot as it is exciting.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Happy New Year from the cold snowy ground of Wisconsin, USA!! 

I really enjoyed the look into Charlie's house.  But I would think that Seth's friends would have been all over Bella seeing that her live in boyfriend is a hot actor that everyone likes.  At the very least the should be crushing on her.  I just think it would have been fun to get that perspective a little.  Seth has to be the coolest kid in school now that he is practically related to a movie star.

As for Edward, he was not too tough.  Finally he has got it just right.  But how on God's green Earth did she forget to at least shave?  I feel hairy after only a day!  I cannot imaging what 2 weeks of growth has made her look like!  But i suppose it is all for the sake of the story line.

As always, I look forward to your posts.  Another good one, thanks.



Author's Response:

oh my - your not shaving comment made me laugh, but Bella gets waxed and I believe that the hair grows back sparsely and slower????  If this is true or not, I have no idea.  You will be seeing a bit more of our Seth in the not too distant future, promise.

 

thanks for the review

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

First of all, I was shocked that so many people were offended by the last chap.  It was not even as bad as some of the beginning stuff.

As for this chap, I am pleasently suprised at how simple the proposal was.  I loved that they were in t's and sneakers.  The rings are very unique and beautiful.  I was also happy to see he spoke to Charlie.  This was perfect.

And because of so much Em and Rose in the beginnng, I did not niss them so much in the end.

As for Anderson, I am glad he has such a special bond with Bella.  He is comforting to her and I tgink there should be more of him. He respects Edward and is such a good guy.  I like that he is always there to protect her.

And oh my heavens that Tahoe house was amazing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your great review and comments - I also loved the Tahoe house - you should see some of the inside shots - so beautiful!

 

xoxo

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Okay, so I totally thought that I responded, but I guess I didn't.  These characters have become a part of my life and I would love for it to continue into a sequel.  athere is so much more to be told.  I cannot imagine this to be ovr in 10 chapters.  They have not even gone back to Italy. It would be so sweet if they married there.  i loved the phone call with Riley and the whole event.  But I was hoping that it was Edward, through an anonymous contact, that had purchased the pig painting of him.  It was so special to her.



Author's Response:

thanks so much honey, well we will see how the ending goes. There is still lots and lots for the whole family to experience, so they won't disapear any time soon.  I thought about having Edward buy her paintings, buy we will have to see how he makes it up to her....

:)

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

I know it is supposed to be hot and powerful, but I couldn't help but LMAO at Edward's reaction to Domella.  PRICELESS!!!!!  I think I have never laughed so much through one of your chapters.  This one was awesome.  I also love how Jasper and Bella connect on such a basic level.  I figured that Ali was preggers by what was said at the easter egg hunt.  but wasn't she drinking the day of the basketball game?  And she did not seem worried about it.  I really LOVE how Edward finally saw his children with Bella.  I think he needs to have them kids sooner than later.  But not before the wedding.  And I am thinking girl/boy twins.

Lastly, I love the rec's, but there is one you have to see for yourself.  It is on FF and is called Unexpected Circumstances by Savage 7289.  It is only on like chapter 12 and has over 5000 reviews.  It is an amazing story and so well written.  PLEASE check it out and rec it.



Author's Response:

Oh Baby, I LOVE UNEXPECTED CIRCUMSTANCES and I want to rec it next chapter. I normally ask the author for their permission to rec their stories but ths one rocks!  I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and the Dommella scene wasn't too serious - it was funny, do you know how laughed when I wrote her lines? 

Thanks again and p.s. Bella will have a baby but not now, its really hard to juggle the weeks and dates of two pregnancies - three would be impossible!

 

xoxox

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

I love how Anderson and Brian were a little more involved in the story.  I like the connection that they share like family.  It was also ggod to see that Edward has friends outside of his family.  But I am wondering, the people that were impressed by Bella at the Vanity Fair shoot at Cullen Crest, are they coming back into the picture?  I also like the outsiders view of their relationship, like Aro's take on what he saw.  It kinda makes it feel all the more special.



Author's Response:

Hmmm - you must be reading over my shoulder... we will see Jamie and and the gay and photographic Jeff in a couple of chapters when Bella is in New York...thank you so much for your comments and your review!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

First of all...Renee's entrance was epic and I am DYING, do you hear me, DYING to know what the letter said.  How can they not read it!!!!

