Reviews by Noble Korhedron
Summary:

Edward realized in New Moon that with Bella is where he is meant to be. Forces earlier unleashed are now again threatening her life, and Edward must do everything in his power to keep Bella safe, from the danger lurking in the shadows and himself. EPOV.  

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257389 Read Count: 3173
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Solutions

AW CRAP?! Did I forget to review?! My bad... I'm liking how it's going so far, I'd say keep at it!! :-P



Author's Response:

Hi there,

well, you still have a few chapters ahead of you, and I'm working on the next one for this story. Thanks for reading, and leaving a review. I'm glad you like it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward never returned in New Moon, now a century after Bella's death a strange twist of events is happening. Could Edward have a second chance? Inspired by the FF Save You. Smut advisory. AU

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30863 Read Count: 9710
[Report This] Published: 11 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Guilt

F-I-N-A-L-L-Y!! He gets it - HALLEJLUIAH!!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Sexual Encounter

The term you're looking for is "erogenous zone".

Summary:

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Not everyone's life is easy, sometimes it's hard, Bella Swan knows this better than most. She's a broken girl. Her mother has died and her father beats her. Can the new kids save her? Will she let them? read what happens...THIS IS AN 18+ STORY DUE TO SOME OF IT'S CONTENTS.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142425 Read Count: 19249
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2023
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Charlie's Demise and a Fateful shock

Ah no - DAMNIT!! I guess you weren't planning on a baby in this story 'cause with this news I doubt they'll be able to have one before the big B-I-T-E!! B+.



Author's Response:

so sorry to disappoint on the baby front...i was going to go that way in the very beginning of the story when i started writing the story but then i stopped and thought well it wouldn't really fit and it just seemed to far fetched in my own head to go from not being able to after what jacob did to her and that this seemed better bacause it explains why her mum died too.

it's still early days for one of my other stories but it's all human and there may be a child in that one...but i don't know. thank you for the review and i hope you still keep reading.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: My Hell

Hey - R-E-L-A-X!! I was just clarifying your situation. Be stupid if I left it for 6 chapters then demanded to know where the baby was?!



Author's Response:

it's all good, I just don't want anyone to be left confused in any way.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 26: GOODBYE OLD, HELLO NEW

Nice ending!! :-D



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing. I am in the middle of writing a sequal of sorts, so keep an eye out.

Black Swan by Raven Jadewolfe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 127]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Black, having divorced her husband Jacob after he finds his imprint, reconnects with the man who stole her heart many years ago, but she soon learns that she isn't the only one keeping a secret. There will be lemons, language, and violence. If you aren't 18, go read something else.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Themslovebug90's read stories
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109285 Read Count: 20701
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Aw - fluffiness!! :-P What exactly happened to teh Cullens anyway?! Got changed by the Volturi or something?!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When everything goes wrong at the baseball field what happens to Edward and Bella? Can they survive what happens? What happens when you give your life for the one you love? Is there a heaven? What will Bella do when all her dreams come true and she really gets her Second Chance at her first love?  Cowritten with preciousfairymom80, go check out her stories too!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102807 Read Count: 55115
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

URK!! Bachelor and bachelorette parties organised by Emmet?! Run for the hills!! A-.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

OH-OH!! Do I even WANT to know what's Bella's holding - no, on second thoughts, DEFINITELY NOT!! A-.



Author's Response:

Ummmmmmmmmm............. Maybe........Maybe not lol!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - The Honeymoon

Aw - LOVED the honeymoon Ch.!! Especially Bella opening the can of "whoop ass" on Newton!! The citrus was nice too - hmmmm, chocolate!! :-P

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Second Chances

WHAT THE FUCK?! THE BITCH BIT THEM?! ARE YOU MAD?! WHAT ABOUT THE KIDS?!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 76225
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Important Conversations

*utters quiet 'Hail Mary'* Story is damn good, BTW!! :-P

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - part 1

DEFINITELY sticking this on 'Favourites'!! But could you do us all a favour?! If you ever have to go on hiatus again, would please, please stick it on the story's frontpage?! So at least we'll know...... :-(

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 - Blissful Interlude

L.O.L!! Not AT ALL like BDWard!! :-P

Summary:

 

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Beautiful, terminally ill, Yolanda is abandoned by her partner to die in the woods near Forks, but is stumbled upon by Rosalie and Emmett while out hunting.  The kind-hearted Cullen family take this former journalist under their protection & care; see how she learns what they are and that there really are vampires in this world.  Her story plays out in a way she could never have imagined. 

