Penname: lahragal [Contact] Real name: Laura
Member Since: 12 Mar 2010
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Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 363239
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans

I have rather enjoyed reading this story. You attempt at 3rd person is definately getting better but often times gets slightly confusing. I am sure this may be readers fault (haha) and not always author.

I look forward to reading more of this story as well as your others. I would like to ask if you will be transfering these stories to twilighted.net as well.

thanks!



Author's Response:

I don't think so.  I don't like the validation process.  It just takes too long and depending on the Jr. Validation beta you get, it can be very daunting.  The one I had for FDKK was awesome, but not all are as awesome as Sassenach Wench.  Anyway, I seriously doubt I will go through the trouble.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War

Oh, the drama of England! This is a fantastic story and I look forward to reading it everytime I get a notice in my inbox. Keep up the amazing work.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: A Snake Hiding in the Garden

Love it!!!

It is time for Bella to show how fierce she truly is and being a royal and future Queen.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown

Sofia and Henry are great names with history and strength.

Love this story!!!

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

Such a beautiful ending. It couldn't have been more perfect.

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 246]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar

Bella Swan opens a bookstore in Port Angeles, which happens to be located right next to the
music store owned by a young man named Edward Cullen. Watch as they meet and form a relationship.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167136 Read Count: 81480
[Report This] Published: 27 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2011
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Loved it and the fact that they finally had the piano in the background was wonderful. Glad to know that the muse has returned so that we can have more of our favorite music & book store owners.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner for Book 4

Breaking Dawn from Renesmee's Point of View. Starting just before Edward 'hears' her for the first time.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Renesmee/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63938 Read Count: 3948
[Report This] Published: 10 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2010
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue

This was wonderful. I always wondered what it would be like from this POV. Thanks for sharing.

Summary:

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bella is a naive girl. she thinks nothing can happen to her, she thinks she will find the perfect man, have an okay job, struggle alittle, than have kids and settle down.

how wrong she was. she meets this boy who is perfect, or so she thinks. one thing leads to another and bella is stuck in a world she can not nor ever get out of. she tries but in the end she is always for ever his.

nc-17 for rape, lemons, killing, drugs,etc.

warning: dark edward and sexual abuse

Hey everyone so my story has been reported for all the lemons sexual abuse drugs and rape. Even though it states these things in the warning and is in the nc-17 category. I have not violated any rules and my stories are not as graphic as many are on this website. So if this story is deleted you know why.  Sorry to all those enjoying it and wanting more, I apologize for this one persons actions in advance. If you want to know who reported this story just look in the reviews and you will see! 

-Love Sinister :D

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49477 Read Count: 48731
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2018
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: reversed

This has definitely had its cringe worthy moments but ala in all it has been really good. It read quickly and time progressed quickly as well. Looking forward to the newest interaction between the NEW Bella and Edward when he finds out that she now has all of her children back and intends to kill him.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4234]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1222155
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Loved it but definitely ready for the story line to continue. Ready for them to start solving some of the problems that keep cropping up in their daily lives. I cannot wait to ready how Alice handles the whole situation or how Esme will handle the fact that her daughter is now acting and treating others just as she has treated Jane.

Much love to you for the large chapter and your mental stability after living in the playroom for that long.

Diamond Extra's by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 265]
Summary:

These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 39148
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Alice in her own Wonderland

This better explains her reasoning but I see this causing a slew of other problems down the road. I agree that this is a more intense version of SM's Alice and see a blow up/out occurring with Alice and Bella.

Looking forward to the next regular chapter update. Thanks for everything you are doing while writing this story.

The Vineyard by EricaNoelle180 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 512]
Summary: Past Featured Story

France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 45803
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2011
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Loving the fact that Bella is a "spit fire" ready to go off anyone close enough. The pregnancy will be interesting. I am so looking forward to reading more of this story and to seeing an explosion between Bella and Alice. It will be beneficial to Alice for Bella to let her know how things go.

Keep up the great writing and I am definately looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

I mean wow! Carmen really wanted to bring this to a head and I can only dream of what Edward will think once he gets a look at all three together in the same room.

Just wow and ready for the next update!

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Epilogue

Truly enjoyed the story and often wondered how it would end. It was a beautiful ending to a wonderful story of how Edward lived his life with his Bella.

Across the Hall by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 486]
Summary:

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Edward Cullen was in a marriage that was doomed from the start. Having been overseas when his wife left him, he's now coming home to Washington newly single and ready to reclaim his life.

Bella Swan was married right out of college only to find out that he was a cheater, a liar and an abuser. After escaping the marriage, she's moved back to Washington to the safety of family and new friends.

Will sparks fly when she moves across the hall from a mysteriously handsome and newly single neighbor?

*Rated for strong language and lemons*           Banner made by: Kiwibeme


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74537 Read Count: 92034
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17 May 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Truly enjoyed the entire story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 58340
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2012
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Strength

Love this story and the absolute strength that so many have when they are fully challenged in life. I truly believe that circumstances do not define us it is our responses to them that do.

