Reviews by Merrisol
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995759
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Merrisol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Spectacular chapter!! I am so happy that he finally proposed. Wedding bells will be ringing ... *raises champagne glass* Here's to Edward and Bella (and the hairbrush). May they have many years of love, happiness, and warm/toasty buttcheeks!

I would like to comment on some of the negative things that other readers are saying about this story. Personally, I find it offensive that people would have the nerve to complain about something written in a story. If they don't like it, they don't have to read it. It is as simple as that. This story is very clearly labeled as to the content contained within. If a person chooses to ignore the warning and read on, it is on them if they have a "problem" with the content ... not the other way around. Seriously, some of the readers need to use their critical thinking skills. People that do not understand the D/S lifestyle or are offended by it should probably look elsewhere for entertainment. I do not say this to discourage people from reading your story (I pimp this story out to all my friends), I simply want people to be respectful to the writer(s) of this story. Name-calling is petty and immature.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review of this mega chapter and your very kind and supportive comments. I really appreciate it.

love,

Michele

Reviewer: Merrisol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

I'm sorry you had such a crappy week :-( This chapter was spectacular! Tasty lemon, naughty Bella, beautiful wedding, naughty Bella (again), and what a suprise at the end. Another baby Bean! How exciting!!! As always, Edward was tastier than the frosting on a cupcake, but that just goes without saying ... or does it? hehe

Hope this coming week is better for you!



Author's Response:

thank you darling, oh no, Merrisol, you can say it anytime. Yummy xoxo

Reviewer: Merrisol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

As always an excellent chapter. Your portrayal of Alice's behavior was spot-on. I was quite proud of Bella for stepping up and taking control of the situation. The pictures you posted of the wedding attire added a wonderful visual. I look forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your review

xo

Unforeseen Events by jmolly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

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Banner by mimozka

Only 25 days remained until Bella would take my name and belong to me forever. Somehow, she was changing me. Somehow, I didn’t hate myself so much anymore. I was beginning to be able to accept what I was. Dealing with some other individuals was not becoming easier, however. Maybe it was just angst. I was having a hard time controlling my irritation these days.

 

 

A moment of passion becomes a fright night for Edward and Bella. Alice and Jasper are  not helpful.

Post-Eclipse, canon-based,canon pairings, vamps. Comedy/Romance.  First story in my Unforeseen Events Series of 6 books.  Rated NC-17 for some language, mature themes & lemons in some chapters. Mature content will become more explicit as this series progresses.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11444 Read Count: 9416
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2009 Updated: 11 Sep 2009
Reviewer: Merrisol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Charlie, No, Please! Don't Shoot Me!

Oh lord! Edward in his underwear being escorted home to his parents' house! Priceless!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your kind review.  Glad you enjoyed it.  I just love humiliating poor Edward.  He's so cute when he squirms.

 

Hope you keep reading.  I have 10 fics over on ffnet that I'm gradually going to post here.

 

Regards,

 

Jess

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255148
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Merrisol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

I enjoyed seeing the supportive family dynamic that Bella was raised in. I cannot even imagine how hard it must have been for Bella to hide the atrocious things that James did to her. I imagine this was two-fold: shame and fear. Shame that she would allow herself to get into that situation and fear that there would be repercussions for her and possibly her family members. I was proud of Edward for standing back and observing her family. He interacted with them and hopefully they all realize now that he loves her dearly and would never hurt her the way James did. I think that this trip to Forks has been a positive experience for both of them. Hopefully this has exorcised some of Bella's demons. While her memories of the pain she endured will probably never fully go away, I think that she can move on to have a beautiful, meaningful life with Edward.

Of course I do realize that the trip isn't over so there is the distinct possibility that the asshole will make an appearance. If he does, I hope she has the strength to stand up to him and tell him to go fuck himself with a telephone pole! She is much stronger than she gives herself credit for. She needs to realize that so many people love and support her unconditionally, especially Edward. He understands her better than anyone. The argument with Leah had to take place. I am glad they hashed it out and hopefully that chapter is closed now. Loved this chapter. Not everything has to be about sex and this chapter proved it.

