Penname: Vtweetymccn [Contact] Real name: Tracey McCann
Member Since: 17 Feb 2016
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I am a Lt. for a small town fire station and also a swift water instructor. I read to my co workers and EMS crew. I have 4 children and my two girls that love to read as much as I do.


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Reviews by Vtweetymccn
Summary:

Bella is working for a catering and event planning company. She has just about pulled off the reception of the year when she's introduced to Edward Cullen, mafia boss. Can he show her that even bad guys can be good


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30285 Read Count: 19609
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 09 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Mathinson we are rereading this story I hope you put the whole series please!!! 

KEEP WRITING!!!🚒🚑

Summary: Past Featured Story

One and Only

 

 

What would it be like to know at first sight your one and only love? What if this was given to you as a gift to be passed down thru your generations? Follow the story of how an Angel from heaven gave this gift to the Clan Cullen in 1314 Scottish Highlands and how the gift is passed thru out the generations to present time. Will the Cullen Men find their One and Only?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: Stories I've read, Read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83342 Read Count: 112341
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2015 Updated: 28 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

Thank you for this loving story!!!🚒🚑💖

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Getting Help from Your Friends

Its crazy that none of the boys have come home!!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚒🚑💖

Summary:

Bound and Dangerous

 

 

 

Sequel to Bound to Family.  A continuing story of Don Edward Cullen and Donna Isabella Volutri-Cullen as they begin their new adventures in combining two power crime families together, while exploring their Dominant/submissive relationship in Master Edward's playroom.  Can they keep their families safe, their relationship safe, or will outside forces tear it apart?

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90815 Read Count: 198129
[Report This] Published: 09 Aug 2015 Updated: 19 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I am so sorry it took so long to read but getting the crew together with my kindle cause TWCS isn't on my phone and this week has been us going to other fire stations due to deaths of firemen. I had to lock up my Kindle in my locker and forgot to take it.

OK now that Aro is dead Elizabeth and Sean can talk and get together but some us think Bella should have killed him since he was her father and he didn't give crap about her. She should have said and done something since she is the Donna.

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚒🚑💓🍀

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Edward can be saved. I have saved a patient that was shot 15 times in the chest. I can be done. Can't wait for Bound & United.

But with Elizabeth putting the pregnancy test in her bag betcha Sean thinks she is pregnant.

KEEP WRITING!!!🐰🚒🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Jessica is in Forks and has run into Charlie!!! Will she become Bella new step mother????

Bets are up if so!!!

17 say yes

13 say no

KEEP WRITING!!!!🍀🚒🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Wonder when Edward and Sean will find out they are fighting the same person .

Can't wait for the explosions!!! Does Edward and Bella need fire fighters, paramedics or heck I teach and do swift water in the coven cause I do all three. Me and my crew can figure out fires and patch the team up.

KEEP WRITING!!!🚒🚑🍀

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Date: 20 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

So will Maria be getting together with Carmine or his father???Guess Elizabeth got Sean's lucky charm. Lol!!!

Ah Bella is starting to get tired is there a little mafia prince or priness in her belly???

What do you mean only 1 more chapter left

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚒🚑🐰

Summary:

Head over Heels

 

Can a broken boot heel mend a broken heart and lead to a HEA?

 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1610 Read Count: 2523
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2015 Updated: 15 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aaaaawwwwwwww this is a sweet story!!!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!!💖🚑🚒

Summary:

flames

The Chicago Fire of 1871, also called the Great Chicago Fire, burned from October 8 to October 10, 1871, and destroyed thousands of buildings, killed an estimated 300 people and caused an estimated 200 million in damages. Can the love of one couple survive the fire or will it be destroyed along with everything else?

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18171 Read Count: 7123
[Report This] Published: 09 Jan 2016 Updated: 02 Apr 2016
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I want to know how Chief daddy took the news of his daughter being married. 

We have a bet going on how long it took to concamate their marriage:

11 say a couple days

19 say a week

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚑🚒

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Sorry it's taken so long bad weather equals car wrecks.a48;d52;

With Edward breathing in all the smoke will he survive it or will he find another handkerchief?

What he can also do is back in that time since there wasn't air mask is wet a cloth and put it to there mouth and nose. It's even a step we still do.

If you have any questions let me know on Facebook.

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚑🚒🍀

Summary:

Bound and United

 

Bound and United is the third installment of the Bound Series.  It continues the story of Don Edward and Donna Bella as they fight with their most evil villian yet.  Will they be able to fight death and be joined once more or will they be forever torn apart from each other?

