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Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for. She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given. Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him. Can an uneducated Bella teach him something? What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263191
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Trash Talking Turkey Day
I LOVE your story!!!! Really!
Seth is SO adorable and Rose is SO terrible!
I got really sad about Edwards Story.
Can`t wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View. Nikky and I are both just so blown away by the response our story is garnering. Thanks to the many recommends and pimping we have been getting. Thanks for the response of our fans that make and send us banners and poems and mostly the kind words of love that give us the drive to keep HCV going strong.
There have been a lot of you all asking for the Bella point of view, and you are going to get it. The next chapter will have a lot of things going on and we hope you love it. The age reveal will be in chapter 17, along with a first kiss, the kids going off to camp, Edward and Bella together and meeting up with Sally...those are a few things you have to look forward to. We started a group on Facebook, you’re all invited to join. TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.
Now to the nitty gritty...
We both wondered how many of you would ask if Edward’s son was really dead or not, and if Tanya was dead or not. We want to be clear that Tanya Denali and the child she gave birth to are in fact deceased; they died in the fire.
We want to point out that Edward is not a Dom. He role-played and dabbled with the girls at the club, because it was his way of maintaining full control. He has no desire to tie Bella up and spank her, he is not looking at her as his next submissive or slave. Just want to be perfectly clear, he is not into the BDSM lifestyle, he is just a man who was seating his needs at a club the only way he saw fit to do so and protect his heart and soul.
Thank you again for all of the story love and wonderful things you say. You really have no idea what your words and kindness mean to us. Thanks, Kasi (&Nikky)
Chapter 17 teaser...subject to changes during Beta process.
Right now, we’re back at Bella’s apartment getting Seth and Leah’s stuff ready for their trip.
“Okay, Seth, you have everything from your list in your bag, right?” I watch as he nods his head, and chuckle to myself since Bella had just checked over the list and the bag with him herself. “Leah, do you have everything from your list in your bag, too?”
“Yes, Bella. Edward and I just went through the list twice.” I turn my head to hide my chuckle.
“Okay. Well, we have to be at the church in forty minutes, and since Edward is taking us, we have time to double check.”
“Baby, Leah and Seth have everything they need. How about you go pack your bag now, and feed Jake? I will help Leah and Seth take their backpacks down to the car.”
“Okay, I will hurry,” she says, leaving to go to her box.
I can tell that Bella is trying to put on a strong front for them, but I know this is killing her to let them go on this trip. It will be good for them, though, and good for her, too. I have planned out this weekend so that she gets a chance to be a twenty-four year old for a change. After we have everything packed and ready, we head out.
I drive them to the church, seeing a bus and a bunch of children. I also see Sally there, and I frown as I pull into a parking space. “Sally works in the Sunday school. She’s the main reason they are going. She is taking her cell with her, and said that I could call her anytime. She is also going to have them call me before bed, and when they get up in the morning. You can stay here if you want. You don’t need to come with me. I won’t tell her who you are.” I turn to look at her, and smirk because she answered my internal question.
I shake my head. “No, I am fine, Baby. Thank you.”
The night of the break in, I explained to Bella that I went by a different name at Aro’s, and the girls I was with, had never seen my face because they were blindfolded. I was very glad that she just nodded her head, and didn’t ask any other questions. I hate the fact that I’ve been with them. I don’t want my sins to show in her eyes when I look at her each time I remember that she saw me there. When the time comes, and she finds out what I did and what happens there with me and the girls, I hope and pray to God that I don’t lose her friendship.
We get out of the car and start walking over. As we do, Sally waves, making her way over to us. Her eyes hit me for only a few seconds before she looks back at Bella.
Date: 14 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: A Cowboy, a Princess, and a Butterfly
I love your Story!!! Thursday can´t never come fast enough!
Alice was the real witch not Charlotte, right?
The Chocolate cock part was amazing! I was laughing so hard.
Author's Response:
Many of you are wondering what he deal is with Edward and the talk of his lost son. In chapter 5 there was a dream sequence that told a lot of what happened that fateful day when Edward found out Tanya was using him, to get his money. She was not pregnant like she had told him, the problem is the night before they had unprotected sex, and she actually did give birth to his child. Esme found out about it, but hid it from Edward trying to protect him. Tanya and Edward junior later died in a fire. There will be more to come on that, but it seems to be getting a lot of questions. Now for Alice...She is clearly a not nice person in this fic, and to some she will partially redeem herself, but for some there is no redemption, her words and actions are far worse than any you have seen from Edward. Siobhan is for the majority out of the picture, so she is of no major worry. Uncle Harry is a very mean man, and there will be more to come about him. We love our Aro he is one of the kindest and most loving men and we are proud to have written an Aro who is not only out of character, but also so very loveable. Bella has come to trust Edward, and it shows. A lot of you keep asking if she will sleep in the step-moms room, or if Edward will talk her into it...the answer to that is no. The next few chapters have so much going on in them, I am sure that you will all have favorite parts. We love hearing what your thoughts are so keep asking questions and we will answer what we can without ruining the plot.
Thanks for Reading and Reviewing
Kasi (&Nikky)
Chapter 15 teaser...Subject to changes during BETA process...
It’s Saturday, and we are into the countdown to Thanksgiving. Alice has called me numerous times, and left well over a hundred text messages and voice mails. I have dealt with each and every one of them the same way. Without reading or listen to them, I just hit delete.
Esme found out during one of my talks with Carlisle about the stunt Alice pulled. At first, I thought she would take Alice’s side, but was stunned when I found her on the phone giving Alice a piece of her mind. Jasper has also said that he and Alice are talking, but not back to normal yet. Jasper is really pissed at her.
Yesterday, Esme called me, and to my surprise, she asked me if I would still come over for Thanksgiving dinner. She told me that she would understand if I did not want to come. She said it was my choice, and she would still make my dinner if I wanted and bring it over to my home or Midnight Sun. Not once did she try and force my hand. After much thought, I said that I will be there. I do enjoy spending time with the guys, even more so in the last few weeks. I know they all were hoping for me to come, and I know I owe them a lot. I told them that I will join them and stay, as long as Alice and Rose keep their mouths shut. Esme, Carlisle, Emmett, and Jasper, have promised to keep them under control.
Things with Bella are still going really well. Too well, in fact. She…fuck! Every time I see her, I want to hold her close. It’s no longer just me having dirty thoughts about her, a lot of dirty thoughts about her, which I still am, but I also want to hug her, lie with her, make love to her, and that is really fucking scary for me, for lots of reasons. I am worried, because I wonder if she could even cope in that type of a relationship. I have been a pussy about it, because I haven’t had the guts to ask Peter or Jasper what they think. I know it’s because I am afraid they may say she couldn’t handle it, or I am not good enough for her. I already know that I am not, but one can always hope for his own redemption.
Date: 24 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Break In
It`s really nice to see Edward with the twins and that he is missing them.
When they cut Bellas hair was it really for a sick child or was it a lie?
The break in into Bellas appartment was personal but what were they looking for?
I´m really looking forward to the Edward and Bella weekend!
Author's Response:
Wow what else can Nikky or I say...once again the overwhelming response and the amount of story love we are receiving from so many people just makes us both feel so loved. I know that this story may have a few minor flaws, but we have tried all along to keep them to a minimum. So essentially thank you as always for reading and reviewing our story it makes us all giggly and excited to see all the reviews we are getting.
We asked you who you thought it might be that broke into Bella and the twins apartment, and I must say we were a little surprised that a lot of you have it figured out. With a wide range of evil or rude nasty characters, many of you said it was Uncle Harry...and you are right. There will not be resolution for a bit when it comes to Uncle Harry, so if you want to figure out what he was looking for all I can suggest is watch for clues. There are some very important and much asked for things coming soon.
We have been asked many times for Edward to stop using Aro’s girls for his pleasure. And where we understand why, we also knew it was very unrealistic for a man with so much anxiety, pressure, cynicism and tainted view to jump into a healthy relationship and give up the release and hidden pleasure he has surrounded himself in to get by for the past five plus years. He has slowly been weaning himself from the place, and very soon he will open up and tell Bella why he went there. We have been asked when you all get to know a lot more about Edward...well very soon actually, and by that I mean the next few chapters are chuck full of things from the past.
