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Can't Let Go by madeleinejade Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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All human. Bella was best friends with Alice and Edward in high school. She decided to confess her feelings to Edward before end of senior year, but he unfortunately didn't return her feelings. Embarrassed and regretful of a ruined friendship, she moved back to Arizona for college but returned to Washington due to Charlie's illness. Can she and Edward be friends again?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 108256 Read Count: 22518
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 17 Feb 2010
Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue: Beginnings

I totally enjoyed this fun, cheery and funny story.  You did a great job with everyone!  I waited until I finished to review since you had already finished the story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 361802
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: A Critical Choice

Jen---I have read a couple of your other stories, and am now also reading Breakaway.  I have to say, when I first saw the title and description of this story, I did not read it---I am not into historical fiction romance--actually avoid them (hate the verbage normally), but YOU have made me read this one. You did an EXCELLENT job with this, and am anxiously awaiting the remainder of the story!! 

I love your style of writing, and so once again, you have me as a great fan!  Keep up the great work, and hopefully your summer is quiet and peaceful---enjoy those little league baseball games!!!!



Author's Response:

Wow...thank you so much.  It always makes me happy to hear things like that.  I hope you like the rest.  It is completed now...I'm just waiting to get it back from my beta.  Thank you for the praise.  Not sure if you heard, but I also entered an original story into the contest here on TWCS.  It's called Children of Creation.  I hope you take some time to check it out at some point!  Thanks again!!!!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

Jen--You have done it again! Another wonderful story--wonderfully written, and "told".   I truly love your writing style, you can write in modern times; which makes us love all the characters, or in "olden days" and again make us love them truly.  When you write a story, I can always feel their pain, hurt, and most of all their love for one another.

I can truly say only you and one other author can make me feel this way.  I always look forward to your stories.  Please keep up the GREAT WORK!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  Messages like this make my effort feel worth it.  Thanks so much for the kind review.  I'm glad you can feel thier pain because honestly I feel it as I write it.  Trust me, however hard a chapter might be for you guys to read, it was at least a little bit harder to write.  If I had a dollar for every time I cried while writing a chapter, I'd be a rich woman!  LOLOL!  Thanks again for the review!

Friends in Love by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is desperate to move out of his apartment with Alice and lands in the only campus housing available, a co-ed apartment with Bella Swan. Both have feelings for the other but are unable to voice them and find themselves in separate relationships. As the friendship grows in spite of deeper feelings trouble brews and Edward finds himself being pushed to his limits while Bella deals with some of her issues. So what can you do when you love your friend...read to find out! Be warned that this story deals with the subject rape and abuse.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119515 Read Count: 35834
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2011
Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue 2: A Little Piece of Happily Ever After

This was an excellent story!  It did indeed teach many things, even to those of us who are not personally involved in DV!  As you did point out there are all types of domestic violence, not just ones that leave visible marks!  For this I thank you!

You should be proud of this story (and all your stories) you are a talented author!  Looking forward to your next one!

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60064
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

Have to say, the last part truly brought tears to my eyes.  Haven't reviewed in a while, and have kept up with the story!  Am now so anxiously waiting for next week!!

Keep up the GREAT work!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality

YAHOOOOOO!!!  I am so excited....sadly now we have to wait!!!  I am sitting here with a silly grin on my face---you would think I was an actual witness to this reunion!!

GREAT JOB!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust

YEAH, so excited to get this update! Also glad with how Edward did not remember!!  Can't wait for the next chapter!  Do we get to find out how mad Edward was w/ Carlisle?  Would be very interested in "hearing" about that part of the story!

Great Job, and looking forward to the next update!!!!!!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments

Ahhh...am sad to see this end, but am SOOOO glad it worked out.  Loved your explanation to Edward and Bella.  Loved the humor with everyone!  This is now one of my favorite stories.  Can't wait for the epiloge!

Read your Sex Tips and Star Trek one shot and absolutely LOVED IT!!!  Keep up the great writing work--you have some definite talent!!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future

You did an VERY GOOD job with this story!  Have so enjoyed it all!  I look forward to any and all upcoming stories you do!  Keep up the good work and again THANK YOU for this excellent story!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue, Part II: Of Marriage and Memories

This was so beautiful!  I truly enjoyed "hearing" what Carlisle was thinking and how he truly felt about Bella and the rest of his family!

GREAT Job!!!!

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 829]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 182691
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 Super Bowl XLVI

ABSOLUTELY GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it!  You did a fabulous job on this story, be very proud of yourself!  I love the O/S you started and you did the whole thing justice......loved the ending!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much hon!  I'm so glad you liked it!  Little epi coming next week and then we'll hit the outtakes hard! hehe

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I have to say, I read this when it was part of the contest (Chap 1, anyway) and TOTALLY loved it--voted for it actually!  So now I have to say, I am SO GLAD you have decided to expand it and make it a full story.  I like the way its going, and love the "misunderstanding"   Keep up the GREAT work.  Looking forward to the next chapter!!!  :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you for the vote and for sticking with me!  The response I got was just amazing so I had to continue.  That and my need for any football I could get this offseason, even if I have to write it :)  I'll be working on the next chapter this week so I should have something for you soon!  Thanks for reviewing and voting!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am really enjoying this story---a bit of fun, humor and L-O-V-E!!!!  Am always such a sucker for a romantic Edward :-)



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you're liking it!  I like fun and humor and love myself.  Too many of the stories I read are angstridden so you can count on me NOT to do that.  I need happy :) 

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Game On

I really enjoyed this chapter!  I am a big football fan, so LOVED the football in here!  I am liking how you are "evolving" the relationship with our fav couple.  Its is always fun to read about Emmit teasing Edward and Jasper---I absolutely LOVE the knick-names Emmit has for Edward (especially Heisman)!!!

Keep up the good work, am looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Awww thank you.  There were a few people who felt it was too much football and I probably won't be that detailed again but I wanted to show the technical side of it a little bit.  I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

I love writing Emmett so I'm thrilled you enjoyed him.  He'll use Heisman and GQ the most because those are his favorites but I'll have to think up more too :)

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Kick Off

This was a very cute chapter.  I love that you are having them take it slow--to me its much more ROMANTIC when they do, and I am a true Romance lover at heart! 