As for the future.  I really want Edward to pull his Cullen magic and have the wedding in Italy.  I really miss the housekeeper and the lake is sooooo beautiful.  I could see them exchange vows in a gazebo overlooking the lake at twilight!  It is her dream wedding come to light!  And Renee wont be there.  Come on please!!!!  He is Edward Cullen, he can move the Earth is asked.  This is their wedding!  Okay, now that I have groveled enough.

The play party...  They could do a scene, but I think it would be more fun if that disgusting Domme steps out of line and she gets hers.  I LOVE protective Edward!

Lastly, there are a few stories on FF that you need to read.  One is Unexpected Circumstances by Savage7289 and the other is Ride by Kris Salvador.  Ride might start out like a lot of smut, but the plot is wise and sneaky and shaping up to be really exciting!

Althought long and drama filled, you did good kid!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

This was all very sweet and necessary, but I expected a little more drama from that Paps...or at least the twins after they were introduced.  I am glad that they are back on track though.  They were not playing as often and I am excited to see what they do for the play party.



Author's Response:

The Twins are going to make an appearance in the next chapter - don't worry about them.  The play party and stuff is up next and I promise, there will be enough d/s to go around xoxo

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

I loved this chapter.  And there was sex, on the bathroom counter at the munch.  But that scene was awesome.  I liked the whole spider thing even though I am very afraid of them.  I am really looking forward to the wedding.  And I cannot wait till the suprise of the quiet wedding hits the press.  This will be great for VF and Jamie and whats-his-name...  I hope you include Bella's dress, if you have already, I cannot remember.  i read so many stories that include dresses.  I LOVE the Tahoe house!!!!!  OME that thing is amazing!!!  Great find.  I love how Anderson and Bella are, I wouldn't mind more interaction and banter between the two.  Her always trying to get him out of his shell and him being stoic, it is pure chemistry of the platonic kind!



Author's Response:

Hi Sweetie, Let me tell you, I DROOL over the photos of the Tahoe house!! I will post some more photos of it in the next chapter as well as her dress, which I haven't posted before.  Also pics of her gift to Edward and his gift to her and some others.  I was a real romantic for this wedding but come on - This is Edward Cullen!! *Sigh*

Okay, update soon!

xoxo

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

I think that this chapter was PERFECT! They are gonna have a BABY!!!!! I am so happy for them. I just hope that she has an easy pregnancy. It would be nice since Rose and Alice struggled with various things. Bella has had a hard life, an easy pregnancy would be good karma. OOHHHH and I think it should definately be twins! One boy and one girl. And the girl should be a splitting image of Edward. Can you imagine those beautiful greem eyes on a little girl? Lastly, I think that it will be just fine to continue on forever and ever. I love this story and can never get enough. Thank You!

Author's Response:

thank you so much for your wonderful review - now stop reading over my shoulder!! :) till next time, honey xoxo

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Now just because he is a man does not mean that he will cheat.  Getting real doesn't mean bad things have to happen.  If he cheats, that will go against everything he stands for.  He is a dominant that is always in complete control.  So now he is going to lose that control?  I do not think so.  The only one who has made him lose control is the one person that can change his world.  You can only be affected by those you let in and love.  So some stranger is goning to bring him to his knees?  I think not.  I just do not see it.

Diamond Man by SatansDarkAngel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 302]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Bella swan is the most popular of singers in Chicago. Edward is the drinking/ smoker/ handsome mob boss who walks into Bella’s fathers club to collect a debt. While Aro gets the money Edward and his associates wait and listen to the music, that’s when Edward first lay eyes on Bella Swan and was determined to make her his.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54794 Read Count: 64199
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2010 Updated: 29 Aug 2011
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Okay, now I want to know who this is and why Bella's so important...again.  What is Renee's deal and who the heck is the mystery woman.  Okay I am sure you will tell us in due time, but I really want to know now!  PLEASE!!!

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106302
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

So I really liked the story a lot.  Although there are a few things that left me confused.  In the beginning Emma's middle name was Grace then it changed to Antonia. And twice in the middle of the story Emmett went from being a Cullen to being a McCarty and back to a Cullen.  I guess I am still not sure who the real sibling is, Emmett or Rosalie.  Other than that, it was fun to read.