We have been asked if Renee will come back...(A LOT ACTUALLY)...Renee was Bella’s biological mother, who died when Bella was only three years old. At the age of three after her mother died, custody of Bella was given to Charlie Swan who was her biological father. Charlie was married to Sue Swan, who is the mom she talks about leaving all the time. Sue Swan is the person who left Bella to care for the twins. Since this story is not alternate universe, neither, Charlie or Renee will be making any grand entrance, unless via a dream. But don’t get too happy, because Sue Swan is still out there somewhere, and she has a few things to say.
We have been asked a lot if Alice, Rose, Siobhan, and Esme will make any redemption...Esme already has begun her turn around, and we think she is doing well. Siobhan, well she wore out her welcome quite completely at the ball, at this point there is not a real plan to drag her back into the storyline. Alice...well this is a hard one for me. I actually normally always LOVE Alice, but this Alice is a tough nut to crack. She is not going to bring in the roses and become a fan favorite anytime soon, but you will notice some changes. As for Rose, well...I just can’t wait to hear your opinions of her...and I am sure you’ll have plenty next week.
Updating...we had planned all along to only update every other week on Thursdays. However since posting the first chapter we have been on an every week posting schedule...and we have NO INTENTION of changing that at this time. Nikky and I have a comfortable cushion, and the next chapter to post is with the beta now. I got this weeks chapter back from the beta on Tuesday afternoon, so realistically we are posting around when they are ready. Nikky is working on her part of chapter 26 right now, and I am working on 24 so we are not looking at any lapses in time. We are both so excited you are choosing to come down this road with us. Bella's haircut was honestly to use the hair for donation purposes, but they did use her natural want to help others to get her to agree to the hair cut. Edward want to do things for her, because she alwyas does for others and leaves herself out. We can't tell you what the person was looking for, because that woudl ruin part of the future story.
Where the next chapter has some major info and angst, we promise that chapter seventeen will make up for it. Thanks again for always being so supportive and showing the story love HCV deserves.
Kasi (&Nikky)
Chapter 16 Teaser...subjected to changes during the BETA process...
Its Thanksgiving today, and I am on my way to pick up Bella and the kids. Bella and I decided that, after dinner with my family, they would all stay the night at my house tonight. I will run them home to get their things for the camping trip in the morning, and see them off to camp. Bella will make sure that Jake has enough food, and then she is coming to spend the weekend with me. I’m looking forward to this weekend, but I am worried about my growing feelings for her. I knock on the door before using my key to get in. Bella gave me a spare key so I could let myself in. The new door has a double lock on it, and is reinforced with steel; no one is breaking this one down.
I walk in, seeing Leah in a black, knee-length dress with a cream ribbon around the waist, and black shoes. Seth is wearing a pair of black pants and a cream colored button down shirt, with a black tie and shoes.
“Wow, look at you Leah! You’re very beautiful, and Seth, you look so handsome.” They both smile at me and look up as Bella walks in. She is in a cream colored dress, with a black ribbon around the waist. The dress goes to just above her knees; she looks fucking beautiful in it - so fucking beautiful.
“Wow, Bella! You look sensational...really beautiful. Are we all ready to go?” I look her up and down, I am so glad she allowed me to buy us all new outfits for today.
I got around her apprehension by telling her that I wanted to go to church with them this Sunday night. We are attending the evening service after Seth and Leah return from camp. Since I was buying something for myself, I wanted to get them something, as well. As usual, getting Bella to let me buy Seth and Leah something, was easy, but her...not so much. I was so fucking glad Seth and Leah helped me. I have on black pants and black shirt with a cream colored tie. I push my fucking guilty feelings down and smile at the three of them.
“Yes, we’re all ready.” Bella picks up their bags, and I quickly take them from her.
“Let’s go,” I say as I usher us all out the door together.
A personal ad for a fake fiancée leads to something they never expected. Two lonely souls discover that faking it might be the best thing that ever happened to them. ExB AH
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories to read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125397 Read Count: 141571
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 5: A Little Traveling Music
Really looking forward when they meet Alice.