 

Part 3 in the Bound Series

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76085 Read Count: 157267
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Jan 2017
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Um.....yeah ALL of the men have gone to the shower room. Lol!!!! Us women want to know when is  Master Edward going to role play as a firemen. Then we can take cold showers. I'll even order him the by bunker gear. Lol!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!! HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!🎃💀👻💖🚑🚒

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Dirty talking Edward and Bella came out in this chapter can't wait for Master Edward to come play.

OK so we need a plan cause the next couple of months we have November is feeding the hungry for Thanksgiving and right after we have to fill as many ambulances and fire trucks for toys for tots. So we need to make bets!!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚒🚑💖👻💀🎃 HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yes so Sean thinks that Elizabeth is pregnant. 1 bet down 1 bet to go.

Now we are wondering how Bella and Elizabeth will stall Roberto until Sean and Jasper can get there.

Also we are worried that the drug they gave Bella to knock her out if it will harm the baby???

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚑🚒💖💞

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Had to have special meeting!!!!

We all agree Edward will lose his shit!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!🚒🚑💖

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Don't you scare us like that again, we thought that we wouldn't get to read B&D. Thought on Monday the crew and I was going to have to go to Virginia and hunt you down and bring Elizabeth with us. Lol!!!

Seriously you are more than welcome and if you need anything from EMT's, Paramedics, fire fighters or even dispatchers we are here. Don't let anyone bring you down if they do just remember there are 30 fire, EMS crew that love your work. Probably more next weekend when I read it to my swift water class.

OK we have a bet our rookies came up with: Will Edward get Bella and Elizabeth or will it be Jasper & Sean???

10 say Edward (all rookies)

20 say Jasper and Sean (cause Edward will still be in the hospital)

KEEP WRITING OUR LOVELY!!!🚒🚑💓

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Sorry it took so long but I took half the day off for my son's birthday party and with the heat they had a call and then I had a swift water call. We talked and we believe Dr. Mallos is going to find someone in Dr. Merbeth. The Cullen family will be the match making family. Lol!!!

Also we love the picture at the end but our boys said that Bella could help Edward out by giving him a BJ and he could help her by eating her pie and letting her feel how the baby will be breastfeeding. Lol!!! Sorry we have PERVS!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!!💖🚑🚒

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

OK we are betting that Paul Jacobs will try to arrest people on the first night:

17 say yes

13 say no

This is for Feed Hungry Families we are feeding the homeless here at the station.

KEEP WRITING!!!!!🚒🚑💖

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 01 May 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

OK are men in the crew are laughing cause in their words, "Sean is caring around Bella pee stick". 

Now we are trying to figure out how Roberto will get away when Sean gets there and the only thing we can come up with is 1) he has a meeting or 2) he has a photoshoot for a commercial. Can't wait to see what you come up with. Also us girls are feeling bad for Elizabeth when she tells Sean she is not pregnant and Sean too.

KEEP WRITING!!!! ALSO BOUND HAS BEEN POLLED ON FACEBOOK MAFIAWARD TWILIGHT FANFICTION!!!🚑🚒💖

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Hmmmmm wondering who this new mystery man is that's wanting to bring down the Cullens??? 

Thank you for updating we were going through Clo with draws!!!! Lol!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!💖🚑🚒

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Girl you know we got your back always!!!  Also we can always add more to Bound!!

Thank you for my birthday present!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!🚒🚑💖💯

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

What would a story be without drama???? There needs to be a fire with some firefighters. Lol!!! We'll join the Cullen Coven!!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚒🚑💖

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Man we thought Edward would be like daddy and throw a bigger fit. Lol!!!

OK here is the bet: Will Pandre get time with the girls alone???

13 say no

17 say yes

KEEP WRITING!!!!💖🚑🚒

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

So why didn't Bella give her Master a blowjob and furthermore why didn't Master tell her to wash his cock and then put that sweet mouth to use?

Told ya my crew is perverted!!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!💖🚑🚒

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Confused if grandfather name is Edward Sr. then how do you get Carlisle Masen Cullen III????

Also the guys said Edward has nothing to worry about all he has to do is tell the doctor to give Bella something for the nausea.

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Author's Response:

The baby is named after his Grandfather.   Edward was named after his Grandfather Edward Sr.   Carlisle was named after his Grandfather Carlisle Sr so if it is a boy It would be Carlisle the third

 

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

OK boy or girl let's see,

16 say boy

14 say girl

Who will be bringing candy for Halloween we are starting to fill the laundry basket cause we have a lot of kids!!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚒🚑💖

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

OK this is a first our men here at the station groaned and got up and left when Bella cut off Roberto package so this review is all women. We believe that maybe that wasn't Roberto cause that was too easy and we're only at chapter 7. They have to have someone after them to go after them. But also GO BELLA GIRL POWER THAT'S WHAT WE'RE TALKING ABOUT!!! 

