Reviews by jay7795
Summary:

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"Mom sleeping?" I asked.

He nodded. "All pilled up and passed out."

"You drugged her." I assessed, rising to my knees.

"Only suggested she take a sleeping pill." He too kneeled on the bed. "So what can I do for you this evening?"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is dark. Characters: Bella, Edward, and Carlisle


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11281 Read Count: 26670
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 25 Mar 2011
Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 2: The Conclusion

Am I crazy cause I actually loved this story? Talk about some dark shit. This was all sorts of crazy but it was exactly what you said it would me. 

This was perfect I think if you add more chapters I'd end up in the looney bin.   Lol!!!

Between women by maymay74 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 84]
Summary:

Two times a week they reunite after their Zumba class to share their laughs, their secrets. It's the only time they have to be themselves. But life is more than stolen smiles and shared secrets. Four married women bare their souls through cups of coffee.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47623 Read Count: 7312
[Report This] Published: 10 Jan 2016 Updated: 24 Dec 2016
Reviewer: jay7795 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Before I continue moving forward.  I need to know about the infidelity. Will there really be infidelity? And what couple (s)? Still ify about that subject. .lol

Thank you!



Author's Response:

Hi! There will be one couple dealing with infidelity, Rosalie and Emmett. The others will face doubts, maybe people making them believe their better half is cheating, but the only couple with real infidelity, not rumors, will be Rose & Emmett.

(I hope I'm not giving too much away as it's already posted when we found about Emmett).

I know it's a difficult subject, and if you have more questions you can ask, I'm here to answer :)

Thanks to you :)

May

Fractured Hearts by cfmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.

 

"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!"  ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails

Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 232153 Read Count: 20818
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2016 Updated: 27 May 2016
Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Torture Devices

I am so loving your story. I love a pissed off Bella. One that stands for herself. This is wicked good. I am hooked and just had to review to let you know before I moved forward. The different POV go with the story and flow perfectly. Freaking amazing story!!!!

I'm excited to read what happens next



Author's Response:

Hi there!!! I'm so thrilled that you're enjoying the story so much. It's a project of love for me, so I get all warm and fuzzy inside when people are entertained and loving it. Thanks for not only reading, but also stopping to review. I appreciate it and I read and reply to every single one. Hope to hear more from you soon.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Guys and Dolls

Really loved the playfulness in this chapter. Sometimes we all need a break from the heavy. I like seeing Edward interact with his family. It shows that even if they are Vamps they still retain their human personalities. 

Awesome work!



Author's Response:

I really felt there could've easily been more playfulness in the books that wasn't there. In fact, I would've like a lot more interaction with the family - which I guess is obvious since I wrote it this way. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

I love that Bella and Alice have so much faith in Jasper. I like the triple date. Lol. Mostly the girl talk Bella really need that. I was grinning like a madd woman when reading this chapter.

Kudos to Bella for stepping up. I almost fell out my chair when she mentioned going commando  and then the ice thing.. I am sure that Edward will be there in no time flat.   Lmao 

Love a teasing Bella



Author's Response:

Haha - yes Bella needed the girl talk, but it she considered the advice coming from Angela than anything Alice would've suggested. ;) And Bella's faith in Jasper is in part why he's so willing to do what she asks (spending time in close proximity to her which is extremely painful and difficult). Commando and ice melting were taunts that Edwarad would certainly never be able to pass up. Haha

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Rounding Second

Oh fucking hell, excuse me while I go take ten cold showers... damn that confidence Bella has tapped into. 

Talk about taking the bull by the horn. Jeez! Go Bella!!!!!!! Poor Edward. That was a test of trust and Edward proved he was giving her control.

I think she should've kept the window closed a little longer...  lol



Author's Response:

Ha - okay see I think Bella has always had this inner confidence, but Edward didn't take the time to really know her well enough to see it. Paying for that now, isn't he? Somehow I doubt he's complaining. ;) And she just couldn't keep the window closed any longer. She wants him....badly.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Blindsided

I should be careful what I asked for.  Lol!!!

Great chapter! 



Author's Response:

I know, right? And more "fun" ahead for sure.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Mistletoe and Message Panty Payback

The presents were meaningful and just beautiful.  Thanks for the tissue warning. I really did cru and was just in awww.

Question: will there be any drama or action?



Author's Response:

Thank you! And warning - both drama and action up ahead. Keep your arms in the vehicle at all times. ;)

Much love, 

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Payback

GO JASPER!!! JASPER IS THE MAN!! WAY TO PUT EDWARD IN HIS PLACE. EDWARD BETTER NOT THINK ABOUT FUCKING BELLA OVER AGAIN. NOT ONLY DOES HE HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT JASPER BUT I'M SURE HIS FAMILY WILL PUT THE SMACK DOWN ON HIS ASS. EDWARD REALLY NEEDED TO KNOW HOW HIS DECISION EFFECTED HIS FAMILY.  HE NEEDS TO STOP THINKING ABOUT HIMSELF AND THINK OF HIS FAMILY AS WELL. AND GIVE BELLA MORE CREDIT. SHE IS STRONGER THEN HE REALIZES. OPEN YOUR EYES EDWARD BEFORE IT'S TOO LATE!

