Reviews by Discordia
Summary:

A bride-to-be runs away in a moment of panic. What do the stormy woods hold for her? A collab with celesticbliss, written for the Showers to Flowers contest. E/B

Placed 2nd in the public vote, and won best lemon.

[credit to FrozenSoldier for the amazing banner]

I stood up, and slid the ring off my finger. Looking down at the empty space on my hand, then toying around with the petite diamond for a few seconds, I set it down on the table in front of him.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11656 Read Count: 1100
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2011 Updated: 14 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Discordia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Speak Now

Oh, I love this!  It was so well done, and the Edward in this story is adorable and wonderful. 

So happy that Bella found Edward in that clearing and they both got a chance for a new start.

Also, the lemon was very tasty!  I don't know if you have any plans to extend this (or if there really is anywhere for the story to go other than delicious, fluffy smutty happiness) but I would definitely read it.

Summary:

Edward writes a message and puts it in a bottle. While on vacation with his family, he drops it in the ocean. Hoping to find his soulmate the way his grandfather did. Will it end in love or in nothing? Sometimes you just have to believe in fate.

 

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27091 Read Count: 5149
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: Discordia Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww, what a cute premise for a story!  Love the idea, and it was a great first chapter.  Looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Summary:

Bella pays a visit to the Doctors and gets more than she bargains for.

AH, lemony fresh,  originally intended as a one shot, but I squeezed out a few more chapters.

I acknowledge that all things Twilight belong to Mrs Meyers and that i'm just playing around.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15686 Read Count: 18996
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 25 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Discordia Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww, that was great!  Just the right mixture of sweet and hot.  I loved it!

However, two really minor things I want to point out.  The story title is listed as being A Thorough Investigation, but the banner says A Thorough Examination.  Was that intentional?

Also, I think you might have clicked on the wring rating.  It's listed as being a "T" rated story and I think it should be "M".

Nothing major, just thought I'd point it out.  I really did enjoy the story and the ending was very cute.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, your review is much appreciated, I didn't notice my mishaps, I think I was so desperate and giddy to get it on line I'm not checking properly- I'm new to this! I will try and put it right. Thanks again. x

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028134
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: Discordia Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 239: Chapter 239

I tore through this and of course here I am at the end of what you have posted and haven't reviewed.  Whoops.

I am definitely enjoying it. *fans self* very, very hot. 

But overall, I think I preferred just the BPOV.  I understand why you went with alternating POVs but I think in the one shot, keeping it with BPOV built the anticipation so much more.  I found I kind of got out of Bella's headspace when it flipped to EPOV, and it was hard to get back into it. 

Still really enjoying it, and I'm definitely looking forward to reading more as you post!  I can't wait to see what Edward does with all this new knowledge.  :)

Last To Know by TBandJelly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 214]
Summary:


Summary:  One day, three missent texts and four couples... secrets spilled and relationships kindled but who will be the last to know? A soap opera of fanfic proportions. Rated M for language and slashy lemons. Written for the Drabble Wars DYAC Prompt challenge.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Family, Friendship, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12626 Read Count: 13126
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2012 Updated: 28 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Discordia Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Such a cute story!  Loved the way the stories were all interwoven, and you did a great job incoroporating the texts.  Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Discordia... it was interesting to say the least....lol.  Glad you enjoyed it!

 

xoxo

tb and jess

Summary:

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Bella doesn’t see herself very clearly which makes her shy, geeky and withdrawn.  Her favorite place to hide and escape?  The local comic book store owned by her only semi-friend, Emmett. When Emmett isn’t there one day, will her imagination get carried away over the new guy? Bday shot for my Jelly girl... JA Mash (who also made the banner!)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4316 Read Count: 1563
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2012 Updated: 05 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Discordia Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww, that was really adorable.  And I love the fact that you had it be Jessica who is the Cullen sister, and the one to guide Bella along.  It's a fresh take on it, and a really nice change of pace!