Beautiful story!



Author's Response:

one of my best reviews yet:) thankyou so much and i agree with you 100%

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings

Love this story and the name that you picked out is absolutely beautiful.



Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 full circle

Sad to see it end but really loved this story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When single Mom, Bella, opted to drive her children to Colorado for their visitation with their father, she never dreamed she would find something unexpected while stranded in a winter storm.  Can Edward heal Bella’s wounds and restore her faith in men, love, and herself?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44043 Read Count: 28537
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2010 Updated: 31 Dec 2010
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I am so glad she unknowingly admitted her "already falling for him" moment. THis will definately be a beautiful relationship once they find their stride.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like the beginning and you now have my attention wondering how everything else will fall into place. Keep up the great writing and enjoy the holidays.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loving this story and the progression is wonderful. Keep up the great writing.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I fall in love with this story everytime I get an update. This is a beautiful story. Thank you for so many updates before Christmas and I look forward to reading the rest after the holidays. Enjoy your time with family and friends.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Even with the minimal misstakes, it was BEAUTIFUL!!!

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

BEAUTIFUL!! It was about time they had some alone lemon time. And about time Bella realized her home had moved on her due to love. Really enjoy reading this story with every update.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Such a beautiful story. The growth in their emotions is natural. I know that when love hits it really does, some of us are lucky enough to know from the very beginning. I have always enjoyed reading your stories. Enjoy the start to the New Year as well as the ending of an old. Keep coming up with great ideas for stories.

Witch Way by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 188]
Summary:

I was a normal girl, living a normal life. Never did I expect to thrust into a world where the supernatural ruled. Vampires, Demons, Werewolves and Witches? ExB, AU

 

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Witch Way

 

Thank you, Sephrenia for the beautiful banner!!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 136619 Read Count: 77963
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2014
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue

Such a great story and looking forward to reading a few more of yours.

In the Wings by SaritaDreaming Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Bella is a disillusioned cheerleader who jumps off a cliff into the churning water below and gets more than she bargained for when she's saved by the man who's been waiting in the wings. Popularity doesn't always equal happiness. AH, Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7440 Read Count: 1439
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2011 Updated: 24 Jun 2011
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: In the Wings: a One-Shot

Beautiful and wonderful. If only we knew that high school was not the highlight of our lives during those 4 years so many of us would have survived it better and succeeded better as well.

Summary:

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BANNER BY THE INCREDIBLE READERGOOF!!!

Bella needed to change it up. Moving to Savannah for a year after graduating from UGA seemed like a good plan. However, bills needed to be paid, and money was tight. Unfortunately, her playboy boss, Edward, doesn’t make her nights easy. After reconnecting with old friends, a pattern of miscommunication about engagements and one night stands, and a stalker dead set on keeping the pair apart, Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together in a whirlwind of events that will shape both of their lives in ways they never imagined. It's gonna get hot in the South!

Set in Savannah, Georgia. OOC, AU-AH. Canon couples. Lots of lemons...it's rated NC-17 for a reason.  Some violence, though not much.  The devil went down to Georgia...you wanna go? 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189712 Read Count: 71800
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2011 Updated: 05 Feb 2012
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Epilogue

Loved the whole story!

Summary:

Bella is a Master's student who is forced to take a freshman class because her counselor "forgot" to make sure she took it. Edward is a last minute teacher added to the class Bella needs to take. The relationship between the two quickly transform to something more than just teacher and student. Photobucket 23-1 Backgrounds_zpsb05b9cc0


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55188 Read Count: 48800
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2011 Updated: 16 Apr 2017
Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

This is absolutely hilarious. I love that you just went with it and the humor is perfect. I can actually see this happening to a family and it really being disturbing for the men when they finally figure it out.

Love it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Bella became a police officer against Charlie's wishes, he forbids any of the male officers from dating her. Will he ever forgive her and accept her as a police officer ? And will he accept it when she meets the man of her dreams, Sargent Edward Cullen.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11758 Read Count: 2342
[Report This] Published: 15 Jul 2011 Updated: 15 Jul 2011
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved the story. It was beautiful to be simply put.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed their story. 

 

EA

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by JaimeArkin

How long can you lust after your best friend's brother before you give up hope? How do you reconcile an attraction for someone you've thought of as a little sister? How long can two people dance around their feelings before they dance together? E/B AH Banner by JaimeArikin.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Kit's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80259 Read Count: 55391
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2011 Updated: 24 Nov 2011
Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: Forever Young

This was a beautiful story and I loved every chapter. The change in the POV was a wonderful unexpected change. It was truly a wonderful story to get lost in.

Summary: Past Featured Story

One summer, an internship in Africa, bloodlust, sharp teeth, and a boatload of fear are all that stand in the way of Bella Cullen landing a job at the Atlanta Aquarium - As long as she doesn't count cocky shark expert Edward Masen on her list.