EDWARD REALLY NEEDS TO MODIFY HIS WAY OF THINKING, DIDN'T HE LEARN HIS LESSON WHEN HE WALKED AWAY FROM BELLA? I AM GONNA UNLEASH THE WOLVERINE ON HIS STUPID ASS... UGH

GREAT CHAPTER!!!! AGAIN LOVE JASPER IN THIS CHAPTER!



Author's Response:

*sigh* Jasper is one of my favorites. He's usually treated like a human xanax given his ability - so he shoulders a lot. But damn, that man calls it like he sees it and to be willing to throw down with Edward if he screws this up with Bella? Hell yeah! Like he said, she's the only person EVER to not blame him for his loss of control. Not once. And even if Alice said she didn't, he could feel that hesitation in her (and it hurt her that she felt that itty bit of blame) which hurt him so much more than any of the others blaming him. But Bella? He's never felt blame from her. And he can feel everything. This is why he'll die to protect her now, because he knows she accepts him completely, and she loves them all completely, and she will never stop feeling that way. So glad you loved it. :)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14:Too Much Testosterone

Oh damn! This was a slap in the face to Edward. I also like that Quill was there. Lots said in this chapter but again his actions come back to bite him in the ass.... he really needs to let her be and follow her request.. ugh

She has to also understand he can't change in a few days. He has been like that for 80 years and it's hard to change especially when it's been set in stone, literally. 

Great chapter!

Thanks for making it clear that Jakes is only a friend and that she needs someone in her corner that she can truly be herself.  



Author's Response:

She will come to understand that, but he also has to come to understand that maybe he never really knew Bella before. He made assumptions based on watching other humans for the last 80 years. She's not like anyone he's ever encountered. Quil makes me smile if for no other reason than his presence keeps things lighter than they might have been if Bella and Jacob had been alone.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Blood Doesn't Make a Mom

You have to just love Esme. Mama bear is the bomb. It is very important to get the prospective of someone outside the situation. She really opened their  eyes to show them a little bit about the other situation. I really loved this chapter and it made me miss my mom like crazy.  

Awesome freaking chapter!!! I really hope she gets time with Carlisle. She started to developers more of a relationship with Esme hope she can form one with carlisle.  To me it would be amazing to see. 

Another teary chapter. I will continue reading after work :) 



Author's Response:

You're right, Momma Bear is the bomb! I adore her and she defninitely said things the kids needed to hear, and that they would respond to coming from her instead of someone else. We'll see if she develops more of a relationship with Carlisle. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Gunpowder and Lead

I love emmett so much!!! That boy is trip. Bella is very wicked, she is playing the Cullens so damn good. Really dumbfounded the way she has things planned. 

Ok so I am not feeling her going out with Jake. Yes they are friends but Jake has more feeling for her and it's not fair. I feel like she is using him to make Edward jealous. She is playing with fire. I know that she and Edward aren't back together that they are working to better themselves for each other but still it doesn't sit right with me. I hope she knows what she is doing.

Now edward is not only gonna have to prove himself to Bella but to Charlie as well. Action speak louder then words and right now his actions are shit. The one thing he has done right was with the flower and letter. That is just a small start. I hope he isn't stupid enough to try and buy her. She isn't like that. She Loves him not the fact that he has money. He's gonna have to be original to win her back. He should go fishing with Charlie.  Lol

Great chapter! 



Author's Response:

Okay, lots to respond to with this review - which is awesome! Emmett: He is so much fun and I think people really don't give him enough credit. He knows exactly what he's doing when he needles Edward, even when it gets him into trouble with Rose. And with Emmett  you always know where you stand because he says exactly what's on his mind. Zero filter.

As for Jacob: I know you aren't feeling the date. Don't worry. I'm not a love triangle fan so there will not be that element. However, you are correct that he wasn't more than friendship with Bella. Bella doesn't realize that yet, but she will. When she does realize Jacob's interest it does cause her to re-evaluate some things which is great. She isn't intentionally playing with fire and she isn't trying to make Edward jealous. Not at all. I've had a lot of people tell me that Bella is just a bitch after they read chapter 14 - but really she isn't. She is learning how to find her way and be strong the same way that Edward is learning to find his way and not be overbearing. They will both still make mistakes. Having said that, she will always make it clear that Edward is the only one she wants.

Charlie: Actions do speak louder than words, especially to a man like Charlie. Edward has a long way to go to prove to Charlie that he won't hurt Bella again - and honestly, Charlie's fear of that might never leave him because he still has never gotten over Renee. That hurt runs deep.

Finally: Edward does realize that Bella has never been impressed or interested in what his money could do for her. He has no idea how to "woo" her, but he does realize he's going to have to be creative to win her heart and it has to be with sentiment and not physical things.

