Man this is sick but I like it. I feel dirty just for liking it but I can't stop reading it I'm addicted and it's so sad. I loved thic chapter but Renee accepted the program too easy she must have been having these thoughts about not being worthy while being with Phil and that sucks. She just sucks. She wanted to be loved so badly that she just into the frying pan with lots of hot grease and dragged her daughter with her for the ride. WTF! Renee really has some redeeming to do.

I loving it as always. Felix has a heart but it was buried and our girl brought it out of him. I wonder what Aro has planned for Liz? What the hell is this place how did it start who came up with this program. Why di they start it? Where the hell is Charlie? Bella will be a totally different child by the time he visits with her. Man I hate Aro! What's this father bullshit? I have lots of questions which means you drew me into this sad but interesting story. Keep up the excellent work!

There is certain religious elements that remind me of Islam in the east and other parts that remind me of different sects of Christianity. Aro was breathing hard because he can't wait to fuck Elizabeth. This story is good but so sick.  It's believable because they broke Renee & Bella down they are not faking they actually believe this shit and that's what makes it so sad. I remember when I converted to Islam I met some Muslim men from the East and they felt I shouldn't speak, look them in the eye and other crap. So I told them this is a America baby & Islam is not used as a tool to demean women it uplifts us and protects us. Don't pull any of the eastern bullshit over here because we do not go for that shit. Especially since I was born in the corn state and I know how a woman is supposed to be treated by a man. It was funny though that I saw my fellow American women going for that crap I couldn't believe it. I was so glad me and my husband didn't go for that eastern philosophy I would have suffered too much and been depressed all the time because I couldn't live that way. Damn TMI my bad.

I loved it. I don't like Aro planting his seed first this shit is crazy but fucking love it! Until next time ladies. Hey did your daughter place in her state competition? Just asking.

I loved it! Edward has pair and I'm proud of the dude. Aro is an ass and I hope Edward doesn't allow Aro to take Bella first or ever but where would be the drama in that. I hope that Edward has her first and they have a baby that's theirs or they leave the compound. Hey what about Charlie? When is he going to be in the mix I hope he's not too much of an ass he's one of my favorites. Ok until next time.

Crap Aro is a sick bastard but what a smart test to place these two in. Well more Bella than Edward and I loved Edward's reaction after. I'm so glad you ladies updated I was feeling sad about training school ending its hard to find quality stories but I know you ladies know! Until next time! Bella had a memory of her pst which was brief but maybe it all might come back later in a flashback like Dorie in Finding Nemo P Sherman lol!

Great insight into this sick world, Aro's twisted mind and Esme's inner rage toward Aro! I loved it but felt hella sad for these people and the person aka Felix who turned the outsiders into family members. Until next time ladies.

Poor Charlie he is trying to get his baby girl back. Keep looking for papa bear she needs your rescuing skills bad Aro is fucking insane! Until next time.

Happy 10th anniversary! I loved the chapter omg is Jasper going to be able to deal with Aro having sex with Alice? Edward's back and APOV super yay. Until next time ladies.

Omg Aro is a psycho weird freak! I knew Jasper wasn't gonna go out like a punk! Yeah he kicked Aro's ass and is heading towards the cellar be he's a man who stood up for his woman you go Jasper. Jasper is the man that's all I'm saying! I'll check out the story you mentioned as well it sounds interesting I'll tell her you sent me their way. Until next time, Blessed Be!

Yay! I can't wait for Edward to step inside the real world. Oh boy it feels like the matrix in here lol! I love how carlisle, esme, jasper and Edward see aro for the nut case he is. Damn the dude is crazy. I'm glad Jazz kicked his ass. Until next time.

Omg these two are in bad shape especially Edward. Hold on Edward don't die on Bella she needs you and damn it I want you to make you brave man. Those guards were punks that's all. Thanks for the update ladies and don't forget about another fic Daddy's Little Girl hello I miss that fic so much I'm just saying. Until next time.

