Reviews by sballluvr5
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311074
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self

wow. i wonder what's going on. ok i must admit that i have been reading the training school series for months, but i never review. i know i'm so mean! sorry!!! this story is amazing so far as is the training school. so now i'm going to go figure out my way around this site since i only joined to read your stories :):)

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow

aww man. these people are friggin crazy! can't wait to read more!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

oh no. she's forgetting who she is. how sad. i'm really curious as to what's going to happen now. update soon!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation

it's nice to see that Felix isn't a complete monster. Aro definitely is. great chapter, update soon!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth

wow. i'm really curious as to where the rest of the Cullen's fit. and is Charlie going to rescue her? i sure hope so. great chapter, update soon!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

i got my alert!! wow Aro is pretty creepy. interesting to know what he's thinking though. update soon!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining

aww poor Carlise. i really hope Bella's ok. i can't imagine what they're doing to her. and i was really hoping that Alice didn't get pregnant. oh well. i hope Bella doesn't get pregnant by Aro. yuck. anyway, great chapter. it revealed a lot. can't wait for the next one!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

jeez that man is crazy. poor Bella. is Charlie gonna rescue her? will she even remember who he is? man this situation is effed up. can't wait to read more to see how this story pans out!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Volturi Order

and they meet... for once i have no idea where a story is going. it's kind of scary lol. can't wait to read more!!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Volturi Order

and they meet... for once i have no idea where a story is going. it's kind of scary lol. can't wait to read more!!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Volturi Order

and they meet... for once i have no idea where a story is going. it's kind of scary lol. can't wait to read more!!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

oh Aro is a sadistic bastard! i want to punch him! anyway... i'm really curious as to where this story is going to go :) can't wait to read more

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

aww Carlisle and Esme are like real humans! haha hopefully Edward is also a real human :):) great chapter

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

Aro sure gets creepier and creepier. I'm glad Esme is there for Bella. 

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

oh yes, mama Esme to the rescue. i really can't wait to see how this story plays out!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

wait what does he mean "cast aside your hand"? is he going to cut it off? yuck. can't wait for the next chapter!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

oh man! Felix tell him everything!! Charlie follow him! poor Charlie. i hope he finds Bella soon... great chapter

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

oh man i hope it's not crazy Aro! i'm so glad that Bella has Alice. great chapter :)

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

thank God it was only Jasper who saw them! great chapter, can't wait for the next one :)

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple

oh man that is sick. but Bella's remembering! hopefully she can keep it to herself though. hopefully Charlie finds her! and soon. great chapter :)

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey

oh yuck. what a dick. i really hope he doesn't have sex with Bella. gross! haha. it's always interesting (in a creepy and disgusting way) to look into Aro's mind. great chapter!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

oohh! what was in the note? ah! great chapter :):)

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

oh man. I hope the Cullen's are able to bring Aro down! great chapter!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling

oh no. oh no. what's going to happen?! update soon!!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning

oh man. i wonder what they're doing to Bella. i want to punch Aro in the jugular. 

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Seek the First

oh man. i can only imagine what he's doing to Bella!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

oh please for the love of God please tell me that's Edward or Carlisle or Esme! Aro is so friggin sick. can't wait for the next chapter!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

oh man oh man. Charlie is going to come to save the day now right? right? PLEASE update soon! 

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

ahhhh!!! oh man oh man. ok. so Edward will hide, Charlie will track the call and they'll be saved and live happily ever after? maybe? update soon!!!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

oh thank God they found them. i hope Carlisle, Esme, Jasper and Alice make it out. great chapter, can't wait for more :):)

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

ahh!!! thank God Felix is going to help him get in. hopefully Aro just went in and out so Edward can try to get Bella to Charlie. oh man you guys really have me nervous. great chapter, update soon! :)

Kristi

p.s. that review about Aro and eHarmony was hilarious!

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

ahh! that better be Charlie and co. coming to rescue them! oh man. really great chapter, can't wait for the next one :)

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Exodus

oh man i hope Edward gets better and i really hope that Aro and his men do not find them. also... go Charlie!! lol loved this chapter, can't wait for the next one :):)

Kristi

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514585
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

Aww, Bella said she loves him :) So I've been reading this story all along, yet this is my first review. I'm sorry :( This story is really good. I loved how B & E got closer at the school and that he's protecting her from James now. So sweet. Anyway, sorry again for never reviewing. I promise I will review from now on! 