And Alice and her football terms had me laughing out loud!  I LOVE football, and am really enjoying this! Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

:) Yeah I don't want to rush them into the physical.  We know, thanks to chapter one, that they will get there soon enough, for now I'd like them to both be anticipating it and thinking about it and getting to know one another!

I had such fun with Alice and her non-knowledge but complete enthusiasm for the game.  She's truly a treat to write!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Flag On The Play

This story just makes me chuckle and oh man.....................You are doing a very good job here and I so wait for my inbox to tell me you have updated!!  Keep up the good work, and am ANXIOUSLY waiting for the Tanya meeting!!  whoohooooooo---GO ALICE!!



Author's Response:

Haha Yeah, it should be interesting when those two get around Tanya.  We'll see what happens!

I love hearing I make people laugh :)  It's my favorite thing I think.  So glad you liked it!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Touchdown

Loved the way, they were both so nervous---to me that shows the caring on both sides (his especially!!) Great chapter!  Keep them coming!!!  :-)



Author's Response:

Exactly!  I think if they didn't care so much, it would have been no big deal. But they both like/love one another and really wanted it to be the best it could be.  Pressure. hehe But they pulled it off beautifully I htink.  I"m happy you liked it!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery

Ahhhh, such a romatic guy at the end...such sweet words!!  Glad they worked it out, and glad he was not "ugly" to her about her article, have been waiting for this type of thing to happen---her having to be BRUTALLY honest!!!  BTW---wanted so much to have Edward show Darnell that HE could own a 300Lb line-backer!!!


Glad Esme is okay, but then we knew she would be!  As always---GREAT chapter and love this story!!!



Author's Response:

:) So glad you're still loving it, thank you!

He is always a romantic and so very sweet.  He never blamed her for the article.  She got worked up over nothing, but that happens from time to time when you're not communicating I suppose! 

I was looking forward to having him have a bad game and her having to cover it as well.  That's definitely tough but we know they can handle it now!

Haha Edward would have liked to hit Darnell but Coach would throw a fit :)

Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion

FUN CHAPTER!!!  I kinda want one of those showers now!  Keep up the GREAT work!  Totally enjoying this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)  I want that shower to be mine.  I could be content with it and without the man, though both would be preferable of course!   So glad you liked it!  I love these two and love the way you guys respond to them!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Huddle Up

Another GREAT Chapter!!  Am so glad they admitted their feelings for one another---also am glad they guys (Emmett and Jasper) were cool with talking to him, and helped!!

As for the chapter one, I would L-O-V-E to read EPOV since we already had BPOV (which I again say was GREAT!!!).  But then, I ALWAYS enjoy reading EPOV's!! ;-)



Author's Response:

I knew EPOV would be win :)  I was always planning on it, just glad you want it!

Thank you for the compliment!  The love was bound to come pouring out soon, just had to make Bella spew it like usual :)  Jas and Em are great friends, to be sure!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Taking The Field

One word: sssssqqqqqqqqquuuuuuuuueeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!

That was a cute chapter and I loved the nonsense of the girls.  Keep up the good work!!!



Author's Response:

Aww thank you!  I had a blast writing it, loved letting the girls get some bonding time and including Rose.  Thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Game Plan

I loved this chapter---you had me CRACKING UP LAUGHING---when Esme was talking about how Edward was looking at her and motioning to her at the game!!  WooHoo!!

Now I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting (oh so NOT patiently) for EPOV of Chap 1!!

Great work!!



Author's Response:

Hehe I was giggling away writing it.  Her playing all clueless but needling the heck out of her son.  Always fun!

EPOV is coming.  One BPOV in between to set up the scene :)  Not long now!

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Press Pass

WooHoo!!  Oh this is gonna get goooood.....!!!!  So proud of Bella for putting that Dan dude in his place, she gave nothing away and was able to keep doing her job!  GREAT chapter!!!!

Can't wait for EPOV on "THE interview"!! hehe



Author's Response:

Haha yeah I am kind of in love with next chapter.  I thought chapter one was hot but it's way hotter when he knows what's going down the whole time.  Hopefully you'll agree with me!

Bella did a very good job holding her own, which is a good thing because she'll have a lot of flak coming her way soon enough ;) 

Thanks for the review, so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line

This chapter, just CRACKED ME UP!!  Esme, like we have never seen her before....did her and Edward plan that "attack" on Bella about the auction???  GREAT JOB!!  Can't wait for that auction!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad it did! :)  Esme definitely let loose to make Bella more comfortable, even if it was a weird way to go about it.  No plan on the attack.  It was all Mama Bear ;)  So glad you liked it!  Auction is about a chapter away probably!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review

Once again, many chuckles and LOLs!!  Ya gotta love Renee when she is at her weirdest!  Ted did a nice "recovery" job!  I can't wait until you get to the auction.....wondering if Bella is gonna have some competiton for BUYING Edward!!!  :-)



Author's Response:

Hehe Thank you!  I love making you laugh.  Renee is definitely out there but a lot of fun.

Glad Ted could redeem himself a bit.  He was surprised and acted out a little is all.

I'm sure Bella won't be the only bidder! ;)

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher

I LAUGHED SO HARD!!!  I think I might have even have pee'd my pants!!  This was the MOST HYSTERICAL chapter I have read!  EXCELLENT job!



Author's Response:

Hehe Love tha t you laughed that hard!  Love it!  I'm so glad you had a blast with it, just like I did!  Thank you!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive

I have to say this chapter CRACKED ME UP, and I was laughing so hard I had tears in my eyes!!!  You did a great job w/ the bidding and oh man TANYA!!!!  Victoria better be running and hiding!!!!