 



Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 705146 Read Count: 162125
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2016
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 58: 58 I Do Times Two

Loved the whole story but especially how it all ended 



Author's Response:

We thank you! :)

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 35: 35 Little Sister, Big Annoyance

Loved it. It truly can be empowering to admit certain things to a sibling that has been bothering you. So glad to see Bella is getting some of the things off her chest and then letting them slid right off her shoulders. Loved the Edward and Esme moment.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 55: 55 Secrets & Societies

Hope you had a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. My NYE was complete with this update, a night home with family and Alabama beating Michigan State. Love the update and how the secrets keep building. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 23: 23 Knock Down Drag Out

Such a great chapter. It's sad that it usually takes something "big" to get guys to reconize their true feelings. Looking forward to the crazy that is coming with Alice and Carlisle coming to the house. Also wondering if Bella heard any of the conversations that were happening around her.

thanks for creating. This wonderful story and sharing with the rest of us.



Author's Response:

It is sad but it's definitley one of those truths of life we can rarely avoid.  There will be plenty of crazy with Alice and Carlisle being added to the group. LOL  Nope, Bella was far too out of it to hear any of the conversations in this chapter. But she's going to hear one soon that will change some things ;)

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 40: 40 Doubt vs Desire

He just has to stop getting so lost in his own head but then again Bella needs to let him know where she's at in her thoughts of the future as well. Communication is always the key and they are unintentionally keeping the other out.



Author's Response:

This is true; communication is the root and the water of a lasting relationship. We're going to start seeing a lot of talk about the future in the coming chapters while they move closer to each other and the end of summer.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 44: 44 In Tandem

Damn good chapter. I was great to see another update. These long chapters must take it out of you plus having RL beating down on you. I love the story as well as these characters. Really enjoyed Lee's POV for a short period. I would love to get Emmett's POV especially on the skiv when they go 2 teams. That would really bring iin a new dimension of how Whit and Masen work together.

thanks for writing and sharing



Author's Response:

Oh what a great idea! Show Gopher's view on his team and friends. We'll look into that!

Yeah, RL has not been cooperating with our posting schedule and it's drives us crazy! More than usual! LOL

Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 19: 19 Diving Deep

Damn good story and this was one of the best chapters to date. Loved their emotional struggles to not only understand the other but their own as well. Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you! We appreciate hearing you enjoyed so much.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 24: 24 Band Together

Loved it! So much revealed and so much presented. Each character revealed more of themselves. Now we just need to Bella and Edward to admit their love to one another.



Author's Response:

Love? Who said anything about love? LOL  Patience! It's nearly here.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 31: 31 Rewards of Trusting

Growth in all the characters but I am feeling some rough waters coming up soon when it comes to Alice. Especially when Whit tells her his story. Loved the up date.



Author's Response:

Alice has a long road ahead of her for sure!

Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 29: 29 Reunited

I cannot remember if Edwards distrust has already been discussed. I am glad that he opened up and can only hope that it continues. Love the story and truly excited to read the update.



Author's Response:

According to him, he doesn't have any distrust. LOL  But we'll see what Bella has to say about that in the next chapter.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 33: 33 Thumper Owns All Horns

Loved this chapter and was excited to see the story update before the holidays. Wishing you and yours a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. Enjoy your time with family and be safe.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Hope your holidays were wonderful. Ours was pretty darn great and we are excited for all the things we have on tap for this new year, like new chapters of BTS!

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 38: 38 Confession & Contrition

Wow, just wow. This chapter has so much i am unsure of where to begin. I loved Edwards speech to Alice and how her comments affected him. Alice is an idiot if she truly believed that her comments didn't hurt him. Well the next phase will be interesting especially when Bella attempts to convince Edward she is not meant for ATL anymore but with the team in HI and the world.



Author's Response:

There was definitely a lot going on and everything that has happened here will affect all of their futures - some just realize it way more than others.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 34: 34 What Do I Stand For

So much has happened and yet we were just getting to the end of a day. Oh Alice, needs to her head on straight and out of her emotional torcher. I am absolutely giddy with the progression for Bella and Edward professionally and personally. So excited for the next chapter.

thanks for sharing your story with us.



Author's Response:

Giddy! That's a great adjective for how it feels to watch E&B progress! :)

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 36: 36 Mermaids & Moonlight Kisses

Amazing, just simply amazing. I literally want to ring Alice's neck but I will wait for you to present her reasoning on sabotage not only for her sister but for Whit too. 

Loved the update and congrats on getting the computer(s) back.



Author's Response:

There were moments I wanted to ring her neck too! I think there's a long line actually. LOL

 

Yes! Having the computer back is amazing! Especially the getting to work part!

Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 37: 37 Tsunami of Emotion

Well, damn. So much has happened. Alice is a real head case that gets more complicated with each chapter. The dive scene was just beautiful and perfect for the 3 of them.

already excited for the next chapter and the outcome of Alice's fitful sleep.



Author's Response:

We had so much fine writing the dive and researching which animals they might come across. It was great to have Bella take that next big step in her career.

