Reviews by vamps09
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625035
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

I still think they should have a place to dump Carlise, lol.

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Glad for the happy ending.  Wow, what a story, very original.  It  was hard to read from time to time, but very hard to stop reading.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the story. I hope you'll check out my other ff stories. They aren't as dark as this one. I've also published my first novel "Blind Faith" which is available at TWCS' publishing house or Amazon in paperback or ebook formats.

Take care!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

oh no!!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

I can not guess what is in the garden.  Cant wait to find out.  Oh, I know maybe a grave for Carlise, they can bury his nasty, disgusting self alive!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

OMG, I just want to beat these men in this story!!!!!  Give them a taste of their own medicine.  It is a story I can't stop reading.  Very interesting.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. (I always feel odd saying 'enjoy' with this story, because it's not quite the right word, is it?)

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

I am glad Bella is finally getting through to him, but I am wondering if Carlisle is going to get to her.  Got to go read more!!



Author's Response:

Change takes time and Edward has to overcome a lifetime of evil influence from his father to finally realize what's right in front of him.

Summary: Past Featured Story

beaches

Returning to her hometown after college, Bella is thrilled to be reunited with her friends Alice and Jordan. What she doesn’t expect is the undeniable attraction that she feels for Jordan’s husband Edward. When lines blur, friendships are tested. ExB, All Human, Rated M for language, adult situations and lemons!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66851 Read Count: 13509
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2010
Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: New Beginnings

I love this story.  Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to review! I'm glad you're enjoying it!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Forever

I thought for sure he was gonna ask her to marry him at Christmas

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Life Anew

Like the chapter, the end is coming :(

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

Love this story

Summary:

When Edward flees to Volterra after learning of Bella's death, he is coerced into staying as a member of the Volturi guard. When he becomes hopelessly lost, will he allow the person he least expected to find him? Sometimes redemption can be found even when it is not being sought after.  Contains slash and some dark themes.

 

Thanks to ms_ambrosia at twificpics.com for the banner!


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Demetri/OC, Edward/OC
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 106374 Read Count: 2609
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2010 Updated: 19 Jul 2010
Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Impelled Catharsis

Like the story, hoping for an update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing.  I'm glad you like what you've read so far!  I actually have fourteen chapters loaded at different locations.  I'm adding it here one at a time to try to garner more interest for it, but if you want to read everything I have sofar you can see it on twilighted http://www.twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=9329, My Vamp Fiction http://myvampfiction.com/dungeon/viewstory.php?sid=431&warning=5, or Fanfiction http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5490687/1 .  Thanks so much for taking the time to read.

Summary:

Story Banner

After Edward left Bella never had much luck with life: her mother gets pregnant and dies in childbirth and her step father doesn't want anything to do with them. Charlie dies from a car crash in Seattle and Jacob imprinted and left her at the alter.

Even 10 years latter Edward Cullen still haunts her memory, and what could happen when he comes to her school, and how is it she doesn't appear a day over 23? Good genetics maybe?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28148 Read Count: 12872
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2010 Updated: 31 Mar 2010
Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Book I

I cant wait to read more of the story, it sounds very interesting.

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Leave

Well geez he didn't have to be so harsh!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Bitter Taste - End of Book I

Ok, I need more like soon!!!  What happens next, don't leave me hanging, PLEASE!!

Summary:

Bella became convinced that she's destined for single life after she broke up with her first boyfriend, Edward Cullen, back in high school. Determined to be the President of her parent's company, she's prepared to do anything to have the job. However, what would she do if her parents only want her to do a simple thing; to get married to the son of their friends whose name just happens to be Edward Cullen?  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61689 Read Count: 41118
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2010 Updated: 30 Aug 2010
Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Reason Seven

Good I'm glad she slapped and punched her!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Reason Twenty-seven

Wow what a witch!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

tsou

 

Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?

 

This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too.  Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.

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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.

This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.

 

 By- SexyLexiCullen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420783
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2010
Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Lingerie and Lasagna

Ha, ha great story, they are such nerds. Love it

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 52: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.

GREAT STORY!!!!!! LOVED IT!!!!!!

Summary:

WDH Jenn

Edward leaves Forks and Bella behind after the incident with Tyler's van. Now, five years later, he finally returns to his family and the Pacific Northwest. While picking up his latest Swedish automobile, he is confronted by a very familiar scent. Will Edward be able to fight the pull his singer has on him a second time? Or will he stick around long enough to find out What Drives Her?

Thank you, JennJenn, for this lovely banner!

 

Thank you, TammyAZ, for this beauty!

WDH Tammy


~ What Drives Her has been nominated by you!! ~

-Nominated in the Sunflower Awards for "Best Vampire Story".

