Well, Jacob seems contrite enough, but will he really stop when she needs him to?

Look at Jacob counting his blessings. Good for him! Can he repair all the damage Edward inflicted on Bella before someone returns to take it all back?

I wonder what caused the blackout in Forks...

Bella is no where near ready for sex with anyone! So, I think you're doing the right thing.

The dual POV isn't adding that much added information in every chapter and some parts just feel repeated.

I wonder if Rachel already gave it up to Paul and that's why she's pissy about Bella.

It's funny how Sam is done talking to Jacob about Bella.

Jacob is pretty irreverent about Charlie's presence and isn't even considering the possibility that it's uncofortable for Bella. This is just another example of his immaturity.

Rachel's quite a bitch. What exactly is her problem with Bella. Is it some pale face predjudice?

It's nice to see Jacob actually soothing her insecurities properly. He shouldn't have to deal with all this, but he knew what he's getting into with Bella.

Jacob seems a bit more in control of himself.

Leah is strong. I never understood why Leah turned, but neither of Jake's sisters did. If it all about the blood lines...

I'm liking Leah more and Embry is just hilarious!

Time to get it on in the parking lot...

I think Charlie would be a bit more articulate than that and Jacob really needs to have some respect. No matter strong he is, Charlie is Bella's father, the Chief of Police and his father's best friend. Those are several reasons to be more respectful - Edward would never have been so rude.

The silver figure would be a vamp, but not Victoria. Edward or Emmett? The fire, I have no idea.

The fire are a distraction so they could raid Bella's house to get her scent. That defnitely matches the timeline.

Is this how Edward comes back? If he's monitoring the news he might see the signs of the newborns in Seattle or the fires in Forks...

It's nice that Rachel seems to be coming around a bit.

I was totally holding out for it and you are so right in that it was clear from the summary and your other stories that the focus would be the JxB relationship.

What interested me about the story was that you went through the effort of really establishing the BxJ properly and then seeing how Edward dealt with that on his return to beg Bella for another chance. I totally understood that entailed going through Bella and Jacob exploring things together emotionally, physically and socially, but didn't think that was the main focus of the story.

I think your writing is good, but you could cut out a lot of repeat in the duplicate POVs. Maybe on JPOV skim his thoughts on what happened when he and Bella were together and go into detail where he was somewhere else (like wolf time).

The bottom line is that is took me forever to realize this really is a Bella/Jacob story, though I knew that, I was looking forward to the conflict when Edward arrives. When Alice and Emmett showed up before Edward, that was really when I just stopped. I really am Team Edward and, clearly, a masochist to subject myself to something I should have known would be unsatisfying. My bad - not yours at all, clearly.

Side note: I do love what you've done with teh series in its structure and side POVs. I really enjoyed how you were capturing the various perspectives and while the story focused on two characters in particular, you told the story in the larger context as well. I especially liked Angela's and Embry's POVs, because they have the voice of Bella and Jacob, respectively, without the emotion drama, so it focuses on the fun of the situation.

Wow, these are some seriously deluded teens! I hope we get to check in with Angela every now and then. This was hilarious!

Oh Charlie, your little girl is all grown up!

So glad to see these two again! Can't wait to see how the scene goes down.

I hope Edward decides to travel with Bella for the long tours. The sex was hot, but of course, I want more.