So glad you enjoyed the chapter so much! I loved your review and appreciate the time and thought you put into it. :)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Invisibly Shaken

I will admit this one had me in tears. They are getting close and Bella is realizing that with out her intentions she hurt her friends. To

This was amazing! I am anxious to read more :)



Author's Response:

Agreed. She didn't intentionally pull away from her friendships, but it happened all the same when she just shut down. Mike wasn't completely wrong in that she doesn't know how to be friends. Just like Edward doesn't know how to be a boyfriend. But...they are learning together.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Turning Stone into Silly Putty

This chapter was too cute. Not so heavy just an easy flow. Really nice :)

Loved it all



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Sometimes they need to just loosen up and have fun. :)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Bitch Slap

Badass chapter!!! Nothing I would've changed.   Love her back bone.. just Damn!



Author's Response:

Awesome!!!! Thank.you so much. I'm thrilled you thought it was "damn" worthy. ;)

Much love, 

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Learning to Listen

Is it crazy that this chapter made me cry? This was very hard to read. Just wow!! I am so happy that I came across this story. 

Let's see how he steps up. I love that she didn't forgive him so quick and that she shut him out til SHE is ready.. 

My favorite part that whole damn tbing!



Author's Response:

No, it's not crazy. I have been told before that I need to issue tissue warnings before some chapters and I almost always forget. I believe you can't predict what will make people cry, but the fact that it moved you so emotionally is such a huge compliment to me that really makes me smile. Thank you for that! It was hard to read (and write) this chapter as it would've been so easy for Bella to just give in and let things go back to how they were. But she had to be strong. She had to remember that she needed to have a place in the relationship, even if that meant keeping him at a distance when all she wanted to do was run into his arms. He needs to work to win her heart this time around. It was also hard to hear the thoughts he was thinking in reaction to what she was saying, because he was really listening to what she was saying and realizing how many mistakes he had made and how much he had taken for granted. Lots of learning for him in this chapter, and honestly, he's just scratched the surface. Bella's no where near done with him yet, hence the closed window. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Reality Check

He is finally realizing the error of his ways. He never did right busy her and that has to be the biggest slap in the face. The all mighty Edward Cullen being read and served by a human no less. The fact that Bella isn't backing down and only standing stronger makes me love her more. She is gonna be a hard cookie to crack...lol

Loved the conversation with Edward and Carlisle. 

Favorite part: has to be him falling out of her tree. That has priceless!

Great job!



Author's Response:

I still laugh when I think about him falling out of the tree and it's been forever since I originally wrote it. I just can't help it. I'm glad you enjoyed the conversation with Edward and Carlisle. It really needed to happen. Edward wanted a clinical opinion on Bella's state of mind, and Carlisle will always be honest with Edward - even if it hurts. He won't like it, but he'll still tell him the truth.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Moves and Countermoves

Go Bella!!!!!! I love that Bella stood up to Edward and stood up for Jasper. I always felt that Jasper and Bella would've had a strong friendship given the chance. Bella truly knows the Cullens and she knows Edward better then edward himself. 

Excellent chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

I agree that Bella and Jasper would've had a strong friendship given the chance. She gave him something that no one else ever could - peace from Edward's constant angst. ;) Thank you so much for the compliment. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much. It's near and dear to my heart so any time someone else falls in love with it I smile from ear to ear.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: A Trek, A Tree, and Titty Hard Ons

Stand up for yourself Bella!! Don't let him go back to his old ways. Damn jerk almost ruined the trip.

Good job

 



Author's Response:

Oh don't worry. She won't let him slip into his old ways. He's going to still mess up sometimes, but he's trying.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Strawberries and Cream

Amazing what a taste of sex can do for a person. How quickly he has changed his thoughts.    Lmao

 



Author's Response:

I know, right? That entire scene was it's own kind of torture for Edward, but again I doubt he minded. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Teasing, Tasting, and a Trip

LMAO!!! This chapter had me in tears from laughter.  Finally she spends time with the whole family. I love their banter! Hope Bella and Carlisle get some time together getting to know each other and maybe some Rosalie time as well. Seems she hangs out more with Jasoer, Alice and Edward. Hope that changes. 

 



Author's Response:

I laughed a lot writing this chapter. The entire family dynamic is just entertaining as hell, and given how many years they've been together, they know exactly what to do to push each other's buttons. I want to be a Cullen. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Summary:

The Mother

The prophecy of the blood dragons was about to come true, but the future mother of the blood dragons needs to find her mate and the mate must be a blood drinker.  Will the future mother only use him for what she needs, or will he capture her heart?  E&B/HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8683 Read Count: 9029
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2016 Updated: 07 Oct 2016
Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved it!!! We got to see a little of earth's history. 

Great chapter!

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Woohoo!!! Jasper found his mate!!! I am gonna say they meet Emmett or Carlisle & Esme. Ehy? Cause you always save the best for last and Edward is the best.

Look forward to seeing the history of Alice's people

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

LOVED IT!!! I'm gonna go with Emmett being next :)

Reviewer: jay7795 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it!! I am excited to follow your story