Reviews by Sugar Rae
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311144
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow

A weak minded follower...exactly what they want.

Why am I not getting email alerts for new chapters? :(

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

Five weeks? I'm glad Felix had some sympathy and helped Bella out. Who was the other man?

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation

Maybe Felix will try to contact Charlie? I hope he comes back to save her.

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth

So disgusted by Aro giving Bella a bath. Why does she need to be waxed?

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

Aro is obviously very tempted by Elizabeth/Bella....who will punish him for his impure thoughts?

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Embrace

How fucking creepy that that man get to take her virginity and plant his seed in her. So do they have to have sex until she gets pregnant? Hope it works on the first take. Where the hell is Charlie?

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

Great chapter! I'm sensing edward isn't going to allow Aro to plant his seed in Elizabeth. I'm somehow hoping Carlisle is his real father and not Aro. 

So happy you and Footroza were able to meet in person. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515272
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

I get so anxious with this story. I still can't believe they let James escape. Good idea shutting down the school.

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Uh oh..now Aro is involved. Can't wait to see what's up with James and his surprise when he finds Victoria isn't at his home. 

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

Laurent selling sex slaves...just wow! Doesn't Victoria have that tracking device in her? My stomach clenches thinking James will go to the cabin while all the other have left for Edward's house.

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

I knew he was going to show up at the cabin. Of course with Jasper and Jacob gone things aren't looking good. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

I knew that chip was going to come in handy for James. Didn't think they would have gotten past Edward so easily. So Heidi helped Laurent. I hope Aro isn't in on this too. Laurent is so stupid. he should have had his gun as he made those threats. He knows James is loose canon.

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24

Poor Edward. He's going to feel so guilty that Bella was taken right under his nose. Will be interesting to see what happens when Aro arrives.

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

Thank goodness dumb ass left his phone behind!!!!

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

Yeah!!!!!!! Did Bella hit him or has Edward made it there? Maybe he made the noise as a diversion. Either way he's down.

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

I hope Jacob agrees to let Aro take James. Great story! Yes to making a it an original work. A bit unsure if I want to see Bella in that mindset again after seeing her gain her strength and confidence. Definitely will give it a try though.

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

So fulfilling seeing James tortured. Will be so sad to see the story end.

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Great ending! Thanks so much.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625395
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

Edward's memory brought me to tears. So disturbing how Carlisle interacted with her. Was he already planning to be with her? So eery. 

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

Poor Bella. Just when she's feeling happy and a change for the better Carlisle wants to cause more problems. i so wish she would have told Edward about his father. 

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

This is just horrible. Carlisle is a bastard. Bella has got to get out of there.

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Pitchfork down and a sigh of relief. i just hope Carlisle doesn't have a key to Edward's room. I hope there's some poison or something in the garden to kill Carlisle with.

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Oh shit! Never thought Demetri would come back. Please let it be the boys at the door but how would they have found them so quickly.

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

OMG. I was scared she may want to leave but hoped not. This is going to break Edward. So happy Carlisle is gone. Can't wait to see the outtake for Esme.

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Such a great idea to turn TPW into novel/series! Best of luck!

Great chapter! A very healthy way to bring them back together.

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Thanks so much for all of your tenacity and creativity in bringing this story to us. Best wishes on your new endeavors.

Summary:

Edward has a hot date with the campus good-time girl. Will the end result be enough to keep him from falling for someone else? Rated M for mature content, including slash. AH, E/J.

This story was originally written for the FML Contest hosted by Fanfiction.net.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6596 Read Count: 285
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2010 Updated: 24 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Read this over on FF but got the alert and decided to give you some love over here at TWCS too! Thought this so comical!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the double-dip review :)  I'm glad you enjoyed this story.  I had a lot of fun writing it!