Reviews by tinamarie7869
Summary:

 

Banner by: Caiteexx Graphics

Summary: Emmett Cullen messes up and has to repeat his senior year of high school. What will happen when he starts bringing home Bella, and how will his father Edward react? Things get intense when Edward starts to think of Bella in more ways than just his son's girlfriend.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85896 Read Count: 126038
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 05 Oct 2015
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Bella has to be very confused right now.

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Date: 19 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Are Bella and Emmett really in a relationship? I have a feeling that something else is going on.

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Date: 30 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Maybe Alice wasn't talking about Rose!

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Date: 22 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I wasn't that impressed with Tia. She seemed overbearing and needed to prove a point.

I don't really hate Bella's parents. That's the only kind of upbringing she knows. I feel sorry for them because one day they may want to be a part of her life only to find Bella doesn't have time for them. Bella isn't like that though.

Does Edward realize that he calls her "sweetheart"?

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Date: 02 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm not convinced that Bella and Emmett have the relationship everyone thinks they have.

Can you give me a hint of which chapter explains Rose's part? I honestly can't remember reading about her.

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Date: 27 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I honestly forgot what part Rose plays in this story so I'm going to have to back up to find out.

Something about Emmett and Bella's relationship seems off to me. I can't recall if they've been openly affectionate or heavy PDA.

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Date: 06 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I'm not getting a boyfriend/girlfriend vibe between Emmett and Bella.

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Date: 22 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I don't recall them using a condom. Does Bella end up pregnant from their night together? If so, how can he deny her then?

I forgot all of their ages.

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm going with real. He wouldn't have dreamed of her being a virgin after what he believes goes on between her & Emmett. My guess is that Emmett knows more than Edward thinks he does. Edward seems to be the only one in the dark

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Date: 09 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Too bad more action isn't taken against bullies in RL. I disagree with something Marcus said. He said that verbal bullying isn't as harmful as physical. Verbal abuse is a form of brainwashing and it takes the mind longer to heal than bruises. Take it from a person on the recieving end.

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Date: 06 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I like when Bella has twins. I don't think Tia's up to anything. She seems to be the only one that understands what's going on better than anyone else does.

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Date: 02 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Solution: MOVE!

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Date: 29 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I didn't figure Tia into the equation but that was a good solution for Bella. I can't get over what a prick Charlie is. I hope we've seen the last of him.

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Date: 29 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I can't believe how clueless Edward is about everything. It's almost comical.

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Date: 06 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

What a beautiful ending to a long traveled road.

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Date: 22 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Her parents a self centered.

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Date: 02 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

:( So sad to see this coming to an end,

This sounds like a nice little bundle of joy.

I wish you and your family well.

Summary: Past Featured Story

SYTYCD

 

The competition is fierce. Dreams are at stake and a budding romance between All-Star, Edward and contestant, Bella are the talk to of the competition. Not to mention jealousy and bitterness from fellow contestants. Will Bella's dream become a reality or will her dreams be dashed before she even gets a chance to compete? Will Edward open his heart to the sweet brunette who captured his attention at the auditions?

 

"And America's Favorite Dancer is..."

 

 

Banner by the talented Mina Rivera

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ON HIATUS


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 209773 Read Count: 45870
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2015 Updated: 30 Nov 2016
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Date: 28 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 6: The Green Mile

There are two villians. Alice and Renee. I wonder how much trouble they're going to cause?

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Date: 15 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 3: You are the New Day

I liked Rose's common sense words to Bella about Edward. I wonder how easy it will be though. Rose is observant. This Edward does seem like a cuddling lover.

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Date: 01 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Pas de Deux

Happy New Year!

I like how descriptive the scenes are.

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Date: 01 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Someone to Watch over Me

I'm giving Alice the benifit of the doubt, for now. She hasn't really done anything vindictive yet. She's just a bitchy diva that we don't have privy to her personal life.

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Date: 14 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Hip, Hip, Chin, Chin - The Rhythm Section

I'm exhausted just from reading this.

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Date: 29 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 4: New York Minute

I'm having a difficult time picturing Edward as sexy. He comes off as more effeminate to me.

Pump It Up by mama4dukes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

piu

 

How does a guy get a girl to notice him? Join Edward and his buddies as they go on a journey of self-discovery. AH / OOC

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Humor
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8679 Read Count: 678
[Report This] Published: 30 Dec 2015 Updated: 30 Dec 2015
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Funny!!!!