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

oh now Aro decides to call! that's really sad that Carlisle has to shut down the school, but understandable. stupid James. anyway, great chapter, can't wait to read more!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

i hope they tear James and Laurent to pieces!! really great chapter, update soon!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

aaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!! damnit James! how the hell did he find them? oh man you need to update soon! PLEASE?

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

wow. so Laurent is dead. Heidi better run. oh man i hope Edward finds Bella and Victoria soon and kills James! really great chapter, update soon!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

eff that! run after them Edward!!! ok i'll calm down. i really hope they get them soon because James is an effing psycho. update soon!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

hahaha take that James. so who was it?? Edward?? great chapter, update soon!!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

uh oh. what's Aro going to do? hopefully something horrible! haha. really great chapter, i'm so glad they're safe. can't wait to read more!!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

finally! James gets his! hahaha.... i ALMOST felt bad for him. then i remembered who he was lol. it's sad that this story is almost over, but all good things must come to an end. wow that was so cliche. anyway, excellent chapter, can't wait for the next one!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

this story was really good. they've come so far. and the end was great lol.

Kristi

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

TPW banner

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624772
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

wow i spent the last two days reading this and i'm finally done! i love that Bella broke Edward out of his horrible ways. i really hope that Demitri doesn't hurt Bella and i hope Bella tells Edward about Carlisle! really great story!! can't wait to read more!!!

Kristi 

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

oh no! no no no!!! can't he just pretend?? and have her pretend?? come on! he will destroy her. oh man. i do not like this. i seriously want to cry. oh! how about he just kill Marcus, Demetri, and Carlisle? then Esme can sign the void adoption papers and they can get married. see? happily ever after?? come on! you're killing me here! sigh. update soon!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

oh man. i literally had tears in my eyes when he first grabbed her and took her to the basement. thank God he didn't go through with it! i don't think my poor heart could take that! or Bella's for that matter. i'm so glad she finally told him about Carlisle. i really hope Edward is able to keep Bella safe. she has been through so much already. really great chapter. i can't wait to find out the secret of Esme's garden. update soon!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

aww... i'm glad Esme has her therapeutic garden. really great chapter, update soon!!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

oh jeez it's Carlisle isn't it. ugh!!!! she really needs to fight as hard as possible. no more taking crap Bella! anyway, i'm glad Edward is getting over himself. i really hope he finds her before she's raped. update soon!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

let me go?? no way jose! haha jk. i don't know why, but i always get scared when you post a new chapter. you sure do know how to keep me on my toes. i'm super excited that both carlisle and demetri and dead. woo hoo two for one special! haha. anyway, great chapter, can't wait to read more.

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

aww i'm glad she ended up with Edward. but i'm also glad that she left him for a few years to figure her life out and go to therapy. this was a great chapter, i can't wait for the epilogue!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

wow that was a really great story! i'm sad that it's over and happy that Bella and Edward got their HEA. i definitely want to read your book :):) great job.

Kristi

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315694
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light

oh man i forgot about her stupid date with Jacob. i'm really glad you wrote Alice's POV. that stinks that she has to pretend to be something she's not. at least now she doesn't have to pretend anymore with Jasper. really great chapter, update soon!!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm

umm Edward, defensive much? just admit you really like Bella already! lol great chapter. i'm glad Edward realized he was being a douche by leaving her by herself. can't wait to read more!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone

haha i don't know why, but Carlisle made me laugh in this chapter. i think it's because i read this after watching Nurse Jackie lol. sigh, i love PFach. anyway, great chapter, update soon!

Kristi



Author's Response:

lol- aww I dont watch Nurse Jackie!! Maybe I should for the Pfach-factor! TY for the rev! x

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw

loved it!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

woo hoo!!! show them what's what! hahaha great chapter :):)

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur

they're so cute lol. i was cracking up at the waitress! great chapter :)

Kristi

have fun in Turkey!