KEEP WRITING!!!🚒🚑💖

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Sorry it's late I had planned on reading to the crew when I got back from my kids vacation bible school but it started raining when I got to the station and had to go on a call, I was tired after and fell asleep waiting on everyone.

The guys said that Bella could have Edward out without over excreting him. Lol!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!💖🚑🚒

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Let the shit storm begin!!!!

With as big as the window are the can throw some alcohol fire balls in them. That's what we're betting on.

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚒🚑💖

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

OK bet for Hams for Fams for Thanksgiving:

1) Dakota and Crystal together

    12 No they won't.   18 say yes they will 

2) Will Charlie die or not 

    15 say yes by Bella.  15 say no because he took care of her when she was growing up.

3) Baby Cullen Gender

    15 girl.    15 boy

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚑🚒💖🚻💯

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

OK starting Friday we will be starting Toys for Tots filling our ambulances and fire trucks our goal this year is 20 meaning 10 for each so we have a bet: who will kill Charlie and Paul

17 say BellaCharlie, EdwardPaul

13 say Carlisle Charlie, EmmettPaul

Now the rules are whoever loses buys a toy but if let's say you had Bella kill Charlie and Emmett kill Paul than whoever bet for Edward and Carlisle has to buy a toy.

KEEP WRITING & HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!!!🚑🚒💖🍴🍖

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I was wondering if you were going to finish this or not with the book being published.

Don't forget that Edward has his Donna waiting at home for him to fuck next chapter!!! 

Have a safe & Merry Christmas!!! Can't wait to read more in 2017!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!πŸš‘πŸš’πŸ’–πŸŽ…πŸŽ„πŸŽ‰πŸŽ†

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

OK betting is: What is Bella and Edward baby; boy or girl????

17 say boy

13 say girl

KEEP WRITING!!!!💖🚒🚑💯

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

OK betting is: What is Bella and Edward baby; boy or girl????

17 say boy

13 say girl

KEEP WRITING!!!!💖🚒🚑💯

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Little Trey!!!!! Betcha him and Sean and Elizabeth daughter get together. Then Sean can't threatened him. Lol!!!! 

Also that would be something if they had a dozen boys. They would have there own football, baseball and basketball team. Lol!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚑🚒💖

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Man she didn't have any pregnancy sex everyday???? 

It's also cool that his name is Trey cause that is my nickname!!!!

OK so we are hoping that the epi will be in February so that are Valentine dinner will be cooked by the men if Trey and Aine get together then the girls win. If they don't we lose.

Also this is not the end of this series we will come up with stuff for Dom Edward and Donna Bella.

KEEP WRITING!!!🚒🚑💖

Wrigley's by heartfortwilight Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

Wrigleys

 

A love story told on tiny sketches on gum wrappers.  E/B. HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6232 Read Count: 1450
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2016 Updated: 09 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thanks Clo now the men are doing Elvis in persona nation which is giving me a headache cause they are singing way of pitch.

Just to let you know are cold water challenge month is coming up and we have bets on your story.

KEEP WRITING!!!!💖🚑🚒

Summary:

The Mother

The prophecy of the blood dragons was about to come true, but the future mother of the blood dragons needs to find her mate and the mate must be a blood drinker.  Will the future mother only use him for what she needs, or will he capture her heart?  E&B/HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8683 Read Count: 8550
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2016 Updated: 07 Oct 2016
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Her mate will be full of light on the inside but black on the outside.

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I for see the protectors getting with so vampires too. Two named Emmett and Alice.

And also what would be great is if Carlisle and Esme are Edward, Alice and Emmett parents and they drank human blood.

KEEP WRITING!!!🚒🚑💖

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

WHAT!!!! Emmett and Angelica not Rose???? You have us all confused.

KEEP WRITING!!!!💖🚑🚒

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Sorry it took so long on reviewing but we don't work on Monday. Lol!!!

OK so Jasper found his mate next will be Rose finding her mate????

I showed the teaser to some of the crew and the bear is Emmett and we think the next picture is Carlisle????