What would you do if you discovered vampires truly existed?  What if you were offered immortality? What if a chance encounter brought you the love you had always dreamed of?

All your Cullen family favourites are very much involved in this story.  An Irish vampire comes calling to add a new twist to Cullen life. 

This is in essence a love story, mostly told from Yolanda's POV as a newcomer to the world of vampires.  Sometimes the story is told from the perspective of one of the others as they watch her adapt to her surroundings. 

Plenty of erotic moments contained in the story for the gorgeous Yolanda you see pictured in the banner.

Story rated for explicit lemony scenes and language and dark issues.
It has been migrated across from the FanFiction site and is now complete.

“Is she even alive, Emmett? I can’t hear a heartbeat from here.”  Rosalie stood there, hands on hips, glaring at me as if it was my fault we had stumbled upon a body in the woods. She clicked her tongue impatiently.

We’d been out for a couple of hours hunting and making out gloriously and lustily in the bracken. When the day had started, bright and early, I’d never imagined it would take this turn of events. Vampires don’t like surprises.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 80 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240866 Read Count: 8480
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: SOMETHING SO RIGHT

Really liking this story so far, I'd say anywhere from B to A-...? Also, WB Yeats is no longer under copyright. Many authors from the 1800's and even some from the very early 1900's are now out of copyright. It expires under UK and/or Irish law approx. 20 years after death, if I remember correctly - anyone want to be more precise?



Author's Response:

thanks Noble. I had a feeling it was something like that but I got spooked about copyright on the other site!

thank you for taking the time to review and I hope you continue to enjoy the journey.  it has some way to go before you catch up - hope you stick with it. 

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 50: WHOLE LOTTA LOVE

Gotten this far now - still going strong. B+ for the last part I'd say - too fluffy for A's!!



Author's Response:

fluffy eh? hmmmm....

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 56: WILD HONEY

A few pints?! Watch yourself, drinking that much brandy in one go isn't safe!!! A-.



Author's Response:

yes, I really did tie one on that evening!

thanks for your reviews. it's great to have a new reader giving me feedback.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 77: HOMECOMING

I'd say heart - she oughta pull a Tesshu. Punch through the ribcage and rip it still-beating from his chest!! A so far! ;-)



Author's Response:

d'ya reckon? It might be his balls!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 48: SURRENDER

UGH!! Tasteful joke - I don't think!! Great story so far. A-.



Author's Response:

thank you very much for taking the time to review. hope you're enjoying the story.

Summary:

The title explains it all. Alice and Bella are tired of being denied by their men, so they take it into their own hands.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1094 Read Count: 488
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Serves them right for neglecting their GF's anyway.... It's not as if they're cheating on them just for the sake of it - like B said "always 50-50 in relationships!"

LOVING EDWARD by Cullenfest Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 47]
Summary:

Loving Edward

Set during Breaking Dawn from September to December, this is my story of Edward and Bella’s voyage of sexual discovery from the first night they go to their cottage in the woods.  Follow Bella's first night as a vampire after her tumultuous introduction to vampirehood, motherhood and meeting the Cullen family as an equal. 

Told mostly from Bella's POV, it will take you on their journey of learning about each other, loving each other as they've craved since the beginning.  Watch their tender bonding with beautiful Nessie and their interaction with the Cullen family through the weeks that follow until the arrival of the Volturi.  All the Cullens are in the story, helping them adapt, as is Jacob's wolf pack.

Rated NC-17: Explicit lemony scenes and language almost from the start.
Note:  This story has migrated across from the FanFiction site and is now up to date.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 93814 Read Count: 13398
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - NIL BY MOUTH

Cute update - but WHAT THE HELL is fibromyalgia?!



Author's Response:

hi Noble. Fibro is an auto-immune disease which means that the body's pain switch is always "on" so every day is fiery pain and fatigue, with meds only dulling but not removing it.  So the transition to a Cullen vampire sounds good to me!!

thanks for reading the update.  hope you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - GUARDIAN ANGEL

"tested the suspensions", "show you my pistons"?! God, are you addicted to innuendo or somethingn?! *laughs*

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - THINGS IN MIND

The lemons are much appreciated hon, but I enjoy the fluff more - nothing personal!! :-P



Author's Response:

we all like lemons, in real life and in fiction. just wish my real sex life was as suped up as the fictional characters all over this site and others!  Thanks for taking the time to review.

Summary:

 

AU. Taking place after the events in Eclipse, Bella never formed the bond with Jacob that led to the wolves teaming up with the Cullens to learn how to fight Victoria’s newborn army and they were all defeated. Jasper was the only survivor due to his exceptional knowledge and skill with newborns. He’s left alone and heartbroken as everyone he’s ever loved is gone.  A series of choices leads him on an interesting journey through is past to discover his future.

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jasper/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27740 Read Count: 2166
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue: Ten Years Later

Read this like, twice on FFN so this is my what, third reading?! Still as sad/touching/funny as ever! A-.



Author's Response:

LOL...well thanks hon :D  Hope things are good your way.

Summary:

 

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Ascension of the Morning Star chronicles the journeys Bella must take on the path to her fulfill her destiny.  In an almost-canon Post-Eclipse universe, we find Bella and Edward at the moment of their engagement and follow along the preparations for their wedding, the consumation of their vows, and ultimately, her envenoming and beyond.

Unfortunately, as they saying goes...the best laid plans of mice and men...

After all the planning and wedding hoopla, Bella's transformation is not a dream come true, and the future is anything but assured; however there are bright signs of possibility in unexpected places.  The journey will force the Cullen family to confront the demons of their hearts and rediscover their connection to humanity, which was thought to be lost forever. 

The inevitability of change is not only the perview of those who seek their destiny, but it is the boundary of all life, eternal and merely mortal. Without the momentum of personal growth, life stagnates.  So it is for many of the Saga, they are emotionally stuck in ways they cannot understand. In her journey, vampires and humans alike discover in themselves new life, new possibility, and hope for the future.   Touched by her unconditional love, no one is the same. 

Nothing will be the same.

A strange human, more comfortable in the dark world of shadow than with her own kind, Bella will discover her destiny is not a choice... it is a gift of love she was born to give.  It was decided long ago.  All that is required is for her surrender to the power of the Fates and accept the unlikely role she must play in history.  By her existence, as human and vampire alike, she will rock the foundations of the mythical world.  Although we grieve, she will rise like the morning star to bring light to our eyes.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 306630 Read Count: 3323
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 25 Jul 2014
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: July 18: The Postman Always Rings Twice

W-H-A-T?! Charlies's not undead?! And vamipres can't cry - can they!?! What's going on...?! A-.



Author's Response:

I am confused by your confusion...PM me so we can straighten each other out!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: August 13: The Women of the Reticule (4:00 pm)

Aw - poor Bella!! Oh well, at least the whole "Renee issue" is cleared up!! A-.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Aug 13: Reception, Part I: Twilight (7:45 pm)

Yesss.... I'm looking forward to seeing what a vampire's definition of "moving mountains" is.... A-.



Author's Response:

That is so funny!  I didn't think about it as a vampire moving a mountain...what a great image!  Can't you just see Emmett trying?  AlasI am not that creative, I guess... just regular old metaphor for me...  Let me know what you think.

 

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: July 6: "Now, that was interesting..."

Takes no prisoners?! You can say that again - I'd nearly compare Alice to the S.S. - at least when it comes to weddings - she don't just take no prisoners, she executes the wounded!! :-[



Author's Response:

And eat their puppies for breakfast...

Yes, Alice is a little... beligerent about having this perfect wedding.  But it is only because she loves both Bella and Edward that she is completely insane.


She was driving me completely crazy too with this whole bridezilla-o-honor thing, but then I realized... Poor Alice is EXPECTED to be perfect, especially on the wedding day business, and MAYBE just MAYBE she doesn't have a very clear vision of how everything is going to play out... and she is... nervous.

Just an idea... taken from a woman who has survived many a bridezilla...

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: July 16: Relapse and Revelations

"Their love is unconditional, conventional, and eternal." You can say that again!! I think it partly stems from sheer amazement/appreciation - i.e. of how she manages to get through every day without some part of their true natures sending her running terror!! Silly Carlisle - if she hasn't left by now she never will!! :-P

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Aug 13: The Reception, Part 3, A Lady Pays her Debts

MORE PLEASE!! :-D



Author's Response:

more is on the way...