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Hologram

i understand that she thinks something is going to go wrong. i just hope she doesn't do anything stupid like cheat on him bc i'm pretty sure he's not cheating on him. i hope Edward shows up to the party and finds Bella before James does something to her. really great chapter, update soon!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Never Think

ok HEA? ok ok... i can calm down then. Edward deep down can't really believe that Bella slept with James. crazy chapter! update soon!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Echo

a cliffie! no!!! i really hope they work things out. i'm so glad Edward decided to get off his butt and see her. update soon!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Bad Romance

absolutely loved it!!! i think that was a great ending :):):):)

Kristi

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 64094
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chaotic Days and Lonely Nights

aww i hope Bella is pregnant. they would be so happy. i just hope that Edward is able to come home soon. really great chapter, i'm glad Bella, Alice and eventually Rose are helping with Cullen Steel. update soon!!!

Kristi



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I hope you enjoy the rest of the ride!

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Good News and Bad News

oh i can't wait for Aro to find out that Bella is his boss' wife. and actually his boss while Edward's away! if Bella wasn't undercover she should've got coffee and then threw it in his face. on a happier note, i'm so glad Bella's pregnant! i really hope that somehow (short of him being seriously injured) Edward is able to come home before she gives birth. really great chapter, can't wait to read more!!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: The Eyes of A Soulless Man

i want to go punch Aro in the face! seriously!! isn't there any way that they can send Edward something to sign stating that his voting power goes to Bella while he's away. you know i'm kind of annoyed at Edward for not making sure Marcus had his voting power before he left! anyway, really great chapter! i can't wait to see Edward's response to Bella's pregnancy. update soon!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Crucial Correspondence

ahh!! so he did leave plans in place. i knew Edward wasn't that neglectful. oh man i can't wait until he finds out about the baby!! will she tell him over the phone before he gets a chance to read her letter? ok i'm going to go read the teaser now. great chapter, update soon!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Blessed Revelations

ah!! Edward finally knows about the baby!!! yay! I'm so glad that in a few days ella will be running the show (with some help). take that Aro! I'm sure he'll be delighted to find out that he was being so cruel to his bosses wife who is pregnant. i hope he craps his pants when he finds out lol. really really great chapter, can't wait for Monday!!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: The New VIP

hahaha! show 'em who's boss Bella!!! loved this chapter! i can't wait until Bella shows up at that board meeting. can't wait until Thursday!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Corporate Hat Trick

woo hoo!! go Bella! in your faces Aro and Caius! man i was all excited in this chapter. really great. can't wait to read more!!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Transitions

awww. great chapter. i like the name Declan. i can't wait for Edward to come home again. now i'm worried about the next chapter which you say will be stressful. can't wait to read it!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Unpleasant Surprises

oh those damned Volturi brothers!!!! i just want to knock them out! well are they going to prison now? and she probably shouldn't tell Edward this until he gets back because he will surely freak out and not be able to concentrate. i hope that Harry and Seth were able to beat the living crap out of James! really great chapter, can't wait to read more!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy

jeez is Bella having premonitions or something? lol this chapter was so good! i'm glad she has some bodyguards now to protect her and baby Cullen. again, really great chapter, update soon!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: A Pain In The Back

aww she's having the baby. but it's early. man i really wanted Edward to miraculously show up! this was a fantastic chapter, can't wait for the next one!!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Welcome Baby Cullen!

awww she had a girl!! i can't wait to read Edward's reaction when he finds out. i want to punch that nurse in the face by the way. i feel like she's working for the Volturi brothers. anyway, great chapter, can't wait to read more!!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Back Home

oh i hope Edward makes it home soon. that would be really sad if he missed a lot of Gabriella's life. and i love when they have the dreams about laying with each other. so sweet. really great chapter, can't wait to read more!!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Mysteries of Time

oh jeez. ok he has to be alright! oh man that is terrifying. i really really hope he makes it back safely. maybe they'll send him home?? anyway, really great chapter, i can't wait for Wednesday!

Kristi

P.S. i hope your ankle feels better!