KEEP WRITING!!!🚒🚑💖

Summary:

Shadow

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How much heartache and pain can one person take before they break? Will Bella's dreams of happiness come true or will it remain in the shadows? E&B.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2069 Read Count: 1278
[Report This] Published: 23 Dec 2016 Updated: 27 Dec 2016
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter1

We have missed you!!! We hope you have a VERY MERRY CHRISTMAS & HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! We look forward to reading more in 2017!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!!πŸš’πŸŽ„πŸš‘β€πŸŽ…πŸŽŠ



Author's Response:

I am back and I hope you like this new story.  Merry Christmas to you.

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ago left them and all the bills including the cell phone bill!!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!! HAPPY NEW YEARπŸš’πŸš‘πŸŽ†πŸŽ‰

Summary:

Infinity

Isabella Marie Cullen the only child of Carlisle Cullen Don of the Cullen Crime family, born with an infinity symbol birthmark. Tragedy hits and Isabella and her mother are killed, or are they? How far will one brother go to take control of the family?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48278 Read Count: 74887
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2017 Updated: 28 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Carlise gets his Lizzie Bell back!!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!!❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑🀘

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey you have more support team. Lol!!! We even had a special meeting. I smell a fight between Ago and Edward!!!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚒👻💖

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So sorry it's late but we had a death in the crew and it has been a crazy week but it's catch up Day and your support crew is here.

Ok so could Carlise have someone impersonate him??? Just something to think about!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚒🚑❀πŸ”₯

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

No Carlise it's a trap don't go!!! Send your men in first. 

Also we voted today for Bound and have everyday!!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!!❀🚑🚒πŸ”₯

 

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

We are your support crew!!! Sorry it's late but we have been dealing with a brush fire near houses pic are on my Facebook page!!!

OK so hypothetical if Carlisle doesn't die and he married Esme could Edward take over as boss??? Cause that is what we are betting on happening!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!!πŸ’–πŸš’πŸš‘πŸ€

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Sorry we're watching Fifty Shades of Grey on USA channel so that is why this is late.

We wonder if Izzy will tell them who she really is????

KEEP WRITING!!!!!💖🚒🚑🐰

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

When is he going to notice the necklace or the tattoo!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!!!❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑🀘

 

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 15 May 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

We are so sorry that we have not review it has been very busy since swift water started and with my kids graduating and floods it's crazy. OK Carlisle has to remember the look on Arm's face and know he had something to do with this. 

We are going to catch up to you tonight and feel free if I don't review that day pm me on Facebook.

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚑🚒💖💁HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY!!!!

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 29 May 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Is he going to tell Emmett??? And will Emmett look around into Carlisle Cullen????? Hmmmmm KEEP WRITING!!! HAPPY MEMORIAL DAY!!!💖🚒🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OMG her son nose is bleeding and she is looking at Carlisle abs!!!! Lol!!! Keep a close eye on your brother Carlisle!!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚑🚒💖

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

But why does Aro want Brad and Louise killed just because Carlisle is getting married???? Also why did he push him into getting married???      KEEP WRITING!!!🚑🚒💖

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

We wonder how Emmett and Rose will get Lizzy Bell back to her father? Maybe Lizzy will go to the same school??? KEEP WRITING!!💖🚒🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

FYI only 1 parent can ride in a medevac helicopte. OK has Bree gone back to being Izzy Bell??? Maybe she has memories of Carlisle, Elizabeth, Edward and Esme. She could have selected memory. KEEP WRITING!!🚑🚒💖

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Aw they are renaming her and moving away???? They need to move near Carlise and Esme.

KEEP WRITING!!!!❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑🀘

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Poor Felix he is going to have to leave his house!!! Lol!!

KEEP WRITING!!!!!🚒πŸ”₯❀️🚑🀘

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Remember Edward almost hitting a girl with your car!!! Remember!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚒❀️πŸ”₯🚑🀘

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Hey can we pronounce Aro and Caius died???

KEEP WRITING!!!!!🚒❀️πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

We don’t get to read how Bella tortured Aro and Caius???

Aww....it’s sweet that they reunited on the other side.

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Author's Response:

That was the Epi.  You need to read Chapter 25.  

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Boiling Oil that’s one way to end a life and it’s a slow death cause the body goes into shock first before it just gives up on the pain. Serves them right!!! Although Ted said they should have freezed them since Bella was in the cold.

KEEP WRITING!!!!🚒πŸ”₯❀️🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

It's betting time: Who will figure out the symbols 

16 say Edward

14 say Bella

KEEP WRITING!!!!❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑🀘

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

She remembers!!!! Can't wait to read the reunion!!!

KEEP WRITING!!!!!❀️🚒πŸ”₯🚑🀘

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

BOOM!!! Lizzie Bell is going to make her uncle Aro suffer.