Summary:

flames

The Chicago Fire of 1871, also called the Great Chicago Fire, burned from October 8 to October 10, 1871, and destroyed thousands of buildings, killed an estimated 300 people and caused an estimated 200 million in damages. Can the love of one couple survive the fire or will it be destroyed along with everything else?

Save


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18171 Read Count: 7836
[Report This] Published: 09 Jan 2016 Updated: 02 Apr 2016
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I hope that both of their families were safe.

Mate by she_viking Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 51]
Summary:

mate

“His gaze travels up and down my body, and I watch as he palms himself through his jeans, almost as if he’s unaware of it, but I can tell he’s straining against the button fly. Then, he leans over me again, and this time I don’t shut my eyes.

 

“Mate.”

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15277 Read Count: 8399
[Report This] Published: 05 Feb 2016 Updated: 07 Feb 2016
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Intense!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Dr. Edward Masen is in for a surprise when his best friend and fellow colleague Dr. Carlisle Cullen invites him out to spend an evening with him at an exclusive member's only club. What Edward does not know, is that the club caters to a select few who share in a unique fetish within a certain lifestyle choice. He meets a brave little girl named Bella Swan who is more than happy to pull him into her world and introduce him to the wonderful lifestyle of Bondage, Discipline, Sadism, and Masochism.

 

It is a story about two consenting adults who venture into the relationship of a Dominant Daddy/little girl.  

 

If you do not fully understand the dynamics of this type of lifestyle I can only inform you that this story has nothing to do with incest, nor are the characters role playing / age playing in any way. It is a relationship where they practice total power exchange in and out of the bedroom on a 24/7 basis.  

 

If any of what you have read so far freaks you out in any way, then I must warn you now...this story may not be for you.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35176 Read Count: 172207
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2016 Updated: 28 May 2016
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

:)!!!!!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Welcome back and thank you.



Author's Response:

awww....no thank you! I am glad to be back!

 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Your writing feels like it's matured. Very good.

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Date: 12 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I appreciate your informative a/n's.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I like all of them so far.

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Date: 12 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Is she reading one of yours?

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Date: 17 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Each of these chapters tempt and tease.

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Date: 20 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

:)

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Date: 24 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Thank goodness he pulled her away from that demonstration. That didn't even sound like acceptable newbie sub training.

Danger In New York by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 536]
Summary: Past Featured Story

danger

 

A Corrupt district attorney and his daughter who pays the ultimate price for her father's betrayal. Two brothers at war and a family divided.

Twins Edward/Anthony. Mature content, mention of rape, abuse, drug use, prostitution, human trafficking, crime.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90965 Read Count: 84496
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2016 Updated: 28 Apr 2016
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2016 Title: Danger In New York

I wonder if anyone was hit by the stray bullet?

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Date: 28 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I wasn't expecting Anthony to die. He was growing on me. More than Edward was/is.

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Date: 28 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

It seems that Anthony gets his thrills watching Edward become a monster.

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Date: 28 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Carlisle gave her a life.

Sequel?

Summary: Past Featured Story

ilck

 

Edward Cullen is a probation officer. He is used to handling some of the toughest hardened criminals out there. That is until he meets his new proby...Isabella Swan.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54473 Read Count: 43905
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Apr 2016
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 21 Bella’s virginity vs. Edward’s primal urges

Is this complete?

Summary: Past Featured Story

TOTGA

Bella Swan was dreading going back to her ten year high school reunion, over Valentine’s Day Weekend, for Hillsborough High School. Her time in high school in Tampa, Florida was not high on her list of pleasant experiences. She was quiet, unassuming and secretly in love with Edward Cullen. It was that unrequited love that forced her to move away to Seattle, as far from Tampa as possible. He never knew she existed. Or so she thought.

Edward was looking forward to his high school reunion because he was anxious to see the one that got away. Bella Swan was the quiet girl who never really interacted with anyone, but Edward saw that she was something special. But as ruler of the school, he had certain expectations to maintain. It was one of his biggest regrets. His life would have been easier if he had followed his heart. Now, he was a divorced father of two. His ex-wife, Tanya, who was his high school girlfriend, left him for a younger man and abandoned her children.

Will Bella be happy to see Edward or will she stay hidden amongst her classmates? Will Edward finally break the mold that was expected of him and open up his heart to the beautiful and shy Bella Swan? Will he be able to win back the one that got away?

Banner by Clo Rodeffler

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Public

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 84 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196828 Read Count: 280863
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2016 Updated: 23 Jun 2017
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Congratulations! I remember this. I really liked it.