Reviewer: Merrisol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Wow! Great chapter! What a strange dream. I wonder if it has anything to do with their impending trip to Forks? She needs to exorcise those demons of her or she will never truly be at peace.

Questions for Jane: What made you choose this lifestyle. Also, do you ever feel like you are less than a person because you are in this type of relationship 24/7?

Questions for Aro: Why would you want to be in a relationship where the other person is not allowed to think or make decisions for themself? Doesn't it get boring? How do you separate the wife/marriage part of the relationship from the dom/sub part of the relationship? Do you give her time off for good behavior? LOL Sorry, couldn't resist that one!



Author's Response:

Thank you for submitting a question ,,,

glad you liked the last chapter... sorry this is so late in getting out, but here is this weeks teaser...louise.

“You did your father’s wash?” that sounded like something a kid shouldn’t do.

 

“Yeah…since I was ten or eleven.” there must have been some kind of bewilderment on my face because she justified herself. “I told you this. Charlie worked all kinds of weird hours; mostly he would sleep during the day and …”

 

Breaking in to her train of thought I made the assumption “You did all the chores”

 

She shrugged “Someone had too”

 

I truly couldn’t imagine any ten year old taking it upon themselves to be responsible for keeping a house. I suppose that would be another reason why at the tender age of eighteen Bella thought herself ready for marriage. It seems so clear to me that she had hopes and dreams for a regular life, college, career and all the other things that eighteen year olds dream about. However in her advanced maturity she pushed her own happiness aside and took on the responsibility of trying to please someone else. I had thought Bella to be a natural submissive and it would seem like she was.

 

The mistake she made was in her choice of partners. I have no doubt that had he not been abusive she would have been a perfect wife. Bella did everything within her power to see to his happiness even to the point of losing her own.

Reviewer: Merrisol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. I love this story because of the writing and the way you have developed the characters. It is interesting to watch them grow and change. The kinky fuckery is just an added bonus. Your writing style reminds me of someone who is painting. You lay down the background and then start filling in all the beautiful, intricate details. I love this story and always look forward to reading a new chapter in the lives of Bella and Edward.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have your teaser for you....lml

“Are we going to talk about it?”

 

“About what?” she truly didn’t know what I meant, so I held up her arm. Bella’s face fell “Oh”

 

I kept staring at her while she sat back down in her seat, waiting for her to start talking. Whatever happened she didn’t want to tell me, but I wasn’t giving her a choice I wanted, no I needed to know. Finally she sighed and started talking.

 

“I don’t know what you want me to say Edward I handled it, ingeniously I thought, I let her know that I wasn’t going to take any of her shit while still obeying you. Did I do wrong? Were you mad at me?”

 

Was I mad at her?

 

I figured I would let her answer her own question “Did you get punished?”

 

Bella shook her head at my question so I asked another one “Were you rewarded?”

 

The sweetest smile and blush broke out over her face “Several times” she admitted, making me chuckle, but I needed her to know something.

 

My fingers laced with hers on top of the table while I explained “The fact of the matter is…” I looked in her eyes “…Bella you shouldn’t have to handle shit.”

Reviewer: Merrisol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I started reading this story a couple of days ago and am now up to speed. Sorry I didn't comment on every chapter. I hope to make up for that now.

This is a very interesting story. Obviously. It has kept my attention for the past two days! I understand the bond between the dominant and submissive. I do not participate in that lifestyle but have done extensive reading on the subject. I like the way you portray Edward's adjustment to Bella's punishments, taking into consideration her abusive history. I don't believe she ever feels abused and he is always clear in his explanation as to why she is receiving punishment. Communication is important.

