Reviews by sballluvr5
Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Growth of Understanding

aww i'm so glad that Carlisle came around. really great chapter!!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Trouble With Money

aww Edward's so cute. and yay for Carlisle and Esme investing in Cullen Racing :) great chapter!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: One Hiding Amongst Them

lol. Bella's such a sweetheart. anyone else would've had Ben arrested. really great chapter :):)

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: To Protect and Conceal

ooh yay! an engagement ring! that was very nice of Bella to let Ben and Angela stay at her house. i would've done the same thing. really great chapter :):)

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Waiting on the Edge

oh i'm so glad Edward's going to be ok. i hope he's able to race again. this was such a good chapter! they're engaged :):) i LOVED that Bella punched the shit out of James. i can't wait until Edward find that out :)

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Legal Eagle

hahaha in your face Aro! and you too Jane!! great chapter :):)

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

aww!!! i absolutely LOVED this story! i'm always so sad when your stories come to an end. really great job, as always :)

Kristi

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251330
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

sucks for you Kate! haha. no that's sad, but i'm glad Edward barely acknowledged her and wished her the best :) i love this story. this chapter was such a pleasant surprise :):)

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

do a part 2!!! do a part 2!! haha this is one of my favorite stories and i would love to see it continued :) Edward is so sweet. it sucks that Bella is plagued with nightmares right now. loved this chapter :):)

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Extra (takeout)

aww that was cute :) a very pleasant surprise. loved it!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

aww i loved it!!! Edward is such a sweetie :) love that their pregnant again! i still re-read parts of this story from time to time. it would be great if you added more... :):)

Kristi

Summary:

 

 

For those of you who read "The Perfect Wife" this takes place twelve years after the epilogue. You do not need to read TPW, but an understanding of the story is helpful.

Carlisle ran a human trafficking ring. He was an abusive husband and father. Esme suffered cruel and horrific atrocities at her husband’s hand. Her sons, Emmett, Jasper and Edward were raised to treat her no better than a slave; undeserving of love and respect. Rosalie, Alice and Bella are brought into this life as their wives and together these women fight to change their outlook on life and women. At the end of TPW, Em/J/E have learned to change and passionately love and respect their wives.

Carlisle is finally killed when he attempts to hurt Bella, freeing Esme from a lifetime of abuse. His will stated he wanted to be cremated so his ashes would remain with his family, forever a symbol of his power over his family. Esme refuses to let him control her life any longer and takes his urn from the house returning empty-handed hours later.

TPW was Bella and Edward’s story. This is Esme’s story.

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4083 Read Count: 7761
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2011 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this was... perfect. i'm so glad that everyone got their happy ending. and i'm glad that you didn't tell us what Esme did with Carlisle's ashes because she's right, it doesn't matter. absolutely loved this! :):)

Kristi



Author's Response:

I really struggled over the decision whether to say what she did or not. No matter what I came up with I knew someone would think it wasn't good enough so I decided to leave it to the reader's imagination. I'm glad you liked it.

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272426
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Woo hoo!!! He gone. I'm really hoping Edward gets to her asap. This gives me such anxiety lol. 

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

YESSSSSS!!!!!!! Edvard is back!!! Thank goodness. Ya had me stressing out there for awhile lol. I'm so glad he found her so quickly. Loved it!!! :):)

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Please don't keep me hanging in this pit of despair :'( 

i hope Edvard finds her asap and Bella and the baby are ok.