Summary:

Sequel to Lustful Awakings. When Bella wakes up from her coma with no memory of her life with Edward, Jasper, and Alice, will they be able to help her remember? Will she still want them if she does remember? Same pairings as in LA. NC-17

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153264 Read Count: 158929
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2010
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Another story would be great.  But mostly, I wish I knew what Bella's baby's name is and who is the baby daddy.  Personally, since this story was so even (ie. all the parent became a quad and did not just stay as two) I think that it should be Edwards baby again.  Then maybe they plan to perposfully have jasper' spawn with Alice (since she is next).  And just to add a twist, it should be twin boys.  Go ahead and steal this idea, I would live to see how this plays out...  but that is just me.  Oh, and THANK YOU for reducing the use of the word chuckle!  Fun story, I just wish it did not end here.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I've really worked on my obession with the word chuckle ;) As for the rest, I'll think about twin boys.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was just thinking about the twin thing.  It could be fun to have Bella have twins (one hiding behind the other).  She could have a girl and a boy and be one of each.  She did have sex with both just after getting home.  2 eggs and a lot of sperm can cause a big snafu!



Author's Response:

Definatly something I've been cosidering but I am not sure if I will do yet.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76112
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am dying to find out what happens next, will there be an update soon?

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I am so glad that you are back and continuing the story.  I have loved it so far and cannot wait to see where it goes.  I will be eagerly awaiting your next chapter.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh My!!!  I am way too excited to find out what happens next.  I have waited so long for this chapter and it was totally worth it.  But now my greedy self just wants another.  I like the slow burn and buildup and this story has such possibilities to keep the readers yearning for more. Brava!!



Author's Response:

I love the slow burn as well! (: Hopefully, I can have the next chapter out soon! I hate making you guys wait!

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297508
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: The Past

I love how Edwards feelings came to light for bella.  I think it was the shock she needed to move on.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Unknown

There is something that I have been thinking about.  How come there has never been a conversation about Aro being Edwards Godfather.  I though that it would have been mentioned right away and was not.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Together

I think the sex scene was the most realistic I have read.  It is not always a bowl of cherries and there are mixed emotions about it.  All in all I think you did a fantastic job with it!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Secrets

That was HOT!!!  I cannot wait for the office fantasy to happen!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: The Letter

I just have a question.  If Esme found out about Edward getting married from her sister, wouldn't that be Emmett's Mom?  I cannot imagine him calling his Aunt about her nephew after getting back from Vegas.  But then at Thanksgiving you said his parents were deceased.  So I guess I am a little confused.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?

 

This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too.  Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.

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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.

This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.

 

 By- SexyLexiCullen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420500
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2010
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.

I so love hoe Edward Sr has turned into his father.  and it looks like Jr is headed in the same direction.  This was the best ending to a story that I have read in a long time.  Awesome!!  Funny and Sweet!

Summary:

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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238795
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Maybe it is not the reaction I should have had, but I laughed so hard at the ending of this.  That shit was a comedy of errors.  Like the saying, years or even days from now we look back and laugh about this, only I did it now.  Love it!  Especially  when  Charlie showed up in riot gear. HA!

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Bella, Rose and Alice are all off at Northwestern going to med school.  They are venturing out of the dorm life into a newly build buidling of condos.  Bella is stalked by someone. Who is doing it and how much will they get away with before they are caught? Can a new friend help her overcome the violent things happening to her? Can she ever trust a man?  Can she survive this or will it break her? Story contains violent actions, stalking, abuse, rape, agnst, and is not geared for everyone.  If these things bother you please pass over those items. *warning will be given* AH/

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113884 Read Count: 55093
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2011
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Find Me Please

Okay, so I am sure you were a little nervous about the rape scene, but rest asure.  You did it well.  It was not long and drawn out and it was what would have happened in reality.  So cudos for sticking to your craft and not shying away from the tough scenes.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment....I hope to hear more from you on your thoughts of this story.  Please take the time if you could to check out the nominations at this website: www . inspiredfanficawards . blogspot . com /?zx=a06fda14bc1742e9   you have to remove the spaces to get to the address.  My Sisters 3 was nominated for best Bella under 1000 reviews......my other story that is a BDSM story where Bella is the Domme and Edward is her submissive is called A Sub Search and it is nominated for Best Lemon under 1000 and for over all best story you are waiting for the next update on.  Thank you for your review and thank you for reading my story!  :)