Uh oh Elizabeth is in trouble Aro want some of her cherry pie and I don't mean food. I can't wait for the next update.

Aro that bastard I hope Felix and Charlie save our couple soon! 

Omg I was tearing up this whole chapter but here is the start of the water works: “Where are you baby girl?”  I whispered. Omg Charlie! I feel so bad for you. Charlie you fight for your baby girl damn it to hell. I hate Aro his bitch ass needs to go down with the ship. Okay that was off but I'm mad. Felix better have a very good plan to get Bella out of there or Charlie bust a cap in his ass lol. Until next time ladies I apologize for being over dramatic but it had to be done lol.

I love that James is now the fucking victim. I loved this chapter keep the torture up he deserves it!

I am glad my Jakey is in the mix plus he is a good guy at least I am hoping. I would be so pissed if his ass was a crooked ass cop. Poor Victoria she is afraid to leave her room. James really did a number on her.

Oh Jake is in the mix. Yes I'm so excited! I can't believe James escaped! Lauren that bitch she is always fucking something up but I'm sure James turned on the charm full blast. It was funny when Bella and Alice revealed they were lurking down in the dungeon just like Lauren was but the thing is I can't stand Lauren so no benefit of the doubt her ass. I loved this chapter as always poor Victoria she is scared shitless! Poor girl.

Man I love jake in the mix and he is a good guy not pining for bella or getting his ass kicked so thank you for that! I am really enjoying this story the Leah reveal was interesting and I liked it even though it was sad it made so much sense. Keep up the good work.

Damn Laurent got the worse of James. Poor Heidi where does that leave her? Maybe while all this fighting is going on Edward & co will catch up with them or Jasper, Carlisle, Jake & co. Man James' dick is still in the cock cage though too funny! Until next time.

Poor Edward he was screaming and crying and didn't even realize it. that happens for real especially when you are traumatized and scared. I feel so bad for the guy he should have trusted his gut but I know he was trying to do the right thing for both Bella & Victoria. That's life though decisions that you agonize over that you can't change but it sounds like my guy Jake has a plan thank God or Edward might lose and fucking get them all killed. Until next time and just too let you know you guys freaked me the fuck out with The Volutri Order. That was some shit especially from Aro's POV. I'm just saying. I want to read Daddy's Little Girl but I vowed no more Edward stories just the ones I am already reading but I have a feeling I will read it next weekend. Your my last Edward story. Most of recommendations on my fanfiction profile are Edward or Emmett stories I have to get back to my Jake stories but you good ass writers make it very fucking hard. I recommend you stories there as well. Keep up the excellent work ladie. No more short ass chapters. I appreciate the update anyway I'm not going to lie.

I think that would be great to know Bella before she was essentially trained by James. I think some us wonder how she could have let it get so far out of hand but guys like James' character are like a fungus they grow on you. I have seen it with my sister and her loser boyfriends I would wonder why she just wouldn't whoop their asses but they broke her down. No one who knows her would believe she was a victim of domestic abuse but love fucks up people's common sense and the intellect. They are far from stupid but lovesick dumb. Does that make any sense. Okay I'm looking forward to the ending but at the same time I'm so sad. The Perfect Wife & The training school coming to an end WTshrek is going on? I love ya. Until next time.

This was so freaking hot: “Look at how you respond to just my voice and my touch.”  He purrs as he continues to move both hands over my body in a whispering touch.  He leans into my ear and whispers, “How would it feel to have my cock buried deep within your pussy?  How would you respond then?” I loved this story and I hate to see it go but it must so I will deal with it. Damn  1st TPW and now this what's next ladies? The Lessons Saga will be ending eventually then what? Okay let me stop being all dramatic I hope this will free you up for VO or DLG hell yeah now I'm excited again. Can't wait for more from you talented ladies. Perfect ending!