 

Alice's fitful sleep will hopefully lead to the hard choices she needs to make and the fixes she needs to employ.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 15 May 2014 Title: Chapter 39: 39 Trapped In A Rip Tide

Wow, it is amazing how pain and meds can alter ones perception of a situation and creat larger problems. Loved this chapter.



Author's Response:

The pain definitely kept him from realizing the underlying anger he was feeling at having his work stopped. And Bella standing strong and taking zero percent of his behavior helped him to just stop being so sure of himself and really look at what had happened and why it had happened. He's learning and that's a great sign for both of them.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 41: 41 End of the Line

Oh, my...they finally did all the heavy duty talking and had some good ole loving. So excited to see their progression and growing up. Loved it!

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 45: 45 Decisions Are Made

Finally got to sit down and read this chapter. So much has happened and I am just giddy with how it ended. Can we expect just a few more chapters until the end? I love haw Bella is continually growing and made the suggestion on a 2 team search. I liked how Edward added the beach search for what Bella proposed as the penguin killer. Looking forward to the next update. 

Happy Thanksgiving if your celebrating.



Author's Response:

We definitely have more chapters. We have some more surprises and decisions on the way for all of our characters.

Thank you! We both had very good Thanksgivings and we hope you did too.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 47: 47 Say Cheese

I finally made it around to reading. These last 2 months RL has been a bitch. I gotta say I got really giddy when I realized we were preparing for the cage dive. It was an amazing chapter. So much going on but I loved the sneak attack by the parents and the dive itself. I am looking forward to the viewing of the footage from the 3 shark dive.

thanks for writing and sharing this story with the rest of us. and, allowing us to escape from our real world and into your imaginations.



Author's Response:

Awe! We are happy to pull you into our heads for a bit and away from the craze of the real world. :)

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 48: 48 The Iceman Cometh

I loved that it was unconventional but it was also very much Edward and Bella.



Author's Response:

Woot!

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 56: 56 A Fighter and A Queen

I loved all the girly wedding stuff but the best part was reading how they worked together in saving the great white. She was able to hold back her emotions and do the job that was needed. It was beautiful how she has finally come full circle in succeeding.



Author's Response:

Watching Masen and Guppy work together and save that shark was so satisfying and rewarding -- all the hard work they've both put into helping her overcome what was once a debiliating fear, it's just so awesome and beautiful :)

Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 57: 57 California Dreamin

It was really beautiful to see the building relationship between Edward and the new sister, Carly. Thanks for updating and sharing with the rest of us.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading & reviewing :)

Summary:

Bella and Edward dated in high school When a tragedy occurs she is forced to move away from Forks. Six years later another tragedy occurs, but this time it brings her back to Forks. What happens when she spends Christmas Eve with the Cullens and she comes face to face with Edward for the first time since she broke his heart six years earlier.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74931 Read Count: 8021
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2012
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Such a great chapter of the two becoming one. I will join the "Let's Kill Renee" cause with the other readers. Looking forward to reading how it will continue to play out.

Happy Holidays!



Author's Response:

HI, there is a long line ing the "Lets kill Renee" brigade. One of my readers actually suggested I erase her from the stroy and make it as if she never existed. Pretty good punishment if ya ask me.  Thanks so much for reading. Chapter 5 will post on Friday. Until then here is a teaser to get ya by.  EA

 

It had completely baffled and amazed me how fast Alice, Esme, Rose and I had been able to pull together all the details for my and Edward’s wedding. It had only taken us three weeks to pull it all together. 

Our first task had been to reserve the View Point Inn and the second had been to find my dress. Alice had said that once those two things were accomplished the rest would fall into place. Of course she had been right and after scouring several online sites, looking through every page of every Bride’s magazine Alice could get her hands on and spending a weekend in Seattle combing every bridal shop there was, we had done it. I had my dress and had known it was the one the instant I’d seen it.

There had been a few bittersweet moments along the way though. We had all gone to Seattle on the excursion to find my gown and the bridesmaid dresses. While Alice, Rose, Esme and me had gone shopping for the gowns, the men had gotten fitted for their tuxes and had gone to the college football game at U-Dub.  But when Alice and Esme talked about some of the experiences they’d had while shopping for Alice’s wedding gown, I couldn’t help wishing things were different between my mother and me. I couldn’t help thinking that she should be there with me, helping me choose my dress and taking part in all of the planning of my wedding.  And I couldn’t help but wish that I could at least know that she was happy for Edward and me.

For the most part I had not let what she’d done interfere at all in my life. I was so very, very happy with Edward and I loved him so much.

However there were just times like now, when I was contemplating on whether or not I should send her an invitation that I couldn’t deny how much it hurt. She was my mother and was supposed to be happy for me.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Epilogue

This was a great ending to a beautiful story. Looking forward to the new story as well.



Author's Response:

Hi, sorry it has taken me so long to get this reply out to you. Real life got real crazy there for a bit. I am so happy you enjoyed the ending of the  story. Thanks for reading and reviewing and I would love to hear from you in a few weeks when my new story begins to post. You can check out the summary below.

