Reviews by sue1zide
Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
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Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146714
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
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Date: 30 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

Bella's doing the same thing Edward's father is. Dictating his life & making decisions for him.

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Date: 30 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

Bella's doing the same thing Edward's father is. Dictating his life & making decisions for him.

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Date: 30 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

Bella's doing the same thing Edward's father is. Dictating his life & making decisions for him.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

Bella's doing the same thing Edward's father is. Dictating his life & making decisions for him.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

Bella's doing the same thing Edward's father is. Dictating his life & making decisions for him.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

Bella's doing the same thing Edward's father is. Dictating his life & making decisions for him.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

Bella's doing the same thing Edward's father is. Dictating his life & making decisions for him.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

Bella's doing the same thing Edward's father is. Dictating his life & making decisions for him.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

Bella's doing the same thing Edward's father is. Dictating his life & making decisions for him.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

Bella's doing the same thing Edward's father is. Dictating his life & making decisions for him.

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The One and Only

 

What would it be like to know at first sight your one and only love? What if this was given to you as a gift to be passed down thru your generations? Follow the story of how an Angel from heaven gave this gift to the Clan Cullen in 1314 Scottish Highlands and how the gift is passed thru out the generations to present time. Will the Cullen Men find their One and Only?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: Stories I've read, Read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83342 Read Count: 134468
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2015 Updated: 28 Apr 2015
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Date: 11 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter #2 Meeting the Clansmen

I've started reading this many times but something would always interupt me. I'm bound & determined to finish it.

Summary:

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Dancing with the Devil cost Bella a piece of her soul. Will she earn her redemption? Or be lost forever. Sequel to Carlisle's Gift.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76020 Read Count: 33911
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2015 Updated: 27 Aug 2022
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Date: 13 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

She's going to either explode or implode if she keeps ignoring it. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Body by aliciaw68 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 403]
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Edward has a fetish that no one else in the world knows about. Except the thousands of followers on his anonymous blog. What happens when Bella works out who 'The Body ' is.

Ths was my submission to the twkink 2015 fest.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 121593 Read Count: 145727
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2015 Updated: 19 May 2017
Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

It was a relaxing chapter. I have a question. I've read this in other stories and always forget to ask. What is a "jumper"?



Author's Response:

A very English word for a sweater or pullover . Made of wool long sleeves and usually just a crew neck

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Date: 18 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

She'll probably end up agreeing after he assures her of anonymity. I bet his blog might explode after posting it.

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Date: 01 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I commend you on your writing skills. Almost every chapter has left me with a racing heart & at my age that could be dangerous. LOL ;)

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Date: 23 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Happy Thanksgiving! <3

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Date: 01 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Outtakes?

Summary: Past Featured Story

 Bella is a good, Christian girl with a dark secret. She wants the pierced, tattooed, and foul-mouthed tattoo artist who lives across the hall from her. Will she ever get him to notice her without compromising her beliefs?

 

Thanks to the LOVELY heartfortwilight for my banner!  I LOVE it!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74153 Read Count: 99337
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2015 Updated: 24 Nov 2017
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Date: 23 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Can't Get Her Out of My Head

I apologize for all of the ignorant azzholes that authors encounter.

That being said, doesn't anyone understand constructive criticism? OR just don't read something they don't like!!!!!

I hope this doesn't deter you.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your words!  It won't deter me; I have strong writer friends who have kept encouraging me (aka the writers I beta for), like I did to them when they had hater reviews. 

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Date: 26 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The Whole World Stops

I can tell that she is still young and immature. Her POV's are child like.

Of course a 34 yr old man isn't going to still be a virgin!



Author's Response:

Is that a good thing, or bad?

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Date: 26 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Fireworks aren’t the only exciting part of July 4th

I thought that they already talked about him and his dart decision way in the beginning of this on one of their talk marathons?



Author's Response:

It was; Bella just forgot ;)

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Date: 20 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I'm a retired Special Ed. teacher and my Downs students were my favorites!



Author's Response:

How awesome!  I hope I'll do an accurate representation of Down syndrome in the story.

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Date: 21 May 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: 3-21-13

Pretty good birthing description.

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Banner by: AstridGreenEyes-Banners

Summary: Being born into a made family has both advantages and disadvantages. Sometimes a man has to reflect on which relationships he involves himself in.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 77 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98617 Read Count: 229009
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2015 Updated: 23 Sep 2015
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Date: 09 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I think Bella has bigger balls than Edward. He just doesn't seem like a "family" boss.

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Date: 10 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

NO! Not Jasper!

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Date: 10 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

I was shocked that I somehow missed reading this story. I thought I had read all of your works.

This had me on my toes, never knowing what to expect next.

Summary:

Edward witnesses his father’s murder and is seen leaving. Bella is tired of being on the receiving end of her husbands’ fists and words. If they want to stay alive, they’ll have to run for their lives…no matter the cost. Inspired by the Three Days Grace song. M for Language and Adult Situations. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26825 Read Count: 5188
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2015 Updated: 13 May 2018
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Date: 26 May 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue: God Blessed the Broken Road

Beautiful!

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Date: 26 May 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue: God Blessed the Broken Road

Beautiful!

Home to Stay by Sher Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 187]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Coming home to Forks after being gone four years, everything looks and feels the same. Edward couldn’t wait to see the love of his life, Bella. She’s the one he left behind, but, first, his attention is captured by a young girl that looks just like him, and the woman with her is just who he came to see. Could the little girl be his?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 74811 Read Count: 35754
[Report This] Published: 20 Oct 2015 Updated: 30 Dec 2017
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Date: 07 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Morning sickness?

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Date: 27 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

It's so wrong that we tell little girls that boys treat them bad because they like them. Isn't that teaching them that abuse is acceptable?

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Date: 27 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Usually antibiotics + sex = baby!

I hope it's twins.

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Date: 18 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can't wait to hear her reaction.

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Date: 31 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I'm hoping for twins.

Summary:

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What happens when Bella is attacked and her mob family find out she's pregnant? How does a protective family act when one of their own is attacked? No one knows for certain, the only thing they do know is they will kill anyone in their way to protecting her.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 173762 Read Count: 87142
[Report This] Published: 09 Nov 2015 Updated: 06 Nov 2017
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Date: 08 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 44: Epi Edward POV

I'm so going to miss them & you.

Thank you!

Summary:

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From the moment of her birth, Edward Masen has had a soft spot for Isabella Swan, a servant taken in when tragedy strikes her family. As she grows, so do Edward's feelings, but life seems to throw up a string of impediments. When an opportunity presents itself, he must act carefully if they can be together in the light of day. Age of Edward 2015 entry.

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Historical, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11975 Read Count: 3339
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2016 Updated: 04 Jul 2016
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Date: 18 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was relieved that they all arrived safely. I thought that one of them might have encountered bad weather traveling.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Newly divorced Bella goes to Vegas for a work conference. On the advice of friends she lets her hair down and goes out for a night on the town. When she comes back from Vegas, she finds out that what happens in Vegas, doesn't always stay there.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143753 Read Count: 134997
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2016 Updated: 04 Jun 2016
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Date: 16 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm glad she didn't nickname the babies "Pea & Nuts".

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Date: 15 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

This was an amazing journey. Thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

TOTGA

Bella Swan was dreading going back to her ten year high school reunion, over Valentine’s Day Weekend, for Hillsborough High School. Her time in high school in Tampa, Florida was not high on her list of pleasant experiences. She was quiet, unassuming and secretly in love with Edward Cullen. It was that unrequited love that forced her to move away to Seattle, as far from Tampa as possible. He never knew she existed. Or so she thought.

Edward was looking forward to his high school reunion because he was anxious to see the one that got away. Bella Swan was the quiet girl who never really interacted with anyone, but Edward saw that she was something special. But as ruler of the school, he had certain expectations to maintain. It was one of his biggest regrets. His life would have been easier if he had followed his heart. Now, he was a divorced father of two. His ex-wife, Tanya, who was his high school girlfriend, left him for a younger man and abandoned her children.

Will Bella be happy to see Edward or will she stay hidden amongst her classmates? Will Edward finally break the mold that was expected of him and open up his heart to the beautiful and shy Bella Swan? Will he be able to win back the one that got away?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 84 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196828 Read Count: 280777
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2016 Updated: 23 Jun 2017
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Date: 22 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Is Tanya really that ignorant?

Summary:

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Bella has her life planned out. Her business is sucssesful and she is surrounded by people she cares about, so why is she so lonely. Fate changes her life but will she follow the righ path.