Looking forward to the next chapter!!!  woohoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hee!  Thank you!  I turned out exactly as I pictured it and I had the best time writing it.  So happy you were laughing that hard. hehe  Tanya got hers and Vicky will get hers as well, albeit less publicly. hehe

So glad you liked it!  Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer

I TOTALLY LOVED THIS CHAPTER.....loved how our fav QB made him squirm!!  I am proud of Edward for showing patience and wiating for the end to BLAST him....I could SO PICTURE that---great writing job!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad you loved it :)  QB had a good time scaring the piss out of him.  Love that you could picture it!  I saw it very clearly in my head and love that you could as well!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Forward Progress

GREAT chapter!!  Loved the firing of Victoria, the article was G-R-E-A-T!!! 

Can't wait for next chapter.  You have done a super job with this story, you should definitely be proud of yourself----from a O/S to a full story and it still gets better!



Author's Response:

Hehe thank you!  Firing Victoria was a lot of fun, as was writing Lauren and Jess' snark.  They're a blast to channel.

I'm so glad you're enjoying it!  I love how my two best received stories were just supposed to be one shots!  I can't leave them alone it seems :)  So happy you're all liking where I took it!

Thanks for the review and I'll see you soon :)

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Scrum

I was laughing so hard at times!!!  You HAVE to love Emmett!!  You are doing such a good job with this story--please keep up the VERY GOOD work!!

Hope your day is a FUN FILLED ;-D one!!!



Author's Response:

Haha Thank you!  I love Emmett!  For sure!  I have the best time with him.  He's so crazy, but in a fun, smart way.  I'm so happy you liked it!

I hope you have a wonderful day as well, thank you :)  More soon, I promise!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference

Oh my---Edward is gonna be majorily P-I-S-S-E-D!!  Would not want to be that Dan guy!!  I do have to say, in some instances she does have to stand for herself or they will respect her even less--but NOT here!!!!

GREAT Chapter!



Author's Response:

Haha yeah it's safe to say Edward is not going to be a happy camper.  She can definitely stand for herself but it's good to have people back her.  So glad you liked it!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Press Pass

I am laughing SOOOOO HARD!!  I have to say Emmett is almost better than my favorite couple in this story---okay not really but ALMOST!!

Great chapter!!



Author's Response:

Haha So glad to hear it!  Em is so much fun!  Thanks for the review!   Love to make you laugh!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 23 Outtake, The Second String

This chapter was TOO FUN to read---I was laughing so many times (got strange looks from the family).  I always think its great to read how Rose gets back at Emmitt!!

As always it was a great chapter and I LOVE this story!



Author's Response:

Hehe so glad you liked it!  I love those strange looks from the family.  Rose got back at him in a big way. hehe He did not want his Rosie doing that interview in lingerie. hehe

I'm so glad you enjoyed it and love the story.  I love hearing from you all :)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Gaining Ground

This was a fun chapter!  I loved the conversation over the phone w/ Bella, Edward and her parents!  That was such a hoot!  Charlie and his "hating" of the ENEMY QB!!!  Their date was fun too!

Totally enjoyed this chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  That was my favorite part.  Charlie's hate cracks me up!  You know he's having a lot of fun giving Edward crap :)

The date was a lot of fun!  That place is real and I wanna go!

So glad you liked it!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Grounding

WOW, that ending part was a hard thing to read (hit home for me)!

I know I have said this time and time again, but I SOOOO love Emmett!! And Renee and her crystals and Charlie and his digs to Edward!!!

Thanks for this chapter and can't wait for the update!



Author's Response:

*hugs* so sorry to hear that!  I hope all is well in your situation!  I'm hearing some amazing stories from people, it's so wonderful that you'll all sharing how it hits home.

Haha Em's such a blast.  Playtex. hehe  The crystals and presents and Charlie were all fun!

More soon, I promise I won't draw it out! ;)

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Timeout

GREAT chapter!!  Glad to hear about Esme....sad that Edward is being such a sour-puss, but hey he IS Edward!  Can't wait to see what Bella does to kick him back into shape!

Keep up the good work, and again am TOTALLY enjoying your story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I promised I wouldn't drag out the Esme thing.  Poor Edward, been a tough couple days and now he's got bruised pride.  I think that Bella will knock some sense into his thick head!

I'm so glad you're enjoying it!  More soon!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF

OH MY GOSH----I have not laughed so hard through an ENTIRE chapter as I have this one!!  I can't even begin to imagine what Emmett has done w/ that statue!!!

YOU DID YOURSELF PROUD W/ THIS CHAPTER!!!!



Author's Response:

Hehe thank you!  I love hearing that!  We'll find out soon enough what Em's gonna do with that thing.  One shudders to think! :)  I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 Blitzing Scheme

Only Emmett would come out ahead w/ this statue thing!!  LOL!!! 



Author's Response:

Hehe he absolutely had to!  Plus I did want it to be their good luck torso :)  Thanks hon!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs

Oh may those girls are definitely going to get Emmett---his ineterest is already peaked!!!  Nice to see Seth congratulate Bella! 

Good Chapter



Author's Response:

Haha they sure are ;)  Seth buried the hatchet.  They may not be friends but at least he can be civil!  Thanks for the review hon!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 Conference Championship

GREAT Chapter!!!  Emmett is such a hoot---you just keep coming up with better ways for him to be such a jokester!!!  Where DO you find your ideas???

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Haha I'm so glad you liked it!  I have no idea where they come from, but they seem to come naturally to me. hehe I'll be glad when I don't have to think up any pranks for awhile though! :)

Thanks so much for the review!  More soon!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue

GREAT ENDING!!!  Loved this story and you did a fabulous job!  Saw and voted back when it was a O/S, and was happy to see you follow it through!  Sad to see it end, but your ending did it great justice. 

You should be VERY PROUD of the job you did!  Congrats!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!  Thank you for being with me on the whole ride!  It means the world to me!  There are a lot of outtakes to come so we don't have to say goodbye quite yet!

The ending was just as I imagined it to be and I could not be happier.  Thank you :)

 

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 Dancing with the Emmett

This chapter was SO PRICELESS!!!  So Emmett.....so FUNNY!!!  What is sad, is I can actually picture him doing all those moves! 

GREAT CHAPTER!!!  Thanks for the outtake!



Author's Response:

Haha Thank you!  I had a great time with it and so did Em!  He would absolutely do those moves!  I'm so glad you liked it!  Thank you :)

Ethics Be Damned by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 489]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...

Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.

 Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?

Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 69367
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Hey There!!  Just started to read this story yesterday--great story, am excited to be reading.  I actually started it over on Twilighted, but saw it here w/ more chapters, so switched!!! 

Am hoping you keep a regular update, have been drawn into this story and am loving it!  Keep up the good work!

Summary:

Bella Swan is starting a new job with the FBI. Not only does she have to prove to the boys that she belongs but she has to face the demons from her past before they find her. NC-17 for language and lemons B/E, R/Em, A/J, Es/C

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, The FBI Saga, to read
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95413 Read Count: 125931
[Report This] Published: 15 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh my gosh---sitting on PINS AND NEEDLES!!  Great job, great twists.......keep up the good work!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 811]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 110486
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Breakaway

Am liking this story already.  You have a great style of writing.  Totally Enjoy Femme and Knights!!!  I see this being just as good.  Love that Bella is not a mousey--but guess you can't be in NASCAR!!!  As usual looking forward to Edward and his possible slutward attitude, which you can turn on a dime.  Can't wait for the updates.

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: New Connections

Once again---great chapter!  I just can't tell you how excited I am about this story.  I keep saying this, and even though it might sound repetative, I do mean it---I really enjoy your style of writing.  I am wondering if there was a paparazzi around to "catch" the kiss???? hmmmmmmm  :-)

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Attacking Walls

Not much to say, other than as I said before, and TOTALLY loving this story (gad I guessed right about the Kiss and media catching on!!)  

 

You are doing a great job w/ this story, glad they are waking up and glad Charlie caught on so quick!  Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Edward Shaped Hole

Am so loving this story!!!  Great job and keep up the super work!!  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Sweet Awakenings

Great job---am really enjoying this story, and get excited each time I see that you have updated in my email box!  Thanks for the great story (all of them!)

 

 

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Growth of Understanding

EXCELLENT chapter!!  I am so glad Carlisle can finally see what Edward's passion is all about. 

Glad to hear you have good news, and Congratulations on the NEWS!!  Hope you can share soon!

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1703]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 289653
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Mrs. Cullen

Just found this story today, and think its very good.  Can't wait to see where this goes.  Keep up the good work!

My Boys by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 572]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan hasn't seen her boys, Emmett, Jasper, and Edward Cullen, in over thirteen years. Just when they find each other again, an outside threat nearly tears them apart. B/E, A/J,R/EM. NC-17 for lemons and language.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115498 Read Count: 133972
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2010 Updated: 31 Jul 2010
Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very good start---am REALLY looking forward to this story as it moves along!  What a way to leave us though!!  :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 206002
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

VERY GOOD Chapter!!!  I really enjoyed their "moment" and it made just go....awwwwwww...:-).

 

Have to tell you had just found the site for the GLOSP awards from another author, and when I saw this was nominated, I VOTED for you right away.  I am trully loving this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow (well, later today, lol). It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Thanks for all of the love and support!

=)

Shel

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Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.

"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."

Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."

Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."

"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."

Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.

"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Just found this story today, so read all the chapters at one time!  VERY good story, glad to see something different and new.  Can't wait for the rest!



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak! This past weekend was absolutely crazy and hectic for me, so I wouldn't be looking for Parachute to update early this week! Friday around 1:00 PM, EST will more than likely be when it posts!

I love you guys and I'm always happy to hear your thoughts, whether it's on FB, Twitter, the Blog or the Twilighted thread. You guys rock my world!

<3 Shel


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As Bella yawned and stretched, her hand hit something soft and feathery. She opened her eyes and saw her fingers resting on auburn hair. Warm green eyes smiled happily at her. She sat up quickly and glanced around the room before turning back to the person in her bed.

"What are you doing?" she asked, slightly confused at his presence.     

 

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

I really enjoyed this chapter!!  It was cute, and fun at the same time----I enjoy "hearing" what Jack has to say, and can't wait for the BIG MEETING w/ the other side.

Keep up the good work!!!  Looking forward to FRIDAY!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime this afternoon! I completely forgot how busy this week was in RL when I decided to do the double update, lol! But, no worries because it's off with Stratan the amazing now! Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet?  Chapter 22's is up if you want that to tide you over! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

You'll have to forgive me because Saturday is my birthday, lol. Isn't that a rule somewhere? ;-) Love you guys and I hope to get the chapter out to you soon! I haven't missed a Friday yet and I don't plan too!

<3

Shel

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"So, wait a minute," the younger woman interjected. "Jack's my nephew, but I have to go through you to talk to him? That's bullshit." 

"Irina," Diane said in a warning tone.

"No, don't 'Irina' me, Mom! How can you be fine with her keeping Jack from us? You're just as bad as Victoria," she snarled at Bella.

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Ruh-Roh!!  Why does Jack's nervousness make ME worry too??  Geeze, can ya tell I am truly into this story!!!  OH MY!  Greast job, having some one who reads your stories grasp the feelings, is GREAT!!!  Especially enjoyed Edward and Bella confessing their feelings WOOHOOOOOO!!!

Keep it up---you are doing a GREAT job!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Parachute Blog! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

Don't forget to nominate your favorite OC character and their story in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump and nom an OC that you love, the link is up on the blog and on my profile! Keep Jack and Parachute in mind if you decide to head over there, but if not, we'll still love you anyway! =)

♥ Shel ♥ 

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"Are you bored, too, Mom?"

Bella huffed and sat back. "Yeah, so sue me."

Jack looked around the room and then back at his Mom. "How about we make a quick escape."

She cocked her head to the side. "Go on, you've intrigued Mother."    

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

All I have to say is: OH MY GOSH!!  I can't believe you left us like that!!!  Sometimes I wonder if Jack is a bit like Alice--psychic!  :-0

I just have that gut instinct that Victoria is gonna make some REAL TROUBLE and she has an accomplice in JAMES!! 

Went looking for the outtake of Jack's POV, but couldn't find it yet---is thatgoing to be posted soon (I am HOPING :-} )

Great Chapter BTW---love Tanya, she just CRACKS ME UP!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up in just a few hours from now! (Midnight, EST) I hope you enjoyed the surprise update, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well! 