Rogue by Robshandmonkey Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
Summary:

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Meet Masen.

He is not just any thug growing up in a family of organized crime. He is a man who has changed the way families do business.

Masen is in line to be the next "Boss" for his well connected family, and in one night there is a massacre and all his rivals and their families are wiped out leaving no one left behind. The authorities have no clues as to who, why or how someone could pull off a mass murder of this scale. 

Meet Charlie.

A soldier turned businessman who will stop at nothing to give his little girl whatever her heart desires, and what she wants is something no mafia family has ever been able to stake a claim on...the city of Angels.  

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42527 Read Count: 22447
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2016 Updated: 16 Jun 2016
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 May 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, if you can't beat him then join him.

I've been waiting for this since your teaser. 

Thanks for the Mothers Day present.

Is Bella a "Princess"?

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Date: 11 May 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Maybe her hands are her "weapons"?

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Date: 15 May 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It's going to be so exciting seeing/reading her in action.

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Date: 17 May 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Trust is earned.

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER

Most mothers would do whatever it took to provide for their children, which was exactly what Bella Masen did when she found out her husband had left them. With the walls closing in and the debt collectors on her doorstep, how far was she willing to go?

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 85 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45714 Read Count: 124603
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2016 Updated: 29 Jan 2017
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 May 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's going to be interesting getting the scoop on why he left.

Will there be an EPOV?

Do they eventually end up back together? If they do, I hope she makes him work for it.

Bewitched by TwiAddictAnne Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 102]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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She was his only friend. She was the laughter of his childhood. And then she was gone. Will he ever find the love that was lost? Or was it all for naught? A love story as old as the times. 18th Century DukeWard. All Human. Canon couples. Rated for language and adult situations.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11225 Read Count: 18249
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2016 Updated: 15 Jun 2016
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter-5

I enjoy mystical stories with surprising twists.

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Date: 15 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter-15: Epilogue

Thank you. I've enjoyed this but as anything good, I wanted more.

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Date: 14 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter-14

<3!

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Date: 03 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter-4

Prejudice over the centuries.

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Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter-12

That explains her sudden disappearance.

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Date: 06 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter-7

Is Edward going to miss her because she was arrested already? I don't think Edward had anything to do with that.

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Date: 08 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter-8

Loving this and on pins & needles.

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Date: 08 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter-9

Lord Edward to the rescue!

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Date: 10 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter-10

Go Edward!

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Date: 12 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter-13

Men can be so clueless.

Wrigley's by heartfortwilight Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

Wrigleys

 

A love story told on tiny sketches on gum wrappers.  E/B. HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6232 Read Count: 1670
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2016 Updated: 09 Jun 2016
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love that commercial. I enjoyed reading about it too. 

Thank you.

Summary:

The Mother

The prophecy of the blood dragons was about to come true, but the future mother of the blood dragons needs to find her mate and the mate must be a blood drinker.  Will the future mother only use him for what she needs, or will he capture her heart?  E&B/HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8683 Read Count: 9029
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2016 Updated: 07 Oct 2016
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm excited to read this. I'm so ready for some fantasy.

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Date: 13 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like how a hidden virus destroyed mankind.

I don't think Bella's quest will be an easy one.

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Date: 14 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm enjoying this mystical journey.

My guess is that it's Emmett?

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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AU in 1950s Paris. Celebrated private detective Charlie Swan is hired to investigate wealthy playboy Edward Cullen who is suspected of having an affair with a rich businessman's wife. Charlie's innocent but overly curious daughter Bella gets too involved with the case. Based on the plot of the 1957 Billy Wilder movie "Love in the Afternoon." Drabble. Updates EVERY DAY. AH, HEA.

Banner by Rita01tx. Beta'd by Frannie Walsh.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15056 Read Count: 20431
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2016 Updated: 09 Aug 2016
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Bella's living out some of her fantasies it seems.

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Date: 18 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Are you sure that Bella's 18 years old?



Author's Response:

yup. :) But some 18-year-olds are both wise and foolish beyond their years. ;)

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Enjoy your break.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I wonder if he'll be tempted to follow her home.

I think it's inevitable that they'll sleep together. It's the when that matters. 

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Date: 15 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I want to know what game is she playing.

I'm also curious about his eyes.

I'm unsure where this is leading.



Author's Response:

Ah yes, what game is she playing? And I hope you're still finding it interesting. Thanks for all the comments! :)

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

At 18 you're not thinking of any future consequences. 