*UPDATING in mid/late 2023*
Following her mother's heartbreaking death, Bella moves back to Forks. It's there she reconnects with her father and forms a bond with the next-door neighbor. Is she the one who can heal his wounded heart; or will he hurt her over his fear of falling in love again?
***1st Place Winner for Favorite Undiscovered FF in 2014* AH/OOC, Olderward/Teenella
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 62443 Read Count: 11553
Date: 12 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Unspoken Words and Fears
Great prologue! Really looking forward to chapter 1! :)
Author's Response:
Hi yrar! Thank you very much for the compliment ;) Im so glad you enjoyed the prologue! Chap one is just finished and i sent it to my beta for edits. I will post it as soon as its ready :) I cant wait for everyone to read it. Thanks very much for reading and reviewing! till next time, Leslie
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Diner Happenings and Seeing Mr. Masen
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!
Really liked the dream!!:)
And I really like Charlie!
Does Mr Masen :) recognize Bella when he looked at her and apologized because of that (a bit)?
Can`t wait for the chapter in Edwards Pov!!!
Till next time!
Author's Response:
Hi yrarbil :) So great to hear back from you! Aww thanks for the bday wishes ;) *blush* And haa, Im so glad you enjoyed the dream! I had fun writing it, lol. Oh and thank you too for saying you like Charlie. Another reader had told me the same. I adore him too! He gets even funnier and great :) Yes, Mr. Masen recognizes Bella from spying on him the other night. Thats why he kept staring at her and giving her a dirty look, lol. Oh yes the next chap will be in Epov, actually it may end up being two chaps because its pretty long. I cant wait for you all to read it. I have it just about ready. ttys, thank so much or reading and reviewing! ~Leslie
Date: 16 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Back Home and A Flash of Green
Is he talking to his dead wife? Girlfriend? Mom? I don´t hope the last one.
I like Charlie he is kind of funny.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hi yrarbil :) Thank you for another great review :) Wow, you were exactly right on your first guess! Yes Edward was talking to his dead wife :( Poor guy. You will find out much more about Edward in chp 3, which will be in his pov. Haa, Im glad you like Charlie i do too. He is funny in this fic. The next chapter there are more funny moments between him and Bella. I am excited for the next chapter too. I will have it posted in a few days :) Thanks for reading! Leslie
Date: 15 May 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Never Moving Forward
Poor Edward! I feel really sad for him.
I think that probably the baby wasn`t his.?
When did he find out that Kate cheated on him? Before or after the accident? I think he found out after.
Is it correct that they had a car crash and he was the driver?
Did Alice give him his wedding video?
Sorry I know too many questions :) But I really love your story!
And I´m really curious for the next chapter and Edwards thoughts about Bella spying on him and when he sees her at the diner.
Congratulations for your nomination! Of course I will vote for you!
Till next time!!!
Author's Response:
Hi yrarbil! Great to hear from you, thanks for the wonderful review!!! I really feel very sad for this Edward too. He has been through so much and it seems to be getting harder on him when it should get a little easier ;( Oh, I cant answer that just yet, hee. But i will say he suspects the baby may not have been his. He found out Kate cheated after her death, so what a whammy to deal with. He already has the guilt on him over how she died then to find that out, its awful ;( Um, you may be very warm about how Kate died but he wasnt the driver or in the car with her. Yes Alice gave him the video. No, thats okay, ask away, lol, I love questions from my readers and the comments! It makes me so happy how people get into my story, so thank you! Oh yes you will find out for sure Edwards pov regarding the diner and other things, haa. The end of the next chp is very interesting! Thanks so much for the congrats I am still floored i got nomin 5 times, a few for my other fics too. Thanks for your vote it means so much! I really enjoy your reviews, the new chap is up and I will post chp 5 soon too. ttys, Leslie :)
Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Reminiscing and Making Amends
It`s a really sad video to watch when Kate acted like she is happy and everything is ok when in reality she was lying and betraying Edward. I`m not sure if it was a good idea to give him this video on her birthday.