As for who is after her ... that is a tough one to answer. The obvious suspect is, of course, James. I am not sure he is that stupid. The jury is still out on that rat bastard. My second choice would be Tanya. She is a bitch, in every sense of the word. A woman scorned can be a scary thing. She could be in cahoots wiIth James. That would be an interesting twist. In all honesty I am afraid you are going to kill off the dog :-) That would hurt Bella, and even Edward, so much. I think it would also be a tipping point in her sanity. Maybe she needs a shove to get over the past. Who knows? Only you :-)



Author's Response:

The thing about punishments is that they talk before hand, so that it is clear why it is occuring and they afterwards there is cuddling and more talking so that she knows all is forgiven and no grudge is held... it helps with the trust and the bond that they share. As far as yourr theories go... Hell hath no fury as a woman scorn... but besides having her feelings hurt or more like her pride wounded what motive would Tanya have? ((i'm just asking)) I promise (((PINKY SWEAR))) Seth will not be harmed in anyway!!!....BTW ... if I haven't said it before ,,,, WELCOME TO THE STORY !!!    ....Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml

I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”  

 

“Don’t say that!”

 

I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”

 

Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”

 

Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”

 

“No…” why the hell would I think that?  

 

“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”

Reviewer: Merrisol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

There is some fishy shit going on in this story.  I don't like Officer Hawk. He is a rude, nosey bastard. I don't like Heather either. She is definitely up to something. I just need to figure out WHO set this whole plan in motion.

Edward was a very good boy this chapter. I don't understand the whole "dance" dealio. Maybe I missed something :-(  Love, love, love this story!



Author's Response:

hmmm the dance thing goes back to chapter 28 ...here is the small exert that has to deal with the dancing ....

“Hey Bella?” Dana called from over by the stove.

 

“What?” I asked looking up.

 

“Who was that guy here the other day? What was his name Tammy?” She asked sarcastically to the woman standing next her. This was not going to be good.

 

“Umm…I think it was Ed-ward? Yeah, that’s what I heard.”

 

Son-of-a-bitch! They would have to do this in front of Carlisle.

 

“Yeah, and a little birdie told me that he is Bella’s…” Dana looked over toward the children, and then grinned at me, “…mattress dancer…” Tammy giggled at her choice of words, “…and I also heard that he would win Dancing with the Stars, hands down.” The two of them stood there giggling while I could feel my face heat up. When I chanced a glance at Carlisle his head was down and he was pretending to be oblivious to the conversation. 

Do you remember now??? and here is tis weeks teaser .....

Walking into the house all the cares that had been forgotten came crashing back as he told me that the locksmith would be there in about a half-hour. I used that time to tell him what I had learned about Heather.

 

“Do you think that could have been her on the video?” He asked me as we sat outback playing fetch with Seth and a tennis ball.

 

“It could have been. But how would she know where you lived. I mean really Edward if she knew where I was why go to the center?” He thought about that for a few seconds as he once again threw the ball into the grass.

 

“I’m going to call Mr. Weiss and let him check on it, I’m also going to see if he can check on your Officer Hawk.”

 

“My Officer Hawk?”

 

He smirked “Well he’s not mine besides he didn’t really care until he found out who you were, and I’m not taking any chances. I don’t know how it will work with him being a cop and all but…” I cut him off because I had gotten an ingenious idea.

 

“I could have Charlie do it.

 

Reviewer: Merrisol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I think this is a wonderful story. I realize that you enjoy hearing from your readers and getting their feedback, but in the end it is YOUR story to tell. If someone is offended by the smut the perhaps they should find a different story to read. I appreciated your honesty in explaining how the story has taken on a life of its own. That's what good stories do. I know you want to please the readers but I believe you have to be true to yourself and write the story the way you want to. Two thumbs, a high five, and a gold star!



Author's Response:

I put up enough warnings telling that my story contains two adults and is a D/s theme...if people don't like it,,,,then read something else... oh well I can't please everyone, so I'll just have to please myself and let those that enjoy the story, continue on this journy with me....thanks for reading...i have your weekly teaser....lml

“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.

 

“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”

 

I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”

 

“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.

 

Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.

 

“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.

 

“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.

