Reviews by tinamarie7869
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285526
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Damn! What a hodge-podge of children.

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Date: 19 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 ~ pre wedding jitters

The Cathedrals, fondue, museums, buildings, art, cafes, all of it!

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Date: 20 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - chicken soup & toasted cheese sandwiches

Thank you for listing the book info.

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Date: 21 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54 - Risotto boscaiola

My guess is maybe he's gay?

Worry Not by Chloe Masen Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

A poem for my daughter, who is drowning in a dream.


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Poetry
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 170 Read Count: 93
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2013 Updated: 11 Jul 2013
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautiful! Any daughter would be proud to hear this from their mom.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334502
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

This story, so far, reminds me of a neatly wrapped package. I'm glad I followed the rec.



Author's Response:

WOW ... what great reviews we got.  There is still redemption to come, and Karma is a dish best served cold and wet in some cases.  To settle all bad thoughts, Phil would never invite Renee or Tanya to Bella and Edward’s wedding.  Some suggested Vicky, but Vicky and James sort of have a love/hate/power-struggle of their own.  He hasn’t quite told us yet, but Vicky is more of the Domme, than submissive and James just doesn’t come across like a switch to me.  Nikky and I will give James and Vicky both closure before the end, we promise.   Some of our favorite reviews made comments about not wanting to ever piss us off, because our thoughts scare them—have to say this had us both laughing.  I’ve always said that Nikky is one of the most diabolical minded people ever, and I was once told that I am good at writing three things: crazy/dysfunctional, fighting and f*ck*ng.  With that said, there wasn’t a lot of questions we could touch on too much, but we hope after reading the next couple of chapters you’ll understand why.  Thank you as always for being such a loyal reader and for taking the time to leave us a message/review/comment—they all mean the world to us.
Nikky & Kasi~

TEASER:  “Do you think we should ask what we are having?” Bella asks looking at me.

I kiss her head.  “Do you want to know?”

“Why are you answering my question with a question?”

“You think I’m answering your question with a question, but yet you do it, too.”

I chuckle and Bella frowns rolling her eyes. I quickly flick her leg and shake my finger, no, to her.

“I am happy either way, so you can choose if we know or not,” Bella huffs and then smirks at me. “Master, your girl would like you to take control and tell your girl what you want to do.”

I tilt my head at her. “Firstly, don’t switch into Dom and Sub time without my approval.  Second of all, I think we should wait, I like being surprised.”

Bella nods at me. “Thank you,” she says while kissing my cheek.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

A very well written story. I believe this is one of the first stories I've read that hasn't left me with unanswered questions. Each situation that was faced had a solid completion to it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Somewhere in life I took a wrong turn and never found my way back. For me there were no second chances, there were no redos...or at least that's what I thought, until I met a girl on a bus who looked just like me...just a little richer. 

Contains Daddyward/Doctorward

Title Change! Once called My Redo Life

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24485 Read Count: 23444
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2013 Updated: 04 Jun 2014
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Okay, these 5 chapters have hooked me. Please don't stop here!

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Date: 07 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Does Edward know his mother & sister are witches?

I can't imagine the damage they're doing by keeping Isadora's identity from Edward.

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm SO happy to see this continued.

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281076
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
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Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm dying to hear what Tanya did with the money.

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Date: 05 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

1) B has little to no self respect.

2) E needs to deal with his personal & mental issues.

3) She needs to get away, clear her head before she gets dragged down even more.

What they have isn't healthy. I'm not talking about their affair.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

This is how I'd like to see this go....

B's year is almost over, she finds out she's pregnant but doesn't tell E due to things he's said or because of his behavior toward herplus he's still married. She realizes she has to protect her child(ren)She leaves, has the baby(s)......

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I agree with you. I understand constructive criticism but ignorant readers just "Piss" me off. If they are that upset by a story, "STOP READING IT"!

I consider myself an open-minded reader & I enjoy sharing my thoughts. Some stories have even given me a different, refreshing view of another side to my beliefs. 

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Date: 15 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Will we get E's childhood story?

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Date: 17 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

YES!!!! I was pleasantly surprised by the turn of events. T is a very dangerous individual. I'm sure E has his intents filed with his lawyer?

Sooo looking forward to the next update.

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Date: 19 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

She'll end up back with him. Not sure how I feel about it unless she makes sure to put Levi first.

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Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I thought the time skips were quite well written. Who wants years of bullshit? You brought us right to the best parts.

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Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

It's good to see B being cautious.

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Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

What are E's demons?

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Date: 29 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Angela is a wise friend.

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Date: 01 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I thought there was childhood abuse but what E did to his father surprised me. Good hook.

