Reviews by Moonlight Caterer
Carried Away by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

carriedAWAY

Bella developed feelings for Pixie Slippers new VP of Marketing, Edward Cullen, from the moment he entered the office.  But he seems to be keeping her at arms length.  Will she break down his walls, or is she simply letting herself get 'carried away.'

 

Winner of the Office Romance Challenge

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3354 Read Count: 3078
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2010 Updated: 09 May 2010
Reviewer: Moonlight Caterer Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Carried Away

 to quote Buster Poindexter ..."Hot, hot, hot"!  Don't remember the reality of office romance being this way, but I'm sure the fantasy was!  The characters were well developed and accessible making this tryst engaging.... the story is urgent, fast paced making the chemistry between Bella and Edward highly believable.  So much is implied by the dialogue and descriptive prose that the reader needs no more detail than offered ... and what was given was just right!