Until then take care and happy reading,

EA

Title: Somewhere I Belong


Summary: Born to parents living a rich and glamorous lifestyle, Bella had never felt as if she belonged in their world where life often felt fake and pretentious. Wanting more out of life and wanting to make a worthwhile difference, Bella assumes a fake identity and heads off to spend her last summer before college doing something real and meaningful. Her journey starts with meeting a handsome stranger, raised to help those in need—and to detest the rich.
1hr 33mins ago

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am truly loving this story. I am curious as to whether this will a short story or not? The mistakes of our past often lead us astray but the love from the one we are truly meant to be with will bring us back.

Happy Holidays!



Author's Response:

HI, I am so glad you are enjoying the story. Yes our mistakes often lead us astrqay, but hopefully we learn from them and it's too late to right them. Yes this will be a short story. It's completely written and I will post once a week until the end which will be 8 chapters.I do have alonger  full length fic in the works and how to start posting it once this one is finished.

 

Thanks so much for reading,chapter 3 will post later today.

EA

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This was a fantastic chapter. I really liked how everything was explained in the section told by Renee. I still do not like her but I understand her better now that she ran the gamit of emotions and really opened herself up again. Loved the new bond between Bella and Rose. With them both marring into the family they along with Jasper will have a better understanding of being "let into" the Cullen bonds/family.

Hope you had a wonderful Christmas and that you are excited about NYE and the approach for another start in the new year.



Author's Response:

Hi, I am glad you liked the chapter. I was a little worried about how everyone would take Renee's changes, but I am happy to see that everyone was agreeable with it. I had toyed with the idea of not having them work out their differences, but then also thought about the fact that Renee is the only living parent Bella has and that if she truly changed that Bella would welcome her back into her life once she was certain that Renee was being sincere. I also thought about having Edward and Bella walk down the aisle together since Charlie isn't there or having her go alone, but neither of those ideas felt right and Carlisle doing it did since him and Esme had always been like a second set of parents to Bella.

 

Thanks so much for reading, chapter 6 will post tomorrow. Hope you are ready for some Bachelor and Bachelorette party fun.

 

EA

 

Here is a teaser for you to enjoy :)

 

Bella walked over to Jasper after we greeted my parents. She poked him in the chest and said, “You see that overgrown gorilla over there?” She removed her finger from his chest and pointed it at Emmett.

 

“Yes ma’am,” he replied.

 

“While completely cute and loveable—”

 

“That’s me,” my brother interjected proudly.

 

Bella shook her head and rolled her eyes at him and then continued, “He is trouble with a capital ‘T’. You are Edward’s best man correct?”

 

Jasper nodded not quite sure what my lovely fiancée was getting at, but certain he was probably much better off to agree with her than not to.

 

“That means you are responsible for him. To make sure he doesn’t get in any kind of trouble tonight because of that one over there.” She pointed at Emmett again while the rest of us struggled to keep from laughing at the surprised look on my brother’s face. Bella then looked back at Jasper and continued. “That also means I am holding you responsible for making sure Edward comes back to me with not a hair on his head injured. I’m putting my trust in you as his best friend and as his best man. I am holding you personally responsible for him tonight. Think you can handle that?”

 

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 212225
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...

I absolutely fell in love with this story. I will admit that the first two chapters were rough for me to get into but after that I could not put this story down. Thanks for sharing all your wonderful thoughts with us.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 252688
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: A Sketching Surprise

I am assuming that Sue was really Edwards mother. That is all I can come up with due to age differences. Truly enjoying the story and how both E/B have slowly come out of their Cimmerian ways. Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks again for the outstanding and wonderful reviews!  We are so excited and happy to have you all on board with us for this journey and we sure hope that you all continue to love and praise the story the way that you do.  I know that you all learned some rather interesting pieces of information in the puzzle we call His Cimmerian View.  I bet a lot of you have more questions than you are asking.  But to answer a few of the questions that don’t take away from future story line here you go.  Yes it is possible that Tanya and Sue are the one in the same, but do remember that Tanya Denali was positively identified by dental records.  Some are asking if Sue could be Edward’s long lost mother... I guess that is a thought, but the age thing would be difficult to swallow.   Sue could very well be masquerading as Bella and trying to get her hands on the money that has been left to her both from her mother’s Estate and her grandfather’s.  Wow more of you seem to be worried about who might have their hand on Edward’s shoulder than much else, so I will relive you of that stress, it is in fact Carlisle.  Between this chapter and the BPOV on EHCV we have had many question how Harry/James could have gotten into Bella’s apartment after Aro did all the security measures, and I assure you that his ability to get into the apartment will be answered, just have faith in us, and you will see.  Lots of new things will come out in the next chapter as well and unfortunately you are all going to hate us, because it will be ending in a cliffhanger as well.  In the next chapter we will get to see Edward come face to face with Harry though... insert evil laugh... but at least I am showing you the teaser from that meeting!  I am excited about the ending of the story; however we will not update any faster than we currently are.  I am working on chapter 28 and Nikky is on chapter 29.  At this rate we are going to be pushing to keep up with the schedule of posting each week.  No I am not saying we will not post, but I am saying we will at this point be sticking to the every Thursday posting.   If you haven’t yet, go check out Enduring His Cimmerian View... the Bella POV chapter is posted.  We will not be adding any chapters to EHCV, until we have the main story cracked out of HCV.  Thank you for being some of the best readers and reviewers out there and for loving this story we are sharing with you all.  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

Chapter 26 teaser...subject to changes during Beta process.
All of it; I mean, this mother fucker broke Seth’s arm.  I close my eyes, and when I open them again, I see nothing but him. Without even thinking about what I’m doing; I hit the fucker as hard as I can.  I just keep hitting him until I feel someone pull me back. With the rage still blinding me, I knock whoever it is off of me and hit Harry again. 