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Date: 26 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

This seems to be moving at a slower pace than it started out?

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Date: 03 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

My fav!

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

A lot going on in this chapter.

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Date: 25 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I can't believe how much Edward has changed.

My 1st thought about their interview was to claim it as a fiction story. That's just a no brainer.

I'm keeping my fingers & legs crossed, hoping to win your signed book.

Congratulations!

I almost have an addiction with signed books. I currently have a series of books by five authors. I hope I can be honored with one from you.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I think their ending was perfect. Edward's explanation of what was on the usb made sense.

PLEASE notify me when you put this in pdf form.

Thank you.  :)

How to Forget by Shadow Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 177]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Where do you go if you don't know who you are, and what if you find you don't want to remember?  Edward finds himself in Forks under suspicious circumstances, can Bella help him discover who he truly is?  BxE AH  NC-17 for lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131184 Read Count: 54712
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2013 Updated: 16 Dec 2014
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

I was leaning toward him being undercover. His temperament doesn't strike me as the typical drug lord.

With the injuries he has, I going to wager he's going to retire.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 May 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I know he's still in PT but what about seeing a psychologist or therapist? He dealing with so much.

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Date: 01 May 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Be realistic Bella, he was drunk and it would be less than professional fo her to take advantage of him.

When are we going to get some answers or action?

Summary:

No matter how big and bad you think you are, if a child hands you a toy phone, you pick it up. No matter how damaged you think you are, when someone pure and beautiful offers you their love, you love them back. And no matter how tough, when your mom asks you for a kiss, you give it. And you make it a good one.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38148 Read Count: 8404
[Report This] Published: 05 Oct 2013 Updated: 05 Oct 2013
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Very intiruing story line. Something tells me there'll be heartache.

Summary:

A tattooed loner moves to a small town to appease his deceased mentor. He stumbles across a modest Isabella at church. He wants her but balks at the age difference, and there’s nothing respectable about him. Is she as proper as he thinks, or does she just hide things well?

 

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BANNER BY: DEEBELLE1


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9085 Read Count: 7390
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Show Me Yours, and I’ll Show You Mine

Great!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is the unacknowledged grandson of Harry Houdini from whom he’s inherited strong psychic abilities. Together with his closest friends: a Hoodoo man, two Witches from the Louisiana Swamps and an honest to God Guardian Angel, they work to solve crimes that ordinary law enforcement is unable to solve.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44432 Read Count: 31370
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2013 Updated: 21 Feb 2014
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Thank you for all of your time, effort and research you've invested in this. I had fun and learned new things. I love reading all of the diverse fanfiction stories over the years that have aided in broadening my mind.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Are you gonna tackle the next two also, as this is the only the first part of a trilogy?  The sequel is called Edward Cullen & Friends - Down on the Bayou.  I hope you.  It's a tad different with the cases that the "team" takes on.

Looking forward to hearing more from you.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

What's the difference between Hoodoo and Voodoo?



Author's Response:

VooDoo is a religion and HooDoo is a form of folk magic that came from West Africia with the slave trade and is primarily now only practiced in the Southern part of the US.  I know they seem the same, but don't tell the practitioners of either that.  :)

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

We all have our secrets.



Author's Response:

*smiles*  Yes we do!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I can't believe that I've never heard of these stories. If it wasn't for it being in the Top 10 on Twifanfictionrecs I wouldn't know about them.

So far I love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I know.  Most of the authors that are popular either write love stories are very erotic ones.  I've tired my hand at both - and my vampire ones come close to the erotic, but my back ground reading has always been supernatural, mystical or occult.  I've tied to combine those elements in this series.  I'm so happy you've found them.

I'm looking forward to hear more of what you think about the story line.  There are 3 in this series.  This one, followed by Edward Cullen & Friends - Down on the Bayou, and the final one, The Down on the Bayou Detective Agency - Case Files.  

Thank you again.  Please come find me on Facebook by my name.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm fastenated by the information given about something I know nothing about. I thoroughly enjoy stories where I gain information.

Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!  I have to admit that some of things the characters do things that to my knowledge are not possible, but others are possible and performed everyday.  I do a great deal of research, and if I can be frank, I've studied metaphysics most of my 74 years.  If you have any questions about anything, please ask.  I love to have conversations about my favorite subjects.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Heart pounding chapter.



Author's Response:

Good means I've done my job properly!

 

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Unexpected things by sjdavis84 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 168]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The accident prone waitress runs in to a jerk. Little does she realize how her life will end up changing, hopefully for the better. The jerk she runs into isn’t so much of as a jerk as he is arrogant and dominant… But Bella doesn’t know that.