Kasi~

Summary: Past Featured Story

Third story in the Awakenings Saga. Join Bella, Edward, Alice, and Jasper as they face their toughest challenge yet, the stress of having school aged kids. Will they be able to survive? Or will this tear them apart? NC-17, AH. Same pairings as in LA & SA

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189515 Read Count: 91265
[Report This] Published: 14 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Jan 2014
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh the plot thickens!  But who would have a naked pic of her?  Does she recognize when or where it was taken or was it an invasion of privacy?  I just hope that this pisses her off enough to stop the self pity act.  It is beginning to grate on my nerves.  Now I sound like the whinny brat, oh gosh darn it!  Oh well.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

One question, where were the police?  Is this not a federal violation now?  And video voyeurism is also illegal in almost every state.  I was just wondering why they were not the first to be called in to help with the investigation and see where the cameras are linked to. 

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311964
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Dude & Dirty Harry

I am sick while reading this.  So as I read the Emmett hunting tale I proceeded to have a coughing fit from laughing so hard.  That has to be the funniest shit I have ever read an Emmett character do!!!!



Author's Response:

oh my..you've just hit the tip of the iceberg with emmett....those chapters should come with a warning.  Read at your own risk!  lol  I will warn you that any time he shows up, you should put down all food and drink, sharp objects, and don't hold small children or infants.  There, enough said.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Tidal Pools & Capistrano

I know what you mean.  I am writing a story myself and I am keeping it very personal.  When not working on it, I have to lock it in my safe.  He even tries to read over my shoulder while hugging me.  He should know I am smarter than that.

As for the marriage thing...they are not normal either.  They were forced to grow up pretty fast and already know what they want in life.  They are not at the place most 20 somethings are.



Author's Response:

exactly...i believe they spent the first few months playing 'catch-up' emotionally because this was their first real relationship.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Lap Dances & Abstinence

I saw this coming.  A friend of mine had the same meeting before her wedding.  But with her, she argued with the priest what Abstinence really entailed.  She actually argued with the priest that oral was not actually sex and should at least be allowed that.  I was seriously on the floor laughing as she told the story in the same Emmett animated fashion.  Gotta love crazy friends, they sure do make life interesting.



Author's Response:

this is true.  Emmett is out of his mind most days!  Thanks, glad you like the story.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Champagne & Diamonds

I LOVE this sweet and romantic stuff!  Taking their time makes it all better in the end.



Author's Response:

I agree.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge

Oh my, I do not think that there are words for Edward's bum.  but what I am sure of now is that I am an impatient and selfish person.  I would like nothing more that for you to quit your job and become a recluse just so you can write and write and write to continue this story that would hopefully never end. heheh So now that I am done being delusional, I will beg.  PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE hurry with the next chapter!!!! Thanks.



Author's Response:

i will try.  I'm working on some LRM chaps first then back to V&V.  Thank you!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears

I kinda guessed that Rose was preggers, but that was all the hints.  I hope that Bella branches out and does something with Esme.  She will be the only Mother she has left.  This will warm the hearts of Edward, Esme and Carlisle.  I also love these moments between Emmett and Bella.  I think they are the perfect Bro/Sis pair.  And I am so impatient.  When is Edward coming home?  I miss him too.  Thank Emmamama for LRM!!!



Author's Response:

you are welcome!  let's see...don't want to give anything away, but the next chap is all Mother's Day.  It's an interesting day....not everything that happens is good...but i think you'll like it.  In V&V it's May 9.....Edward finishes filming late in the month....if that helps.  Thanks somuch!----Anne (aka Emmamama)

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

that was fantastic!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  posting next LRM soon.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Iron Man & Safely Home

I really wanted him to return, but it was so he could be there for this day.  i am so glad he made it.  I LOVE EPOV, but now i just want the next chappie here.   Oh I am so torn.