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: June 19 The Meadow

Bridezillas - UGH!! :-P I'm gonna take your word for that - I don't even want to think about having to get close to one....

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Aug 13: "Under a New Moon" Part I

I'll say - you've practically cashed in your chips with this Ch.!! I was almost biting my nails!! :-P



Author's Response:

Well, then!  I hope your manicure survives Part II!  Thanks for writing!!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Aug 14: The Morning After

L.O.L!! :-D MORE PLEASE?!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if a Vampire Singer was not about blood lust instead its involuntary, unpreventable and irrevesable form of true love. What would you do if you waited a century to find it? What would you do to keep it? ANYTHING! AU reg.pair. Re-writting earlier chapters.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124314 Read Count: 67388
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 07 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

URGH!! I'm not Jacob-hater but I HATE this version of him... A-.

Summary:

I have searched for her since the day she was born, My singer. A singer is a precious gift. Its one I will protect and treasure always. That is if life doesn't screw it up! AU reg. pairs OOC  EXB

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43691 Read Count: 24310
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

URGH!! How coudl Tanya ever be such a bitch... I think you've really gone OOC with here in this story!! A-.



Author's Response:

i just might surprise you! Tanya really wasn't being a bitch she just didn't know he was mated...but that will be addressed in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Aw!! I'm a bit dissappointed that you made Nessie a lesbian. I'm not homophobic but I always imagined her as straight - it's been so long since I've read this I'm guessing... no Jake?! Anyway, it was a good twist, so if that's what you were after, it worked - nice one!! I'm surprised the Denalis would accept the loss of Tanya so readily, but I guess they're just too peaceful to condone that kind of crap!! Good ending overall. Have an A - I'd give you an A+, but nobody's perfect - well, maybe Katmom!!

Hiding Bella by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 214]
Summary:

stories/8628/images/hiding_Bella_Banner.jpgI found a secret hiding in the Alaskan wilderness while on summer vacation. Now I need to keep that secret safe and protected. But what affect will it have on me? What will happen if its exposed? What will I sacrifice to keep it safe? AU,REG PAIRS  EXB

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79986 Read Count: 22413
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Hmm, DEFINITELY liking this..... Poor Bella though... :-( Will she recover..!? A-.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Man, I LOVE AngryElla!!  But what's with the third kid having totally black eyes?!



Author's Response:

First so sorry it took so long to reply I was on the vacation from hell! Who know there was a place with no wifi? As for your question: When I asked for everyone's opinion I recieved three types. So I thought about the third one and figured why not make him special. It's just how my brain works. Not to mention I do love my twists. His power of seeing 360 degress will come in handy later. hint hint! Thanks for reading it!

High Noon by RiaMaria Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 68]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Set 5 years after Breaking Dawn, the Cullens leave Forks for a new life. However, one of them lapses, putting the entire family at risk. This is not a Jake and Nessie story, and gets quite dark in places. Contains vampire violence.

 

I was rooted to the spot. I had been a vampire for five years, but I had never taken a human life, nor seen one taken. In the instant it took me to take in the broken form in his lap, I finally understood what I was, what we all were. I could smell the blood from the lifeless body in front of me, and it smelled good. My throat burned and my mouth filled with venom.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83172 Read Count: 4853
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: 25. A new order

I've read this already on FFN, so this is like my third reading...? PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE consider a sequel?! :-D

Love at 1st Bite by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 64]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is instantly drawn to the new girl, Bella Swan. From their first meeting he is overtaken by a desire for her body as well as her blood. After a week in Denali he returns to Forks and visits the object of his obsession. What happens in her room that night will change both of their lives forever. First chapter was written for the "In the Dark" Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wanna read
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50865 Read Count: 17343
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2017
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Epilogue

Poor Emmet; I think I'm going to re-read this - I hadn't realised you killed off Rose, but if she would've been willing to die for anything, I think it would be defending family, PARTICULARLY against those bastardos Italianos!!

P.S.: I apologise for the 9, but I refuse to give pefect scores on principle..

