Reviews by tinamarie7869
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478689
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

It's killing me not knowing who Miss Honey & Guido are.

I appreciate your faithful updates.

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Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Loved the action.

I want my own Chaos.

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Date: 05 May 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

E seems to be emasculated somewhat.

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Date: 06 May 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I'm having a difficult time keeping everyones nicknme straight.

I have to admit each chapter recently, has me sitting on the edge of my seat.

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Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Wonderful!

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Date: 14 May 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I loved all the twist & turns. The mystery was excellant.

Sorry to see this end. I've enjoyed the journey.

Thank you for sharing all your hard work.

Summary: Past Featured Story

fertile

 

 

Summary: Almost over the hill--in her own mind--Bella wants a family, so she chooses in vitro. Tainted by playboy father, Charlie's need to date barely legal girls, causes her to push away a younger Edward. AH/Rated M

Edited for content on FFN. Unedited will post on TWCS and FicPad.

Banner by: Beffers87

Birthday story for: Bobbi Wordsmith aka: AWayWithWords


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20562 Read Count: 56092
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2014 Updated: 13 Apr 2014
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

E's only doing what she asked of him.

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Date: 09 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I enjoy each new bit of info devulged in each update.

Summary:

Can Edward and Bella survive the intrusion of a friend who wants more than friendship? Who is out to take him? Threatening black roses says it all - "He's mine!"

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: More than my own life
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7183 Read Count: 716
[Report This] Published: 07 Apr 2014 Updated: 19 Apr 2014
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm not completely sure I understand what's happening. I don't get the difference in time jumps from chapter 2 to chapter 3.

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner

 

Banner made by Marie Carro

 

TFFA Banner

 

 

Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146714
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
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Date: 16 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

"Merry Christmas"! It's so nice of you to say that. It's become quite a controversy here in the states. We're being pushed to be "politcally correct" ad use Happy Holidays instead. Home of the free, yeah right.

I'm concerned how much of an impact Carlisle will have on them. Also, I don't think Edward is helping by keeping things from Bella. If she's armed with the correct ammo she'll be better able to fight the battles.



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. It's so sad that everything has to be PC today. I mean, I get the idea behind it, but still, there are ways to overdo it. You're the only one commenting on Edward keeping things from Bella and being worried about it. You're not too far off with that ;). Merry Christmas to you and your family. See you on the 29th.

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Date: 16 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps

I hope Edward's stronger than he appears to be because if not his father is going to chew him up & spit out the pieces. I can see how easily Carlisle can cause problems.



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Edward is strong and will become stronger as time goes by. You'll see.

Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by FemmeCullen

 

Summary: Edward’s grandfather’s business has been closed because of his investment partner died and his daughter, who he calls the viper, wants more than just money to reopen. The viper makes life hard for the Cullens when Edward refuses her ‘offer.’ When an angry Edward meets another poor little rich girl that needs some tutoring, will she be the one to teach him a thing or two?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69931 Read Count: 84922
[Report This] Published: 20 Jul 2014 Updated: 25 Aug 2014
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Date: 20 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I'm quite sure I can imagine why she's wanted in Russia. Maybe sending her right back would've been better? No, prolong her torture!

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Date: 04 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I believe a huge shock is waiting in the shadows. I wonder how they'll handle it?

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Date: 05 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Let me tell you, I'm sweating bullets, waiting for each update!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

THANK YOU!!

That fix helped a bit with my anxiousness.

Now I'm just gnawing my nails to the quick.

I don't understand ungrateful reviewers. If they're so bitter then don't read.

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Date: 07 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

With the way B acted, I'd say Jasper did a good job.

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Date: 08 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I think Edward needs to work a lot harder if or ever he'll gain her trust.

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Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Now who's built a wall around their heart?

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Date: 11 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

He's lucky B has a kind soul.

Summary:

allo

Bella is a Drama Student in UCLA. Edward Cullen is an up and coming actor. When these two meet on the set of his new movie, sparks begin to fly. What does this mean for their current boyfriend and girlfriend back home? E/B pairing eventually. Rated M for Language and Lemons.

