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Breathe Again by ysar Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary: Past Featured Story

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

A BELLIE AWARDS NOMINEE!

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories that tell of Bella and Jacob during Edward's absence, Bella's start at college, and the Cullens' eventual return.


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards | Best Jacob Point of View in the Twilight Twins Awards


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9, Jacob Black Wins the Girl
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 163880 Read Count: 35938
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 12 Sep 2010
Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Perceptions: Bella's POV

wow.. the ending to that chapter was.. interesting lol.. wonder what Jake thought.. guess ill find out in the next chapter! :)

RYSS,

~Harmony is Ke

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Persistence: Bella's POV

haha l love the endings to your chapters, they're so hilarious

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Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Unease: Bella's POV

Embry? or Sam.. wait.. is it?  better not be! Edward? I can sincerely hope it isn't. Damnit! It sure as hell better NOT be!! Not yet. Not so soon. They JUST got together! :| Guess I'll find out after the next chapter.

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Unease: Jacob's POV

Yes, i think that would be nice haha. I really hope what happened to Leah won't happen to Bella. I sure hope he doesn't Imprint. If he does, Edward better be already back and 'waiting in the wings' as he put it in book three. But Jacob just better not Imprint. Who are you going to have as her Happily Ever After? Leah deserves one. She really does. Will she Imprint? I hope so haha. Because if she fell in love with someone who wasn't her Imprintee, then if she ever imprinted, she would feel so horrible, 20x worse than Sam ever did, because  she knows what it feels like. Anyhoo, Loved the chapter, and now i get to figure out who the man on the motercycle is! haha. Yes!

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Mischief: Bella's POV

Ha! I was right! On my first guess anyway. I'm so glad my last guess wasn't right :) love the chapter. Can't wait to see Jake's reaction.

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Choice: Bella's POV

Frankly, I don't care how much she loves Jacob, or how much he loves her. She's throwing away so much by doing that. She could get good Scholarships because of her grades, to go to a good school, and she's giving it up for a relationship, that probably won't last due to Jake's Imprintee out there somewhere. But, this is a story, so i guess it really doesn't matter haha.

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Admission: Bella's POV

The silver figure is just her imagination? And the fire is because they finally caught the Redheaded Victoria leech and they're burning her sorry ass? Wishfull thinking? haha. Siver figure, Edward? And I have no idea why there would be a fire.. You know i really hate cliffhangers, and I have to read another whole chapter until I can figure out what it is.

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Waiting: Jacob's POV

GO JACOB!!! I can't wait until he finally catches up to and and kills her.. even if i felt sorry for her before.. she wanted to die right?? God, it's so fustrating, your story is like one of those good books, you can't seem to stop read or put it down. I know I'm going to regret this in the morning, when i have a massive headache from staring at the computer screen for so long.

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Quiet: Bella's POV

JACOB!!!!! always! but yea, I know, he still might imprint on someone, I'm guessing thats how it ends, him imprinting and Edward 'waiting in the wings' for when he does.. I really wish it didn't have to be that way though. Anyway, I wonder why Jess is looking for Embry, haha, she probably thinks their dating or something and has turned into a clingy girlfriend or something, wouldn't that be hilarious! Poor Embry.

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Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Quiet: Jacob's POV

haha, can't wait to read the next chapter, but that'll have to wait till morning, which sucks, but iim tired and i don't think my eyes could take staring at the computer screen for much longer. Loved the chapter though, and your writing. Ever think of writing your own story? That you created? I think you would be good at it. Just a thought

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Nuisance: Jacob's POV

gotta love a mad Bella lol.. wonder what the howl was for.. hmm, guess I'll find out soon enough

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 65: Unexpected: Bella's POV

GOD DAMNIT!! EDWARD JUST GO AWAY!!! Well.. I'm guessing it's Edward that's looking around Emmett.

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 66: Unexpected: Jacob's POV

oh good haha... it wasn't Edward, you really had me convinsed though.. Jacob, don't be so stupid.. god! I hate these parts of storys.. they make me so fustrated

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Closure: Jacob's POV

Oh great, I don't even know what detail your talking about from chapter 2 or 3.. now I'm curious.. and I'm probably going to have to go back and read to find it.. Thanks a lot!! haha

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Honesty: Bella's POV

Oh, really? I kind of liked reading what both their thoughts and everything were for the arguments and all the events that happened. Ah well, I didn't notice the sequal up, is it up? Or are you still writing this story?

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Honesty: Jacob's POV

It's in the topten most favorited section.. so usually those story's are the best, I always read some story's from there.. and I'm a big Jacla fan so.. this one really caught my eye, espectially when you have the part about, Edward leaving, Bella forgeting, and her and Jacob in bed together haha, I think it might even be in the topten most reviewed.. but I'm not sure..

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Normalcy: Bella's POV

haha, loved that ending. I was wondering though, what does YSAR stand for? Is that your real name? Is it an abbreviation for something? I just thought that as i logged on and went to read your story haha

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Normalcy: Jacob's POV

Well I already know that it doesn't involve Jacob either haha, because i read in your table of contents, so, I'm glad, because otherwise i would be freaking out haha, hopefully Jacob never has to imprint, but i guess that's just wishful thinking, but hey, it is a story, not real life, so you never know what will happen

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Distractions: Jacob's POV

can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Distractions: Jacob's POV

can't wait for the next chapter.. hopefully soon :)

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Perceptions: Bella's POV

Do you have a FF.net account?