Summary:

Diary

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When you are the most unique person in the world, what is your life like?  This is a look into Renesmee’s life as a teenager.  She tries to be a normal teen, but her uniqueness keeps getting in the way.  Renesmee’s POV. 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Renesmee/Jacob
Genre: Humor, Romance, Young Adult
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41546 Read Count: 3846
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 40: January 1

I'm still interested.... PLEASE continue....?! *puppy dog pout*



Author's Response:

Lol.  I might.  I have been thinking about it actually.  Although I need to get off my ass and get the next chapter posted.

Summary:

A canon one-shot about Edward Cullen's first human kill in 1927.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1395 Read Count: 94
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aw! Poor Edward..... When it's written like this I can see where his issues/insecuirty about vampires being automatically damned come from.... A-.



Author's Response:

Yep, after I wrote this I felt like I understood Edward a lot better and I was able to write from his POV a lot easier.  This is basically an outtake from my other story, Prelude, and you can find an expanded version of this little story there.  Thanks for reading and reviewing. m

Summary: Past Featured Story

HBTY

Jake lied to Bella the day she visited him after the newborn attack, changing her decision & the lives of everyone involved. 4 years later, everything has changed again & Bella begins a journey to try & recapture a future that was lost to her.Jake-OOC/AU/LEMONS

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41676 Read Count: 8887
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 24 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue: As Time Goes By

Aw - fluffiness!! PLEASE think about doing a sequel to this...? A-.



Author's Response:

Thanks...you're actually the first person to suggest that!  Glad that you liked it so much!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Wolf That Cried Soulmate

BTW, have you considered any kind of sequel? For example, what do they tell the grandchildren? Do they have to "die"? Is Beth ever turned? etc....

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Every Light in the House

Hmmm, I guess shit's different in Alsaska. Are all the roads made of gravel!?



Author's Response:

no, there are paved roads, but some of them, especially leading to certain parts of the state are gravel road, because of the weather, it would cost too much to constantly fix potholes caused by the snow and salt damaging the pavement.  The things you learn while doing research.

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/11066/images/Tasteofinnocencejpeg.jpg

Edward Cullen has survived for years drinking the blood of the dregs of society.  He longs for something different, the blood of an innocent.  Enter Bella Swan.  Will desire for her overrule desire for her blood or will he take both?  All EPOV.  Starts darker, quickly turns humorous.  Language, lemons and some violence.

My awesome banner was made by ambrosia over at Twificpics.com.  Go check them out!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204849 Read Count: 50129
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Epilogue #1

Already R&R'ed on FFN, hon!! :-P



Author's Response:

Saw that!  Thank you :)

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

UGH!! FussyElla is SOOOOO annoying!! But I love sexy, demanding, BLoodElla!! And this version of Edward is good too!! A-.



Author's Response:

Haha Thank you, glad you like them.  They're both crazy but lots of fun.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Bella's Past Outtake

*EVIL LAUGH*!!! THAT'LL TEACH  NEWTON!! :-[



Author's Response:

It's bloodless, but very cold!  I don'tk now that he's done with him either :)

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

OH-OH!! :-P Now who could this be...?! One of the Volturi - or just some nosey nomad?!

 



Author's Response:

Haha could be just about anybody, well any vamp anyway!  Why are they there?  What do they want?  Does Smugs have some competition for the love of his girl?  We'll see soon :)

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Aw - F-I-N-A-L-L-Y!! About time, AssWard!! :-P Man, I would've just kicked Demetri out for lookin' at my girl that way..... I mean, SERIOUSLY - SOME BLOODY MANNERS/DECORUM WOULD BE NICE!! :-P



Author's Response:

Hahah Vamps aren't necessarily known for their manners.  He only got to live because Smugs doesn't want to cross the Volturi.  If he wasn't connected...hehehe Well, you can imagine.

He said it!  He's the man!  We'll just have to see what Bella says. hehe.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Meh - it was good while it lasted!! :-D And anyway, all good things must come to an end.... :-P



Author's Response:

Awww thank you!  Still have a few more chapters to spend with them :) I really don't want to say goodbye but I know when I have to and the time is coming! 

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Hmmmm, lemons..... :-P



Author's Response:

Yep!  Didn't expect to have sexing that chapter but it seemed necessary :)

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

R&R'ed on FFN, hon!! :-P



Author's Response:

Hehe saw that!  Thanks sweetie!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue 2

Reviewed on FFN, hon!! But just one small addendum - seriously fucking LOVE AngryElla!! :-P



Author's Response:

Haha I love turning her loose on him as well.  Makes me laugh everytime the explosion comes and he knows it's coming and eggs it on.  They're so good together. :)

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 School Daze

Oh man, that Prof. is lucky to still be alive!!