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Ahhhh, nice chapter---got some questions answered, some more speculation brought up.....EXCELLENT!!! 

Again am TOTALLY enjoying this story!  Great job, and keep up the super work!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!

I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!

Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.

♥ Shel ♥

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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?" 

Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."

"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself. 

"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."

Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

I have to be honest w/ a confession......there are very few stories that I get R-E-A-L-L-Y IMPATIENT for waiting for updates, but this has definitely become one of them!!  (BTW--that is a good thing :-) ) I totally love this story, you are doing a great job, even not having it beta'd!!!!

Looking forward to the next chapter!  Keep up the good work!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Don't shoot me, okay?

I've been working on an Emmett Outtake for Parachute to be used in the 30 Days of Emmett, a series of One Shots, Outtakes and Drabbles featuring Emmett, which is hosted by AccioBourbon, Hmonster4 and Theheartoflife. It's already started off with a bang! Our Outtake will appear there on 12/3 and post to Parachute's Outtakes a few days later. Enormous kudos to these ladies for showing Em some love! =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Charlie squeezed Bella and she melted against her father's side in comfort. When his flight to Seattle was called, Charlie leaned down and kissed her on the cheek.

"I'll see you in a few weeks, baby girl. Everything will work out fine, you'll see," he told her quietly.

"Thanks, Daddy," she whispered in his ear. Charlie grinned and reached out to shake Edward's hand.

"Edward, it was good to meet you, son. Take care of my family, you hear?"

Edward smiled sincerely. "With my life, Chief."

The two men exchanged a look and Charlie nodded, before looking at Jack and holding open his arms. The boy hugged his grandfather tightly.

"I'll see you soon, Pops! Tell Seth and Nana and Leah that I miss them!"

"I will, kiddo. I promise," Charlie responded, blinking away tears.

 

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

GREAT Chapter!!  I have to tell you, with this story and your writing---I can SOOOO feel the emotions that the characters are feeling and going through.  You are doing a great job with this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!

Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.

Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.

"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."    

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

GREAT CHAPTER!!  I do wonder what Renee is up too--is she truly wanting to get back in Bella's life for the right reasons or is there an ULTERIOR MOTIVE???  I do worry how Edward is going to take Bella keeping the recording of Victoria from him!!

See this is what makes you a great author---you are contastly keeping us on our toes, and making us ask QUESTIONS!!!  Keep up the good work!! :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. It's pretty, umm, hot? (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Just a couple of things before I leave you with your teaser! Parachute is up for two Avant Garde Awards, Best Bella and Best Kid. Voting ends on the 4th so please vote if you can! We have some tough competition! 

Also, we've been nom'med for three Original Character Awards! Mostst Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kiddos! But, alas, I do love Jack more! Voting for those open up on 12/1! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"Jack?" Bella called anxiously. Her head whipped from side to side frantically. "Jack!" 

Edward's hand squeezed her tightly as he pulled her towards the customer service department. The crowd was heavy with people and her heart pounded in her chest painfully.  She pulled her hand away and started to push through the crowd, heading back towards where she last saw her son.

"Bella, wait!" Edward called, but she was too far gone in panic to listen. 

She stopped for a minute and tried to think clearly. What would Jack most want to see in this store? 

Immediately thinking of the answer, Bella tore off towards the escalators.    

 

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

MAN!!!  You had given me chills there for a moment--thinking of Jack either being kidnapped or getting lost in FAO...!!! My little old heart was pitter-pattering!! 

VERY GOOD chapter!  Enjoyed Edward and Bella TIME!! :-)  Done just right!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Emmett's Outtake has also posted, so check it out if you'd like!

Voting for the Original Character Awards! is open until 12/14! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kids! But, alas, I do love my Jack more!

♥ Shel ♥

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The music surrounded her, swirling like a tornado. Bella moved her hips and danced along side of Tanya's lithe body as she got lost in the sound.

"Excuse me," a deep voice spoke into her ear. She turned and saw a tall, handsome man smiling down at her.

"Would you care for a dance partner?" he asked.

"No thanks," Bella responded. "I'm fine with my friend."

He looked over her shoulder and nodded in that direction. "Looks like she found someone else."

Sure enough, when she looked, Tanya was dancing with a blond young man. She shook her head and laughed before turning back to the man.

"The answer is still no, but thanks for asking."

"Ah, come on. I'm alone and you're all by your self. What's the harm?"

"I think the lady declined your offer, pal," Edward spoke, sliding up against Bella from behind.

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

Shel---this chapter was fun, but also uhmmm, making the hairs on the back of my neck stand up??  Geeze am I channeling Bella now (oops, rather you)??

I cracked up when Esme dropped the bombshell about Edward moving---that was PRICELESS!!!

Keep up the SUPER work.  Looking forward to the next chapter!

:-) Terri  M.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) It ties in with this one nicely.

Voting for the Original Character Awards ends today! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough!

Make sure you leave your pitchforks at the door before reading the teaser! This chapter's drama skyrockets, but I think it's necessary to complete our journey and it's the way that I've always pictured it heading.

♥ Shel ♥

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"Call Tanya and give her this info. She'll know what to do."

"Yes, ma'am. I'll keep my ear to the ground. If I find anything else out, I'll let you know."

Bella pocketed her iPhone and her hands curled into fists. The anger that she had experienced minutes earlier paled in comparison to the rage that coursed through her. The proof that James was a part of Jack's abandonment was black and white in front of her face. She fully planned on marching back into that office and tearing a new asshole into anyone who dared to get in her way. When the elevator reached the final floor, she was alone.

The doors opened and before she could step out, she found herself once again face to face with James Brooks. His eye widened in shock and her fist flew without thought. He swiftly caught her hand and pushed her back into the elevator with his body weight. "

What the hell are you doing?" he hissed angrily.

"You- you-" she stuttered. "You piece of shit! I'm not leaving here until I talk to Edward. I know who you are and what you did to Jack. You're a miserable excuse for a human being!" she shouted in her fury.

Quicker than she could blink, one of his forearms was pressed against her throat menacingly while the other hand gripped her by the hair.