Author's Response:

*sigh* Yes, I'm afraid that at 18 so many of us  are unable to conceive of future consequences, lol!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Hell No!



Author's Response:

hahaha! you are so right, lol!

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Date: 07 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Doesn't she realize the position she's put her father in? He may be at the end of the gun now.



Author's Response:

Don't worry, Aro will realize the truth after he's calmed down, and will give up on using his gun. Charlie is in no danger. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Is Charlie still following Edward?

Little girl is playing with fire.



Author's Response:

Charlie has stopped following Edward because that case is over. But yes, Bella is playing with fire.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm intrigued by his eye color. Is that a precurser of his true identity?



Author's Response:

you'll find out more about the eye color in later chapters. Everyone is a human in this story. Thanks again! I'm really enjoying your comments :)

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I can't picture Bella's behavior. I see her as a naive teenager.



Author's Response:

I know right? ;)

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Date: 13 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

He's full of himself?



Author's Response:

Oh, he definitely is!

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Date: 13 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I think that Bella's swimming in shark infested waters.



Author's Response:

You are so right! Thanks so much for your fun reviews! <3

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Anxious to see where this goes.

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Date: 03 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Is tall, dark and slimey Aro?

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Date: 03 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Dribble or drabble, it doesn't matter to me as long as this story continues.

In my opinion the names don't matter. It's the settings description that sets the stage for me.

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Date: 03 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm wondering if her thoughts are foreshadowing?

What is their age difference? 



Author's Response:

Great guess and thanks so much for the reviews! Bella is 18 and Edward is 30.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

How self serving of Edward. I know he's going to ask her to pretend that she's the woman he's spending time with in the room. The sad but true thing is, Bella's a naive, awestruck teenager, so of course she'll agree. She's saving their lives.



Author's Response:

He is totally self-serving! Thank you for taking the time to comment and rate my chapters. I really appreciate it! :)

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Date: 14 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

This isn't the same Bella from the beginning. What game is she playing?

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Date: 31 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Look out Bella. I think Charlie's going to follow her to make sure that his suspicons are correct.



Author's Response:

Hahaha. You'll see what happens soon. Thanks!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Is Charlie going to go into protective "father" mode?



Author's Response:

You will find out soon! :) Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: 26 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Things are going to catch up to her.



Author's Response:

Oh, I think you are so right! ;)

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

You got some splainin to do Bella.

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Date: 09 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Has Charlie confronted her?



Author's Response:

No... he's more subtle than that in this story...

Summary: Past Featured Story

banner

 

He could have chosen any female wolf in the room. Why did he have to choose me, the lone half-breed?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32608 Read Count: 178668
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2016 Updated: 06 May 2017
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Maybe he's just letting her think that he's letting her leave?

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Date: 18 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm hoping for an EPOV.

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Date: 18 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice twist and a refreshing change.

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Date: 24 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

She showed her.

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Date: 24 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Thanks for EPOV.

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Date: 23 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm enjoying picturing them as wolves.

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Date: 25 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I wonder why Edward's dad ignored the prejudice of his pack? Was it his way of "make or break" phylosophy?

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Date: 15 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Are they the true alpha pair in the eyes of the Pack? There wasn't the traditional ceremony.

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Date: 21 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I like her aggressive attitude.

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Date: 01 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I think his mind is made up already.

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Date: 10 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Their claws are coming out now.

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Date: 10 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Bella needed to let off steam and Irina was what the Dr. prescribed. 

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Date: 11 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I guess Peter didn't tell Edward everything.

Chimera by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1017]
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Summary: Bella Swan has lived a sheltered life, and chooses to go to college as far from home as her strict parents will allow. She runs into Edward Cullen, a gorgeous law student. They become friends and one night cross the line of friendship in a way that will alter the life of both of them more than anyone can ever believe. When DNA doesn't tell the same story Bella tells, how will her young life be altered?
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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 256985 Read Count: 333172
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2016 Updated: 30 Mar 2017
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Date: 02 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

OMG! That girl shouldn't go anywhere w/o a leash and muzzle.

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Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I don't understand how she doesn't see anything sinful about lying. It's not her religous beliefs that have her mind messed up but how her parents raised her.  

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Date: 19 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Jessica and Lauren are too cute for words. I don't think Bella could've found better roommates if she interviewed them herself. They seem flighty but actually have some common sense.

Alice is the one that I'd like more info on.