I liked it. Its very interesting and I can't wait to read more tomorrow. I liked how Bella got Jake back because he was trying to be slick and hurtful. I think Bella was a little over dramatic with Edward leaving him that stank message but she is young and hurting. You think you know but when a child is in the mix the dynamic changes. Until next time.

I love it! Emma is so cute I thought her name was Emma Grace not Antonia maybe I read it wrong a few chapters back. Until next time.

I'll read your other stories when I'm caught up on this one no doubts. i knew Kate was going to fall again. Its the drugs I thought it was the person but talking and helping people who are addicted changed my mind on that real fast. I don't work with that population any more but it did help me to understand why people did the things that they do for drugs. Some turn the corner some are life long users or functional but I'm glad to say some kicked the habit and helped other and returned to the lives they had before addiction became a problem became something more. I love your story but I have a feeling its going to be hard to read especially if they find Kate living for the drugs. Until next time.

Wow I love how Riley ripped Kate a new asshole!

Really I think Bella took it too far leaving her parents house after they picked up Emma. Dramatic much? Also I thought Edward had just turned 27? I must be mixing up stories or something. Anyway it was good. Bella lost me at the end though. I hope Riley gets a pardon or something because he tried his and did take care of Emma better than Kate did. Emma would probably be dead without Riley there and that's the truth! Until next time I'm caught up!

OMFJ! This was too funny: As far as parenting went, their belief was one of 'let them learn from their own mistakes.' Meaning they were lazy as fuck when it came to being parents.

Man I think you have channeled my inner HS persona with this: More time passed and I had to pee horribly. In my drunken mind I felt horribly guilty for leaving my spot incase Rose decided to come back. But hey, the bitch left me for like an hour. 

Tanya is a super skank! Jess & Lauren suck so bad. They make me sick tramps. 

Aw I knew she threw up on Edward but I was hoping no because that sh*t is nasty but hey its fiction why do I smell throw up? I like how you reversed the intro and how Rose was talking sh*t about not throwing up in her house.

Okay I'm on to the next chapter.

Poor Edward he heard their whole exchange. Bella is a b*tch right now to me for hurting Edward. Rose was on to Bella all along she has no man present so she can see sh*t. I like the intro of Angela & Ben plus Carlisle & Esme. I feel so bad for Edward he seems so her about his granddad dying I mean who wouldn't it was so sad. He loved him you can tell by how he was acting and what he said. Okay I can't wait to read the next chapter. I loved this super long chapter by the way. Until next time.

Damn Bella is trying she needs to put on her big girl panties and ditch Jess & Lauren they suck. Until next time.

I loved it especially the seth red car thing aw. this fic is awesome. until next time.

I loved it. it was perfect everybody got wrapped up plus it was funny. wtg I truly enjoyed this fic and your writing hasn't let me down and I wantto thank you for the entertainment and your skill. sometimes i read it because I needed to read about a fictional struggle I could relate to. other times I needed to know you are not your past and you gave it to me no matter what kind of day I had. not to get all sappy but thank you for putting this story out there honestly I appreciate it so much. until next time.

loved it funny.

this chapter made me cry it felt the pain, joy and other emotions. I really love this fic. Sorry for not reading this earlier but my driod phone had problems with the layout so I'm on my kindle and it still annoying stop zooming in you know anyway I should catch up real soon. I'm glad school is going well. Until next time.

I enjoyed it! I forgot to mention I love Jake's mental illness where he thinks he's Sam that was unique and different but I loved it! This is a really good story so far keep it up! Until next time.

Omg thank God for Ben Edward was about to get the business! James that fucker he needs to get dealt with sometime I knew that fucker was up to something. Until next time really liked this chapter!

Aw poor Jake he's so sick damn it! I'm so glad that Edward and Bella are doing so well little by little but that Roy just won't give up. I know James is in the choir singing his ass off so he can get to Bella damn jerk. Until next time. Oh yeah I will be recommending your story on my fanfiction profile aka here  http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2053450/ and on my blog  http://luv4jake.blogspot.com/ on the first of July. I know its not one of the big sites but I just wanted to let you know. Don't be fooled by the counter on my blog I just added it yesterday! 