Suddenly, I feel a lot more people dragging me back. I feel a sting on my face, and I look around to see Aro shaking his head.  Garrett has his arms wrapped around my waist, Felix is holding my left arm, and Emmett is on my right; I have no clue when he got here. Standing right in front of me is Jane. 

“Jane, I don’t think you needed to slap him,” Aro says as he walks over to us.  That fucking bitch slapped me! 

“He was out of it, and it brought him back didn’t it?  Besides that, I get to do the beating up around here,” she huffs, walking away from me to bend down and look at Harry.  I look down as well, noticing that I knocked the fucker out. I can’t help but grin about it.  “Wipe that look off your face! You broke some of his ribs and his nose; that’s my job, Assward!”  Jane jumps up and walks over to her bag. She brings out some jars and sets them in a line on the desk.

“Eh...what the hell is in those jars?” Emmett asks as he gives me a look to ask if I’m alright.  I nod and the three of them release me.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: The Faith Within

Great chapter and hers to hoping Jane gets a little time with Sue while Emmett helps her out later.



Author's Response:

Well it seems that most everyone is happy that Sue is caught, but many of you are unhappy that she wasn’t tortured first by our dear Jane.  No worries our little Jane will eventually be paying Sue a visit.  Many seem to be worried that Sue will escape or get away; well rest assured that we have no intent on letting that fruit-loop free.  She is toast.  It seems that less people are disgruntled by Bella being pregnant, now that chapter 30 posted.  As the next few chapters post, I am thinking most if not all people will understand why Jess told us it was the perfect fit.  Nikky and I have added to but not really changed much of the original story-line.  I love when you all make suggestions and we’ve already written it into the story.  The next chapter has a few suggestions in it, that oddly enough were written before they were suggested.  I know that some of you are sad that this will be coming to a close, but there will be MANY – MANY more out-takes to come.  We actually discussed some future plotting things today and have a whole other out-take to add to the Enduring His Cimmerian View, in Edward’s POV to boot.  A lot of you want a Jane’s POV and well we have decided that it will be the next one released, do I hear the cheering already?  Yep... pretty sure I do... LOL.  We really want to say THANK YOU again and again, for reading, reviewing and loving this story so much... it has become a HUGE part of our lives and we both put a lot of work into it, as well as the wonderful group of gal’s we have keeping us from looking stupid. 

Thank you, and we will see you with the next update.  Kasi (& Nikky)

 

Chapter 31 teaser, subject to changes during beta process.
Tomorrow we are scheduled to be in court.  Since it is the same day as my birthday, I have refused to do anything but celebrate us getting full custody of Seth and Leah.  I am thinking positive.  Bella has refused to let my twenty-ninth birthday go by without doing something.  Seth and Leah soon joined in and I lost the battle.  So tonight we are having a family dinner, and everyone is going to be here.  Bella decided that I should also receive my gifts tonight from everyone.

I watch her making sure everyone has drinks before she sits me in the middle of everyone.  Seth and Leah come up to me first.  Seth hands me small box, and Leah hands me two envelopes.  I open the envelopes first.  The first envelope contains a certificate for being the best dad, signed by both Seth and Leah.  The second envelope holds a homemade birthday card from them.  I whisper out an emotional thank you to them in their ears, before opening the box Seth gave me.

As I open the box, I see it’s a necklace.  It is platinum with dog-tag like disks of metal hanging from it.  The first tag says ‘Dad’.  I look at the next which says ‘Seth Masen’ on it as I turn it over I see the other side has his date of birth.  The next has ‘Leah Masen’ again the back has her date of birth.  The last tag is blank and I look up questioningly.

“It’s for when Bean’s born.”  I look up at Seth and Leah and pull them both in for a hug a kiss the heads.

“Thank you Little Man and Princess.” I watch them go back at sit down, after we share a few more hugs.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family

I cannot believe it has come to an end but it was a beautiful journey with you and your characters.

Thank you for taking the time to share them with the rest of us.



Author's Response:

This has been a fantastic journey and we are sad yet excited that we finally clicked completed.  Keep in mind to watch out for Enduring His Cimmerian View to update, there are a few of those yet to write and post.  There is not a real posting schedule for those, but they will be written. 

