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I am a fanfiction addict but usually I stick to HP and Pride and Prejudice. My daughter is a huge Twilight fan and keeps trying to get me to read Twilight fics. I am not always impressed with the ones my daughter likes. I am looking for good ones, if I can't find what I am looking for, maybe I should write it myself?
Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way. He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
Date: 30 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
Well, I know that I don't have a submissive bone in my body. Damn, it is good to be a Dominant, isn't it? Sub, make the food. Sub, suck my cock. Sub, you forgot to ask for permission to speak - 20 lashes. Oh, I messed up, no punishment for me, I'll just feel bad and that will be the same thing. Hmmmm.
It isn't that I don't think the story is good, I do. It is the lifestyle I can't come to terms with. As I said, not for me. Although I will admit that Garret is not likeable AT ALL. He is a dickhead of the first water and I might have kneed him in the crotch REALLY hard. If the Sub is actually in charge, why is he such a condescending twat? No one likes a know-it-all and he is just smug and pompous. Really, for an original character, I have had a very visceral reaction, well done.
You have one of the best Rosalie and Emmet that I have ever read. Plus, I keep worrying about when Jacob and James (Tanys's brother and Bella's neighbor) make their move on them both. 5 Stars
Date: 30 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
I just can't help thinking that the women who would be happy with this as their life must have no self-respect at all. It is all about the man. If Bella was a Harvard trained doctor, would Edward want someone smarter than he is? I think he woldn't, Bottom line, the 'Doms' seem like spoiled little boys who want everything their way and can't wait to criticize their partners. Then again, this is no partnership. Would they be happy if the woman made more money than they did? Again, I think not. This is just another form of colonialism.
I can't stop reading it but I cringe the whole man through. You are doing a fabulous job conveying the lifestyle. I am starting to think that every would-be submissive should read it. You probably go into it not realizing that just about every thought that comes into your head will be read, examined and judged unworthy by someone who wouldn't consider for a second telling you his thoughts. How lonely and bruised they must be.
Date: 03 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
Just for the record, Edward is an incredible hypocrite. He doesn't want Bella to have any hair but he certainly wants her to suck on his balls. Do you understand how gross that is when they are covered in hair? He says that he will take care of her needs. Apparently, that is only the cse when he gets to do nothing at all.
When Edward makes a mistake, Bella forgives him instantly. When she makes a miatke, her beats her so that she will 'remember'. Is there some reason that the domiants keep reinforcing the idea that the submissives are stupid and connot remember on their own?
You have done a fabulous job with the story, it is the inherent unfairness of this supposed 'partnership' that I am criticizing. If you weren't doing a stellar job writing it, I wouldn't care as much as you make us care. Bravo.
Adult Content: BDSM When Isabella’s contract with Master Jasper Whitlock is ending. Master introduces her to his friend, Edward Cullen. Will Isabella be the perfect submissive for Master Cullen? Will Edward be the perfect Master for Isabella?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181505 Read Count: 281164
Date: 24 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Easy, Peaceful Feeling
As a matter of fact, as a private community, a home would NEVER be rented or God forbid sold, without the permission of the owner of the community (Edward) or a majority of the members of the community or their Board, if the Board is in charge of new members. This is one of the stipulations associated with transfer of title and escrow would fail without proof of HOA approval. This would all be spelled out in the Bylaws of the HOA (Home Owners Association) and the new people would need to sign that they are both aware of the limitations associated with the property and that they are bound by the Bylaws is their entirety.
FYI, the University of California at Berkeley does not offer Associates Degrees, it is a 4 year research university and the many schools offer Bachelor's, Masters and PhD designation programs. There are currently over 40,000 students at the UCB campus. It is possible that James might have influenced a single Dean within the university but with the high profile of the UC schools and particularly Cal Berkeley, it would only be a matter of time before any discrepancies came to light.
I realize this is fiction but considerable effort has been made to safeguard the students, particularly the undergraduate female population.
He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After. From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.
*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113785
Date: 10 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I am sorry, but it is very distracting that you keep saying that Nicholas is starting his MBA in business as a freshman. MBA stands for Masters in Business Administration, it is a GRADUATE degree. Stanford doesn't even have an undergraduate business degree so he couldn't be starting in business at Stanford, otherwise known as 'the farm' to the students. Nick would be starting at Stanford in economics, political science, math, so many things, but NOT business. And then, if he was recruited by a big Wall Street firm and had at least three years of experience, then he would need to take the standardized tests to get into an MBA program and then, at 26 or 27, then he could be starting his MBA at Stanford, but he would never say he was getting his MBA in business, it's like saying he is getting his law degree in law. In case it wasn't clear, I live in the Bay Area after graduating from school and some of the mistakes are larger than the others. The lack of traffic, ease of parking and the short amount of time that they use to get to place to place is pretty funny.