Reviews by Momma Laura 517
Summary: Past Featured Story

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I was having a really bad day. Boys are persistent, and Edward Cullen is laughing at me. A little daydreaming never hurt anybody. AU BPOV


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 192783 Read Count: 72371
[Report This] Published: 29 Dec 2013 Updated: 03 Sep 2018
Reviewer: Momma Laura 517 Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~ Daydreaming

I am really loving this story - I came across it just yesterday and have caught up to the last chapter now. If you ever go back and edit, I have a suggestion - and I mean nothing mean about this - the term Alice uses in one of the last chapters - she says Edward was humming and hawing - it's hemming and hawing. Doesn't change the awesome feeling I have for the story - it's one of the best plot lines I've read in ages. I love this stronger Bella and this less controlling Edward. This works much better for the story!

Reviewer: Momma Laura 517 Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~ Daydreaming

I am really loving this story - I came across it just yesterday and have caught up to the last chapter now. If you ever go back and edit, I have a suggestion - and I mean nothing mean about this - the term Alice uses in one of the last chapters - she says Edward was humming and hawing - it's hemming and hawing. Doesn't change the awesome feeling I have for the story - it's one of the best plot lines I've read in ages. I love this stronger Bella and this less controlling Edward. This works much better for the story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. We actually googled this phrase as we were writing it, and it told us "humming and hawing", even though we'd both heard and seen it phrased differently. We will go in and change this. Thank you again.

The Collection by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 365]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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In Volterra, the Crown Prince chooses his future queen from the Collection. 35 young women from every province of the country, open to members of all castes, given the opportunity to be the newest chapter in the country's fairy tale. But Isabella Swan didn't want to be part of the Collection, all she wanted was to love a boy and have him love her in return. And Edward Masen was not that boy.

 

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The Collection: A Twilight/The Selection Crossover

For those of you who have read The Selection Series, you will recognize the world of this story and some of the character types, but most of the plot will blend elements of the two series with original ideas, so it won't simply be The Selection plot with Edward and Bella. There will be things that will completely take you by surprise, I hope, and keep you entertained. This idea overtook me while reading the last book, which is the first time a series has done this since Twilight, so I wanted to play with it. Also, it felt right to post this the day before my 9th anniversary in fanfic. Thank you to all my readers, new and old, and my team, past and present, for sticking with me on this journey. 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed, Wanna read
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118372 Read Count: 63740
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2018 Updated: 17 Jun 2020
Reviewer: Momma Laura 517 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Wow - definitely a plot I've never seen before, and I'm really liking this so far - great job!

Reviewer: Momma Laura 517 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Aha! She finally admits it to him and herself! Good for her -