 

allo

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56387 Read Count: 34698
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2014 Updated: 09 Dec 2015
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Thanksgiving part 2

It sounds like the cracks are beginning between B & J but through no fault from B. Jake's insecurities will be his own downfall.

Leah is Leah.

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Date: 20 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This is 1 story I wish moved quicker, it's so good!



Author's Response:

Well I have up to chapter 18 written and trust me, your in for a bumpy ride.

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Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Considering that the cops were there so fast, I'm guessing Tanya had a hand in the setup.

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Date: 13 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

B is seems strong & confident. J knows her weeknesses & will use them.

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Date: 26 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I like this strong B.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm looking forward to see where this goes.

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Date: 06 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I enjoy B & E stories but not when they're those overly sappy, love-at-first-sight ones. Is this one of those?

B/J & E/T seem to have loving, solid relationships & I can't see them just drop it at the drop of a hat. I hope there's at least some build up?

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Date: 11 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

It seems like E is tempted easily or his love isn't as strong as he believes.

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Date: 14 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I think it's just normal insecurities on his side coming through but I reserve the right to change my mind in the future.

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Date: 01 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm relieved Bella seems to have a backbone & is sticking to her guns.

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Date: 04 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

The pot's beginning to boil.

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Date: 23 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm usually not a fan of Tanya's but, she is Edwards  long term girlfriend so I'll give her the benefit of doubt. For now.

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Date: 11 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

It seems like it's going to be an interesting visit.

I think, for me anyway, this would flow better and be an easier read if the translations followed right after instead of at the end.

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Date: 14 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I just don't understand why some people like to get into others personal lives.

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Date: 14 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Thank you for adding the English translation in the sentence. I made my reading comprehension easier.

If Tanya and Jacob ever get together and compare notes, look out.

 

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Date: 09 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Something tells me we haven't seen the last of Tanya or Jacob.

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Date: 24 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

It doesn't matter what her reasons are for her behavior. She's an adult and is responsible for her actions and choices.

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Date: 27 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I think that Rose is a manipulator.

Summary:

Charlie Swan made a deal with the devil. Owing a debt he couldn't repay, he took the cowardly way out and offered his daughter's services to pay off his tab. The rich and powerful Carlisle Cullen greedily accepts, and Bella finds herself at the mercy of a dark and violent man. Will she survive? Or will he beat the life out of her? Dark themes. NC-17 for violence and language. AU.

 

cg


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39293 Read Count: 72878
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2014 Updated: 19 May 2015
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

She's my Superhero!



Author's Response:

Mine too! 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

10 Stars

This was a very welcomed read. I was feeling stagnant. I couldn't find anything worth investing my time in. I became intrigued by the comments on fb & decided to see what all the excitement was about. I was wonderfully surprised.

Thank you!

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Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I would make Carlisle suffer a slow torture. He'd end up sucking his own cock!

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Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

WOW!

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Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I'd say that I would like to see Carlisle get a taste of his own treatment but he might enjoy it too much.

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Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I hope that Bella kills him soon.

Is Bella's love for her father still there?

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Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Is Carlisle in the mob?

Clearly he's not a true Dominant. I don't even know how to describe him.

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Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm surprised that Charlie can even get it up.

This should've been called "Freak Show".

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Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Intrigued.

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Date: 24 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm surprised that she doesn't black out after some of the abuse.

Summary:

lci

 

Desperate times call for desperate measures, but how far would you go to escape? How can three men help three girls out of their sticky situations, or help them into them for that matter? Canon, non-canon, everything goes. You have been warned. ExB

 

This will be the only warning given for this story: This story is based on a porn site. There will be plenty of sex. Mixed couples, slash, HET, bi, anal. Basically, anything goes. If you are easily offended, please do not continue.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 86216 Read Count: 192179
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2014 Updated: 06 Jun 2016
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I'll admit this is difficult for me to read but I hope I'm open minded enough to continue.

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Date: 20 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

GAH! This is like a train wreck. I can't walk away.

I don't see what's so special  between B & E. Not even their sexual encounters because they're the same with the others.

It's just like a college toga party.

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Date: 03 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Color me intrigued.

Summary:

She's an acrobat Angel and he's a famous actor that keeps his private life secret. What happens when he shows up at an exclusive viewing of her show?


Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Mpreg, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7967 Read Count: 1669
[Report This] Published: 15 Oct 2014 Updated: 23 Apr 2017
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A/U AH - Three Witch sisters move from Salem, MA to Houston TX where they rent to own the ancestral home of one Edward Cullen. For some reason Edward has a dream about a dark haired beauty that he has yet to meet. Does Bella already have Edward under her spell? What mayhem will the Witch Sisters bring into the lives of Edward, his family and his friends?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47434 Read Count: 30293
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2014 Updated: 22 Oct 2015
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Sweet tale!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Everyone loves the HEA.  :)

Hope you'll read more of my stories and let me know what you think.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I don't think he can be considered her "true love" because of her spell.



Author's Response:

Nope not if a "spell" was used.  However sometimes things can evolve that will allow the spell to have been a type of karma.

Thanks for reading!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

They're immortal?



Author's Response:

Yes.  :)  

thanks for reading

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Summary:

bannner

All of Bella's memories have been erased. She knows nothing about herself or the two men that are holding her captive. The only thing she can recall is a feeling of urgency ... Danger. She knows that she needs to escape ... Run ... While she still can. ***DRABBLE***


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Sci-Fi, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23513 Read Count: 41755
[Report This] Published: 20 Dec 2014 Updated: 06 Feb 2015
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

This was my 1st Werewolf Edward encounter. I was pleasantly surprised by it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

When Bella Volturi, daughter of the famed mob boss Aro Volturi, decided to sneak out of the house and use a fake ID at a bar, she never dreamed she’d meet the man of her dreams. However, both of them have secrets that could ruin the other’s life.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32714 Read Count: 39476
[Report This] Published: 26 Dec 2014 Updated: 28 Mar 2015
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting.

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Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm confused. In the 1st chapter, didn't it inform that Bella knew her daddy was in the Mafia? 

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Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Edward sounds more like a mobster than Aro does.

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Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

At least Bella wants to learn. One big thing is to never tell a child you're going to do/get them something w/o talking to the parent(s) before and not in front of the child(ren).

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue

Thank you for this story.

I can't find your rec for lizhobbs1974.

Summary: Past Featured Story

The One and Only

 

What would it be like to know at first sight your one and only love? What if this was given to you as a gift to be passed down thru your generations? Follow the story of how an Angel from heaven gave this gift to the Clan Cullen in 1314 Scottish Highlands and how the gift is passed thru out the generations to present time. Will the Cullen Men find their One and Only?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: Stories I've read, Read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83342 Read Count: 134476
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2015 Updated: 28 Apr 2015
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 History of the Gift

A+

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Date: 03 May 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Our Love Runneth Over

What happened to the box she found in front of her door?

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Date: 03 May 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Unlucky #13

I didn't think it was him. He's all talk and no action.

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Date: 03 May 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 One Day Until the Rest of Our Lives

Did Bella ever read the letter from her parents?

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Date: 03 May 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 A Beautiful Day Part 3

How authentic was the ceremony?



Author's Response:

I did a lot of research for the ceremony and I think it was very close to authentic.  When I began to start writing (which this is my first story) I wanted the events and places to be close to real as possible.  I truly believe that if you have a base of reality in your story it makes the story come alive.  This week The One and Only was nominated for the Top Ten Recs for the month of April.  I would appreciate your vote.  The voting can be made at http://twifanfictionrecs.com/2015/05/01/vote-for-your-top-ten-completed-fics-april-2015. Thank you for reading and reviewing my story.

 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

Thank you. I enjoyed this.

Summary: Past Featured Story

A Dominant & A Gentleman

Growing up with a father in the military was hard on Bella. She made a promise to herself that she would never date or fall for a Marine like her father. That is until she runs into a pair of identical twins that have her reconsidering her rule.

Anthony is shy, extremely polite, and a true gentleman.

Edward appears to be in control and exudes confidence, and has a very dark side.

Will she take the risk or walk away?



A special thank you to Chandrakanta for creating the awesome banner for this story.

And a heartfelt thank you with undying gratitude to my awesome beta LostInPa who has helped with this story from the very first chapter.

