Reviews by MortalTwilight23
Summary: Past Featured Story

Teacher's Pet Banner

 

Bella eventually moved on with her life after Edward left and never returned. Seven years have passed and she is now a teacher. When she starts her newest teaching assignment destiny intervenes to reunite them. Now she is faced with new challenges and decisions. Canon pairings. (Warnings: Violence/Mild strong language/Adult situations)

 

NB: I will be posting the EPOV (Student Liaison) alongside this as much as possible. The full version of Teachers Pet is on fanfiction.net but that will be the watered down version - this one will be complete with outtakes in place.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116512 Read Count: 48850
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Nov 2011
Reviewer: MortalTwilight23 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Timeslides

I think Bella's power is the coolest thing ever. Never heard someone giving her a power like this, its almost like Renesme's but she doesn't have to physically be touching someone and she can view the scene from a 3rd person perspective. 

A New Normal by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella's perfect world is crumbling around her. She feels as though she's drowning when she meets an angry, broken Edward. Can he save her while living in an abusive nightmare of his own? Can they save each other? 

"Growing up is hard. It's hard for everyone,however, some are luckier than others. I always thought I was one of those lucky ones, but as I sat there, I realized how wrong I was."

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138890 Read Count: 29516
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2010 Updated: 03 Jul 2011
Reviewer: MortalTwilight23 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Aftermath

Poor Bella. Hopefully Edward will be able to help her through this tuff time like he has been so far. Hope his parents aren't too awful when they find out about football.



Author's Response:

You will get to see his parents reaction very soon. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! 

Katie 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella struggles to survive on her own after Edward leaves her. A chance encounter with Jasper will alter life for both of them. BxJ. Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and eventual lemons.

  ***Thanks to christine30974 for the beautiful banner!***

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234838 Read Count: 38993
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: MortalTwilight23 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Loved this chapter. It was nice to see Jasper and Bella have some alone time, to let Jasper get use to Bella being a vampire and Bella getting use to her newborn tendencies.  Thought it was extremely cute that Bella asked Jasper to marry her, stealing his line.  Thank you for writing! 



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed the twist with the proposal!  I considered not having them get married, but in the end I felt it would be important to Jasper.  I wanted Bella's proposal to feel kind of like their first kiss did!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: MortalTwilight23 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 I was Broken

Glad Bella is feeling more comfortable around Edward, that she is able to tell him about her past. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for writing!

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211508
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: MortalTwilight23 Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

Oh geez. Didn't see something this serious, her possibly being taken by James coming. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for writing! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)

I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*

Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.

♥ Shel ♥

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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.

"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."

Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.

"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."

"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.

Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.

tHirTeEn by twolipps Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 216]
Summary: Past Featured Story

In the aftermath of war, the Volturi have given Bella a choice-live as a vampire among the Guard, or die. What will she choose and will Jasper be willing to train her as a newborn and then give her up at the end of 13 short months? Vamp/Human OOC / A darker Jasper

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169540 Read Count: 16139
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2011
Reviewer: MortalTwilight23 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Bella has been put through a ton in such a short amount of time.  Very interested to see how Jacob/the pack reacts to the situation. Thanks for writing!

Summary:

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Bella and Edward have grown up practically hating each other. Friends and family will force them closer than ever before. Will they try to fight it, or give in? AH/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future Lemons.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 113597 Read Count: 27217
[Report This] Published: 22 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: MortalTwilight23 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Back to reality

Yes!!! So glad he finally admitted his feelings for Bella. Favorite part was the ending, the last two lines spoken. Can't wait for dec 29!

Reviewer: MortalTwilight23 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Sunburned

Such a cute and playful chapter. Glad to see they can stand to be around each other, and that they obviously have some feelings for each other. Love that Edward was calling Bella baby throughout the whole chapter! Can't wait for the update next week! Thanks for writing! 

Wild as the West by lfcpam Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 513]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and James Swan move out west after their parents death. Moving to Wyoming, they both come to work on the ranch of Edward Cullen. See what happens when your life and love are as wild as the west.

Banner by:Ange de l'aube

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132021 Read Count: 48540
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 May 2012
Reviewer: MortalTwilight23 Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I feel bad for Bella.  I feel like she feels out of place, and unwelcome because of Edwards look and quick get-away. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

thank you for reviewing.. I feel for her too but she is a tough cookie!

Getting Warmer by eiluned price Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

After their honeymoon on Isle Esme, Bella gets to spend more time being human with Edward as they travel cross-country to New Hampshire and beyond, and learn about art, love and temperature differentials. AU. BxE. Newlyweds being newlyweds, so lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159812 Read Count: 6189
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2010 Updated: 26 Apr 2012
Reviewer: MortalTwilight23 Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: SEA

Absolutely love this story. It extremely cute and follows how a newly wed couple would be. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella's life was irrevocably changed by the vampires who left her behind. Alone in the world now, she finds herself drawn to another. Fighting for her life has changed her and now, the new family she has found will change her as well...


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125187 Read Count: 71713
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: MortalTwilight23 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Absolutely love this story. I'm all for the Peter/Bella pairing.  I like what you've done with Bella's power.  That it slowly started to build the more venom she received from vampires.  I really like that Garrett is a main character in this.  He is rarely in stories.  Hope he finds his mate. Can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks for writing!