Author's Response:

Haha he's not alive :)

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Are you saying Edward had his ass for lunch?! :-S



Author's Response:

Haha whattttt? :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Teacher's Pet Banner

 

Bella eventually moved on with her life after Edward left and never returned. Seven years have passed and she is now a teacher. When she starts her newest teaching assignment destiny intervenes to reunite them. Now she is faced with new challenges and decisions. Canon pairings. (Warnings: Violence/Mild strong language/Adult situations)

 

NB: I will be posting the EPOV (Student Liaison) alongside this as much as possible. The full version of Teachers Pet is on fanfiction.net but that will be the watered down version - this one will be complete with outtakes in place.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116512 Read Count: 48850
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Back to School

Aw - finally!! :-P I'm just sorry you didn't fit Nessie in somehow!! :-P

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Trouble

Hi,

Can I ask why you've migrated this over here?! Wider audience? I have it alerted on FFN also!



Author's Response:

Few reasons - 1. Wider audience, 2. Back-up in case it goes poof from FFn for any reason. Ideally I want to get this up to date & post in all three places at once (Twilighted, FFn & TWCSLibrary) & 3. Supporting TWCSLibrary.

:)

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Audi

Hi!! Q. - are you changing the text from the FFN version? Or leaving it as is? Just thought I'd ask... A-.



Author's Response:

Hi :D

It's pretty much the same. There are a couple of outtakes at the end of the FFn version which I may go back & insert if they fit in seamlessly, but otherwise it's just a clean like a beta would do (fixing tense issues, grammar, incorrect words etc).

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Investigations

Are you writing new material for this or just transferring over from FFN? Seems like this took ages just to copy...?! :-S

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Matrimony isn't a dirty word

Aw - even better here on TWCS 'cause you don't have to censor all that citrusy goodness!! :-P Bloody FanFiction!! :-@

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Every move you make

Needless to say, "Oh-oh, spaghetti-o!!" :-@

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Back to Reality

Hmmmm, citrus.....

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Experimentation

W.O.O.T!! Go VampElla!! :-P

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

Heh-heh!! Had to LOL at parts of this!! :-P

Summary:

On a mid-September evening, Edward Cullen broke off his relationship with Bella and the entire Cullen family left Forks never to be seen again.

2 years have passed and now Bella Swan is a Psychology & English Literature undergraduate at MIT University. She has abandoned love and any sort of relationship, burying her self in her studies and a limited social life. But when an unexpected guest arrives at MIT during the fall, she finds herself reunited with The Cullens and embraces the dawning of a new threat on the horizon that could divide her and the Cullens for the last time.

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185139 Read Count: 17980
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Hmmm, could we be headed for a battle royale, Cullens VS. Volturi?! It's possible... But first they'd have to deal with Emil - make it clear that, turned or not, it's a case of "thanks but no thanks!!".

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Misguided reality

UGH!! Vicky!! Why can't she ever learn to just F-U-C-K O-F-F!?! B+.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: An Interview with the Volturi

Good Ch. I suppose.... If you want to keep me sweet, here's a tip - STOP WITH THE CLIFFIES!! I HATE 'EM!! I hate 'em more than wolves hate vamps - if that's even possible - L.O.L!! :-[ B+.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Nice job!! But I don't know WHAT you're thinking leaving the Cullens as "guests" of the Voulturi?! Unless Bella is some sort of secret weapon?!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

JEEZE LOUISE - W-H-Y IS EMILE BEING SUCH A DICK!? He has to know she wouldn't be intersted in his group, OR the Volturi. As far as she's concerned, once the Cullens are safe, Emile and Aro can finish each other off no?!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: The Calm Before The Storm.

O.K.... A bit of an interrogation, huh?! Well, here's my answers:

(a) Pretty chuffed!

(b) Propose?

(c) He'll go ballistic?