"You couldn't just leave, could you?" he ground out. "No, you had to be Miss High-And-Mighty. From the first moment I laid eyes on you, I knew you'd be a challenge."

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

OH MY HEAVENS!!! I thought the teaser was bad on your blog, but this whole chapter had me squirming for M-O-R-E!!! I guess I will have to be patient **sigh** Having to wait for Christmas AND a new chapter to solve the Cliffhanger---are you SURE you aren't Santa????? :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)

I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*

Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.

♥ Shel ♥

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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.

"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."

Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.

"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."

"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.

Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

Wow!  Not sure if I ever saw that one coming!!  Great chapter.....hope there is not a "problem" w/ Edward and how Bella reacted to James' tricks!

Have a Great Holiday and Safe New Year!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

I'm sorry that I didn't get around to finishing up the EPOV, but between the holidays and an annoying family, it got pushed to the side. Never fear, it'll still go up!

♥ Shel ♥

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Jack rolled his eyes and shook his head. "I know you, Mom. There's something that you're not telling me."

She bit her lip slightly. "Victoria was there as well. James shot her and she died."

The boy's jaw dropped in shock. "She- She's dead? Like, she can never hurt me again or take me away?"

Bella blinked in surprise. She wasn't sure of what his reaction would be, but that certainly wasn't it.

"Yes, baby. She can't ever hurt you again," she responded quietly.

Jack bit his bottom lip and nodded resolutely. "I mean, I guess it sucks that she's dead, but does it make me a bad person being kinda happy about it?"

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

Very good chapter!  I am glad you discussed how Jack felt about Victoria and James!  I am waiting (oh so NOT) patiently to find out how things go w/ the move!!  ;-)

Hope your New Years is safe and happy!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

In other news, Bella and Jack both won the Avant Garde Awards that they were up for! I simply can not thank everyone enough! You guys are the single biggest reason that this story has been as successful as it has! I adore each and every one of you! And not just for voting or reviewing, but for continuing on this journey with me and loving Jack as much as I do!

I'm shooting to have the EPOV up soon, but he's been difficult. I'm also in the process of writing a Victoria POV for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence compilation. It should be interesting to see how well I can channel bat-shit crazy!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Edward, can I ask you something?" she asked in a quiet voice.

He shifted slightly and brushed a piece of hair from her face. "Anything, baby."

She swallowed nervously, worried about what his response would be to her question. "The documents that James showed me, were they real?"

He took a deep breath and nodded hesitantly. Betrayal pierced her heart and she felt tears spring to her eyes.

"Ssh, don't cry," he whispered, brushing thumbed across her cheeks. "It's not like it sounds."

"Then how is it? Why were you petitioning for custody if you're moving across the country? Or was that a lie?" she replied with a small sob, her body beginning to shake.

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

Ahhh this did make me sad, I always like when they are all in the same town/area.....but I know you have to do this!  You are doing a great job.  Glad Edward wasn't a butt---knew you would have a good explination for him wanting those papers! 

Looking forward to the next chapter(s).  So sad this is coming to an end.....but as the song said..."This Ain't Goodbye" I am sure you will have more stories for us when this one is done.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

I'm saddened each week that brings us closer to the end, but I'm happy for E, B and Jack to get their HEA.

The promised EPOV from Chapters 31/32 is up now! Go check it out!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Garrett was just telling us about the Flag Football team sign ups. I really want to play this year. Please?"

She placed her hands on her hips, eyeing her son carefully. "Let me talk to your dad and we'll see."

Garrett's eyes widened and he looked at Jack, grinning. "Is that weird?"

Jack's brow scrunched in confusion. "Is what weird?"

"That you have a dad now."

"I always did have a dad," Jack responded. "I just couldn't remember where he was."

"But still," Garrett continued, "after all of this time apart, is it weird now?"

Jack thought for a moment before shaking his head. "No, not really. It feels right."

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

This chapter was really cute----did wonder if Edward was going to show up early!  What a GREAT B-day present for Bella!!  WHOOOOOHOOOOO!!!

I am sad to know this story is coming to an end.  I have TRULY, TRULY enjoyed this story!  You should be proud of yourself, you did a great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

Ahhhh, I am so sad to see this end.  This was a WONDERFUL story....you did an excellent job on it--you should definitely BE PROUD of yourself!  Now that it is complete, I will go back and read it from start to finish again!!

Thanks for giving us a heads up about the new story.  Can't wait!  Good luck in the Shimmer Awards---voted for you!



Author's Response:

Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!

The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:

The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.

She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.

"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.

The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.

"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"

"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.

Taking the Fork by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

One tragic night, the world changes for Edward and Bella Cullen.  The life they've struggle to build over the last decade is threatened and Edward is left with nothing but his memories as he tries to will his love back to him.  This couple has handled a decade of lifes bumps, but can they survive a fork in the road?

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13987 Read Count: 1660
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jan 2011
Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Fork in the Road

Mandy---this story has me truly interested.  Can't wait for you to update.  This is a truly different story, which is nice!  Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

I'm happy you like it and I'm enjoying the concept...when it came to me I was so excited about how it changed the story.

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: It's What You Beget

REALLY enjoyed the chapter.  Am glad you are possibly back on schedule for this story.  I am so looking forward to having this story continue!

Keep up the GREAT work!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42109
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Confession

Meghan---you are doing an EXCELLENT job on this story.  I was once (LONG AGO, in a far away land, i.e. before kids--who are now in thier mid twenties) a nurse at Children's Memorial Hosp in Chicago.  You are doing a great job explain and portraying Edward's problem so well!!!

Bella & Emmett's earlier life was making me actually feel like I was there---so great job discribing that also!!  I have read all the chapters up to now in the last 24 hrs, so I waited to review, but again I think you are doing a GREAT job, this is the type of stories I enjoy, a little bit of fluff and some plot too (especially mystery and suspense).  You have brought out and made us actually FEEL what everyone is going through--thanks for doing a great job!!!