Oh Edward your daddy is a freak and you have no idea what he was thinking and meant when he told her those things. Yikes creepy!

WTF?! OMFG! I am shocked boy Carlisle was not playing when he made up his decision a few chapters back. When I told people I was about to read the update they told me it would make me yell at my monitor. Boy were they right. I felt like I did in the beginning when Bella was with James & Charlie. I thought Carlisle lost his spark but apparently he was waiting to release his secret weapon. Poor Bella & Edward they are pretty much stuck under Carlisle's rule. This was one of the reasons I didn't want Bella & Edward to have sex before marriage because of Carlisle. Bella got too comfortable and so did Edward now he has to become the monster Carlisle created. As fucked up as this is about to sound I want to see how our couple dodge this obstacles in their way aka future. It was getting to lovey dovey and a weak Carlisle was getting on my nerves because he just gave up there for a minute. Not that I want him to succeed I don't. I wanted the drama back and you brought it back big time. I am sad to say that I wrote on twitter I wanted bad Carlisle back now I am not even sure I do any more he was full possession of his devilish ways talking about Esme & Bella in that crude, crass, demeaning way. I'm scared of this Carlisle and Edward is right where Carlisle wants him. Poor Bella I hope she will be able to recover after this and forgive him later when he tells her what his is doing. Brilliant chapter but so fucking sad. I feel like a pervert because I want to see what Edward does to convince Carlisle but I am scared as hell for Bella since she is no longer a virgin and Carlisle wanting to do a check. Why would she have sex with Edward when she knows Carlisle said chapters ago he was going to fuck her when Edward popped her cherry? Anyway babbling and shocked can't wait for the next chapter.

I loved the secret. I loved the flashback even though it was horrible but needed. I loved Esme & Renee's strength. I love this story and I'm trying to get others to read it on twitter and just pimping it on my FF.net profile. Just because it's not there anymore doesn't mean that th story isn't one of the best out here in fandom. I hope to donate the next time my hubby gets paid. I love the site it has grown so much since those LU bastards started beating the TOS drum and that's fine as long as they don't shit on my freedoms and liberties in the process. I like to chose what I want to read and I chose this story because it touching my heart not my groin. This could be someone's life via sex trade but it's not it's fiction and I love the strength your characters possess to transform and change themselves into something better than what they were or where they thought their life was going via acceptance or storing hope in their heart. Sorry for getting deep loved the chapter. Until next time.

It's fucking Carlisle or Marcus. I'm going to go with Carlisle. Just because he wants Bella's ass like a fat kid loves cake. Damn it after Edward's emo ways I was getting bored until the text message and your story shot off like a NASA shuttle. OMFG! I was so good. I loved it I so fucking loved it. Angela & Edwards' conversation genius. Poor Bella & Edward WTH!? I fucking love it. This doesn't look good for Bella though and I'm scared. I can't wait for the next update.

I can't believe its almost over. Well I loved this chapter because there was a lot of closure and new beginnings. Bella does get her HEA it just came later down the road but she has been through so much. I'm so proud of the Cullens for changing their lives. I am especially proud of Edward for letting her go with all her inheritances to make a life that is truly her own. Bravo you did a wonderful job wrapping up this story. One more chapter to go well the epilogue. I hope there are babies, traveling, Bella & Edward's career, Esme with great man that treats her like gold and updates on the rest of the Cullens. Until next time I can't wait but I don't want it to end especially now that her and Edward are going out on a date. *tears up*

Aw! Damn it. Its really over. It was an excellent ending too. I just bitchy because now I have to find another story with a bad ass big daddy C in it. Your Carlisle was the first twisted Carlisle I have ever read and no compares to him. Believe every time I read something I think damn TPW Carlisle would have been so much more devious and smart about doing that. I didn't know how crazy he was until the last few chapters but damn him for always keeping me on my toes. I can't read CAM and my favorite all I'm going to say is "purina" yeah I can't wait. Damn sorry for going all fangirl on you. I hope the family is doing well and look forward to reading all your upcoming projects including original works. Well gotta go. Until next time.

