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Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 753010
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
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Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Avoidance and Disappointment

     Edward totally humiliated Bella at the hospital where she works!  To the nurses on that floor, it looked like he either dumped Bella for Maggie or was playing around behind Bella's back.  He should leave his playing for somewhere else.  Carlisle wouldn't appreciate that doctor's lounge stuff.  That would damage his reputation too if they were caught by someone other than Bella and it came out that Edward was Carlisle's nephew.  Slutward AND Disward.  But thanks for the story!  LOL

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Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice

LOL  I love Mama D!!  Her analogy of Edward being like a little puppy was priceless!!  (and pretty accurate!)  I am sensing jealousward may appear when the men start hitting on Bella!!  Thanks for the chapter! 

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Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Puppet Master J

     I thought she was wearing a fancy black dress but maybe this was before she changed?  I can't wait for him to see her at Dooley's.  I think everyone in their circle knows (including Mama D) except Edward!  He deserves it!  Thanks for the chapter!

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Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Femmes Night Out

     I like the ending.  I think that Trevor sounds like trouble.  He is probably a new hot shot attending physician - she should ask Carlisle.  Of course maybe Krista and Sabrina could find out from his friends.  I was surprised all of those guys except Edward were drinking on call!  Thanks for the chapter! 

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Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Sleeping With An Angel

     Okay, I forgive Edward.  He better get this relationship started now though!  That Trevor dude is still on my suspect list.  His last name isn't James is it!  LOL 

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Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy

With the "Team" working on the Operation Edward & Bella Together, I am confident they will eventually prevail.  Carlisle will NOT be happy if Trevor two times Bella either. That is probably why Trevor relocated to a bigger city - more anonymity and a bigger selection! Thanks for the chapter! 

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Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing

     Okay, Iwill trust you to give me an E&B HEA!!  Also I hope you didn't let her do the deed with Trevor, she would feel terrible later if she did.  

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Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Roommates and Baby Steps

     At last!  I hope Trevor doesn't get frustrated and try to pull her into a supply closet or something!  Wait, Bella will probably catch Trevor in a supply closet with Maggie!!  

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Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Be Careful What You Wish For

     That was a nice warm up date, good to get the nerves out a bit.  Thanks for the chapter! 

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Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Perfection

     Yes, he knows her well!  I can see taking it slow isn't going to work for very long.  Trevor still thinks she is going to show him the town this weekend? I don't think so.....  Thanks for the chapter!

Summary: Past Featured Story

  Guarding Edward

 

A stalker is trying to get close to Edward Masen, a green-eyed 24 year old concert pianist.

 He hires Elite Guardians to keep him safe from the one who is stalking him.

 Bella Cullen is the owner/operator of the company.  

She's also a 110 year old vampire.

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  In the MYSTIC AWARDS:

GUARDING EDWARD WON FIRST RUNNER UP IN THE

CUTE CATEGORY:

Story that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200652 Read Count: 30101
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2010 Updated: 23 Aug 2010
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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue and Chapter One...Blood Singer

Nice twist.  Thanks for the story!



Author's Response:

You are welcome, JaVaJiVe!

I hope you enjoy the rest!

Kathie

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Choices

I guess Alice and Jasper will have to postpone that trip!



Author's Response:

LOL...I guess they will!

Kathie

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Face to Face

Maybe if she "borrowed" an under shirt she could wear it to their meetings!  LOL  It sounds like Bella is Edward's human singer!  



Author's Response:

Good thought...keep reading!

AND, thanks for reading...

Kathie

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Who is She?

Short but sweet. Thanks for the update. 



Author's Response:

You are welcome...

Kathie

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Love Letters

a cliffie !!  ...I'm glad that I don't have to wait for the next chapter! Does Bella look like Elizabeth? 



Author's Response:

That's a good guess...you'll see soon!

Kathie

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 I Love Him, He's MINE!

Or perhaps some psychotic sociopath type issues?



Author's Response:

LOL....that TOO!

Thanks for reading, JaVa...

Kathie

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 How Fast Can This Baby Go?

I agree, I like the relationship that Emmet and Edward have. They could definitely be good buddies. Thanks for the chapter!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the guy bonding thing...they may be good friends...soon!

Kathie

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Too Close to Home

Thanks for the cookies! THanks for the chpatoeralso. Yes Lauren is definitely in crescendo mode, probably going to peak after the concert at her "wedding".  



Author's Response:

You are welcome, I'm partial to chocolate chip with pecan pixel cookies...

Ah, Lauren...the girl is nuts...so much fun to write!

Kathie

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Too Close to Home

Thanks for the cookies! Thanks for the chapter also. Yes Lauren is definitely in crescendo mode, probably going to peak after the concert at her "wedding".  

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Discoveries

It's good that Jessica will be at the house as an added chaperone for Bella and Edward. Bella seems to be totally in control of her blood lust now.  



Author's Response:

Ah, she's trying to get some control...

Kathie

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 On Guard

Who is the godmother going to be, or is that spot still up for grabs...?   LOL



Author's Response:

Good question!!!  I hadn't thought of that...