Poor Bella Alec is a manipulative fucker! I loved this chapter even though Bella is coerced into leaving Colorado my home state to go to Phoenix. It is definitely time for Edward to spill his story for real. These two fucked kids are gonna make right? My heart is breaking for Bella right now. I saw Eclipse it was fucking awesome! I yelled at the screen did a fist pump during the fight damn near cried when Jacob screamed out in pain while Billy cried in front of their house with the pack. I was mad at Bella for disrespecting Edward through the whole movie but at least he got the girl. I loved it I wish there were more of Seth, Leah and my second favorite vampire Emmett! I loved Jasper's flashback and Alice & Jasper sparing it was so fucking cute plus Rose's little flashback it was too short for me but it was okay the fight scene was fucktastic. I can't wait for BD. This was the best out of the three and stuck closer to the books. I don't know how they made me feel sorry for Riley, Bree and Victoria but they did! Damn good move though. Until next time.

I enjoyed this chapter and I'll see you Monday. These are the parts that I loved because they ar cute, funny or just Edward on some messed up kind of level. I hope their trip goes well but I'm thinking there's going to be drama I hope Alec doesn't show up or some shit. I hope Jake shows up at the shelter even though he is crazy and needs some mental help. I'm still a little upset and disappointed with family over this. Anyway keep up the good work.

She flutters her eyelashes at me; I assume this is an attempt to flirt. She really just looks like she has something in her eye.

"Do I look like a map?" she asks rudely. I'm tempted to let her know that while she doesn't look like a map, she does look like a cheap hooker.

I have a key, but I still knock as I open the door, just so I don't catch her changing or anything. Not that I would mind all that much.

I'm shocked to see her eyes start to well with water. She bites her lip in an effort to control her emotions. She thinks I bought this shit for another girl, and she actually cares. Fuck, maybe she cares about me more than I think.

"Yeah, she is really nice," I say. She looks up and gives me a fake weak smile.

"Oh, good," she says, giving the snacks her attention once again. I can't stand to see her hurt so I give up the gig. I already feel stupid I bought the shit, now I have to tell her why I bought it. I walk over to her and take the food out of her hands.

"No, it is Edward. It's a big deal to me," she says, taking her gift out of my hand. I lean forward and kiss her on her forehead. I'm happy that she likes the gift so much... but I still feel stupid for buying it.

"Every single second. I won't even go to the bathroom... scouts honor," I say. She laughs and shakes her head.

"Well, I know I don't know that much about your past, but I'm almost positive you were never a scout," she says, laughing.

"I was," I insist in mock seriousness. "My mom, she uh... made me do it when I was younger. She and my grandma thought I looked cute in the outfit," I admit, trying to continue to loosen her up a little with my embarrassing confession. It works. She laughs and agrees that the outfit would be cute on me. I just roll my eyes at her.

"I'd like to hear more about them," she says quietly. I don't respond.

Poor Edward you're a good guy and just need to be a little more patient Bella will get there in no time: I take my time in the shower, exhausted from not only the trip here, but also the unexpected meeting with Carlisle. For the first time in a long time, I don't do anything other than bathe in the shower; I'm just too worn out... and tired of fucking myself.

Aw poor Edward and Bella she loves you man let her in plus I wanna know too lol:I rip my hands out of hers, stepping back. I'm pissed, but not at her. I'm pissed at myself, because I want to tell her so badly. I just can't. I'm pissed I'm so fucked up that I can't let her in even though I want to so badly.

Because I am the way I am, I react out of anger, not knowing what else to do. "Why the fuck do you even care? Why do you even want to know?"

She looks at me, shocked. She steps forward, anger in her eyes.

"Because I love you! That's why I care and want to know!" Her body stops. She freezes and throws her hands over her mouth, shocked she let the words fly out.

There's no way she's more shocked than I am. We stare at each other, not moving. Even though I thought I wanted to hear this all along, that I have admitted to myself I love her as well, I can't get the words out. In my mind, I know we should have a cheesy movie moment where we run and embrace each other while I declare my undying love for her, but I can't. Now that the moment has come, I can't, and I hate myself for it

Before I even know what I'm doing, my feet move and take me to the front door. I walk out, hearing her sobs as I walk away into the night.