Author's Response:

holy crow!!  i love your review!!  i'm so glad you're enjoying my story, and i'm thrilled to know that the characters are being portrayed well.  it's even better that another medical professional thinks so highly of my descriptions.  thank you so very much for reading and reviewing!!  ;)

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Fallout

OH MY GOSH!!! You definitely have me chewing on my acrylic nails!!! Now we have to wait to see if its the Calvary or the bad guys!!!  Very Good chapter!

 



Author's Response:

lol!  i'm glad you liked the chapter.  i hope your nails survived the torture.  :)  more to come soon, and help is on the way.  thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)

Adesse Olympus by Billiegirl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 77]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Separated at twelve, childhood friends grow up in different worlds.  Bella waits for her soul-mate to return to his roots and to the mountain ranch she and her brother have built from scratch.  Somebody or bodies will go to any length to make sure they don't get their happy ever after.  AH, cannon pairs.  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140161 Read Count: 28995
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2010 Updated: 07 Sep 2010
Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

This was a very good story!  I enjoyed it all, well except for when I cried about Jake, but can totally understand (I am a big dog lover, and it always makes me cry when one dies), but you did a nice job!

I loved the mystery, and the angst, and lets not forget the LOVING and HEA!!!



Author's Response:

I actually cried when I wrote it.  We're a big dog loving household too.  I actually modeled Jake after our Giant Waykon Malamute.  Thank you for the lovely review.  You guys on this site are just too kind.  Muwah!  

Summary:

The body of a young girl is found and all signs point to Royce King, convicted serial killer currently serving a life sentence in prison, who has spent the majority of his time in solitary confinement.  FBI agent, Bella Swan and her team are now charged with piecing together this poor unidentified victims' tale, and also ascertaining how it's possible for a murderer to strike from behind bars.

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Criminal Minds Twilight Style, Twilight, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25716 Read Count: 15270
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2011
Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Have loved your other stories, so when I saw you had a new one, I immediately had to read it.......WONDERFUL start!!!!!!

Am so looking forward to this new story---I too (like you) love all those shows you have listed, so this is (i have a feeling) going to be another GREAT, GREAT, GREAT Story!!!  You have yet to disappoint me with any of your stories I have read, and I am sure this one won't either!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Nice work!!  Weird to say with this story (which I am TRULY loving BTW!!), but it was "cute" to have them start to get closer :-).

I truly believe you will go far in the writing/publishing world....you are a very good author!  Keep up the good work, and yes I know we have to wait a few weeks for all your stories, and I will TRY to be patient----good thing you can't HEAR me!!! :-)

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh MY, MY, MY!!!  You said there was a cliffy.....I have faith in Bella, she is one smart cookie-----not to mention the EMOTIONS I am sure Edward is going through!!

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 104782
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This story is very good.  On one point I can see the "weirdness" but on the other (since its THE couple), I am touched by the sweetness in it.  Their love is so new and special---I am rooting for them!! 

Will try to be patient, but am looking forward to updates for this story!  Keep up the good work :-)

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

That was a well written chapter---I could feel Emmett's pain as well as Bella & Edwards (well okay, not the bruised face, but internal pain).  Am so looking forward to the parentals talk.....OH BOY!!!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I have to say, right now this story "owns" me---I guess that is the saying!! When I see in my email, that an update has been posted, I pretty much drop everything, and open it up.  Only a few stories are like that for me!!

GREAT JOB!!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

First off.... CONGRATULATIONS on your story getting published!!!  On the sad side, I feel very selfish, because I am going to miss your updates.... I L-O-V-E this story (feel like I am quoting Bella here). 

Good luck with your editing, and truly hope all goes well!!!  Will TRY to be waiting patiently for your next update to hit my email box.  If we don't hear from you before-----HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!  :-)

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Very Sweet and loving chapter.  But I get a sad "gut" feeling something is about to maybe 'hit the fan'????  Well I have every confidence in our two young sweethearts!!!

CONGRATULATIONS on your new publication!!  I saw it advertised up on the banner.  Am planning to buy it for eBooks (have a Kindle!!).  Good luck!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: My Other Brother

Short but very good chapter!!  Gotta love campus life!  I can just picture Bella jumping up on the chair.....hope this comes back to bite a couple of skanks in the butt!!!

Thanks for the update, have a Great Holiday, and stay safe!!  Looking forward to the next one!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

This was a very good story---I have to say, I teared up at the end....bitter sweet but special as usual from you!!!

Thanks for always sharing your talent with us, you are a very good writer and I always enjoy your stories.

Good luck w/ your Creation series!!!!

Summary:

 

Heartbroken when Tanya told him she cheated on him with his best friend after he proposed to her, Edward vowed to give up on love and women. Bella Swan, they shy freshman at the Univ of Wash, catches his eye.  He fights to stay away, but can he? Love can heal many wounds if you give it a chance.  Travel with Edward to see if he gives into temptation while dealing with his tainted past.

 

Rated NC-17 for language, dark themes, adult content and future lemons! Enjoy

Stephanie Meyers owns everything Twilight, but I own the plot! This is my first story I hope you all like it!!

There is now a group site for my story on facebook.  If you want to keep with with updates and fellow groupies, feel free to come find me... ;)

http://www.facebook.com/home.php?sk=group_152421278164462&ap=1

The first few chapters were reviewed by the Project Team Beta, Betas - thank you to them for their assistance.  But I am very proud and excited to have Woodlily and itsange helping me with revisions and future chapters.....THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH!!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 146797 Read Count: 14994
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 12 Aug 2015
Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Oh boy---I can already see the SPARKS are gonna fly.  More than one TYPE of sparks, too!!!!!  I think its so funny how Alice and Jasper are dancing around each other, what a hoot!

Thanks for updating and can't wait for the second part.  Have a great Holiday and Safe & Happy New Year.

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 13 - Memories are best left in the past!

Gotta say, was not what I was expecting--the past, I mean!  Glad she is calming down w/ him and oh boy is he ever falling----B-A-D!!!  hehe



Author's Response: Edward pretty much laid it all out. There are some lingering issues because of this and he's so falling for Bella, lol!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 15 - Facing the Music - Part II

WOW----a LOT covered in this chapter, but a GREAT Chapter!!!  I am glad they are going to move towards each other, now if Alice and Jasper could ADMIT it!!! :-)

I am glad his family is willing to stick behind him and support them all.  Glad no one went nuts on him!  I just can't imagine being in that position!