Aw! Damn it. Its really over. It was an excellent ending too. I just bitchy because now I have to find another story with a bad ass big daddy C in it. Your Carlisle was the first twisted Carlisle I have ever read and no compares to him. Believe every time I read something I think damn TPW Carlisle would have been so much more devious and smart about doing that. I didn't know how crazy he was until the last few chapters but damn him for always keeping me on my toes. I can't read CAM and my favorite all I'm going to say is "purina" yeah I can't wait. Damn sorry for going all fangirl on you. I hope the family is doing well and look forward to reading all your upcoming projects including original works. Well gotta go. Until next time.

Oh shit I laughed so hard about Jasper being a nerd before being turned toward the dark side. The three kings are sexy and assholes but what can you do they're hot! Watch ladies and hold on to your panties they are going hunting for virgin puntang. Will they find any? I can't wait to see.

OMG This is like a train wreck but I'm too scared to see the outcome. Tanya is a hating ass whore. Bella totally is stepping outside of her box i hope she doesn't give up the goodies. 

Tanya that bitch that was so wrong. I have no words.

Oh crap I didn't think you go this direction but I was secretly hoping even though I know she is going to end up with Edward I love the drama of it all.

I loved it. Charlie is the man. I mean is the man but he is on Edward's ass. Poor Edward is going through it. I love his mom too.

I'm liking it so fa not instance Alice/Jasper romance yeah buddy.

Ew Em is a big meanie and Jasper was jealous as hell about Sean and Alice is getting used to being a feeder already.

oh boy the volutri have been introduced yay but they are still scary as hell. what's up with alice's visions.

I have heavy periods and cramps plus I have to have some potatoes or I'll kill someone. I love how this story is coming along.

I liked it the volutri are coming the wolfpack entered the story and Sean is just dreamy. Poor Alice her luck sucks.

Oh boy things happened so quickly she was taken from the wolves Sean kissed her and she has a thing for Jasper which means she can't be with Sean because of the rules. She didn't stay with the wolves very long but what can you do. It was okay not your best chapter but I liked it.

It was sexy at the beginning and the usual at the end.

Crap Jasper was a soldier he tried to stand up to Jane and failed but he still tried. Damn Jane and her evil crew. Aro is such an arrogant bitch.

It looks like another interesting story. I can't wait to read more. Oh yeah I started following you on twitter. I need you to follow me so I can make comments you can see since my tweets are protected since the girls and I usually have picture porn parties and they get a little raunchy. Yeah twitter is like a black hole for me and so is fanfiction. Until next time.

Man poor Em he had to breakup with Rose because she had issues that would keep effecting his sister good brother move Em. Edward, Esme and Alice are making a killer team getting the things together that Bella needs. I'm loving it. Oh I forgot to mention that Bella's POV crushed my little heart for real. Renee is a bitch and didn't deserve to have Bella as a daughter.

I'm still loving and thank God for you A/N2. It confirmed what I thought. 

I love Noel. Bella is making progress one step forward three back probably. I hope my Jake doesn't become a bad guy.

Wow down the rabbit hole we go. Whoa mama someone save Bella. I hope Noel is okay she's just a puppy. I hate Renee and Phil especially Renee she sucks as a mother and should be ashamed of herself.

This was my favorite part: And Jasper went home last night; his Dad came and picked him and his tire iron up. I love my Noell as usual but I can't wait to find out what happened with Em & Rose plus this drama with Tanya & Edward. Oh yeah baby can't wait. See ya around in twitterland.

I loved it. That date was perfect with the exception of the tongue biting! lol. I'm feeling Alice on the Vicky situation. Poor Rose this shit needs to stop before Em gets any deeper but it will bring the extra drama in spades. Until next time this chapter was the bomb from every POV.