 

Thanks AstridGreenEyes for the Awesome banner!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49952 Read Count: 41537
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2013 Updated: 23 Jun 2015
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Will there ever be an EPOV?



Author's Response:

I'm not sure. I might do an outtake. I will have to think about it, but for right now no.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow! I commend you for taking time out of a very busy life to share your time & words with us.

Summary:

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Bella had been lucky to land the job as the nanny to Esme and Carlisle's two girls, but when Carlisle's younger brother arrives in New York in need of a fresh start and some help with his own brood, Bella's world is quickly turned upside down. It was just supposed to be a job, but they quickly became everything she needed. 

 

Check out Edward's POV, Everything I Wanted.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99082 Read Count: 87253
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Apr 2018
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm totally confused as to what age Rosalie is. I think I've read three different ages: 12, 13 & 15. Which is it?



Author's Response:

Rosalie was 12 when Alice was born, 13 when they separated, and 15 now. Hope that clears up any confusion. Thanks for the review!

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Date: 02 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Bella seems robotic to me.

Summary:

What happens when Edward sends Bella away before she can tell him a secret she has been keeping. currently a one shot


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7354 Read Count: 2565
[Report This] Published: 08 Dec 2013 Updated: 09 Feb 2014
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I thought it was triplets?



Author's Response:

My story family secrets is tripletsthis one shot is twins

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Emmett the bad boy who is involved in a life ruled by money drugs and guns meets the beautiful and snarky Bella and both of their lives change forever

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 141212 Read Count: 32815
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2013 Updated: 13 Jan 2014
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Date: 11 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I'm curious. Did bringing E back change the original plot?

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Date: 11 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'm going to guess the Jenn is a typo?

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Date: 11 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Excited for the sequel!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The man in Bella's bed was second in command of the largest Italian Mafia family in Chicago, and she was the cop that had sworn to take them down.  Follow her as she puts her life and her heart on the line.

 

Completely uploaded today. 

 

Almost at 1,000 reviews!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 100675 Read Count: 38876
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 29 Jul 2014
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm already hooked!

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Date: 06 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

She's one stupid cop. She could fuck up the whole investigation.

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Date: 07 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I don't know what to believe.

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Date: 08 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'm glad I found this rec on FB. I've enjoyed it. Can't wait to start the sequel.

There's no chapter 12.

Relentless by StillDreaming85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 576]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella meets Edward and sparks fly. She thinks he's a charming businessman, but he's not. He's in the Mafia. How will she handle it when she finds out? Will an innocent girl like her be able to survive in his world? Darkward / Mobward / Possessiveward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2817 Read Count: 185508
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2014 Updated: 16 Jul 2015
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

He's all kinds of fucked up.

Run B!

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Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

Is she really this blind & naive? I like B with more backbone!

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Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

She should've questioned his actions sooner.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. She should have x x

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Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Relentless

She was bought off easily.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I wouldn't consider her bought off x

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Date: 03 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just say NO!



Author's Response:

HEY!! Thank you for your review. Sorry for the slow update. March was a super busy month and I am still struggling with tiredness. Chapter 33 is now written and with my betas xx

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Apr 2015 Title: Relentless

He's correct. He not only destroyed her, he's slowly killing her.

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Date: 09 Apr 2015 Title: Relentless

I'm not sure how I feel about this.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Isabella Black lost her husband in the cruelest way possible. He wasted

away and was ravaged by the evil, silent killer, cancer. Five months after his initial diagnosis, he died, leaving Bella with their two young children, John, seven and Grace, five. A year after his death, Bella packs up her home in Phoenix and drives back to Forks, Washington to be closer to her family. Will she finally find a way to pick up the pieces with the help of her family, friends and a green-eyed cop?

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 255357 Read Count: 101885
[Report This] Published: 07 Jan 2014 Updated: 29 Aug 2018
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Author's Note

I understand how you're feeling.

I lost my husband to brain cancer and w/in 6 months, my mother to breast cancer. I'm also bipolar, on a cocktail of meds. Believe it ot not these types of stories have given me some peace of mind.

I wish you well and will keep you in my thoughts.

Summary:

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Emmett, Benny C ,J-Action and Cullen conquer the streets, fatherhood, marriage and La Familia. The Bronx Bombers sequel. Thugmett/Mobward. 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 53175 Read Count: 7829
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2014 Updated: 02 Jan 2018
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - I'll be your Soldier

Shocked again!

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Date: 12 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - So much for my happy ending

I believe the worst is still to come.

Dark Lies by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 603]
Summary:

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Now that all the lies have been exposed will Bella and Edward be able to survive?