Nikky and I are writing a couple more stories at least together and we hope to see you checking them out too.  We have a stalker story coming soon, as well as a BDSM/Olderward story coming out.  We also have a pretty large one-shot that will post soon, that we wrote for the Forbidden Fruit contest.  We can’t tell you the name of it yet, but there are a TON of great stories entered in the contest.

I started posting the new story collaboration I am doing with Jess2002, it is called Bases Loaded and you can find it under the author name of JessAndTAT.

We again thank you all so much, Kasi (& Nikky)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

Banner by the lovely vbfb1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 212665
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Date Night

Enjoying the story and the Mystery POV truly has me stumped. I am looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 Abducted

I am still baffled by the Mystery POV but it is good to know that a pissed Edward will handle it all. I assume the unwanted/unknown voice is the voice of Bella's baby daddy but only your next post or two will be able to tell.

Summary: Past Featured Story



Edward Cullen, former Confederate soldier, begins a journey from his home in Tennessee, to that of his only living relative in Texas. Along the way, he meets a girl. He's running from the past. She's running from a future she doesn't want. drabble-ish

Thanks very much to Cared for the beautiful banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 80 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75743 Read Count: 119638
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2012 Updated: 28 Feb 2013
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Epilogue 2

This was a beautiful story from start to finish. I just loved Jack and his sense of complete understanding.

beautiful, just beautiful.



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421000
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I have enjoyed the crazy of this story. Looking forward to reading how Alice explains it all and how this all plays out.

Summary:

Bella is working for a catering and event planning company. She has just about pulled off the reception of the year when she's introduced to Edward Cullen, mafia boss. Can he show her that even bad guys can be good


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30285 Read Count: 20378
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 09 Jun 2012
Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Loving this story and looking forward to how it will all play out.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is a choral director, reeling from his recent divorce from his wife, Jessica. His world is filled with his daughter, Emma, his music and his job. Bella is an English teacher, running from her past and wary of love. ExB, AH, AU

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Shena's Storys to Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 252329 Read Count: 122531
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

This was fantastic and made them all realize that "the norm" has been altered. I wish my hubby would figure this out. Would love for them to have a girl, let Bella keep her Mattie as the only boy. I believe Edward would be the manliest of men if he was surrounded by girlie stuff.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Let it be a girl. Names: Evangeline ( means good news), Layla (means dark beauty) or Vivian (means alive).

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Beautiful!

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Perfect ending for them. I died laughing about the comment about the youngest pooping and wanting to have the picture showed to the parent. Mine asked the same thing several months back and all I could do was say maybe next time.

Thanks for sharing Your wonderful imagination.

Figure Eight by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a nationally ranked paired skater with Jacob Black. Edward Masen is beautiful British skater paired with Tanya. However, both of their partners fall into hard times. These two try to navigate their way through life, both on and off the ice.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 235336 Read Count: 140378
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 11 Aug 2012
Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue

Wonderful story! I loved every chapter as well as the love between the characters.

Mafia Bargains by Joce_Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 206]
Summary:

Traded like livestock, treated like trash, all by her own aunt and uncle. When she's put up as collateral, does Bella find what she's always needed in a man from the underworld? BxE Mafia AH/AU OOC Rated M just in case OS or continue? Please tell me what you think.stories/12096/images/Mafia_Bargains.jpg

***I am so sorry, I forgot your name, would the maker of this banner please contact me so I can give you the credit***


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 191091 Read Count: 57299
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 16 Aug 2013
Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This story is freaking amazing. I have absolutely have enjoyed it. I would love to beat several of them and kiss a several of the others. I do hope we get to have a few happy chapters where E & B get to spend time together. 

Looking forward to the chapter and where we all go from here.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Love Bella's revelations throughout the chapter and how well she is handling his need to touch as well. I am looking forward for those two to have some time where they can make more progress in their relationship. I would love to see Bella help the guys with more "research" as well. 

Love the story!!

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

So glad to see another chapter and that Bella made a great deal of progress in it as well. I cannot wait for the Cullen's to finally one up Black for the last time.

keep up the amazing work in your writing and enjoy the holidays.

Hot Bubblegum by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 655]
Summary:

Bella Swan rose to fame starring in the hit Disney Channel series 'Girl Next Door'. Now that she's finally legal, she's ready to lose the sweetheart image. What better way to start than to get a tattoo? E/B Olderward/Tattward - Drabblish 

 

Now available on Blogger - http://hotbubblegumfic.blogspot.com/

 

 

banner by FrozenSoldier

 

 

banner by SoapyMayhem


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45471 Read Count: 305891
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Loved the last two chapters updates and that you brought everything over to TWCS as well. 

Sorry to hear about your loved one passing and hope that everything has gotten back to as normal as they can at this time of loss. I do hate that " the haters" actually left mail for a few days late on an update but it truly riles me up when they have done it anonymously, that is the cowards way out. I truly believe that if you were that passionate to send the response, then you should tack your name onto it. I have only done that once and signed it. I still felt guilty afterwards b/c I dislike confrontations. Some people amaze me with their selfish stupidity. Sorry for the rant but I guess this carries over from the FF massacre that is happening.