You did a GREAT job letting us "feel" all the emotions he was going through, even though this is fiction, I felt so bad for him....glad Bella was there for him and so supportive!

Can't wait for the next update!!!



Author's Response:

LOL...Alice and Jasper, um, yeah...they have some serious issues...they'll get there once they get over their stubborness...

The Cullen clan is all about love, care and support...I wanted to incorporate that in my story too.

I'm glad the "feelings" came through in my story, it lets me know I am doing it right...I want my readers to be able to either put themselves into the character or 'feel' what they  feel.  I'm glad it worked *grin*

 

So much more in store for everyone...stay tuned...

Across the Hall by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 486]
Summary:

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Edward Cullen was in a marriage that was doomed from the start. Having been overseas when his wife left him, he's now coming home to Washington newly single and ready to reclaim his life.

Bella Swan was married right out of college only to find out that he was a cheater, a liar and an abuser. After escaping the marriage, she's moved back to Washington to the safety of family and new friends.

Will sparks fly when she moves across the hall from a mysteriously handsome and newly single neighbor?

*Rated for strong language and lemons*           Banner made by: Kiwibeme


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74537 Read Count: 91563
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

REALLY good story!  Can't wait for the next update....you've done good!

Keep up the good work have added you here on TWCS and FanFic!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Thank you, thank you!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

VERY GOOD!!  Thank you for giving us two updates today!!  YEAH!!  I am so into this story now.  You are doing a very good job, keeping us on the edge, but also giving us enough!!

I am itching to know who "White Rose person" is!!!  My guess---James! 

Keep up the GREAT work!



Author's Response:

Wow. Thank you so much. I'm still blown away at the response this story has gotten. Reviews are so important. They don't only boost my ego, they let me know that people actually like what I'm writing. I never would have thought this would happen. Myself? I don't have the patience to wait on stories that don't update often. (I usually read 'completed'ones!) So, I try to post often and usually 2 chapters at a time. I think it helps with the flow.

I'm not saying whose leaving the flowers... Thanks!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Ahhh, ya know I said in my last review I wondered if it was James....but have to say, honestly I did itsy-bitsy, teeny-weeny wonder if Mike was somehow involved!!  Way to throw us off the track!!  Sneaky author you!!

Loved the last two chapters!! Can't wait to see where they go from here and what on earth will Edward do for work now??!!  He is definitely not the stay at home type---he will drive Bella BONKERS!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad my sneakiness paid off... You're right, he would drive her crazy. Thanks for the kind words.

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

OH MY---that was mean!!  The last two chapters were very good.  I am wondering is Marcus still doing this because of Mike, or is there someone else behind it!  You are definitely good at keeping us guessing!!

Can't wait for the next update.  Keep up the great job--you definitely are a talented writer.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words! I appreciate you taking the time to let me know what you thought!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

GREAT CHAPTER!!!  Oh, YEAH!! You answered my questions from last chapter!  Was NOT expecting the engagement though!  NICE WORK.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I knew your question would be answered! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Very good conclusion to a VERY good story!  Thanks for writing this....totally enjoyed it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Very nice words. Thanks for all the support!

Is This For Real by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

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Bella’s always had a deep love of undiscovered talent, so what happens when the newest artist she finds touches her heart in a way she never imagined.  Winner of 2nd Place in the Public Vote in the "Killing Me Softly With His Song" Anon One-Shot Contest

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Winning banner made by Robs Button Babe

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5555 Read Count: 714
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2010 Updated: 01 Dec 2010
Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Is This For Real

Very nice o/s!  Was simple but very New York like!  Great Job!!



Author's Response:

thanks love, i really enjoyed writing the street musician aspect of ny.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What do you do when the Mob is after you? Run.

After accidentally witnessing a New York Mob hit, Bella Swan and her brother Emmett are on the run. Due to a lucky pull from a bucket, they land in Montana at the Cullens' animal rescue facility. Will they find more than just refuge with the Cullens?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54397 Read Count: 34144
[Report This] Published: 15 Dec 2010 Updated: 16 Dec 2010
Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: The Water Park

DANG THE WHOLE THING, IN ONE NIGHT!!!  Woohoo, never had that happen before....you are a maniac....a good one, though :-)



Author's Response:

Well, it's short. We figured it would be better being put up all at once, especially with the holidays and all. Thanks for the support.

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Baring Souls

I love this story!!  You were updating so fast, I thought I was at the end, getting ready to review and BAM, another "next" button to click!  Thanks for so many updates tonight.  Looking forward to the rest!!!  Keep them coming!!!  :-)



Author's Response:

I'm posting it all tonight.

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Finding Home

It definitely was a very cute/good story.  Had a good amount of lovin' suspense (although, I am a mystery lover so.....) and only Jake to worry about.  You did a good job with your first story.  I can definitely see how you have grown into ATH!

Thanks for posting this all and GOOD JOB!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the kind words. I'm happy you liked it and I know you've been R & R ATH, too. Thanks for all the support!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Time To Run

You are doing very good!  I am impressed you did all that you managed to get done.  Will wake up to the end tomorrow----THANKS for this story!!!



Author's Response:

Wow. Thank you! Kind words. I'll get the rest up soon. Thank YOU!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Settling In

Glad you wrote this story!  Am following your other story--Across the Hall.  This one sounds like it will be just as good.  Looking forward to the next chapters!



Author's Response:

Thanks. This story has been written for months, just never really thought it was publishable as is. Well, I did need to write the last couple of chapters. Thanks for the support!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When single Mom, Bella, opted to drive her children to Colorado for their visitation with their father, she never dreamed she would find something unexpected while stranded in a winter storm.  Can Edward heal Bella’s wounds and restore her faith in men, love, and herself?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44043 Read Count: 28341
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2010 Updated: 31 Dec 2010
Reviewer: clanmoran Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This looks like a really good story!  Am looking forward to the updates.  Hope once you finish this, you will be able to continue MOB...I was/am hooked on that story!

Keep these chapters coming---can't wait to find out how it all works out!