Reviews by MystikAngel85
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108986
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

That was good, and i mean not just the chapter. But this chapter was funny, i especially loved Edward's reactions to Renesmee and Jacob.

Summary:

 

Bella Swan is given one night to experience being a Domme. But having Edward Cullen as her sub might be more than she can handle.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5443 Read Count: 1131
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Apr 2010
Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please do continue. Loved it



Author's Response:

Thanks for the support.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Five years into her marriage, photojournalist Bella, is worried that she isn't enough for her bi-sexual husband. Can a meeting with a mysterious street artist allow them both to fulfill their undisclosed desires?

 

Lemons Poly/Slash Edward/Bella/Jasper

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9218 Read Count: 6224
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2011 Updated: 05 Jan 2011
Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Undisclosed Desires

Loved It... You should so continue this.

Bases Loaded by JessAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Spending summer vacation traveling with the St. Louis Cardinals isn’t every teen girls idea of fun.  What happens when the teen daughter of the team doc falls for one of the players?  Can they find love or will life get in the way?  AH/Cannon and Non-Cannon Pairings/Rated NC-17

Wonderful Banner made by: Stephenie Masen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115192 Read Count: 87329
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 01 Dec 2013
Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow the reaction of her parents was funny... I think Bella will end it with Ben, especially if he keeps up the possessive act... But if you love someone, there age won't matter. Can't wait...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for another outstanding bunch of reviews for chapter 4.  We understand many of you are not pleased about the whole Ben getting Bella’s virginity, but we wanted to really keep this story as realistic as could be, and sadly there are so very many-many girls who give it up to the wrong guy, convinced that they’re with their one and only forever love.  The next chapter will make a few of you smile and a bunch will say ‘I told you so’ or ‘I knew it’.  Jess and I both are so completely in awe of our wonderful following of readers, and we thank you all for your reading and reviewing of our story.  Kasi~

PS… no teasers on Fictionators until they fix the issues with the Trojan viruses and such they have going on so here is your teaser!

(subject to changes of course)
My face hurts from smiling. I call Esme to talk to her about it, but she doesn’t answer. I get a text from her the second I hang up.

~What’s up? Did you hear about Edward?~

~I did! Where are you?~

~I’m with your dad. The team is having a few drinks to celebrate!~

And just like that I’m reminded that I’m only a kid and I can’t be with them to celebrate such an amazing thing.

~Do you want me to come back? We are right down the street.~

~No, I’m okay. Night.~

Now what will I do with myself?  I start watching the TV again as they are showing the series of hits once again.  I watch all five hits and the interview again, before my phone dings.

~Edward’s not much of a drinker so he’s staggering back to your room right now.~

~Okay. Night.~

And just like that, my night gets a whole lot better. It feels like an hour even though he is walking in the door within ten minutes. I hear the door lock click and I jump up and run to my man.  I highly doubt his smile could get any bigger. He drops his bag and I throw my arms around his neck. I giggle as he lifts me of the ground as we hug.  I wrap my legs around his middle and don’t let go.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Jasper are twins who just moved from England to Beverly Hills and are new to Mason high school. The second that Bella and football Quarterback Edward Cullen meet, it is love at first sight for both of them. They decided there and then that they would be together no matter what. There is only one person who stands in their way. Edward’s girlfriend Tanya. Lemons and language AH


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: YA - High School
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77045 Read Count: 34693
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2013 Updated: 10 Apr 2015
Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Whoa. One guess, can't wait

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281063
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

That so mean. Please update soon. Loved it.

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272402
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Please, please update... So want to see them reunited...

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Isabella Black lost her husband in the cruelest way possible. He wasted

away and was ravaged by the evil, silent killer, cancer. Five months after his initial diagnosis, he died, leaving Bella with their two young children, John, seven and Grace, five. A year after his death, Bella packs up her home in Phoenix and drives back to Forks, Washington to be closer to her family. Will she finally find a way to pick up the pieces with the help of her family, friends and a green-eyed cop?

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 255357 Read Count: 101885
[Report This] Published: 07 Jan 2014 Updated: 29 Aug 2018
Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 24

In this chapter you have said Rachel was with Ryan, previously it was Rebecca who was pregnant and married to Ryan. Rachel attacked Bella and was on drugs? I'm confused.

Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 24

In this chapter you have said Rachel was with Ryan, previously it was Rebecca who was pregnant and married to Ryan. Rachel attacked Bella and was on drugs? I'm confused.

Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 24

In this chapter you have said Rachel was with Ryan, previously it was Rebecca who was pregnant and married to Ryan. Rachel attacked Bella and was on drugs? I'm confused.

Comfortably Numb by mathisson Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 222]
Summary:

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Bella Swan enjoys helping people. It doesn't matter if it's the customers she pours a cup of coffee for, or the man who just drop money on a New York sidewalk. But when the kindness she shows is turned against her, how far will she continue to go to protect her family? Will she sacrifice her happiness? Or let her only relative lose everything? Angst! CC rated M for adult content.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48864 Read Count: 35366
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2016 Updated: 27 Nov 2017
Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

So cannot wait for the next chapter, on edge. In shock here at the cliffhanger. So hope Edward teaches his uncles a lesson

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Newly divorced Bella goes to Vegas for a work conference. On the advice of friends she lets her hair down and goes out for a night on the town. When she comes back from Vegas, she finds out that what happens in Vegas, doesn't always stay there.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143753 Read Count: 135008
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2016 Updated: 04 Jun 2016
Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Ong. Really end it there. Omg. Hanging on

Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

i cannot believe he is like that. Mentally Unstable, has he been like this the whole time the new each other?

Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Omg, is he really crazy. Wow. Can't wait to see the outcome of this. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

TOTGA

Bella Swan was dreading going back to her ten year high school reunion, over Valentine’s Day Weekend, for Hillsborough High School. Her time in high school in Tampa, Florida was not high on her list of pleasant experiences. She was quiet, unassuming and secretly in love with Edward Cullen. It was that unrequited love that forced her to move away to Seattle, as far from Tampa as possible. He never knew she existed. Or so she thought.

Edward was looking forward to his high school reunion because he was anxious to see the one that got away. Bella Swan was the quiet girl who never really interacted with anyone, but Edward saw that she was something special. But as ruler of the school, he had certain expectations to maintain. It was one of his biggest regrets. His life would have been easier if he had followed his heart. Now, he was a divorced father of two. His ex-wife, Tanya, who was his high school girlfriend, left him for a younger man and abandoned her children.

Will Bella be happy to see Edward or will she stay hidden amongst her classmates? Will Edward finally break the mold that was expected of him and open up his heart to the beautiful and shy Bella Swan? Will he be able to win back the one that got away?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 84 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196828 Read Count: 280777
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2016 Updated: 23 Jun 2017
Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Omg Tanya is the one who needs to go down. 

Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Omg really. Seriously. Ok I'm in shock. Loved it though but it makes me hate Tanya so much more. Why????

Summary:

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When a small town girl finds herself in a world of trouble, she turns to an old ‘friend.

 

Rated: NC-17 for the following strong language, drinking, some drug usage, SEX, violence, etc…

 

Genre – action, adventure, drama, romance,  some horror, gore, death

 

 


Categories: Sons of Anarchy, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Chibs
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 292645 Read Count: 38006
[Report This] Published: 28 Jul 2016 Updated: 27 Mar 2017
Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Old Lady

Loved it.

Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Chester Cheetah's Cousin

Tara is a bitch. Like.

Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Luck of the Irish

Just found and read this. I'm hooked, loved it, can't wait for more

Summary:

BANNER

Charlie owes the mob an obscene amount of money and  it’s time to pay up. The problem is, he doesn't have the money. So in a last bid to save his own neck, he offers them his daughter. Dark Romance.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27753 Read Count: 53532
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2017 Updated: 17 Feb 2018
Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh cannot wait for more of this.  I remember this from awhile back and glad your are working on it again.

Summary:


Summary: Bella is deaf and due to her disability she is unable to do the one thing she's always wanted to do, follow in her father's footsteps and be a firefighter. Overcoming the hatefulness of several people, she works in the firehouse, but can she be the saving grace in a scary emergency situation? 

Book Cover and regular Banner by: HeartForTwilight Productions


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 77829 Read Count: 43247
[Report This] Published: 27 Apr 2017 Updated: 24 Jun 2017
Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 03 May 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I thought it was going to be Edward especially how he said his birth name and that his brother and cousin. But who knows. Can't wait.

Summary:

When Fate Steps In

Fate decides that two lost souls need a little boost in finding their soulmates.

After Bella confronts Jacob about his infidelity and evil plans to sell the companies, she chooses to spend her already paid Christmas honeymoon alone. She arrives at the cabin in the woods just as a horrible blizzard hits.

Edward finds out that woman he was supposed to marry has been lying their entire relationship. Not only was he betrayed by the woman he was going to spend his life with, but also his best friend and partner. Wanting to get away from everyone, he rents a cabin in the woods for Christmas.

 

What happens when he arrives at cabin number 5696 that Fate has worked her magic on the number? What surprises will he see in the little cabin? What happens when the roads are closed and there is no cell service?

Disclaimer: I don't own the characters names, but I do own the storyline

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9389 Read Count: 10143
[Report This] Published: 12 Dec 2018 Updated: 25 Dec 2018
Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it. Want to see Edwards side

Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh my lord this just gets better. Will Karma come in to play as well

Summary:

Words to Die By

I.M. Swan a best-selling author is on top of the literary world. After coming off her book tour for her latest book, she has begun her research for the next, a book on the Chicago Mafia. Spending hours in the library and courthouse, she is surprised to find out a most curious piece of information about the Don of the largest crime family. He is not the rightful heir to the family.

Aro Volturi planned and executed the complete destruction of the Cullen family. Wiping away any documentation or body of any evidence of the family from the face of the earth, or he thought so.

Edward Cullen was smuggled away with the aid of his faithful nanny, who kept him safe until it was time for him to take revenge for his family's death. Training and building a new, stronger family to take back what is rightfully his and executing the man who took his family from him.

One evening, as Edward is following one of Aro’s hitman, he witnesses him a young woman in the alley. Coming to her aid, he is mesmerized by her beauty and when he gets to know her, he is in awe of her intellect.

            Will Bella be able to survive with Edward’s help or will Aro get to her and silence her forever? E&B

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62607 Read Count: 65884
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2019 Updated: 27 May 2020
Reviewer: MystikAngel85 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please expand, want to see the end.