Reviews by mjne
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625349
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: mjne Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Hey! Love your story. I started reading it and stopped because it was so hard to read the early chapters. I was not going to finish but I could not get the story out of my head. I am glad I kept reading. I loved the ending. I am so glad you made it real and had her leave and get help. would love to read what was is Edwards head after she leaves him. Will you write any outtakes? Looking forward to reading what you write next. :) jpl



Author's Response:

There will be an outtake for Esme when she finds out Carlisle is dead and what she did with his ashes.  Edward's pov is saved for the book.

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183820
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: mjne Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal

Thank you for not having her forgive him and fall right back into bed with him. I love that she is stronger and voicing her needs. :) jpl

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: mjne Signed
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Weeping Willow part 2

Hey! Really like your story but having a hard time with these last two chapter. Edward is an acting like an ass and bell a is like a weird stepford wife. She was beaten and abandon but just shows up and takes it. She would be bruised and in pain and emotionally hurt from what happened. Who is taking care of her. I get that Edward was upset but give me a break that he is the victim.

Summary: Past Featured Story

bsnnr

 

Banner by Readergoof...she even found a white bikini!  Thank you!

 

A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57546 Read Count: 31184
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2011
Reviewer: mjne Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself

Hey! Love your story but this last chapter kind of bugged me. I don't like Edward's tone. He seems so cocky about it all. Bella was clear that the ball was in his court and waiting for him to make up his mind about the future. Did he really expect her to call and be angry about him dating. She was heart broken. She accepted her responsibility for what happened and everyone thinks she should just take him by after all this time. I also don't get how Alice thinks this is ok.
Waititng to see what happens next. I really want him to see how much pain she has been in. :) jpl