The above were my favorite parts I am so wrapped up in this story I stopped updating my blog to read the update. Yeah I know it would have been here later but I keep seeing it in my inbox and I couldn't resist. Until next monday!

I loved it. Edward really is steeping up to the plate to help Bella but also recognizes he needs Carlisle's help. I'm really proud of Edward. Oh and he waited so they can make love with the timing is better you go boy! Until next time.

Omg I hope Alec is not Alice's baby daddy I might just faint. Damn when I looked up the chapter was over I'm a sad panda now aw! Here are my favorite parts as always. Oh yeah you got a lot going on but I'll be waiting every two weeks for an update believe me I love this story. Until next time, here we go!

Omg too funny but true: "Oh my gosh, Alice! He's so cute!"

He is? I saw Bella work with some of the kids when she volunteered at the Mission; she's good with them. I take a closer look at him. He has dark curly hair and dimples. I guess he would be considered cute, but as soon as he opens his mouth and screams, the cuteness factor drops to zero in my book.

Omg Edward is killing my with laughter I swear: Seth, Alice's... spawn, is completely taken with Bella. At the moment, he's sitting on her lap playing with her hair. Once she got a hold of him, he completely calmed down and has wanted to do nothing but sit with Bella. He's shown her his cars and explained what the cartoons on his shirt are.

"I think he has a crush on you," Alice giggles to Bella. Bella smiles at him and ruffles his hair. The little boy beams and looks up at her through his lashes. Even at three he has it bad. Yeah, bud, join the party.

Oh Edward that's some amazing progress but so true for real: I'm stuck outside with Carlisle and Seth; he's a pretty cool kid. As long as he doesn't start screaming again, I won't call him the spawn.

2. You did a great job with this chapter which could have gone wrong but you rose to the occasion wtg!
3. I loved this chapter and can't wait to meet Charlie he's one of my favorite characters. I hope Edward doesn't snap on him yikes!
   omg Rose having braces added to the charm of the chapter too I loved that.
4. damn Edward's being kind of harsh well judgmental as hell but then again he doesn't know Charlie and loves B so its to be expected.
6.    Esme made me love her even more this chapter. I was proud of Bella how she handled visiting her mom and edward there. you go Bella!
   Until next time.

I loved it even though Charlie got me a little heated because he was being so damn rude but it was understandable. Also J. Jenks needs to work on his people skills but now Jasper is in the mix please don't let Alice just fall head over heels with him right at first sight omg that annoys me to no end but anyway I really did enjoy this chapter. Until next time i glad Charlie & Edward's relationship made that turn all for Bella of course she has good guys all around her yes!

Aw happy holidays to you & your family too! I took a beta break aka sneak reading your chapter. I had to know what these two were up too lol.

I loved it as always here's my long review just kidding okay not really. See around twitter. Until next time.

aw & lol: "I was teaching them how to pick the lock," I say, thinking the situation is hilarious.

Two grown men stumbling and trying to hide what they're doing from their wives. I hear a chorus of names coming from the women, each one scolding their respective partner, and Bella doesn't leave me out. Both men shoot me a look, and Emmett flips me off. I laugh and bring the beer bottle to my lips, only to get it ripped from my grasp.

"No! No beer for you, traitor," Emmett says, mocking hurt and fury all in the same expression, and I about choke I'm laughing so hard. I wonder if this is what it feels like to have a family and if it is... it isn't so bad.

I see Emmett's pickup pulling into the lot when I exit the building.

"What the hell are you laughing at, Judas?" he asks with a smile when I jump in the passenger seat. That's what he calls me now. I've learned not to rat Emmett out; he'll never let you forget it. I also won't tell him that's exactly what I'm laughing about.

omg these guys are so cute & I love their relationship as its growing before my eyes: "Today, Judas... today, is the day you learn to drive," he says with a wicked grin. I have no apprehension and grab his keys. I put the keys in the ignition, and Emmett's hand slaps mine away. I raise an eyebrow at him.