Loyalty by ysar Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Companion story to Breathe Again, written as a side to Chapters 33 & 34: Mischief.

What kind of friend would Embry be if he just stood by and let Lauren come in between Jake and Bella? (One-shot)

~If you asked me, Jake was lucky Bella even bothered to come to him about it instead of just dumping him. And now he was too scared of stirring up trouble and upsetting Bella to do anything about it.~

~The pack was lucky, too, because dealing with Jake when he and Bella were on the outs was no picnic. But a call to Leah and a trip to Forks High would solve everything.~

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2589 Read Count: 318
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2010
Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Loyalty (One-Shot)

haha, I love Embry in your story. He's so crazy. And cute. And loyal to his friends, i guess thats why you named the story the way you did.

Confrontation by ysar Rated: T [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Companion story to Breathe Again Post #s 37 & 38: Questions.  Charlie receives a call from one meddling Mrs. Newton, and Jacob's reaction leaves his head spinning. One-shot.

 

~ Well…crap. Bella had told me that I didn’t need to worry about…that. And Miranda Newton was certainly not the best source for unembellished facts, but half-dressed and making out in a parking lot? I was in my car and headed to La Push within seconds. ~

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1471 Read Count: 335
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2010
Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Confrontation (One-Shot)

haha. I love overprotective dads. They make for good oneshots.

Pursuit by ysar Rated: T starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Companion story to Breathe Again, written as a side to Post #43: Waiting. Victoria pieces together the circumstances behind James's disappearance and plans her revenge. One-shot.

 

~ He was my killer and my savior. And now he was nothing. ~

 

 

~ A part of me was gone. I could still see his soft red eyes and feel the gentle curtain of his blond hair brushing against my cheek. When I breathed deeply enough I could imagine his sweet scent filling my lungs. I had to find him. ~


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Action, Drama, One-Shot, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1503 Read Count: 194
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2010
Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It kindof makes you feel sorry for her, she lost her love and everything, and by drinking human blood she's just being a normal vampire. Edward was going to kill himself when he though Bella was dead, she wanted to die also. It makes sence. If only she didn't have to cause so much trouble, if only she could just go to the Voultri like Edward. If only.. well, I like the way you wrote her charactor. I haven't read much of anythink from her Point of Veiw, so it was interesting, and I'm so glad that the silver streak was a newborn vampire and not Edward haha, it would be to soon for him to come back if it was.

Destined by ysar Rated: T [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Companion story for Breathe Again. Written as a side to Chapter Fifty-Three: Nuisance. Jessica is convinced that she and Embry are destined to be together. One-shot.

~"Finally a guy that was worth it. And just in time for prom.." ~


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2129 Read Count: 201
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2010
Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Destined (One-Shot)

lol, she so fucking clueless, its hilarious

Envy by ysar Rated: T [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Companion story for Breathe Again. Written as a side to Posts 39-54. Rachel's having a tough time adjusting, and she's been taking it out on Bella. One-shot.

 

~ So I was jealous. I could admit that. I just couldn’t admit it to her. ~

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2212 Read Count: 194
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2010
Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Envy (One-Shot)

wow.. theirs a lot more debth to her charator than i would actually have thought, and there i'd just thought she was being a right bitch haha, goes to show doesn't it

Concession by ysar Rated: T [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Companion story to Breathe Again, written as a side to Post #61: Confessions. Charlie's reasoning behind relaxing the rules and a peek at his talk with Jacob.

 

So yeah, there was a boy in my daughter's bed, and I wasn't entirely sure he deserved to see another day.

 

 

One-shot.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Charlie/None
Genre: Drama, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3275 Read Count: 340
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2010
Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Concession (One-Shot)

Haha He reminds me of Bella.. I dont know why, it's not just the fact that he's her dad. Its the way you wrote him, i guess.. he just reminds me of her. haha, if that makes any sense.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner for Book 4

Breaking Dawn from Renesmee's Point of View. Starting just before Edward 'hears' her for the first time.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Renesmee/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63938 Read Count: 3962
[Report This] Published: 10 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2010
Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Dawn

Loved this first chapter, you are such a good writer. Can't wait to read the next chapters.

RYSS,

~Harmony is Key

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Charlie

Loved this chapter! can't wait to read the next one!! you are such a good writer! I can't seem to stop reading you story.. this is by far the most interesting story from remesme's point of veiw.. you get every detail from the original Breaking Dawn, it makes the story seem that much more real. You capture Remesme's charator so well. Can't wait to read more of you story.

RYSS,

~Harmony is Key

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Darker Days

OMG!! Talk about cliffhanger! lol, really can't wait for the next chapter! hopefully it's soon. :)

RYSS,

~Harmony is Key

 

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: The Seen and The Unseen

lol "I was careful not to say nice." she's so cute!

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Christmas

Loved the chapter. you know? The funny thing is, is that it didn't come to a fight, and the Volterri really did leave peacefully, well, except for the killing Irina part. So, maybe Siobhan's gift really does work afterall. lol

Reviewer: HarmonyisKey Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: No Fighting!

This scene got me more than the original.