-Nominated for a Faithful Shipper Award for "Best Alternate Universe/Canon Story"!  (Update: TKegl got the well-deserved win for her story, "Beyond Time". I highly recommend reading it, if you haven't already!)

-Nominated for a Vampie for "Best AU Story" in the Newborn Round, Winter 2011.

-Nominated for a Shimmer Essence Award for "Best Dazzled Moment", in the 2010 Snowflake Quarter.

 

*If you know, or hear of, any other noms for this story, please feel free to send a DM my way as I'm not terribly active in the awards and contest circuit anymore.*

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 258430 Read Count: 27261
[Report This] Published: 09 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Oct 2018
Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Riding In My Car

Ha ha go Bella. Love the story!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Deals Off

Dang, all deals are off??? The elders must be upset, lol.

Summary:

What if Edward didn't come back?  Bella has cancer and she's looking back on her life. Alternate ending to New Moon.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2173 Read Count: 2249
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2011 Updated: 30 May 2011
Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Aw, so sad

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324374
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication

Great chapter.  Love the story!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Bella Swan was the reincarnation of Isabella Salvatore, Damon and Stefan's beloved sister that had died tragically? She not only looks exact but due to a spell cast years ago, she has begun to remember her former life. What will the Salvatore brothers do when they find out she exists? How will this affect Bella's relationships, especially with Edward? How do Katherine, Victoria and Klaus factor in?

AU: Takes place at the end of New Moon (Twilight) and the end of Season 2 Vampire Diaries.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, The Vampire Diaries/The Originals, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 68 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244615 Read Count: 75632
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 18 Oct 2012
Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Operation Kill Klaus

sounds like things are about to go wild.

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Thanks for the Memories Part 2

Omg Bella!!! Noooo .

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Caged Hearts

Yeah she woke up

Always on my Mind by jess2002 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 196]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Written with Siobhan! He said I had no life before him. He said that he was my past present and future. I couldn't remember life before him so he must be right. He promised that he would never leave me, but one day that all changed.

Thanks to Christag for the banner!

Thanks to Stepaine Mason for the other banner!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159709 Read Count: 59807
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2012 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Well I loved it, you don't know how many times I wanted to knock Edward out, but I see it's not his fault. Great story!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow this story is so intense. Poor Bella she is so brain washed poor girl. I love EXB but not this E!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

What was in her journal? And i really hope Edward stops being so mean!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward was 19.  Bella was 13.  They were next door neighbors.  Charlie was the chief of police.  Carlisle was a doctor at the local hospital. 

Edward’s little sister Alice was also 13 and Bella’s best friend. 

While home from college for the summer, Edward spent time with his little sister and her best friend so their parents could all go out for dinner.

Over the next several years, Edward and Bella became good friends, until the summer she turned 16 when she transformed before his eyes.

 

Banner for my story

AH, ExB, Mostly EPOV, sort of coming-of-age, hopefully a little poignant, with a splash of angst until Bella's at least seventeen.  Mature for language, eventual lemons and a very spunky Bella.

 

Banner made by yours truly!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77808 Read Count: 67190
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2012 Updated: 08 Jan 2014
Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Ignorance is Bliss

Why is Carlise such a jerk??



Author's Response:

He has a lot of unresolved issues that will be dealt with soon enough.  I'm working on him.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 10: The Airport

Hmmm why is he going back? Is someong getting married ? ?



Author's Response:

No, no one is getting married.  Yet.

Thanks for reading!

Second Chances by melloncollie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 60]
Summary:

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Edward and Bella parted ways after high school and never spoke again. 5 years later, when Edward dies in a car crash, Bella gets the chance to live out what could have been if she made a different decision 5 years ago. AH, HEA. contains adult themes and language.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 100196 Read Count: 12206
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2012 Updated: 15 Mar 2015
Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: The Funeral

Omg, I am crying like a baby.



Author's Response:

aww I'm sorry, I promise that wasn't my intention!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: The Zoo

Love it!!!

All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 792]
Summary: Past Featured Story

All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 167459
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 03 May 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

Im glad she is giving Edward a chance

Summary:

Bella the teen mom. Edward the sexy olderman. How do they meet and can they have more? Lets stalk them and see...

Very little angst and as sweet as i can write!

 

thanks to christagbanners for the banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35295 Read Count: 95367
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2012 Updated: 15 Nov 2012
Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Wow her parents are real jerks!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

OKAY is this win a ghost? 

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Great story! Loved it. Your are a great writer, this is the 3rd story i've read and they are all great.

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Aw, Edward is so cut with Liam. Love the story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

banner

 

Somewhere in life I took a wrong turn and never found my way back. For me there were no second chances, there were no redos...or at least that's what I thought, until I met a girl on a bus who looked just like me...just a little richer. 