"Now, Edward, there are some basics you need to learn when it comes to operating a motor vehicle," he says in a snobby way. I pretend I'm listening to him, because I'm amused by his act.

"This," he points to the steering wheel, "this, Edward, is a steering wheel. Can you say that? Steer... ring wh... wh... eeel. Can you say that, Edward?"

"Fucker!" I say, punching his arm as hard as I can. I let him play his game a little longer. I'm not going to tell him Carlisle has been giving me lessons for weeks. I go to turn the key again, but he stops me.

"No, seriously. There are some things you need to know before you just drive off."

"Just let me show you what I know," I say rolling my eyes. I turn it on and smoothly pull out of the parking lot.

He looks at me with his mouth open. "I thought you'd never driven before?"

I laugh at his disappointed expression. "I hadn't... until your dad taught me," I smirked.

"Shit," he sighs, sitting back in his chair. Disappointment paints his face. I just laugh as I drive us to the store.

I love that Edward is a guys guy if that makes sense: "So what's the deal?" he asks, as I push the little cart around the store trying to find all the shit on Bella's list.

lol: "Nah, we just don't want her to leave again." I nod to let him know I understand. "My little heart might break if you go, too," he says in a sickly southern accent.

"Well, we can't have that, can we?" I laugh.

lol: "Yeah, I won't have you start training for three weeks or so; it's not rocket science. You just need to get your license before you start."

"Uh... Thanks, Emmett," I say sincerely.

"Not a prob, Judas. You'll basically be my bitch," he says with a big grin as he walks down an aisle getting distracted by something shiny.

I shake my head, laughing, and make my way to the register, appreciating the surprising friendship I've found in Emmett.

lol: "Uh, I just waited downstairs. I... don't like to go very far." And I guard the door to see whose coming and going like an obsessed stalker - I leave that part out.

aw & lol plus its just cute: I nod, my smile growing to match hers. I'm waiting for her to jump in my arms, but she doesn't.

"What is it?"

"I just... you've made so many sacrifices, Edward. Before I showed up that night you had your own life your own-"

"And it sucked, Bella. My life... sucked before you."

I don't think she grasps that every change has been for the better, even though some of the changes haven't been easy or fun; they've been for the better. I've been resistant and probably have made some things more difficult than they needed to be, but I can't imagine going back to the isolation I lived in before, especially now that I know what it's like to live without it.

A huge smile spreads across her face. "You want to stay, don't you?"

"I do."

Then she's in my arms. I spin her around, and she laughs. I trip over a damn log and almost bring us both to the ground, so I set her down.

i loved it as usual. yay they had a very steamy and initmate moment and they deserved it. omg i know the shit is gonna hit the fan next chapter and i canit wait. i read and reviewed on my cell so that is serious how much i love this fic. keep up the excellent work. until next time.

i loved it. so good. poor esme, carlisle and em and rose. it was really great to see jake working through his illness and everyone supporting him. i love that alice and jasper had children together even though seth was so freaking cute lol. until next time. sorry for the text my cell wonkt correct on this site

OMG I loved that show: I had been busy talking to Tanya, my now ex-best-friend about what happened the night before on Veronica Mars. 

The bitch is crazy but I like it: I'm going to have to try a little harder. If I can't get Alice on my side, I'm going to have to push her out of Emmett's circle of friends. Now that I have Emmett, I'm not letting him go.

Ever.

Until nex time.

Omg I read this on my cell and loved it. I'm rec'ing it on my blog tomorrow.

Aw damn it Em you are so evil and I can like the change but poor Bella this sucks for you. How the hell is she gonna get out of this mess or find out who Em really is? I can't wait to find out. Until next time.

aw snap I love Charlotte she is refreshing because I don't know how much more I can take of Rose. Poor Bella still in the dark but right now ignorance is truly bliss. Until next time.

 i have never been more mad and hateful toward an emmett character since reading fic i didnit know i was possible. wtg btw i wanted to fuck em up seriously when he killed the baby and beat bella it was an all time low. i canit wait for bella to get revenge and kill him plus get her hea with someone else. until next time.