Reviewer: Merrisol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I understand Edward's reaction to her kissing his peen. I look forward to seeing what she wrote in her journal afterwards. Irena is up to something. I hope Edward finds out what is really going on there. Lovely chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm posting the Journal OT on the extra's page later tonigh (tuesday) look for it there....Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment...I have a teaser for you...lml

Edward was pulling into the parking lot that was across the street from the main entrance. He didn’t say anything else until he held my door open for me taking my hand and pulling me closer to him. “I am sorry about my behavior”

 

I smiled at him “You girl forgives you”

 

His face moved closer to mine as he spoke “My girl is more tolerant then I deserve”

 

“Never” as I said the word his lips brushed against mine, it was a sweet chaste kiss. When he pulled back his eyes held a tenderness in them as he palmed the side of my face. 

 

“Remember your task and speak to no one other then family members”

 

“Yes Sir”

 

“Come let’s get this over with so we can get home” I nodded in agreement following behind him with my eyes down. As we approached the entrance Edward spoke with the guy at the door.

 

“Tyler, how is the night going?”

 

“Edward, actually it’s been busy, it’s game night”

 

Edward groaned “damn I forget about that”

 

Tyler chuckled as we moved into the club telling us to have fun, I wasn’t sure what game night was but it appeared I was about to find out.

Reviewer: Merrisol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Wonderful chapter!! Very interesting explanation about the collar and leash. Bella's "release" in the middle of a crowded restaurant was all kinds of hot. I cannot imagine ... although I certainly would like to!!!

Questions for Aro and Jane. Hmmmm. For Aro: Do you ever "switch" roles in the playroom? For Jane: Would you be comfortable playing the role of the dominant? What is on your list of hard limits? Does it get monotonous being a sub 24/7?



Author's Response:

I got your question --thank you -- and as far as public orgasms....I say drink a few glasses of wine and - go for it -...lol....thanks for reading, I have this weeks teaser for you ...lml

Edward took the lid off his coffee while I took a bite of the danish moaning as the sweet gooey goodness melted in my mouth. The mixture of berries was a perfect balance between sweet and tangy with a thin layer of warm yummy cheese and sweet drizzle.

 

“MMMmmmmnnnn” I think my eyes rolled to the back of my head. When I opened my eyes Edward was looking at me licking his bottom lip. “What?”

 

He kind of shook his head as if trying to come out of a daze before taking a drink of coffee. “Last night was good?”

 

“Uh huh…” I nodded as I swallowed “…last night was great. I was a little worried when I saw the leash”

 

Edward cleared his throat “Well you shouldn’t have been looking, your eyes are to remain down not searching the room.”

 

I sighed “I know but when you put it down on the table all I could think about was when you were going to put it on me.” He looked…stunned, so I figured it would be a good idea to explain. “ Not that I wanted to walk around in public and I will admit it panicked me a little but it kind of excited me too.” taking a drink of coffee I asked the question I really wanted to know.

Reviewer: Merrisol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Great chapter! I have to admit that I was shocked that even Jane thought something less than wholesome was going on between Aro and Bella. I never felt there was because I based my assumption on the fact that I know Bella's character. Seeing it from the other side and realizing that others did not know Bella, explains some of their judgment on Aro. That does not reflect well on his character though if so many would jump to the wrong conclusion. Human nature, at its worst! lol



Author's Response:

jane didn't know Bella's charater in the begining, and to tell the truth I wouldn't have been very happy about my husband going off to meet with a young woman on a regular basis either...I mean all she knew was taht it started off with emails...then phone calls and then they were meeting in person ...what would you think?...hmmm???...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. i have this weeks teaser for you...lml...

Taking another drink of coffee I didn’t say anything, but that was twice now that something was not put on the calendar. The lunch with Jane yesterday- which I found out about accidentally - that was ultimately cancelled and now the waxing, I guess my submissive will have some explaining to do. But at the moment I thought of something else.

 

“If you are waxing have them remove the remaining patch of hair” Bella’s hand stopped mid-way to her mouth as she just stared at me and I wondered what had caused the reaction I was getting. 

 

“W..Why? You said I could keep it”

 

Taking a drink of coffee I thought over my words to her on the subject “If I remember correctly I said you could keep it for the time-being but I would like it gone now”

 

“Can we talk about this?” her eyes stayed focused on the few pieces of bagel that were still on the paper towel. I didn’t understand what the problem was; we were talking about a tiny little patch of neatly trimmed hair.

