Reviews by chiquiflakes
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752869
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: chiquiflakes Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Avoidance and Disappointment

I'm really digging the story but I kinda hate this Edward. I don't get what he's hoping to accomplish by "explaining" anything to Bella. If it were me I would be royally pissed off either way. So he thinks is not as bad cuz he was trying to date the dotard bimbo? That to me is an even worse betrayal; so he goes and kisses her and then thinks it's an excelent idea to try a serious relationship with another woman? What kind of f-up logic is that? If the roles were reverse this kind of situation would be unforgivable and I hope she makes him freaking crawl for redemption because otherwise I'm gonna lose respect for her. 

Reviewer: chiquiflakes Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice

I think it's really sexist to think of Edward's fucking up, as some quirk he has that Bella just has to continue to forgive. Hell no! Like WTF? Either he grows up, mans up and stops pissing all over things or it is over. Bella does not deserve going after a loser like that. If the name of the character wasn't Edward, it would be much encorage for her to leave him behind. He really needs to step up his game already. 

Reviewer: chiquiflakes Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Puppet Master J

He's in so much denial, it's not even funny. Man up, dude! 

Reviewer: chiquiflakes Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Femmes Night Out

Oh, for Christ sake! He was being such a dick and then lays the horrible truth on her like that ugh! I wouldn't care if Maggie had turned out to be fucking mother Theresa, what he did was so wrong, I can't even with him. I'm actually in love with this Bella and her reactions, just until this last bit; he totally deserved a lot more groveling. I hate love triangles but I actually found myself liking this Trevor guy. Oh well...

Reviewer: chiquiflakes Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Sleeping With An Angel

Damn it, why did Trevor had to turn out an @sshole? I SO wnated him to be a good guy. Finally Edward is getting his head out of his ass. About damn time too.

Reviewer: chiquiflakes Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 9: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy

Crap. Now I can't enjoy that Trevor situation seeing as he's a freaking sleaze. Bella sure knows how to pick the, huh?

Reviewer: chiquiflakes Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing

Well I'm gonna be one of those backing Bella up. I'm beggining to think Edward would be best alone; he's so emtionally stunted he keeps making a worse mess of things everytime he opens his mouth. Bella doesn't deserve that. I just wish Trevor wasn't a bad guy so Bella cukd have a healthy relationship for once. 

Reviewer: chiquiflakes Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Roommates and Baby Steps

Finally things are looking up. Let's hope thta boy doesn't ruin it.

Reviewer: chiquiflakes Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Be Careful What You Wish For

Aw! That was sweet. 

Reviewer: chiquiflakes Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Perfection

Perfect first date. Thank god the boy finally got his head out of his ass

Reviewer: chiquiflakes Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 14: The Inner Sanctum

And the plot thickens...