Reviews by hilighter
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625419
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: hilighter Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love

This might be my first review ever and I read a lot of fanfiction.  That being said, I felt compelled to send this message.  I wouldn't begin to "review" as I am not in the least qualified.  Several chapters in, I honestly wondered if I had the stomach to finish your story.  This would have been a second if in fact I did abandon the story, and again, I read alot of stories so that should say a lot.  I am so glad I stayed with it.  Although the subject matter was very uncomfortable, the overall story was well written and redeeming.  Thank you for writing something that got such an emotional reaction from me. 

Additionally, although I would love a sequel as I was not ready to let these characters go, I do believe you ended the story well and was left as it should be.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I know the whole premise of TPW is hard to read and the beginning is graphic and horrific. I couldn't think of any other way though to realistically show Edward as the "lesser of evils" between him and what she went through with Charlie & James. I had to show Edward was nobody's hero, but at least he was a better option when she had none. Domestic violence has two sides; the abused and the abuser. It in no way is meant to justify the actions of the abuser, but often we forget they were also once the abused. What they choose to do with that experience is what makes the difference. Do they continue the cycle of abuse or do they break the chains and take a stand?

My father and his mother and siblings were abused by my grandfather when he was growing up. He wasn't much better to my mom when they married until he made the decision to stop the cycle. They have been married 44 years and 31 of those have been violence free.There has been no violence in my own marriage of 28 years.

I have started Alice/Jasper's story from TPW, but it's on hold right now. I's only 6 chapters so far. I'll pick it back up in a few months. I have a lot on my plate right now between rl, working on my third novel and I'm determined to finish Creating a Mate before anything else.

Thanks again for reading.

Mic