I ♥ you hard!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/OC
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134473 Read Count: 94273
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2015 Updated: 01 May 2016
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!

This was a heartwarming chapter.

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Date: 28 May 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Return to Camp Pendleton

I hope the next update will be coming soon?

This has a unique beauty to it.

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Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Shit Hot

I'm so glad you're back!

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Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Attention!

Do you have a posting schedule?



Author's Response:

no...I don't they will just come as I can get them out...

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Camouflage

That was hot!

I was enjoying this the 1st time I read it but I like how it seems to flow smoother now.

Do you have a posting schedule? I only asking because I can't get enough.



Author's Response:

no schedule sweetie I am just trying to do it as I go along....

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Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Uncle Sam's Misguided Children

WOW! What a pleasant, unexpected surprise. Keep them coming, please.

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Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Dog and Pony Show

How accurate is this info on BDSM?

I'm very intrigued by it.

Thanks for another update.

I appreciate any replies you've taken the time for.



Author's Response:

I am trying very hard to make it as close to the real lifestyle as possible. Some of this will be fantasy but the majority of it is from my own experiences over the last year

since I became an active member of my local community. I have learned so much and discovered so many things that you just won't find on the web from reading about it or watching a movie.

The only way I know how to tell it, is to share what I have learned and yes this story will have some major changes than from the original version so that it is more closely related to what really happens in real life.

BDSM clubs are located all over the world and they are not readily available to the general public. There is an order you must follow before you can actually walk into a private club. Munches are the first place to start and from there you will find out what you need to proceed if it is something that truly interests you.

I have made alot of friends and learn new things everyday and I hope I can pass it along to my readers so that they can see what the lifestyle really is all about.

 

Thanks for reading and don't hesitate to ask me anything...

 

Andrea

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Inspection

Correct me if I'm wrong but doesn't he need to curb his anger before engaging in a scene?



Author's Response:

Did he come off as angry before they begin? His comment about her sass isn't anger really...

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Begin Morning Nautical Twilight

I'm curious about Bella's thoughts fom chapter 9.

-There is just something about Edward that seems dark. Something that is hidden from his past maybe.-

Is she on to something?

This chapter took my breath away.

Summary: Past Featured Story

BTTF

A Mafia/BDSM story.  A Don who is a Dom; two powerful personalities bound together in one body.  Will it be too much for one woman to handle, or is she exactly what is needed to balance this man. 

top ten

Bound To The Family was awarded one of the Top Ten Favourite Completed Fics for the month of August

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129501 Read Count: 601807
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2015 Updated: 08 Aug 2015
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Please, pease don't kill off Michael and Claudia.

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Date: 12 May 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

His actions are anything but that of a  true dominant. Aro just a sadistic fuck along with his son.

I hope their plans are foiled. I'm impressed with Michael and Claudia. I'd hate to see them harmed.

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Date: 09 May 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Ewww! That makes James her half brother.

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Date: 01 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Please don't kill off Michael? He's the only decent family she has.

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Date: 09 May 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I was glad to get this update. I haven't received any since chapter 10.

I'm anxiously awaiting their wedding.



Author's Response:

So sorry.  Thanks for keeping a look out for the chapters.  I have opened the selection of the wedding dress to my group of facebook and they have selected a beautfiul one.  And now they are voting for the cake.  I hope to make this wedding some very special.

 

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Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I was pretty sure that James was behind it.

I'm not sure how I feel about Bella's "quick" acceptance of her life.

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Date: 24 May 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

The hit on James is a good call. I have a bad feeling when the merger is announced though. I'm sure an attempt will be made on both of them but I'm concerned for Michael and Claudia also. I'm getting attached to them.

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Date: 24 May 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I wonder if Aro's smart enough to put 2 & 2 together.

I had a feeling Aro & James would be up to no good.

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Date: 03 May 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

"I'm wet".



Author's Response:

I am so happy that you are ready my other story.. yeah.....It is a very different than the other, but I believe you will enjoy it....Thanks for the review.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Heavy is the head that wears the crown, noble the ill-prepared to turn it down. Bella is no one, a lady's maid at a girl's school until the princess she serves changes her life with a choice she would never make herself. Now she sets off into a world she doesn't know, betrothed to a man who will never know her.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 123897 Read Count: 109592
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2015 Updated: 26 Dec 2016
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Too bad there wasn't any technology back then.

