Reviews by Cutelilbeachgal
If Only by Vampgirl79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary: Past Featured Story

IO

 

*UPDATING in mid/late 2023*

"Come over, I need you. Now." As always, I go to her. Except this time, it may be the last. I love her deeply, but I don't know if I can do this anymore. Each goodbye is harder than the last one. I want more than just being hers behind closed doors. If only we could truly be together; if only we were meant to be. 

AH/OOC, Told in EPOV


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17231 Read Count: 7973
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2013 Updated: 13 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Almost Is Never Enough

Just finished reading this story. I am so curious as to what happens next. Any plans on finishing the story?.

Summary:

Infinity

Isabella Marie Cullen the only child of Carlisle Cullen Don of the Cullen Crime family, born with an infinity symbol birthmark. Tragedy hits and Isabella and her mother are killed, or are they? How far will one brother go to take control of the family?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48278 Read Count: 91378
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2017 Updated: 28 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I literally binged this whole story. Just like I did with your other stories. Love love love. Can’t wait to see where you take this story!  HUGE FAN

Summary:

Defiance

 

Carlisle Cullen is ruthless Don of the Cullen Crime Family, but his wife Esme doesn't want this life for their son Edward.  Running away and starting a new life and new identity, will they have a happy, safe life or will Carlisle find them?  E&B HEA


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42347 Read Count: 64409
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2017 Updated: 29 Apr 2018
Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 It Must be a Dream

Looking forward to the update! 

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Revelations

I've been dying for an update. Loved it and am looking forward to the next!! You are fabulous. Seriously devouring all your stories as we speak at insane speed it's not healthy XD  Can't get enough! 

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future

Love the new chapter. Hope you’re well! Can’t wait to read the next chapter as Alabama :)

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown

Love this chapter. Serious been waiting so long for the last one that when I saw this update, not only was my week great from Chicago 15, it became even better !!!!! Still love it. Can’t wait to see where you’ll take this story. 

Summary:

RN

After ditching her groom at the altar, Bella needs to get as far away from Willow City, TX as possible. The second she meets a hot rodeo star while hitchhiking, Bella knew her life would never be the same. Edward's hot, cocky, and successful and could be just what Bella needs. Rated M for Lemons and Language. Curvy Bella and Cowboyward.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46504 Read Count: 14628
[Report This] Published: 16 Nov 2017 Updated: 01 May 2018
Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Shopping Trip

Just binged this story. I know, dumb move since I knew the last update was like a year ago but I just adore your stories. So i’m begging. Please update soon? 

Summary:

Testing Faith Cover

 

Summary:  Edward Cullen thought his life in the playroom was over, when his leg was amputated from the knee down due to an car accident. Could a submissive with her own ghosts be the one to show him that he is more than enough to take complete control of her body and her heart?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53532 Read Count: 84332
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2017 Updated: 26 Nov 2019
Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 Life Changing

Ahhhhhhhh what’s next?! Right when you think things are going to happen with Bella and Edward this happens. WHAT ?!?!?!? Please update soon. Can’t wait to find out what’s next.

Summary: Past Featured Story

AMDFT

Crown Prince Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is the heir to the throne in the small independent country, Gevalia. His life is all about duty, honor and pride for his country. However, he’s lonely, focused on his career. When his younger brother makes some poor choices, Edward is forced to fly to the United States to smooth out diplomatic relations and spend six months looking for a bride, with some pretty stiff stipulations by his mother, the Queen of Gevalia.

Isabella Swan is the oldest daughter and now owner of the Swan Family Bakery, Inc. 1897. She went to college to be a teacher but was forced to forego her dreams when her father was diagnosed with Parkinson’s disease. On a chance evening, a handsome stranger slips during a summer rain storm into her bakery and awakens something inside.

Who is he?

Where did he come from?

Why is she drawn to him?

All that is known is that Prince Charming is a real person and Bella is about to live A Modern-Day Fairy Tale. But will it end in a happily ever after?

Banner by Clo Rodeffer! Thank you, girlie!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 194069 Read Count: 129901
[Report This] Published: 03 Mar 2018 Updated: 02 Jul 2019
Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I live your this story. I am waiting each week for your updates but seriously I hope you know how much I love this story. 

Summary:

FOYS

 

In the blink of an eye, your world can change. You can experience the greatest happiness … or succumb to the world’s worst pain, losing someone that had no reason to die …

Edward Cullen, a decorated fireman, after losing a woman in a deadly apartment fire, left his life and family in Seattle, trying to escape the ghost of the beautiful woman, the concert mistress of Seattle Symphony. He stayed away from Seattle, living in Boston, working as an arson investigator until his mother called him, informing him that she had cancer. Without a second thought, Edward moved home to help his family.