Author's Response:

lol.  Thanks!  glad you liked it.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Joy Rides & Clown Masks

This was another sweet chappie, but I qish the prom was added to this as well.  But I am sure you have your reasons.  Cannot wait for the next bit of drama...will it be Alice's new status (finding out Edward's real last name) or will it be Anonymous Flower Stalker?  So much excitement to come and I a glad that LRM is almost caught up.  I love both stories!!!



Author's Response:

we are getting so close!  *squeal*  I truly can't wait.  It will hopefully mean that V&V gets updated a lot faster.  yes, lots of excitement to come!  Thanks!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Hallelujah & Zombie Dances

Okay, so I know that she doesn't want a big to do for the wedding, but I hope she is not going to sabatoge the whole thing.  First of all Johnny wants to come and she does have to be accomadating to the guests involved.  Second, dont let her bicker on about colors and themes and such.  She does not even have to do a thing about it.  All she has to do is say yea or nay.  She needs to let it go a little.  What is there to really stress about when you are not responsible for any of it?  Unless that is her worry and she wants to be kept more up to date.  Anyway, I guess I am shocked that a room full of teenagers and not one came up to Edward?  I really find that hard to believe.  Even if the Chief told them to stay away, come on they are teenagers!  They NEVER do exactly as they are told.  Hopefully LRM  has a bathroom scene or something with possibly Edward and Emmett both.  That would be good.

Lastly and most important.  I would rather you catch up LRM to this chappie than screw up future ones trying to get them out.  I liked the last two chapters, but they are kinda slipping in the connection that was once there.  It all was left at the graveyard after Edward showed up there.  Just  a thought.  This is one of my favorite stories, so I am just throwing out my two cents...



Author's Response:

you'll be pleasantly surprised about the wedding...that's all i'm going to say...i've got abig mouth and i don't want to give stuff away. lol.  I think you'll enjoy the prom from E's perspective...yes, he did have a few 'admirers'. 

just posted the next LRM....Edward has a lot to say, and Emmett barged in a couple times as usual.  Sometimes these chapters 'between' the action come across a bit dry...but they're necessary to move forward.  This latest LRM was a big fat monster to finish....it's well over 9000 words...ugh.  Not a lot of it is an overlap of the two stories either.  good grief.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

Natural Family Planning????  Is she for real?!!!!!!  I knew this was going to happen!  OME!!!  I just wonder who it is.  There has been no word that the killer is out of jail so maybe it is one of the others.  Watch it be someone like Alec.  Although I don't really think it is.  There has to help on the way.  She cannot be taken and miss graduation.  This will also be huge news.  I cannot wait for the next update.

BTW, I never did get my update for this chapter, I found it by looking for something else.  Is the update not working?



Author's Response:

i'm so far behind...responding to these reviews. sorry.  I heard there was a glitch with TWCS a few days ago..hopfully resolved now?  Natural family planning...yes there are folks who actually do that.  main reason my first child was born BEFORE my first wedding anniversary...*Cough*  .  Anyway...thanks very much!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Boot Heels & Body Bags

She did exactly what I would have done.  I would have hicked him dead if I had to.  But why diid she not just follow the car trails out of the forest? There must have been a path that the tires made, especially in such a wet climate.  But I do suppose she had quite the head wound.  Will we get LRM next?  And how come I did not receive the update?  I found it by accident.



Author's Response:

it was dark...i don't think she would have been able to locate the tracks.  I tried to convey the impression that the car spun before hitting the trees also....very disorienting.  TWCS was failing with updates last week...hopefully better this week.   You've probably already seen the latest LRM.  I'm almost done the next V&V...posted a sneak on facebook and the blog.  THanks!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Scenic Views & Meeting Duke

I knew you were going to end it at Oprah.  But since there doesn't seem to be a lot that Edward could be thinking yet, I think you should wait on LRM and get right to the Show segment.  OOOHHHHH and I hope that Oprah has a little pull to stop Victor James' show from continuing.  That would be Fan-DAMN-Tastic!!!!  And I definately voted for you.  But there were one or two that I voted for Quiet Storm.  You should so read it if you like Mob stories.



