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Bio:
Hey, I am Jen! I am a 34 year old single mom of 2 teenage boys that drive me crazy. I am also very Twilight obsessed but even more than Twilight obsessed I am fanfiction obsessed as well. I take full blame for my Twilight obsession but I blame my bff messybar for my fan fiction obsession....
A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366681
Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Air & Water
I am back, well sort of, I only read one chapter now I am off to bed, it was a very long day.
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Moving Forward
I love, love, loved this chapter. I loved the APOV, it was nice to know where Ali's head is.
I am sad for E about his business but I still the job that he has now is more conducive to having 3 babies and a Bella. I do hope he buys her some jewelry soon....
So Emmett is winning back brownie points, and I love the placard, as well as the shirt. I so want that shirt, although I am not pregnant, it could refer to my fat too, right?
lol
Author's Response:
LOL! Sure if you want the shirt to! LOL
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Aloha Wau Ia Oe
Thank God she finally said it, i was really getting ready to smack her. Oh and I am back, I wrote my review and sweet Mary is going to read though to make sure it doesn't suck ass...
Great chapter, although I have to say, I said ti to Mary earlier but I really just want to smack the hell out of this Emmett he pisses me off with the shit he did to E.
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Hoaloha
Great day in Hawaii!!!!!! I am glad that Bella has opened up so much, but I notice how long this story is and I worry....
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Moe'Uhane
Awesome, for them that they finally got a whole day away from everyone....where they could just be them.
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 34: All Shook Up
Have I mentioned that I am loving them in Hawaii. Great choice of song there too, and him singing to her is just awesome...
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Beaches, Boys, & Blues
It was nice to have some Bella and Em time and while he pisses me off with some of his reactions in this one, I will always love the "grape ape".
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Don't Worry, Be Happy
I totally thought Em would man up and propose but the promise was nice I will admit.
I loved how much research you did for all of the Hawaii chapters, really it was great that you put so much time and effort to make us feel like we were there with them.
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Complications
So glad she is opening up to the idea of being a mom later on, I know how important it is to her. Also I have to say while I hate that she has to go through this I am glad she has Edward there for her, and I am glad that he stood his ground with Alice. I love the Pixie, I do, really but sometimes I want to clip her wings.....
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Adjusting
They grow more and more in each chapter and it really is so nice to see. I know it is a little late but sorry to hear about your arm. Now I am off to bed, as it is almost 1 am, I had to pause my reading to see the President announce that Osama Bin Laudin is actually dead....I am sure you will be hearing from me tomorrow when I get home from work...
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Drive
I wanted to hit a little pixie in this chapter, just sayin'...
Glad E went to pick her up though.
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 20: The Longest Day
Ok, I am with Bella, I want to introduce Mary to my fist too, although it makes me think of the other Mary and that is sad because I luv her!
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 21: The Next Contestant
Got to love a bar fight with a pissed off don't be touching my girl Edward....
Nice to see EPOV's I do so love to hear from him.
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 22: New Start
Ok, this has been my favorite chapter by far because I got to see Edward stand up to Bella and put her in her place, sometimes I think she needs it...(not that he doesn't)
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Somewhere I Belong
That was a fun chapter, and I love me some LP so props for using my fave band so much in this story!
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Learning As I Go
Nice to see Bella growing as a person, even if Rose and Alice have to help her along the way....
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 25: The Past Laid Bare
I can't tell you how great it was to see them in this chapter, and letting E help her through this time with the Aaron situation was huge...
So glad that she told E about her condition, and I am so happy that he had the response that he did.
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 26: That's How You Know
I will admit I did want to throttle Bella a bit in this one, I mean as I was just IM'ing to Mary, he is Edward freaking Cullen, I mean really it shouldn't be this hard, even for her....LOL
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 27: No Turning Back
I would like to personally smack the jack ass upside the head now...Oh and Alice pissed me off too, damn it!
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Keep Holding On
So very intense chapter, have to say I am so proud of both of them because they really did come a long way, starting with Edward not leaving, that was huge...But honestly the hero in this chapter was freaking Bree, he rocked his shit this chapter, and really helped them both see so much.
Yay! for Bree!
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Need You
Yay! for Hawaii...Boo for the summer issue, but not everything can be sunshine and daisies all of the time....Ok one more chapter and then I have to write my review for Indie Fic this week, then I can finish up on the story....
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 30: And So It Begins
Damn it would have been so funny to have had Em tased but it was pretty funny having him think he was going to get tased....
Ok, I am going to do my review now, hopefully I can get it done and be back later tonight....
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Scars & Ninja Mind-Fucks
I really love this Bella, and I am sorry for not reviewing every chapter like I should be...I know I suck, I get engrossed and forget, I am bad...
So like I said, loving this Bella, love this Edward too, although there have been a couple of times I wish he would get sassy back to her, someone needs to put her in her place sometimes...