Thank you for bringing your stories over to another site and continuing along. They are all just wonderfully fantastic. Much love to you for sharing your stories with the rest of us.

Design For Life by Tardis19 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 111]
Summary: Past Featured Story

He's a shy library clerk. She's an outspoken tattoo artist. They come from two different worlds, but they're both looking for the same thing. Can they survive the danger that is lurking nearby and have their happy ever after?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139486 Read Count: 58432
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 07 Jul 2012
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Jasper's Outtake

Enjoyed the whole story and loved the reversal of roles for Edward and Bella.

Summary:

Follow along as Sexy Geek Boy and Nerdella continue to grow as lovers and parents. Be aware, there is danger around the corner. What, you ask? Read and find out! ExB, AU/AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , A Nerd Story of Love Series
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161783 Read Count: 109653
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Aug 2012
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Forgive Me Brother, For I Have Sinned...

This was a tough but insightful Emmett. I am glad that both Bella and Edward got to finally have their say. Bring on happier times.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Happy Birthday!

This was a beautiful chapter and so happy Owen made it into the world with less drama.

Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 641439
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 30: Edward

These two are going to tear each others clothes off before they even say hi when they finally meet. Their chemistry is amazing which just tells me the two of you are perfect for writing a story like this. I love the story and get giddy when you update. 

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 38: Edward

I will take either elevator version with Sarge, just saying.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 54: Edward

They are definitely going to be having phone sex or Skype sex. They have been flirting, teasing and leading each other in that direction and I cannot wait to get to read it. It is time for them to make that progression. My, my you two girls are ready to get down and dirty with these two characters.

Love you guys for it!

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 58: Edward

Love having the multiple chapters and so excited for the boys to be stateside. So much trouble they could all get into.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 82: Edward

Yay...I cannot wait to read everyone's reaction to B/E first meeting. I am assuming that some major loving will be coming into play. Enjoy the weekend ladies.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 88: Edward

So damn beautiful and you could feel the tension melting away as their lips first touched. I am so looking forward to the second double day and the lemon. You girls are just too good to us. Love ya for it too!

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 112: Edward

Thanks for the amazing chapters and looking forward to the photos and how all of them will handle the last 3 months of being separated. 

Love you girls!

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 124: Edward

Loved it and looking forward to more. Thanks for the wonderful chapters and amazing story.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 134: Edward

Oh, to be his prisoner for a weekend.... I could really use that time right now. I would really want to be spending some time with Rob as well but I will take my time  with "my Rob".

Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 152: Edward

Definitely looking forward to the face to face meet/greet for Edward and Charlie.

Enjoy the weekend ladies!

Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 154: Edward

Loved how these two got back to the basics or their beginning. I am looking forward to the meet/greet that's coming up.

Have a lovely weekend!

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 171: Chapter 172: Edward

Good lord, girls. That proposal was too beautiful and irresistible. I loved it!

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 173: Chapter 174: Epilogue

The letters were the perfect ending to a truly wonderful story. You two can collaborate together any time.

MWAH... Thanks for sharing your love for Sarge and Bella.

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wisp

 

Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 218655
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I was thinking a baby doll but a kitten is even cuter. It is probably more realistic b/c it can respond back in its own way just like her. I am loving this story but wishing it would speed up so I can read more about her progress.



Author's Response:

Yeah, a doll just isn't the same as something alive that can respond. Thanks for the review! As far as the story speed, it's probably going to stay pretty slow, though I'm sure there will be some summary/jump cuts in the future.  Just FYI, with some slow fics I read, sometimes I like to save up chapters so I have five or so at a time. Then it doesn't seem so slow. ;-)

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

This was a beautiful chapter. I loved reading the progression that both women made in their short time together. I loved how one has helped the other with their own thoughts and questions whether it was purposely or not.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Take the time you need to get back into the story. Some people really piss me off that they cannot create on their own and have to twist others ideas into their own.

Bless you for having to deal with others stupidity.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Holy crap... They finally got a name. I am definitely looking forward to finding out if that helps at all with their searches.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Wow... Wisp taking more for her own and talking more, as well as we now have a lead for the doctor. So looking forward to the next updates.

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 314260
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument

Truly enjoying this story. I came across it while it was featured. It really has me wondering about his family life and Carlisle's response. 

Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Our Binding Reunion

This was definitely juicy. I would love to see more of them truly getting to know each other. Love the story and looking forward to all the updates.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Our End?

Holy Hell, it seems they both have a lot to make up for in order to make it work. It seems those in Hollywood want the best of both worlds and they don't always work.

looking forward to reading how Maggie goes down and how the relationship gets rescued.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness

Holy crap! I hope he finally gets it and truly understands she is his equal in everything. I cannot wait for Bella's POV. Loved Carlisle's response to the whole situation.

Reviewer: lahragal Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas

I am so glad he finally opened up to her and that they did talk. I cannot wait to read how he follows through with regaining her trust in their marriage. Keep up the amazing writing and looking forward to the next update.