(d) Highly possible, but I doubt Aro would do anything before she was changed - he'd want her for himself the Italian schwein!!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Intermission

UGH!! VOLTURI SCUM..... MORE PLEASE?!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22:

I doubt it.... But it's just like Aro to pull something like this - ITALIAN SCHWEIN!! :-[

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Meh, I'm too pudgy for cookies!! :-P I will be looking forward to the next Ch.!! :-D

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Secrets & Lies

*snorts* Huh, you should be a bloody comedian if you're going to keep writing like this!! Props to Carlisle for admitting he was a complete fool though!! :-P

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: A History of Immortals

Frankly I'm Team Swtizerland still.... If I was in Bella's shoes, I'd rather they would ALL get lost - the Volturi, the Valhallas, Nomads, anyone....

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Darn.... I'm totally cofused/unsure now... Good update all the same.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Frankly, I'd rather be Team BelOC at this point!! :-( Far as I'm concerned, DoubleAgentWard's been a complete jackass and she's well shot of him - I just don't know how Esme is going to react when Carlisle confesses.... :-(

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: The Beginning of The End.

Frankly given the choice, I would've roasted both the Valhallas AND the Volturi!! With both major covens gone, who would be left to try and raise the vampires to be rulers of the world? Possibly Esme, but I doubt she could be THAT sadistic... She just hated the Voltidoucebags from what I read here...... :-S

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Esme and Marcus... Although I have to respect the new, kinder Marcus, I still think the whole business with decieving Bella was a complete low-blow!! If I could, I would've them all to come clean after Aro was killed.... :-(

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Part 1

Heh-heh!! :-D I like how he blew off the nurses.... *laughs*

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Part 2

Well - I hope Edward's happy with eternity knowing he blew it!! :-P For anyone who can actually appreciate a well-written non-BxE story I reccommend Sassafrass junction by MissErie Chastain/VampishVixen

Summary:

Ginny and her straight girl crushes.

WARNING: FEMMESLASH, SMUT & PWP So if you do not like any or all please do not read.

Disclaimer: Harry Potter and the wizarding world are the sole property of J.K. Rowling. I own nothing except my own ideas, and make no profit. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Ginny Weasley/Other
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1674 Read Count: 337
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2010 Updated: 12 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

O.K, now I see where you got the title.... But T.B.H, I find it impossible to picture Bonnie Wright like this... Sorry! :-P

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Cullen and her family aren't the only one's in Forks with a secret.
Will Bella be able to withstand the tempting blood of newcomer Edward Masen, while unravelling the mystery behind his facade? 
OOC, AU, Future Citrus

Twilight...with a twist...

~COMPLETE~

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90926 Read Count: 12221
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Phenomenon

FUCK DAZZLING - I'm putting my money on him being a dhampir!! You know waht that means right?! B+.



Author's Response:

OF COURSE I know what that means...hee, hee....and OF COURSE I mustn't divulge Edwards secret...Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Revelations Part 1

Like I said, dhampir a lá Nessie!! Good new Ch. A-.



Author's Response:

Heeheehee...You hit the nail on the head from the get go. Thanks for reviewing, as well as reading. AND...I am glad to see that my grade has gone up, lol. Thanks again =)

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Mind Over Matter

Aw!! Poor Edward.... Still, maybe he can learn to come to terms with what his worthless father did to his mother...?! A-.



Author's Response:

Only time can tell how poor 'ol Eddie will do. Thanks again for your review...I'm trying my hardest to get that A+ from you, lmao!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Recollection

OH-OH!! This could be a problem for Eddie-poo!! B+.



Author's Response:

HEY! HEY! Why'd my grade go down :( ???? LOL, thank you for the review...as always =)

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Confession Part 1

Hmmm, I like the new Ch. But will Edward really be able to kill James?! Can a hybrid stand up to a full vampire in close combat? A-.



Author's Response:

Aaaahh...that is a very good question. Hmmm....Blade is a hybrid and he kicks ass, lol. I guess we will just have to wait and see. Thank you so much for your review =)

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Confession Part 2

Hmmmm, love the sexy banner!! Hmm, I guess Tanya can smell Azreal on Edward being his vampire progeny... I wonder... Will he become friend or foe?! A-.



Author's Response:

Lets just say Azrael could be a potential problem. Thanks for the review, as always. And glad you liked the banner. I felt it was fitting for the scene, lol. Thanks again =)

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Time Passes

F-I-N-A-L-L-Y!! You know, I half want to strangle you, half want to pat you on the back!! So, because I'm in two minds, you get two grades for this one. B+ for the Ch., D- for making us wait SOOOOO LONG!! :-(



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you...I have decided that any and all future fics I write will be completed prior to posting. I felt and do feel horrible when I cant get them to you guys as quickly as I'd like...why does real life always have to interfere!?!? LOL

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Family

Happy Birthday!! ;-D Good new Ch. But  you're saying Edward has actually killed full vampires?! W.T.F?! A-.



Author's Response:

LMAO! Yes, maybe thats what I am saying, lol...and THANK YOU as always for the review. You're one of my toughest critics. That little leak of info will eventually be revealed...not to worry. Remember, though Edward is half human he still has vampiric strength. The Cullens, especially Bella, have yet to really see all his abilities at work. Thanks again for your continued support.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Checkmate

OUCH!! Personally, I wouldn't like to have to feed a sick vampire, dhampir or not.... Too much risk of them drinking too much.... :-( Are you going to make us wait A-G-E-S for the next update AGAIN?! :-(



Author's Response:

I know, I know!!! I was an epic FAIL with updating! I apologize :(( I am trying to get my writing mojo back, I lost it for a while. I wont make any promises but I intend to update within a week or two. As always thank you for your support of my crazy ass story. It means alot!

Summary:

 

 

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 I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29033
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2016
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

*Gungan accent* Meesa like!! *end accent* Good story!! B+.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Well good - also, what's with the loooong wait for this Ch.?! A-.



Author's Response:

My deepest apologizes for the wait but I had surgery and if that wasn't enough I had a death in my family. You know I hate to make you all wait but it was unavoidable and I will do my best not to make you so long again. Thank you for waiting for it! and I am already on to the next chapter so this wait will be very short. Thank you for taking the time to review! It makes me write faster! :) Michele

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

W.T.F?! OH-OH.....



Author's Response:

OH - OH is right! lots of new stuff will be happening to our favorite group of freinds. I hope you stay tuned! Thanks for reviewing!

Angela by LizzieHopscotch Rated: T [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

"If Angela's a witch she can join the party too!"

So...what if Angela really was a witch?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3643 Read Count: 417
[Report This] Published: 10 Apr 2010 Updated: 08 May 2010
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Aw - poor Angela... B.T.W, I'm assuming by the following remark,

"I didn’t want to call them, but after everything that just happened I didn’t have I choice. This needed to stop, and to do that I needed to call the two people who turned my world inside out." she means Bella and Edward, but how did she find out they're vampires?!



Author's Response:

all will be revealed....at some point =p

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

UGH!! Poor Angela!! Good new Ch. B+.

Summary: Past Featured Story

golf

 

Taking place at the 1956 US Open, 20 year-old amateur golfer Isabella Swan becomes the first women to ever compete at a professional golf event.  With local caddie Edward Cullen at her side as she makes her attempt at history, she will grow more in the span of this weekend then she has in her entire life as she plays against the best players in the world, battling gender roles and the boys club that is this “gentlemen’s game.”  Will she be able to pull out an against the odds victory, or will the prize she wins be even more valuable.

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34179 Read Count: 3213
[Report This] Published: 14 Apr 2010 Updated: 22 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue: A Life Well Played

Aw - I didn't even know you had an epi planned so I just have one thing to say - FINALLY!! :-D You GOTTA stop keeping us waiting like this, hon!! :-D



Author's Response:

Sorry, but as I've said on a few other stories, this summer and the month of September were very difficult and made writing nearly impossible.  I've gotten back into the swing of updating and I have updated 4 stories as well as posting 3 O/S's so the long delay is over, now the wait will be about a month between updates as I get a chapter done a week on my vasious stories.  I'm glad you liked the end of this story and I can't wait to see what you think of all that is coming down the road.  Thanks for reviewing.

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Breakaway Banner

 

Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114431
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: New Connections

Aw - looks like assWard ain't so cocky now!! Loving this so far. B+.



Author's Response:

Hey Noble!  Good to see you :D  This one's going to be a lot of fluff with some snark mixed in.  Hope you like it!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Breakaway

wHAT the hell is snark?!



Author's Response:

hmmm...american slang at it again....sort of like smart mouth, sarcastic banter.  I guess that's the best way to describe it.