Author's Response:

I have been reading Quiet Storm...it's great! As you can tell I am way behind responding to reviews.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Time Warps & Slow Motion

I hate cliffys, but at the same time it is such sweet torture.  I am SOOOO happy that there will be a sequel.  I like PS so far, but I LOVE me my V & V.  I am looking forward to the Chris and Ethan hook up.  Chris is my fav and he deserves to be happy.  But then again, so does Shane! 



Author's Response:

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Blessed Events & One Little Year

I thought that this was a lovely end, but I am going to beg for something.  PLEASE let the first line of the sequel be Edward rinning in the room yelling that he is going to be a father!!!!!   PLEASE!!!!  With everyone there i cannot wait to hear the reactions and how they play off of each other.  So exciting!



Author's Response:

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Armpits & Coffee Stains

This is the second time that I have received a response from you that include no text in the message.  Is that intentional or is there a problem with the system?  I just thought I should mention it if there is a problem...



Author's Response:

Summary:

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 EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.

 

Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77172
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Mixed Signals for The Fortunate Son

I am finally happy to now undertand why Alice speaks like a grandmother.  That was so perplexing to me.



Author's Response:

LOL.  You can always tell a person that spent a lot of time around an elderly relative growing up...I've know a few, and was actually one myself, and we tend to use words in every day language that garner some strange looks.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Higher Love For The Marked Man

BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!!!  That is some funny shit.  I love all the background that the Cullens provide.  The underware bit is hysterical!!  This was awesome.



Author's Response:

the underwear plotline continued through many chapters.  Glad you are enjoying this!  Thanks!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Copious Amounts of Alcohol For The Bilingual

Do not stop EPOV!!!!  I love his side.  It is oddly refreshing and also fills in the blanks at times.  Like in here I was glas to have his view on her behavior.  If it was just from the other story I would have never known he was worried about her behavior.  From BPOV I was led to believe that he just found her endearing.  So as I said, keep up this story.  It really makes it whole.



Author's Response:

i'm not stopping it...i want to catch it up to V&V so the two stories will be even.  Definitely not stopping.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 29: The Ugly Truths

That was AWESOME from his point of view.  Such a great ending!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Heart To Heart For The World Traveler

Loved the talk with Charlie and cracked up at father Pat's insight.  I LOVE Edward's POV.



Author's Response:

poor edward doesn't realize how obvious he is...although Bella remains oblivious most of the time.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: A Sigh Of Relief For The Betrothed

I almost forgot about their little experiment in the sack.  They sre deifuntalu cuute.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Here's the link to the sneak peek of the next V&V, enjoy!  http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: A Perfect Plan Comes Together

I thought for sure he would have a one on one with his hand instead of a cold shower.  He was rather put out...



Author's Response:

i refuse to write about Edward having sex with anything or anyone before he has it with Bella. lol   Thanks for reading and reviewing!  just posted the next one.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Sage Advice For The Overworked

As always I love EPOV.  Esme cracks my shit up!  Although I have to agree with Edward.  It is a little disturbing to share sex tidbits with the folks.  It's like committing verbal incest.  I loved how he blew up at Simon, but that may have fueled him to seek out his real reason for privacy.  I hope that doesn't happen.



Author's Response:

Esme...lol.  I agree completely about Simon.  These things do have a way of backfiring.  Glad you like it.  sneak peek for the next V&V is now on the blog.  Thanks!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Prelude To A Proposal

As i have said before, I LOVE EPOV...  He is such a romantic.  I love hearing his take on B's thoughts and actions.  I wish he was a little more strict with Alec.  It is disrespectful what he has done and Lady Gigi could have been out for a story or goods even.  Just because she doesn't talk about it doesn't mean that she is not after it.  I also kinda wish you would have finished the proposal scene in this chappie.



Author's Response:

i don't want to give anything away, but he's not through with Alec yet.  Here's a link to the sneak peek of the next V&V, enjoy!  http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Distractions For The Homesick Protagonist

I love Edward's POV.  It was interesting to get the skinny on what happens without Bella.  Like Alice asking for the ring as soon as she arrived.  That is just priceless.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Here's the link to the sneak peek of V&V's next chap.

http://www.facebook.com/#!/notes/virgins-villains-fanfic/sneak-peek-vv-chap-53/141470895917050

any probs, let me know.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 44: The Stuff of Nightmares...

Oh I cannot imagine his pain.  What must he be thinking?