KEEP WRITING!!!!πŸ”₯🚒❀️🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wow what he said on bened knee was so loving. Your a great writer Clo!!

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Get em Carlise!!!!

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Both going to the club!!!! 

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Has he not seen her tattoo??? Ok that wasn't the first thing that went through the PERV CLUB mind something about don't write about a woman not sticking her Stelio's heel on a mans dick cause that would hurt. Lol!!! Us fire girls though it was funny.

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Summary:

Defiance

 

Carlisle Cullen is ruthless Don of the Cullen Crime Family, but his wife Esme doesn't want this life for their son Edward.  Running away and starting a new life and new identity, will they have a happy, safe life or will Carlisle find them?  E&B HEA


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42347 Read Count: 55699
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2017 Updated: 29 Apr 2018
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream

Happy Belated birthday to me. 

Bet: Will Carlise have sex with Bella or will Bella give Carlise blue balls??

10 say Carlise will take Bella

20 say Bella will give Carlise blue balls

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker

We have missed you!!!!

Well Carlise will be in even more trouble now that daddy Swan is coming to Chicago and he took his baby girl. Lol

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid

Happy Thanksgiving πŸ¦ƒ!!!!

Ok Bella tell us why you started an Escort service cause some of us still don’t get why you would do that???

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Making a Run for It

Sweet cause we work every weekend and the next couple of weeks I will start reading to my class.

OK she should have set her old car on fire!!!! KEEP WRITING!!!πŸ€πŸš‘πŸš’πŸ’–

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 15 May 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future

Esme is going to become an artist!!!!

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 21 May 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future

Esme is going to become an artist!!!!

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 21 May 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?

Will Carlisle be in San Fransisco??? Hmmmmm!!!!!

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions

So Bobby will recognize Esme. Go back to Forks!!

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes

So sorry for not reviewing with the weather and the firehouse it has been crazy. And we will be trying to review both stories.

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Cold Black Heart

WHAT OMG!!!! Bella is a escort!!!! WOW!!!

Betting time: Will they recognize each other???

19 say yes

13 say no

Who is going to start my Bridge day on October 21st???

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Wandering Heart

Is she in New York????

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Saying Goodbye to Your Heart

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Revelations

We are wondering how Edward will react to Bella having an escort service??? Will he be mad or sad???

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future

Aw man so Malcom is not the mole to Edward. 

Ok now Charlie needs to go with Edward and shot Carlise up.

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 It Must be a Dream

Bella kicking Edward in the groin is not the reunion we had in mind but he did call her a whore. 

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown

We don’t know if we should trust Malcom. Now if Emmett was watching Bella then we would trust him. But Malcom sounds double cross.

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Blood Payment

My men out in pain thanks to hearing you cut off Carlise manhood. Mason said “All there is left to do is char him”.

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

Aww man a gas explosion πŸ’₯!!!! You know there are other was to burn a house down. Just saying!!!

We loved it!!!

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Blood Payment

My men out in pain thanks to hearing you cut off Carlise manhood. Mason said “All there is left to do is char him”.

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

Aww man a gas explosion πŸ’₯!!!! You know there are other was to burn a house down. Just saying!!!

We loved it!!!

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Summary:

Testing Faith Cover

 

Summary:  Edward Cullen thought his life in the playroom was over, when his leg was amputated from the knee down due to an car accident. Could a submissive with her own ghosts be the one to show him that he is more than enough to take complete control of her body and her heart?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53532 Read Count: 59498
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2017 Updated: 26 Nov 2019
Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

We think Tonya will cause problems. Stay strong Bella and don't let her get to you!!! Punch her!! KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 ~ Passion

We thought it would be a little HARD for Edward to have sex with his prosthetic leg!!! But Bella took the regains. 

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 ~ Passion

We thought it would be a little HARD for Edward to have sex with his prosthetic leg!!! But Bella took the regains. 

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 ~ When The Nightmares Come True

WOW!!! Daddy??? We are so confused!!! KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸš’πŸ”₯🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

He’s going through the emotions!! He needs Bella to come back I bet she could get him out of bed and get his dominant side out.               KEEP WRITING ✍️ β€οΈπŸ’™πŸ”₯🚒🚑

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 ~ Texas Sizzle

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected

Is Edward going to tell his brothers????

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - Sore but Satisfied

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Happy Thanksgiving πŸ¦ƒ!!!

ok so if they were in the car together than how much did Edward get burned??

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn

I can see Angela tying Ben up and spanking him!!! Lol!!! Just saying!!!! It’s always the quiet ones.

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Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 Life Changing

Sorry if we are questioning you but what has Edward pinned???

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