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 64: The Name Game
I love the babies, and their names, they are truly perfect. So happy that everything is ok, sad that Bella will never have babies of her own again but it is ok, this is the way it is meant to be.
Author's Response:
Yep! This way, everyone is healthy and happy!
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Halloween Hook-Up
Ok, after much berating from Mary, I am finally reading, even though I hate TWCS, because the format sucks, but I love Mary and your other stories so I am reading.
Date: 07 May 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Learning to Breathe Again
Yay! for early updates. Thanks so much. Great chapter, I am glad that they are talking things out and that Bella didn't hold on to the Numb info for too long....
Author's Response:
Nope! Bella didn't want to hold on to it at all, just wrap her head around it.
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Surprise
hmmm...detecting a little bull shit coming from our honest Edward....I don't like it....not one bit.
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Eclipse
So awesome the Grand Canyon was and i am still laughing about Edward's inability to fish...
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Crash & Burn
Fucking Emmett, OMG, and I was prepared for it....I am going to run some errands before I begin the rest of the angst....Oh and I have some choice words for Edward but I think I know why he didn't tell Bella....Damn It!
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Cry
Wow, I picked a bad week to read something so emotional, I am an emotional basket case now. I really still want to freaking kill Emmett, like badly.
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 45: My Cross to Bear
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Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Searching for a Reason
Well nothing like forcing her to face shit...
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 47: So Different Yet Still The Same
Ok, I am still a blubbering mess with these chapters...stupid Aunt Flow...
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 48: My Guiding Light
I can't wait until the rest of the family find out about Emmett, I really want him hurt badly.
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Pulling All The Right Strings
Thanks freaking goodness that he knows finally, and I wouldn't be opposed to him hopping on a plane and kicking his ass, but I have a feeling we will be seeing Em at the ann. party so maybe that isn't necessary.
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Piecing It Together - Part 1
So I am glad that Emmett came, but I hate that he doesn't remember it is like he gets a free pass, maybe Rosalie will beat some sense into him, God knows he needs it.
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Piecing It Together - Part 2
A little afraid for next chapter, I don't want her to react the way Rose thinks she will, I want her to keep getting better and be more understanding...
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 52: One is the Loneliest Number
Argh, I mean I knew that Bella was going to be difficult but seriously, I want them to be happy again....Argh!!!!!!!!
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Ghosts of Broken Hearts
We are getting better, which is good...
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 54: More Than Words
I am so glad for Esme and I am also so glad that we have been Alice free for a few chapters, Bella needs calm right now and as much as I love her, Alice is anything but calm.
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Finding Our Way
I know they need to watch heir money and he needs to get a job and all of that but seriously I so wish he would have gotten the guitar...just sayin'...
Only one more until I am completely caught up, this kind of makes me sad...
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 56: You Found Me
I was wondering when Bella would figure out who Numb was, I knew that she would figure it out first. Ok, I am all caught up. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
It was a lot of fun to see all of your reviews as you went through the chapters and everything they've gone through pretty much all at once. So glad you have enjoyed and continued to read!
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 58: If At First
You know I was sending IM's to EA asking when this was going to post....just sayin'
Nice that Bella is feeling better about things, and I am glad that Alice and Jasper finally now, although I think it will be funny if Alice finds out she knew after everyone else...
See you next week!
Author's Response:
Yes, it was that IM that alerted me to my grevious oversight! So thank you for that and thank you for the review!
Date: 22 May 2011 Title: Chapter 59: The Reason
Nice to see things are still calm for B/E and they are making amends with the people that matter. I am so excited for these babies....
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 60: I'm Not Calling You A Liar
So glad that Alice knows now, but seriously worried about Bella and the babies. I am also very glad that Bella and Edward are back to being themselves and I think that their communication skills are growing more every day.
Author's Response:
Edward and Bella are both working hard to get things right this time, especially with communication. It's great to see them getting close quickly and being more open than ever before.
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Life After You
Yay for Jasper beating the crap out of EM, He totally deserved it...wow 18 weeks already, time does fly doesn't it.
Author's Response:
It really does. All too soon, it will be October and a brand new Halloween.
Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Cheesy Cullen
OMG, I am crying like a baby, all I can say about this one is "absolutely perfect in every way." This sums up E getting the ring with Carlisle and visiting Elizabeth, Esme and Bella's talk. The proposals...yes I mean both of them, and of course the wedding, I love that you did that from Esme's POV.
Thanks for yet another great chapter.
Jen
Author's Response:
Aw! Yes, that does sum it up nicely. Esme's POV gave the best view of their lives in that snapshot moment and it was a pleasure to write for her. SO glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Perfect
So sad that this is over, I really want it to keep going but I suppose it is time. Thank you for sharing this one with us. I want to read it again now that it is complete ask EA, I tend to read things a lot when I love them, I just finished my 4th time with TGTCIA...
Looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response:
Well EA's story IS amazing and worthy of rereading. That Baseballward of hers is pretty damn amazing. And Ms Bella with her camaro is pretty fun too!