Reviews by MellyJo89
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625045
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: MellyJo89 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

ok so i've followed the story since it was back on FF and I must say that i became a bit impatient an just decided to come back when i knew you had finished it and i'm quiet happy i waited because honestly i'm about to crawl up a wall if i had to wait to read the next chapter you'd probably find me rocking in a corner going but...but...but...

so i've said before that i hate this Carlisle because he is one of my favorites from the books, but other than name and occupation there isn't anything that makes the two men the same so i'm over that one and so hoping that there is an olander flower or a hemlock tree that esme has so that she can poison the lot of them!

and edward he could just tell her that they need to pretend you know like the other boys did. surely that would work. of course when he finds out that carlisle wants to "share" bella with him then he'll be the one committing murder. of course esme would probably say that she did it.

think i'm gonna shut up now and just read the rest.  

Reviewer: MellyJo89 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

ok so now i'm better and now we will find out whats in the garden. "ahhh" my very carthartic sigh) and now on to the next. (

Reviewer: MellyJo89 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

who else could it be? Jake maybe its Jake?!

i could just hit next and find out but i feel like amusing u!

Reviewer: MellyJo89 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

wow, yeah, thought i might puke there at the begining but glad to see that the monster was vanquished. i liked the line "evil is easier to believe when its ugly" its so very true and not just for this story but for life we don't want to believe that the all american boy next door really beats his high school sweet heart wife when no one looks or that the kindly neighbor is really a peodophile evil is so much simpler if its the scary homeless guy. or better yet if like in the old western the bad guys just wore black hats.

the chapter ended nicely Carlisle deservered far worse he got to be the hero at least to the outside world. But at least he's fertilizer now, or is he? wouldn't he have wanted at least some part of his ashes to be left with renea a sort of heathclif and Catherine HEA in his sick twisted mind?

hopefully edward has heard the saying if you love some one let them go if they don't return they were never yours. She'll come back she just needs to spread her wings.

 

Reviewer: MellyJo89 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

ok so that was nice though i don't think we needed the suspense that it was edward because well duh, but anyway its nice to see that everyone is doing well. wonder what charlisle would think about his house becoming a domestic abuse shelter? (Smiles evily)

Think satan told him?

He brought her flowers awe how sweet!

Reviewer: MellyJo89 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

great ending really just great!

it took a while for us to get here, but well worth it!

Summary:

After a bad break-up, Rose and Alice take Bella out to find her someone to have a little “fun” with so they head to La Push, a local college hangout, where she meets a certain 17 year-old looking guy with green eyes and sex hair. OOC. First chapter written for the NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-Shot Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38182 Read Count: 23676
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2010
Reviewer: MellyJo89 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Perfect Gift

wow, that was so sweet. i still haven't figured out how to get alerts from this site so i got all three updates in one and am blown away i love the preggo shirts and will be sad to see them go! i love seeing proudpapaward so looking forward to see baby billie go home.



Author's Response:

what you have to do is fave each story you want to be emailed about and then make sure you selected email alerts in your account info.  I love proudpapaward too!  Baby billie is on her way home~

Living Free by loss4words Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella lives a plain life, devoted to family and the Ordnung. She never thought that there could be anything, or anyone, that could ever make her want to leave everything she knew and loved, behind. Will the stranger she meets help her change her mind?

Thank you to nicwise for the lovely banner!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22401 Read Count: 1374
[Report This] Published: 11 Aug 2010 Updated: 11 Aug 2010
Reviewer: MellyJo89 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: A Decision Made

That was great read it all in one sitting so i didn't review each chapter but it was wonderful. my only compliant is i want more, which really isn't much of a complaint cause a good story should always leave you wanting more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I truly enjoyed writing this story and I do have some ideas if I decide to carry it out later on.  I have a million things I'm working on, but I am thinking of continuing it.  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :)