Reviews by chocolate-emeralds
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116432
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: chocolate-emeralds Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Great story! I read it in practically one sitting...

 

One question though. If Bella hates to take pills and they bother her that much, shouldn't she have been on the shot or something?  It just seems a little strange to me. :).

Sight by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53869
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Oct 2014
Reviewer: chocolate-emeralds Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Junior

He got the holy grail right ... there's hope for him yet. I am kinda amazed, though, that he flipped his switch on Tanya so quickly. 

 

Can't wait to read what happens next.

Summary:

Bella became convinced that she's destined for single life after she broke up with her first boyfriend, Edward Cullen, back in high school. Determined to be the President of her parent's company, she's prepared to do anything to have the job. However, what would she do if her parents only want her to do a simple thing; to get married to the son of their friends whose name just happens to be Edward Cullen?  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61689 Read Count: 41155
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2010 Updated: 30 Aug 2010
Reviewer: chocolate-emeralds Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Reason Twenty-three

I'm a little confused on the timeline, wedding, Christmas, Valentines, then it's their monthsary?  Other than that, I love the story. :)

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211604
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: chocolate-emeralds Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Yay! Edward's coming soon. I'm excited and very curious what kind of Edward he'll be.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.

I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!

Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers on Twilighted and here will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!

Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!

I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!

XoXo

Shel


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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.

"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?"  Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.

"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."

Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.

"Mom! We're here!"

Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.

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Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

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Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 312005
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: chocolate-emeralds Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Tasers & Interrogations

After Rosalie sticking her head under the partition of the bathroom stall then Emmett's Charlie impersination, I would REALLY LOVE to spend a day wit those two. I've been LMAO this whole story~~~!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I think I'll have to do an outtake from their POV, maybe spend a day in their heads.  Scary thought.  Thanks!

Speak by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

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Bella moves back to Forks after an unexpected event with her daughter Leah, Leah has not spoken  word since the event. When Leah befriends a green eyed little boy next door, Bella so realises that his father may be the key to Leah's illness.

This story is about how the strength that family  love can create and how two families joining can overcome anything life throughs at them.

 check out my blog for pictures and stuff;http://babylou23-speak.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Speak  copyrightbabylou23@2010.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79551 Read Count: 27210
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2016
Reviewer: chocolate-emeralds Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 -

I'm intrigued!!! Keep writing & I'll keep reading. :)



Author's Response:

lol thank you

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob?  Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi?  canon

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181679
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: chocolate-emeralds Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 Decisions

I'm really enjoying your story. I can't wait to read what happens with Victoria (& Tanya too ... I think I saw her name on the Story Summary). 

Just a little constructive criticism, there seem to be a lot of inconsistencies and continuity issues in your story. I remember Chapter 1 Harry was alive, then a couple chapters later you mentioned that he died months before Billy did. Then in the chapter where Charlie first went fishing with the boys they had Emmett's Jeep and it was mentioned here that it's still in Forks. 

Don't hate me, I'm just trying to help.

Other than that, I love your story and can't wait to read what happens next. :)



Author's Response:

Oh, I don't hate  you at all!  i appreciate it!  I fixed the Harry thing, now I just have to find where the jeep is mentioned. . .

Reviewer: chocolate-emeralds Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71 Calling Sam

I had a little deja vu in this chapter. Didn't Bella & Edward tell Charlie about Dartmouth back in Chapter 58?



Author's Response:

Wow, you are absolutely right!  What a great memory you have!  I am going to go in tomorrow and change one of the chapters, probably 71!  Thanks for telling me!  Glad you are still reading!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533639
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: chocolate-emeralds Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Now and Then

I'm a little concerned about this whole one last score thing. :-( other than that Great Chapter!!!