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76583 Read Count: 539702
[Report This] Published: 23 May 2016 Updated: 17 Oct 2016
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Date: 02 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

See what manners get you? A crazy stalker.

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Date: 02 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I had a feeling Jacob & company might have something to do with it.

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Date: 01 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm curious to see where the title ties in.

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Date: 01 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

She's a robot.

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Date: 01 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Does she even have any emotions?

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Date: 01 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

He was in the wrong place at the right time for Bella to use him as her temper board.

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Date: 01 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

At first I thought he was just testing her but now I think he's been through some Hell.

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Date: 02 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

"Rescue Ink" an excellent story.

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Date: 02 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I can't read this fast enough.

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Date: 02 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

It started with her first incident with Edward. Edward was running from something/one. I wonder if whatever he was involved with ties into Bella bumping into him?

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Date: 02 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Esme needs to know everything.

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Date: 02 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I have a couple of ideas flying around my head.

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Date: 02 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

You're knitting a very fine web of suspects.

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Date: 02 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Phew! I didn't think they'd ever get together.

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Date: 02 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Manners be damned. She doesn't owe anything to that arrogant ape,

Summary: Past Featured Story

This story take place before the great revelation. A kitchen fire destroyed Merlotte forcing Sookie to find a new job. Initially intrigued by the silent mind of her boss, Sookie takes a job at Salon Rouge, Eric’s bar. As Sookie and Eric’s relationship evolves, she soon realizes, Eric is not only different, he is not human.

This fic is rated R for sexual content, violence and crude language.

It is a Eric and Sookie story, HEA.

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 144757 Read Count: 17072
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2016 Updated: 10 Jul 2019
Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Bill isn't easy. He almost attacked her.

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Date: 05 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I've never been a fan of Bill's.

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Date: 05 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

She forgot about the cell that was left unclaimed.

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Date: 06 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I wish there was more dialect from Eric, or even his POV.

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Date: 06 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Not only are they brainwashed but they're very prejudice.

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Date: 06 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

My heart is thundering in my chest.

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Date: 06 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I have to see how they get out of this!

Do you have any rec's for other Soolir/Eric fics?

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Date: 15 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I can't believe she left her gran alone.

I've never liked Bill.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Leaving behind a misserable childhood Bella trades one type of misery for another kind.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Gelesen
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64876 Read Count: 46224
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2016 Updated: 20 Jun 2017
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Date: 07 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm enjoying this but I'm itching to fix the errors.

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Date: 08 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Maybe she better enjoy it while she can because I don't think it's going to be all sunshine when she returns.

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Date: 08 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Those three better not feel any blame for Esme's death.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He could have chosen any female wolf in the room. Why did he have to choose me, the lone half-breed?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32608 Read Count: 178532
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2016 Updated: 06 May 2017
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Date: 25 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Keep telling yourself that Bella.

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Date: 22 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I'm confused. I thought she knew he was the Alpha?

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Date: 05 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I'm curious. Since they mated in wolf form would she have a litter or a baby if she got pregnant?

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Date: 08 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

And then Bella disappears.......

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Date: 13 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I knew her stubborn ass was going to cause problems.

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Date: 29 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

NO!

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Date: 31 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Please save their pup or litter.

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Date: 02 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

I hope her captors burn in Hell.

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Date: 04 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Those poor women. I hope that they're not in more danger for trying to escape. Hopefully they get away.

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Date: 06 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Don't go!

I'm so happy and excited with these frequent updates. Thank you.

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Date: 23 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

I'm still curious if she'll have a pup or a kid.

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Date: 12 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

That was quick.

Chimera by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1017]
Summary: Past Featured Story

chimera

 

Summary: Bella Swan has lived a sheltered life, and chooses to go to college as far from home as her strict parents will allow. She runs into Edward Cullen, a gorgeous law student. They become friends and one night cross the line of friendship in a way that will alter the life of both of them more than anyone can ever believe. When DNA doesn't tell the same story Bella tells, how will her young life be altered?
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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 256985 Read Count: 332962
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2016 Updated: 30 Mar 2017
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Date: 31 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I thought it might have been Angela that taped Ben.

I'm intrigued with their theory about Charlie & Alice. That's not something I considered. Is her father that fucked up?

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Date: 15 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Insanity!

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Date: 16 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Everyone of them are fucked up in the head. I'm not even sure if therapy would help any one of them. 