Sequel to Dark Velvet

Banner by AnaRodFranco 

Beta'd by Kim Ginsberg & Sjdavis84.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88581 Read Count: 97745
[Report This] Published: 14 Jan 2014 Updated: 30 Apr 2015
Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Was there an explanation about Edward being Eddie's father? Ifso, whichchapter was it in? I can't figure out how I missed somethinglike that.



Author's Response:

It's in Dark Velvet there are numourous chapters where Edward talks about his suspicion and Heidi also confesses to Bella.

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Date: 08 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

wow! Eerie coincidence?

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Date: 19 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Disfunctional!

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Date: 21 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

E's an ass. He says he loves her & wants the baby yet he isn't doing anything to prove it. He's selfish.

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Date: 21 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I guess E doesn't believe in Pro Choice.

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Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Does B know Ronnies involvement in her families death?

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Date: 26 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm going to guess the last part was Eddie?

How old is Eddie?

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Date: 26 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Uh Oh!

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Date: 14 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I have a feeling she won't leave Edward willingly.

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Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

It's been a while since the last update so I had to start over to remember what was going on. I hope there isn't such a long pause for the next one.

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Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

E's gun is going to be used against him.

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Date: 18 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm stumped on how Eddie plays into this, & why does Dimitri want B dead?

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Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Why does the writing seem choppy?

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Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

It's been a while between updates so I'm going to have to refresh my memory.

Does B realize how hard her personality has become? I'm not quite sure I like her this way.

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Date: 04 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Hidden video?

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Date: 28 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I'm not thrilled that she's leaving after having the baby but I don't judge her. As long as she doesn't ignore her child.

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Date: 28 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I didn't think Eddie should have been killed. He was a brainwashed, naive child.

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Date: 30 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Thank you.

I enjoyed the journey so much that I'm going to start all over.

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What happens when Bella is attacked and her mob family find out she's pregnant? How does a protective family act when one of their own is attacked? No one knows for certain, the only thing they do know is they will kill anyone in their way to protecting her.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5222 Read Count: 100405
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2014 Updated: 15 Oct 2015
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Date: 05 Mar 2015 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

Wonderful!

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Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 : Secret Reveals

I'm a bit confused. Is this a new story? Out takes? Or a rewrite of the original?

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Date: 02 Oct 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

What's the title of the poem?

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Date: 16 Oct 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

The 3rd one must be boy.

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Date: 11 Aug 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

Pure Evil.

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Date: 18 Sep 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

It's been quite some time& I'm foggy on something. How far is B? Don't let the kids die!



Author's Response:

B is now 4 and a half months pregnant because she is carrying triplets her bump developes quicker and the light movements and muscle spasms are the babies moving.

Summary:

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She didn’t have a choice, to save her children and herself she needed to listen to the man who just put a gun against her lower back and said: “Turn around and hug me like I am your man.”


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31722 Read Count: 55465
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2014 Updated: 31 Aug 2014
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Date: 21 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmmmm. We'll see how this goes.



Author's Response:

hahaha read on and find out ;-)

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Date: 21 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

He sounds like a creeper.



Author's Response:

realt? hmmm yeah i can see you can feel that way....

he is watching her and knows a lot....

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Date: 21 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This has a good premise but it's a little choppy.



Author's Response:

well i never said i or the story is perfect ;-)

but thank you for reading and leaving reviews.

i love to hear what you are thinking, all critic is good.. it is the way it is said that can hurt.

And we don't want to be hurt....

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Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478685
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
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Date: 21 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I hate to admit that I have never heard of Paul Sheldon. Is there a hissen meaning?



Author's Response:

paul Sheldon was the name of the fictional character who was a writer in the movie Misery.

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Date: 08 May 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

There's so much going on, I'm having trouble keeping everything straight.

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Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Wow! You totallytook me by surprise.

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Date: 23 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So far I like. I like a strong Bella, one that doesn't fall all over herself when she sees the "Green-Eyed Adonis". That's getting old.

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Date: 07 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love trying to solve your puzzle.

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Date: 11 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Marmaduke- (big dog) Jacob

Kato- Sam

I'm at a loss as to who Miss Honey & Guido are.

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Date: 11 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I thought B called her Donkey because she brays like a jackass.

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Date: 17 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Although I enjoy a good lemon, I'm more intrigued with Bella's secrets.

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Date: 17 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Damn! You're killing me sweetly.

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Date: 19 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Who's Hawk?

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Date: 22 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

My first thought, while reading it, is that's the name of her computer system.

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Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Yes! I was correct about Chaos. (takes a bow)  :)

I knew Bella was intelligent & highly skilled, I didn't know she has such talents.

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Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I would've liked a few more sparring matches but I guess she made her point.