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Safe

yay he's coming home!!!! but i don't want this story to be over!! that was so sweet when Edward talked to his daughter for the first time and heard her voice. so sweet. really great chapter, can't wait to read more!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Birthday Party

aww that's ashame that Edward missed Cherie's first bday. hopefully he gets there soon. really great chapter, can't wait for the next one!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Foreign Familiar

aww!! he's back!!! i agree, them getting all hot and heavy wouldn't have felt right just yet. this was very realistic, the fears and anxiety and even Cherie not warming up to him right away. really great chapter, can't wait for the next one!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A Clean Start

aww... that was so friggin cute when Cherie woke up and said "Dada." So sweet. i loved this chapter, it's like everything's turning into the way it should be. loved it!! can't wait for the bittersweet last chapter. i don't want it to end lol...

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: It All Comes Together

aww haha that was really cute. i'm glad Emmett and Jasper are home safe. i hope E and B get their baby number 2. and 3 and 4 haha. really great chapter. can't wait to read the epilogue. but then again i can because that will mean it's over :(

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966

this is so bittersweet. this is one of my favorite stories and i'm sad to see it end. i'm happy Cherie is getting married. sad to hear that Esme and Carlisle died (i actually teared up). random thought- my Pop Pop was born in 1946. that means that in 2010 Cherie would be a little older than my grandpa! haha and he was a marine and fought in Vietnam. anyway, enough of my rambling... i really loved this story. it's sweet to see that Edward and Bella's love just keeps growing throughout the years of their marriage. and i was cracking up when Grace walked in on them feeling each other up! hahaha. loved it, really great job!!

Kristi

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373175
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

oh man! not gonna lie, the epilogue might have made me cry lol. i really loved this story! i can't believe it took me so long to read it. it was so sweet and cute and it seemed pretty realistic to me. again, i absolutely loved this story. you did such an amazing job with it :):)

Kristi

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114431
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Breakaway

wow this is really good! i'm glad they called a truce lol. can't wait to see what happens next!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: New Connections

aww Edward you're so sweet! i love that the press is making it seem like they're together, which they should be soon hahaha... that's sad about Jacob, but maybe Edward will punch him in the face or something. the press will love that! lol. really great chapter, can't wait to read more!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Edward Shaped Hole

aww that was so friggin cute! i knew she was going to get into an accident. i'm glad Edward is staying with her and I love Charlie! lol. really great chapter, can't wait to read more!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Sweet Awakenings

aww Bella and Edward are so cute together! and Charlie cracks me up. i love this story, i keep re-reading it lol. great chapter, can't wait for the next one!!!

Kristi

P.S. those clips were hilarious! i never actually seen the movie, but i'm going to have to

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: You’re Asking Me This NOW?

aww!!! it is so like Edward to ask Bella out in the middle of a race. and i love that he calls her Bella now!! i love this story so much. (sometimes when i'm driving, i pretend i'm Bella racing) um.. yeah, ignore that last bit. anyway, amazing chapter. can't wait for the new one!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Mr. Cullen’s Neighborhood

i hope Bella buys Edward's house! then they'd be neighbors. and when they get married, she can sell it and move in with him in the big house and have lots of babies. oh, sorry am i jumping the gun? haha great chapter, can't wait for the next one!!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Pushing Boundaries

aww that was so stinking cute! i loved it!! can't wait for more :):)

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Schooling Cullen

hahaha Bella owned him! that was really cute :)

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Unexpected Visitor

aahh!!! well strawberry blonde automatically makes me assume Tanya. hopefully Bella believes Edward. i wonder what Aro wanted. great chapter, update soon!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado

haha Tanya's funny. great chapter!!

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Interruptus

aww poor Edward and his obsidian balls hahaha. great chapter!!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Cosmic Event

aww i'm so glad Bella trust Edward so much. and i hope she does move in with him ;)

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Sacrificial Lion

aww i love how comfortable Bella is with Edward now. they are so friggin cute :) great chapter, can't wait for the next one!

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Helpful Wagers

hahaha i love Tanya! great chapter :):)

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Additional Motivation

haha they're so cute :)

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: It's Just Business...

oh wow. what douches (the Volturi). maybe Edward and Bella will find somewhere else to be. can't wait to see how you have it planned out! :):) great chapter

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Rewards

ooh time to meet the parents. Edward and Bella are so friggin cute lol. great chapter :):)

Kristi

Reviewer: sballluvr5 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Meet The Parents

oh Carlisle lol... great chapter!!

Kristi