Dr. Isabella Swan, a renowned oncologist, specializing in women’s cancers, went through the paces of life. Her mother, an ovarian cancer survivor, was her impetus to become a doctor. However, she was closed-off and had been for many years … since the death of her twin sister, Angela, in an apartment fire. Bella focused on her job, working to forget the empty pain of losing her soul mate. Even eight years after her death, Bella was profoundly broken because of it. She never let anyone in … Until … a handsome, sexy man and a son of one of her patients … Edward Cullen …

Everything in her mind told her it was wrong, but in the blink of an eye, your world can change. You can experience the greatest happiness. Your life can come back to life, especially when you find your new soul mate … the Fire of your Soul.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115672 Read Count: 29356
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2018 Updated: 25 Aug 2021
Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Love the movement in the plot as well as the relationship. I can't wait to see what happens next.

The Collection by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 365]
Summary: Past Featured Story

CollBanner

In Volterra, the Crown Prince chooses his future queen from the Collection. 35 young women from every province of the country, open to members of all castes, given the opportunity to be the newest chapter in the country's fairy tale. But Isabella Swan didn't want to be part of the Collection, all she wanted was to love a boy and have him love her in return. And Edward Masen was not that boy.

 

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The Collection: A Twilight/The Selection Crossover

For those of you who have read The Selection Series, you will recognize the world of this story and some of the character types, but most of the plot will blend elements of the two series with original ideas, so it won't simply be The Selection plot with Edward and Bella. There will be things that will completely take you by surprise, I hope, and keep you entertained. This idea overtook me while reading the last book, which is the first time a series has done this since Twilight, so I wanted to play with it. Also, it felt right to post this the day before my 9th anniversary in fanfic. Thank you to all my readers, new and old, and my team, past and present, for sticking with me on this journey. 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed, Wanna read
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118372 Read Count: 63740
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2018 Updated: 17 Jun 2020
Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

I died. My heart. I can't even write complete sentences. Gah. Please update soon. Both stories are so good. I can't wait to find out what's next for both. â¤ï¸

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

I died. My heart. I can't even write complete sentences. Gah. Please update soon. Both stories are so good. I can't wait to find out what's next for both. â¤ï¸

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41

🤯😭🤪🤷‍♀ï¸ðŸ™ˆðŸ˜ðŸ’”

 

At all the feelings (not in particular order) I felt in this chapter. The DRAMA!!!! 

 

Sad to know this is slowly/quickly coming to an end... Looking forward to your next update â¤ï¸â¤ï¸â¤ï¸

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 31 May 2020 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37

Fascinating turn of events but was i the only one confused? She put jewelry on before she left... did she not notice it was different because Jacob came in? I had to read this chapter several times to make sure I got it right... or I think I got it right? Her jewelry was stolen and Felix had it right? 

Still love your story. Just a tad confused for a sec. Can't wait for the next chapter!! 

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I literally binge read your stories and need more. Can’t wait for your update â¤ï¸â¤ï¸

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I literally binge read your stories and need more. Can’t wait for your update <3

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

So excited to see your update! Looking forward to the next chapter as always<3 don’t keep us hanging for too long. Confession. Definitely have an obsession checking your profile until the next update 

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

So excited to see your update! Looking forward to the next chapter as always<3 don’t keep us hanging for too long. Confession. Definitely have an obsession checking your profile until the next update 

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

So excited to see your update! Looking forward to the next chapter as always<3 don’t keep us hanging for too long. Confession. Definitely have an obsession checking your profile until the next update 

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

Ahhhhh what an amazing chapter! Please update soon. The suspense is killing me!!!

Summary:

Words to Die By

I.M. Swan a best-selling author is on top of the literary world. After coming off her book tour for her latest book, she has begun her research for the next, a book on the Chicago Mafia. Spending hours in the library and courthouse, she is surprised to find out a most curious piece of information about the Don of the largest crime family. He is not the rightful heir to the family.

Aro Volturi planned and executed the complete destruction of the Cullen family. Wiping away any documentation or body of any evidence of the family from the face of the earth, or he thought so.

Edward Cullen was smuggled away with the aid of his faithful nanny, who kept him safe until it was time for him to take revenge for his family's death. Training and building a new, stronger family to take back what is rightfully his and executing the man who took his family from him.

One evening, as Edward is following one of Aro’s hitman, he witnesses him a young woman in the alley. Coming to her aid, he is mesmerized by her beauty and when he gets to know her, he is in awe of her intellect.

            Will Bella be able to survive with Edward’s help or will Aro get to her and silence her forever? E&B

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62607 Read Count: 65883
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2019 Updated: 27 May 2020
Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three ~ July 12, 2017

Love love love. Absolutely love. Like all your other stories. Seriously excited about this story and where you’ll take it. Can’t wait to read the next chapter

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I’ve been waiting for this chapter for months! So excited to read more of this story. Sending good vibes and writing muses your way! 

i love all your stories and can’t wait to read more! Hope you’be been well! 

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So excited to see updates for this story. Can't wait to see where this story goes. Cheers!