 

“What’s the big deal?” I watched as she sat there quietly staring at the table chewing her bottom lip. “Bella?”

 

Devastation is the only word that came to my mind when she looked into my eyes “I know this is really stupid, but can I please keep it until next time?”

 

My eyes narrowed in confusion what did it matter if it was now or later? “Why?”

 

“Do you know why I kept a small patch?”

Reviewer: Merrisol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

That collar and leash had better be for the dog!! LOL Perhaps it is a bit of a mindfuck. Perhaps I am wrong! I usually am when it comes to these two. I wanted to thank you for the OT of Jane's thoughts. It was very interesting insight :-)

Waiting with bated breath for the next chapter!!! Two thumbs up AND five stars!

Reviewer: Merrisol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

I thought it was an excellent chapter! Yeah, hot sex is great but this is the story of two people. That includes their hopes, dreams, and thoughts. It makes the story so much more richer and believable.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and I agree they can't spend their whole life naked...lol....I sent you a seperate e-mail as a thank you for leaving a review..lml

Reviewer: Merrisol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Impressive and insightful chapter. It will be interesting to see if Bella can exorcise all of her demons. I enjoy the fact that Edward is always so in tune with what Bella needs, even when she doesn't know herself.

Can't wait to see what Charlie has to say. Hope they survive their stay in Forks! lol



Author's Response:

I think they will survive Forks...lol...

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me a comment ....I have this weeks teaser for you...lml

Leah went into the bathroom while Bella came around the corner into the kitchen. Our eyes met immediately as a warm smile engulfed her face. It was clear she had been crying and it took everything I had in me to remain in the chair and not run to comfort her. Sue looked up as she started putting food on the table then went over to hug Bella just as I wanted to. Bella nodded at whatever Sue was saying then left her go so she could say hello to her father.

 

“Hi daddy” Bella said wrapping her arms around him from the back before leaning down to kiss his cheek.

 

Charlie’s hand gripped her forearm then patted it in a fatherly manner. “Hi’a Bells. How are you?”

 

“I’m good…” Bella gazed at me while adding “…I guess you got to met Edward?”

 

“Yes…no thanks to you. Paul introduced us” Bella glared at Jacob mouthing ‘Paul’, Jacob held his hands up in surrender “You don’t want to know”

Reviewer: Merrisol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

My heart literally aches for Bella. Hearing in detail what her life was like with James makes me want to BE the sniper! I would rip his balls off and feed them to her dog. Rat bastard. I have a sick feeling in the pit of my stomach about the fact that James is probably not out of the picture yet. Cue the sniper. No, scratch that. I think that would be too easy. Flog him in the middle of the street. Naked. Hanging upside down with his dick super-glued to his leg. Much better!

Edward's amount of control with a single finger made me ... well, you get the idea. Holy soaked panties! Lovin' it!!!

Reviewer: Merrisol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Great chapter! I think Edward's insight gave Leah something to think about. Hopefully she will accept his explanation and give it some serious thought. Bella is a very important part of Leah's life. They need each other.

Re: Water for Elephants. I read the book and saw the movie. The book was great. The movie told the story well and I enjoyed seeing RPattz with some color in his face for a change. I was disappointed in the chemistry between him and Reese Witherspoon. I blame this on the director. The actors take their cues from the director and I don't think he did his job. I know RPattz can conjure up passion. I have seen Remember Me and even Little Ashes.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183820
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Merrisol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

I understand the sentiment behind this chapter. In any relationship it is important to keep the lines of communication open. Reality can take a toll, especially when children and work take  up so much of a person's time. While I do not necessarily agree with E's behavior, I do get it. I am also proud of him for stopping before he got too carried away. B had every right to be hurt. I do feel though that she went a bit overboard in his punishment.

Loved the ending. Sometimes you just have to go back to the beginning and remember what things were important before all the chaos of life entered the picture.

Reviewer: Merrisol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

Beautiful ending ... as it should be.