Author's Response:

next chap is posted... Thanks !

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 45: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

I think that I died a little along with him.  Even knowing what has happened, your writting has made me relive his pain with him.  Although I am sooooooo against suicide, the romance behind this thought made my heart melt to pieces.



Author's Response:

things get easier from here.  next chap is up.  Thanks!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: CPR for The Dead Heart

Oh, and maybe next time could you add in a little of the fallout from the photos and video of his breakdown?  I find your take on the paps interesting.



Author's Response:

oh my...i think you may like the next chap...it's posted.  Thanks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward's always gotten what he wanted, from a baby sister to the career of his dreams. When Alice invites him to a holiday dinner, it brings him face to face with the last thing he'll ever want. Written for the SFFR Christmas Compilation.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5844 Read Count: 3350
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2010 Updated: 25 Dec 2010
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have always loved your writing, but this story was soooooooo sweet.  It was refreshing to just have a little nothing more that pure romance to live in.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed this one...its a departure from my angst, but a welcome one and I had a blast writing it!

Ruthless and Ivory by MujerN Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 169]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is infamous. Everyone knows about the terrorizing murderer who leaves behind bloody scenes and corpses at night while the city sleeps. Bella, a journalist, investigates and finds her fear turning dangerously into love.

–Ruthless and Ivory
The full story to the Red Ribbon assassin. Finalist to Tattward and Inkella Contest




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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251248 Read Count: 40590
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2011 Updated: 16 Dec 2012
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Sunset

This ending was epic.  I do not know that an epi would be needed. I think it would only be necessary if a sequel were to happen.  But I must say that I like where is has ended. Great story. Publish if you want, if it hits big it would make a hit movie for both men and women!

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2669077
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 22 May 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Prove It

I figured this was coming too. But now there is the stress of Edward being gone and stress. She better not lose another baby. And I really hope she is preggers, with twins! Will we see EPOV and what happened in the office? I would like to know what was said about the Feds showing up.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Helluva Day

I am baffled!  How can someone want this of FF.  It is a rocking story!  I am sad that you want to end it, but I do think that a sequel would be Heavenly!  This was a great chappie.  I just wish that Jacob would get his stripes and move up.  He has gone above and beyone to make the Skip's wife happy like he requested.  Surely he needs to be properly compensated!

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143205
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I like that she is trying, but when is it her turn to open up.  She should share her truth with him now.

Summary:

Banner by: the amazing and talented  ivoryhairbela... you rock!

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Isabella Swan has never had an easy life; she's haunted day-in and day-out by the demons of her past.  Believing that she can never trust a man with her heart and definitely not her body after Charlie, her father, and only living relative is killed in the line of duty.  She decides to become a mother by In Vitro Fertilization... Dr. Edward Cullen is a pediatric specialist.  After suffering a tragic loss of his own, Dr. Cullen closed himself off to everyone in the world, including his 7 year old daughter.  Can an extraordinary twist of fate and a rambunctious 7 year old help bring two broken people, who've given up on love, together?

 

Will Isabella finally have a real family of her own?

Beta'd by: Jdonovan09, famaggiolo, and ivoryhairbela... you ladies are amazing and I couldn´t do it without you... even when you bust my chops, Iza!  A million and one thank you´s!!

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DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN TWILIGHT OR ANY OF ITS PHENOMENAL CHARACTERS.  NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT INTENDED...

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58003 Read Count: 32307
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

I am fully enthralled by this story already.  I cannot wait to see what happens next. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Summary:

Edward is a single parent of a five year old daughter who is just trying to maintain. Bella is a teacher replacing little Ally's teacher. Edward finds that his life is more connected to Bella than he ever thought.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47107 Read Count: 44756
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2011 Updated: 28 Jul 2017
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2015 Title: The Doctor's Daughter

Good to see you back.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1531302
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Wag the Dog

Esme is so nuts these days that Candace should just take her place.  She seems nice and Carlisle can take the kids.  She does have a history of being unstable.  Either way, that little boy needs his recognition.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 9: This Time Around

First, Edward wont regret not beating up Carlisle because he will do it when C comes to bitch him out for telling Es.