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Date: 16 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Everyone of them are fucked up in the head. I'm not even sure if therapy would help any one of them. 

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Date: 18 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Everything sounds so twisted. It has me questioning the paternity of Alice's daughter and even Angela's involvement with Ben. Was she the one manning the camera?

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Date: 11 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I hope all goes well for everyone.

I'm concerned about Alice's daughter. Alice sounds like she has a screw loose.

It's nice to see Bella in a better place.

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Date: 22 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I appreciate and value your time.

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Date: 21 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Right now all I'm thinking about is what my HEA would be for this.

I would like to see Bella healthy, happy, confident & independent.

I just want to see both A's get what they deserve. The sad thing is, family almost always forgives.

I'd like to know what god Bella's parents subscribe to? 

That's why I don't believe anymore. I was tired of the two-faced hypocrits, spouting about god.

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Date: 23 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Health & family should always come first. I hope things end well for you.

Bella's doctors are helpful but I feel they should go a step further and suggest therapy, especially knowing some of her secrets and stress. Has she been in contact with Jessica and Lauren?

I can't believe that Edward's going to be a lawyer. He doesn't seem to have that investigative, questioning nature.

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Date: 29 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I don't think Alice is staying away at all. She's probably the one scheming & coaching Angela.

As far as Bastward, he's very gullible & too trusting of the people around him. 

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Date: 05 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

It was scary for her to walk into that but in the long run I think it was for the best. She needed to get her bearings straight for herself and her child. She couldn't do that living under Double A's Evil.

Please don't have her fall right back into his arms! I would hope that she's a more self confident person and mother now. Allow him to be a part of his sons life but take everything else slow.

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Date: 09 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

This was an emotional roller coaster.

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Date: 28 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Siobhan's possible baby daddy sure surprised me. 

Are Alice's parents still enabling her? How did they not see the condition that their grandchild was in? They're as much to blame as Alice & Jasper in my opinion.

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Date: 24 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

My thoughts are with you. I lost my husband to brain cancer.

I admire both of your loyalty and strength.

Merry Christmas!

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Date: 08 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

What a clusterfuck. 

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Date: 18 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I'm sure no is going to think that any of them got near enough what they deserved. It frosts my buns that our money pays for their counseling, food, medical, etc.

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Date: 14 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

My head is swimming from this chapter. Just when I thought things were starting to come together, shit hits the fan.

Kudos to Edward & Emmett for facing Alice. If they hadn't her "therapist" could've caused a Hell of a lot more problems. Having a degree doesn't always mean what it states.

Bella & Edward are surrounded by crazy. How far was Edward's head up his ass to miss so much that went on with the people (family/friends) he associated with?

Don't even get me started on the "book". I belive he lost his rights the minute he was found guilty, as I believe that for any & ALL criminals. Does his book contain information not brought out in the trial? 

I always said if I ever became homeless, sick, etc that I would make sure I ended up in jail. I would have a roof, food, clothes, medical, an education/trade, etc.

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Date: 10 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I don't know how you hold up after writing each chapter. I feel so drained after each one.

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Date: 23 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Bella has truly demonstrated her growth and strength.

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Date: 01 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

It was nice to see that their shildren were getting a good education. Unfortunately, that isn't always the case.

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Date: 15 Oct 2022 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

That is some fucked up child abuse!

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Date: 15 Oct 2022 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

That is some fucked up child abuse!

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Date: 15 Oct 2022 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I don't know if this will post because my reviews keep getting an error message. 

Bella's parents, especially Charlie are nothing more than fucked up abusive people. 

Summary:

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You know what brings a smile to my face? Memories of you… I wonder if your dreams are your reality. How I wish your life turned out exactly how you imagined it in your seventeen-year-old brain. Mine not so much.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11393 Read Count: 4701
[Report This] Published: 09 Aug 2016 Updated: 07 Jan 2018
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Date: 11 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 12: AUTHOR'S NOTE FOR READERS THAT ARE CONCERNED ABOUT WHERE IS EDWARD?

I appreciate your explanation. It cleared up my confusion. There doesn't have to be a responding recipient. Maybe I misunderstood the synopsis that this was a journal?

I wish you experience a smoother road in the New Year.

I'm no stranger to cancer either.

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Date: 13 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Faith

Is he receiving her letters?