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017

All I want to do is bundle read this story so please please please update soon! 

 

 

I mean, take your time but I hope you can feel the love and enthusiasm for this story!

Summary:

Bella has everything. Perfect husband, perfect kids, perfect life. Until one day, her world changes, and the perfection she thought she had is shattered. Will she be able to pull her life together and survive on her own? AU, AH, Rated M for eventual lemon


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44376 Read Count: 10200
[Report This] Published: 06 Jan 2019 Updated: 06 Jan 2019
Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Strawberry Wine

I just finished all of your stories. What a great binge. Love love loved it. I hope you keep writing! Looking forward to your amazing writing.

Wander No More by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 103]
Summary:

History is written by the victors, but lore is written by the fearful. The Great Battle between humans and vampires is centuries in the past, and all the Wanderers have are their stories. When Bella, a young Wanderer is chosen to be the next queen of the vampires, she must choose her mate and king and try to navigate a world so different from the stories she knew. 

 

WanderNoMore


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23068 Read Count: 21325
[Report This] Published: 02 Jul 2019 Updated: 31 Mar 2020
Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Sorry to hear about your rough week. I love your stories. I love this chapter mand how you've introduced the twins.  Please keep writing and share your talent. I look forward to every update. 

Summary:

family

Bella has the love of her life with Edward. They have their seven kids, Happily Ever After feels real, but what if when it begins to rain it pours. Can they handle the stress as a family or is going to tear them apart.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48017 Read Count: 16024
[Report This] Published: 08 Aug 2019 Updated: 01 Oct 2020
Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Welcome back! And congrats on the baby. Love the chapter as always

Toy Soldiers by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

"I didn't ask her to interfere, but him walking into the cabin this Christmas may be the reason I'm alive today." Sometimes you think you know what you left behind, but the reality is far different. Second chances are hard won, but they could make all the difference.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17905 Read Count: 728
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2020 Updated: 28 Jan 2020
Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a story. I'm think you made a genuine shot at capturing the characters and their experience. I love the tension and the build up of this story. The dilemma between Edward being her trigger yet her saving grace... but focus also being on the fact that she needed to want the change.... you can see the character develop in an honest way in such a short format while being believeable. Thank you for writing this story. You are amazing.

Summary:

Banner

 

***This story has been pulled to be published under Lara Norman as Bloody Halo*** When notorious criminal mastermind Edward Cullen came back to town, Bella was blindsided by old feelings of infatuation. She knew better than to dance with the devil... but she did it anyway.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Fallen Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2502 Read Count: 76832
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2020 Updated: 27 Apr 2021
Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2020 Title: Fallen Angel

I literally binged through this story! Why can't things go smoothly?! But then again the DRAMA!!! Yassss. It hurts so good z😂â¤ï¸

 

I know you just updated but I can't wait to see what's next!! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

TPWCH

 

Providence and destiny. Elizabeth Masen raised her boy on those principles, and though all of life’s hardships, he’s remembered her words. When Miss Bella Swan steps off the train at the Denver Depot, she’s a pleasant surprise and some much-needed help. As they work to build a life for themselves, they’ll face hardships neither one expected, but together they will weather the coming storm.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Western
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69173 Read Count: 21588
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2020 Updated: 27 Mar 2021
Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Love love love the story! So sad for and ending but happy how you ended it! Another great in the books! Looking forward to more!!

Summary:

Falling for a Dark Soul

 

Isabella Swan moved away from the world she’s known, trying to move on from the loss of her parents and raising her baby sister, Katie. She’s always seen the best in the world, but she’s struggling in coping with all of the changes in her life. A new start was needed and she packed up, moving from the small town of Forks to Chicago to work as an advertising junior executive at Masen Advertising Corporation.

Edward Cullen, CEO of Masen Advertising Corporation, is a cold-hearted, uncaring, hateful asshole. An orphan and living in foster care until he turned fifteen, he was adopted by Carlisle and Esme Cullen. Edward struggled with forming relationships. All he wanted was a partner, a friend, a lover, a wife, a mother to his children. He lost his wife, Tanya, when she was found screwing his partner, Jacob Black, on his desk. She also shattered his heart, ending several pregnancies, even though Edward had pleaded to start a family.

What happens when Edward bumps into Bella in the hallways of Masen Advertising Corporation? Will she be the chink in his armor, shattering his carefully constructed walls? Or will he bring her into the darkness, shattering her optimistic view of the world? It’s uncertain, but she’s Falling for a Dark Soul.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 250672 Read Count: 73596
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2020 Updated: 17 Apr 2021
Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I forgot to review after the first time j read it but WOW. Love destroy so far. This was the best birthday present 😂 I love the gradual steps Edward is taking in his character development. The surrounding support is awesome. Just interesting to see the conflict start to fade... But I'm assuming something new is on the horizon? ðŸ˜ðŸ˜†