Next, if B tells Esme that her hubby is hot for some B action since before the wedding, shi-ot is going to hit the fan.  I just hope that someone stops Es from going after Candy.  She doesn't deserve it.  Maybe Es will go insane and be replaced by Candy anyway.  Whateva...

Last, I laughed loudly when Aro gave Sonny 20 bucks and then took it back a minute later.  That shit is fun-ny!  Great chapter, cannot wait til the next!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chasing Regret

This is really getting good.  But Aro needs to live and Lauren needs to die!  Oh and Esme could go too.  She is just trouble waiting to happen.  She would turn on C in a New York minute!  Ohh that would be good.  She tried to get his arrested and she gets taken out!  That would be great!  But C better get away with it.  He is a major screw up, but he has a heart of gold!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 27: NuMb

That was not what i had hoped for!  But it will be interesting in two years time.  Hopefully Car doesn't get himself in trouble for this little move.  Oh and Jackie needs to get her shit straitened out by someone...preferably Edward Sr or Jr!  That would be awesome to see her put in her place.  Why does she get to be mouthy with Bella and nobody else?  That is shit, she knows who Bella is, doesn't she?  What is her beef anyway?

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Long Drive

First I think he needs to be caught.  Then Alice needs to show him how to put a condom on a dildo, the rape his ass and see if he likes it.  Eye for an eye so to speak.  But for true poetic justic just to take place, they need to tie up and blindfold her Mom and the whole time ask her if she believes what she hears.  Because she sure did not when Alice told her.  Then the two of them need to have their legs and arms broke, put in a car and driven off a bridge.  Go ahead and use this, but Alice needs closure.  Then She and the broad need to move closer to the city so they can tag team Esme when she returns, because we all know she will.  Oh yes she will!

Summary:

Bella pays a visit to the Doctors and gets more than she bargains for.

AH, lemony fresh,  originally intended as a one shot, but I squeezed out a few more chapters.

I acknowledge that all things Twilight belong to Mrs Meyers and that i'm just playing around.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15686 Read Count: 18996
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 25 Oct 2011
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

At first I was like 'oh this is like all th others...a little role play' but with that cute little twist at the end, I was smiling and sharing their joy.  Very cute!



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. x

Summary: Past Featured Story

Hot Commodity Banner

Edward Cullen is used to getting everything he wants. Good looking, wealthy, and charming, NYC's most reputable playboy doesn't take "no" for an answer. Then he meets Isabella Swan and all bets are off ... Except for one.

Banner by Rochelle_0089.

-Winner: Best Edward, the Winter 2012 Sunflower Awards-
-Winner: Fic of the Week (12/10/12-12/16/12, 4/16/13-4/22/13), The Lemonade Stand-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Quote, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Friendship, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Edward, Eclipse Awards-
-Nominated: Best Rosalie, The Wordsmith Awards-
-Nominated: Best All Human, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Fic of the Month, December 2012, The Lemonade Stand-
-Nominated: Favorite Drop Everything Fic, The 2013 TwiFic Fandom Awards-
-Nominated: All Time Favorite Story, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Bella Swan, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Supporting Cast, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories I've read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202423 Read Count: 112943
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2014
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Slipping

It is either going to be very good or very bad.  Either Em is going to spill the beans or Em and Jasper are going to tag team Edward and make his realize his true feelings.  I say go for the second option, that way everyone wins and the cliche bet anger will not happen.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! :) 

Very good or very bad .... Maybe somewhere in the middle? Hehe. You'll see! ;) 

I hope you like the story so far -- and that you enjoy what's coming in CH 10! 

Thanks for reading! 

xoxo

Summary:

New York City"s night life is always up and running, wether it's a club or a strip joint. but their is only one club that has it all, sexy women, alcohol, gambling, drugs, and a supply of rooms in the back that only the elite can get into, for private dances from one of the sultry untouchables. And if you are a high paying customer you get to spend the night with one.

NC-17 for sex, drugs, gambling, violence, and more sex.

Real banner inside

 

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32148 Read Count: 20544
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2012 Updated: 14 Mar 2018
Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Revealed Truths

Well, shit, I really did not expect that!  There has to be a way to stop it from happening.  It is not making anyone happy so WTF????

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Thoughts

She is smart and I hope that she is the way ou for the rest of the girls.