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Date: 08 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

How old is Rose? Emmett's 16, almost 17, correct? Actually, what are all of their ages?

I'm anxious to see what's in store for James and company.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

An eye for an eye.

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Date: 20 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I imagine some readers will be surprised or upset with the executions. That's how things were, if not more dramatic and gruesome.

Excellant story.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you.

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Date: 27 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

So sad to see this wonderful story come to an end.



Author's Response:

This has probably been the most talked about moment in this fic, and as a thank you for your reviews throughout this process, I’m going to go behind the nearly closed door in Chapter 18 and show the conversation between Sam and Edward in full, so you can see exactly how much of a misunderstanding it was.

Also, this fic is up for Top 10 completed fic of July at twifanfictionrecs, so if you would like to support me, they allow daily voting for the month and the link is in my profile. Without further ado, here is the full conversation in Edward’s office:

Sam leaned against my desk, shaking his head at me. “You’re quite taken with your princess, the whole country can see it, especially after that display at her welcome banquet.”

“Do not remind me,” I groaned. “I’ve never seen my father so upset, and Isabella…”

“Oh come now, there is no way that you look upon her and see no faults. I love Emily with my whole being and I can still see the things that aren’t perfect. They are what gives her substance.”

“Truly, she is everything I could want,” I said before hesitating.

“But…” Sam pushed.

“Her coloring is darker than I’m used to, but it adds to her intrigue. She is pretty in her own way, that is sure, but a little slight for me. I enjoy someone that I can have without fear of breaking them. And that long peasants bob that her hair is styled in, something will have to be done about that.”

Sam smiled as he moved closer to me. “See, that was not as difficult as you thought and the two things you mentioned are temporary.”

“How do you mean?” I asked.

“From what Lady Tanya said in front of Emily, she used to dye her hair and it damaged it, so it is not a fashion statement but a necessity. And she is still young, she will fill out into a womanly shape by the time she is nineteen, even if she has not given you a child by then.”

 

I sighed, thinking about what it will be like when we are married, already anxious for the day that she is mine.

Summary:

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Dancing with the Devil cost Bella a piece of her soul. Will she earn her redemption? Or be lost forever. Sequel to Carlisle's Gift.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76020 Read Count: 33911
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2015 Updated: 27 Aug 2022
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

A shaken bottle will explode!

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Date: 24 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

How old is Edward?



Author's Response:

Around 25 or so. 

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Date: 24 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Bella appears strong on the outside but she's crumbling on the inside and I'm not sure Edward will know what to do when she implodes.

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Date: 24 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

James?

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Date: 24 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

There were some pivotal information and maybe foreshadowing suggested. I think it was important. 

The Body by aliciaw68 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 403]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has a fetish that no one else in the world knows about. Except the thousands of followers on his anonymous blog. What happens when Bella works out who 'The Body ' is.

Ths was my submission to the twkink 2015 fest.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 121593 Read Count: 145727
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2015 Updated: 19 May 2017
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I find it sad that what one considers normal is taboo to the masses. Don't knock it until you try it.

Inanimate by Chloe Masen Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Today's brain space is too crowded. My thoughts, nothing more. 


Categories: Poetry, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Poetry
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 110 Read Count: 96
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2015 Updated: 14 Jun 2015
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Inanimate

:)

Kill The Lights by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

How many f**k buddies does it take to ruin a good thing? Two. Or maybe just one of them. Bella's never been great at math. 


Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4776 Read Count: 1147
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2015 Updated: 26 Jun 2015
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Intrigued.

Summary:

 

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Summary: Emmett Cullen messes up and has to repeat his senior year of high school. What will happen when he starts bringing home Bella, and how will his father Edward react? Things get intense when Edward starts to think of Bella in more ways than just his son's girlfriend.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85896 Read Count: 126007
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 05 Oct 2015
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Date: 12 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

My thoughts: he exercising or studying difficult math problems.

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Date: 09 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Is Bella 18? I'm guessing Edward is around 36?