Contains Daddyward/Doctorward

Title Change! Once called My Redo Life

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24485 Read Count: 23444
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2013 Updated: 04 Jun 2014
Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Isadora Meet Isabella

I like it!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

what??? How do they know. 

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281069
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Ha these kids are so funny

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Wow I can't believe it is over :( This was such a great lemony story. Thanks for writing!!

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272409
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Loving this story!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

How and why did you let her go.

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh I love this story!! Will you continue?

Summary: Past Featured Story

TCOACG Banner by Mina

 

(Banner by Mina)

 

A perfect cafe au lait was all it took for Hollywood's most eligible bachelor to fall in love with me...the coffee girl.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93585 Read Count: 142597
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Feb 2014
Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Eight

Aw such a cute story!! Love it.

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Love the story!! But this Malice needs to get punced in the face!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue

Love it, great story!!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Outtake

Awwww, just love this story!! Thanks for writing!!

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by Marie Carro

 

TFFA Banner

 

 

Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146714
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame

oooooooooo, hot story, love it cant wait to read more



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like the story so far. See you soon with the EPOV.

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate

Love it!!



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm glad you like the story. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - Support System

love the story cant wait for more.



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. But I'm afraid you'll have to wait about ten more days for the update :(. See you then.

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps

Well Alice is Alice, liked the chapter and I think Forks should be interesting.



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you liked it. And yes, Forks will be interesting. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - Surprise!

Love this story cant wait for more.



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Next up will be something you've for sure been waiting for ;). See you next chapter.

Summary:

lwoc

Summary: After her parents are murdered, Bella and her brothers flee to the protection of their Godfather. When Bella discovers information that puts her life at risk, her only choice is to marry a man that she hates. Edward is a hard man, one that wants nothing to do with his reluctant bride. Can this pair ever learn to love each other...before their enemies destroy them? AH E/B


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25286 Read Count: 66591
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2014 Updated: 22 Oct 2017
Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

What a weirdo King is. Cant wait for more.

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Love it, cant wait for more!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

hahaha go Eddie boy, cant wait to see their reaction

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Love it, cant wait for more!

Summary: Past Featured Story

mm

 

Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113973
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 9 Part 2

Oh I can't wait for the race!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 15 part 4

She's probably up to something. 

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 17 Part 10

Poor little thing. 

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 13 Part 6

Aw nice of him to dedicate to her did she catch it? Glad you're back.

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 12 Part 5

Love it!!! I NEED MORE!!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 20 part 2

Nice wake ups!!

 

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 13 part 2

Love it, wish the chapters went on forever! So sorry to hear about your family, very sad.

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 13 part 1

Love the story. Cant wait for more.

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 20 Part 3

Ha great chapter, loved it!!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 19 Part 14

Woo hoo, finally! He's so sweet.

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 17 Part 11

Yay the signs for Tanya

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

Oh wow try to spin the story, they are nuts. Love it.  Hope you feel better. 

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 14 part 4

I can't get enough of this story. Love it!!!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 20 Part 6

Yay another chapter! Love it!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 15 Part 2

Love it. They look so different as themselves.

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 4 (part 4)

Aw, poor Charlie, love the story!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 8 part 6

No dont leave us hanging. What did they decide?? Cant wait for more, love it!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 18 Part 8

Yay an update. Love it!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 17 Part 6

How is the baby?? 

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 17 Part 7

Me too I hope the press gets her

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 17 Part 8

Yay finally a little  closer:)

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 17 Part 4

Who is at the door? ?

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 17 Part 5

Wow she is so all about herself, really want to punch her.

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 15 part 5

Yay another chapter! !! Love this story. 

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 15 part 7

Love it,  I need more!!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 16 Part 1

Cute 

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 16 Part 3

Ohhhh boy. Can't wait for more! !

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 16 Part 4

Tanya is such a witch! ! Thanks for another chapter! ! Love it. 

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 16 Part 5

Aww poor baby 

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Oh boy get her Edward rip her a new one,  lol. Poor baby all sick and cold. Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 16 Part 7

What is Edward doing,  I  can't imagine him happy with that stunt she pulled. And what about the baby.  Love the story! !

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 16 Part 8

:( poor little guy. GImme more pleaseeeee. 

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 17 part 1

How is little Charlie doing?  

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

Hmm what did Tanya do to his phone that he is not getting calls??

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 18 Part 8

Hmm what does he wasn't ???

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 18 part 3

Oh does she take it? ? I need to know. 

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 18 Part 4

Thank goodness they are not making problems. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 18 Part 5

Finally!! Love it.

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 20 part 5

Oh that ending was toooo funny!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 19 Part 7

Naughty Bela!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 19 Part 18

Hot stuff!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 23 May 2016 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 20 Part 4

Thanks for another chapter, love the story!!

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 20 Part 7

Aww sweet