Kathie

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Before the Dawn

OOh, nice chapter! I like stalker Bella :D    I also like that she can be around Edward. I think that I know where she got that button down blue shirt that she was wearing.... :F 



Author's Response:

"Stalker Bella"...yes, she has a few of those tendencies!

;F

Kathie

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 His Girl Friday

You're right, I was able to "keep up".  Thanks for having faith in my intelligence!

Is the other part of the scent Lauren's mama's scent? 



Author's Response:

I knew you could!  I did have one person tell me that they couldn't...sigh...

Good guess on the scent...or lack thereof!

Kathie

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Taken

This wasd a really nice chapter with their blossoming relationship. I had to laugh at the mental image oif Bella hiding sushi in her purse! I guess with vampire speed and a plastic bag anything is possible! LOL

Author's Response:

Sushi in  a purse...as long as she cleans it out later it should be okay...LOL

Thanks, JVJV!

Kathie

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Epiphany

Whoa, are you really going to let them out-maneuver all of those vampires who know their scents? Hopefully not!

Author's Response:

Maybe... ;D

Kathie

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Gone...Just Gone

Hey, Taylor is cute with a fabulous smile but Jacob is not Bella's soulmate, Edward is. Besides the hole is probably not big enough for intestines to fit through. Is there enough blood to merit a change? Thanks for the chapter!

Author's Response:

Taylor is a LOT cuter now that he's 18...lol

No guts falling out...but maybe enough blood?

Kathie

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Interrogation

Yes, I am relieved that Edward is OK. Lauren really is an idiot but with a mother like Lorena she was bound to be totally messed up. Too bad Alice didn't see psycho mama coming!

Author's Response:

Ah, my Alice isn't the "all seeing all bossy know it all" of some fics...like *coughStephenie'scough*....LOL

Adds just a touch of mystery...right?

Kathie

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Trying to Focus

OMG, I can't believe that you let her break his hand! : (
So much for his career. I thought you were supposed to break the legs so that they couldn't run away.

Author's Response:

I know...shudder...Lorena is a very bad woman...REALLY and truly...

Aren't you glad you got to click NEXT?

Kathie

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Rescue

For Lorena, dying was the easy way out. Life in prison is no picnic.

Author's Response:

It really was...wasn't it?  At least Lauren is going to get to *enjoy* prison...

Kathie

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Later

Thank you for making the hand surgeon a woman, I liked that! I am also glad that he will paly again so that his destroyed hand is not why he wants to become a vampire.

Author's Response:

You are welcome...GIRL POWER you know...LOL

Kathie

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 The First question

Yes, Edward kisses are nice. I was surprised that he said kissing Bella was hot since she is so cold! Thanks for the chapter

Author's Response:

LOL...I think he was meaning hot...like HAWT...LOL

She thought his kiss was pretty nice too...maybe he can be awake at some point for more...

Kathie

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 It was Time

I can't believe that she called Emmett and Rosalie her favorite siblings when she knew that Alice would see! She better clarify that she has 4 favorite siblings!! This was a sweet chapter.

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it, JVJV!

Ah, she knew she was in trouble as soon as she said it!  LOL...

Kathie

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Answers

Edward does not disappoint us with his reaction! True love.

Author's Response:

He was pretty calm...WONDER WOMAN...LOL

Kathie

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Not Keeping the Secret

For me, HEA is a must as well! This was a good chapter - he is accepting and not rejecting Bella. Thanks!

Author's Response:

For me too...HEA all the way...well, eventually!

Kathie

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Anticipation

Aww. Now that was a sweet chapter. If they weren't going to get guests, they would have a lovely time in Colorado!

Author's Response:

Yep, those GUESTS are raining on their fun...but it will be fun to see them too...

Kathie

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Company

Oh you really do have my sympathry! With help like that I am surprised that you get any chapters written! LOL Has your daughter not read book four? Jacob will get his true love and it will be mutual! Your hubby is really into humor noir. I bet your daughter was after him for that remark!

Author's Response:

LOL...yes, their HELP sometimes isn't!

Kathie

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Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Gifts

I thought that the succubus Tanya trying to lure Edward was a fun idea. I suppose you didn't draw it out so that Bella didn't have to kick them out of the house. I liked that he tattled on Kate! I enjoyed the chapter, thanks.

Author's Response:

Ah, Tanya...THAT scene is one that I had planned from the very beginning of the story...still makes me smile to think about ALICE flinging herself at the wench...LOL

Kathie

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Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Options

That Edward is quick. I think htat he should still wait until his tour is over unless he wants to pretend that he didn't get full use of his hand back and had to retire. Hey maybe the Volturi will come to Washington and get hit by an asteroid... Thanks for the chapter!

Author's Response:

LOL...The Volturi and an ASTEROID!  Now THAT's a story that's just waiting to be written!

Thanks for reading...

Kathie

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Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Perks

I am surprised that he isn't getting jealous of Edward!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading JVJV!

Kathie

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Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Drawbacks

Couldn't he become a recluse instead of dying??  



Author's Response:

That may be more like it...LOL

Kathie