Does Alice and the rest of his family and Kates family know that she had an affair?
Tanya is unbelivable!
It´s very nice that he called his parents and very interessting how he already thinks and cares about Bella. She already spare him from his nightmare, and they even didn´t meet each other. :))
Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: The Diner and That Brown Eyed Girl
Rhonda is really a sweetheart!
I hope he will follow her advices too!
I really wonder if his family knows about the "real" Kate?
Poor Ben! And all because Edward started to get angry about Bella. Or maybe about himselfe because he cares about her and doesn`t understand why?
While reading this chapter I could better understand Edwards feelings and why he is still or at all so hung up on Kate.
Thank you also for your explanation in the End Notes! (Love the big spoiler!!:))
It`s awful and terribly mean that her "lover" approached him at the funeral!
Will we hear from him again?
Did Edward knows about the pregnancy before she died?
Can`t wait for the next chapter!!! I hope Edward will save Bella and they will finally talkt to each other. But I don`t think they will like each other at first because of the spying and Edwards outburst at the diner.
:) Till next time!! :)
Author's Response:
Hi sweety! So great to hear back from you. Thanks for the awesome reviews! I agree Rhonda is a sweetheart for sure! She will be around a bit more in the story and always there to offer Edward advice ;) In a way, he will follow her advice it will take him a bit longer, but he will finally snap out of it! To answer your question and I do love your q's lol. No, the family does not know about Kates betrayal. Except someone in her family does, take a guess? hee. Haa, i know I feel so bad for Ben too. Its cause Bella got Edward all riled up, haa. Edward will apologize to Ben, I wont spoil when but it will happen ;) I am so so relieved you get why he is so hung up over Kate and it makes sense now. I really want my readers to understand. So i felt i needed to explain more. Haa, glad you loved my long A/N and the spoilers. I love to reat my readers to that ;) Yes, I agree very cruel of her lover to tell Edward the day of the funeral but the man is just that evil and cruel ;( Yes, he may appear in the story or at least you all will find out who he is ;) Um, good question about the preg I cant answer that just yet but only because I am sitll figuring that out, lol. You are so right on your prediction, haa. Edward and Bella wont like each other at first. Their meeting will be very interesting! Till next time thanks so much for reading! xoxo
Author's Response:
Hi sweety! So great to hear back from you. Thanks for the awesome reviews! I agree Rhonda is a sweetheart for sure! She will be around a bit more in the story and always there to offer Edward advice ;) In a way, he will follow her advice it will take him a bit longer, but he will finally snap out of it! To answer your question and I do love your q's lol. No, the family does not know about Kates betrayal. Except someone in her family does, take a guess? hee. Haa, i know I feel so bad for Ben too. Its cause Bella got Edward all riled up, haa. Edward will apologize to Ben, I wont spoil when but it will happen ;) I am so so relieved you get why he is so hung up over Kate and it makes sense now. I really want my readers to understand. So i felt i needed to explain more. Haa, glad you loved my long A/N and the spoilers. I love to reat my readers to that ;) Yes, I agree very cruel of her lover to tell Edward the day of the funeral but the man is just that evil and cruel ;( Yes, he may appear in the story or at least you all will find out who he is ;) Um, good question about the preg I cant answer that just yet but only because I am sitll figuring that out, lol. You are so right on your prediction, haa. Edward and Bella wont like each other at first. Their meeting will be very interesting! Till next time thanks so much for reading! xoxo
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Turning Page
Hi!
I`m really happy to hear from you again!!!
I`m glad that you don`t give up the story! That would be terrible!!!
I like the teaser! He really doesn`t like her.(Until now.?:))
Can`t wait for the whole chapter!
Till next time!! :)
Author's Response:
Hi yarbil! Im so happy to hear form you as well, thanks for leaving me a comment. It made my day! Hope youre having a ncie summer. No I can say for sure I dont plan on giving up the story. I have so many ideas for future chaps and Im very excited to write them. haa, yea Edward isnt very nice to Bella for now but in the near future, he will warm up to her more. I look fwd to posting the whole chap, I hope all of you like it. ttys, take care and thanks for the support! ~Leslie