Reviews by Billiegirl
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123485
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: Billiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent start!  I like your explanation of nomads.  I can imagine them wandering till they were mad with loneliness.  

I love that Edward doesn't have any preconceived notions of turning a human if she's the right one.  

I like the premise.  I can't wait for more.  (hands are clapping as I push Submit, then Next please) 



Author's Response:

Glad you like!

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love the way Edward decides Bella is his mate and then says "Now, how do I get her?"  He's almost child-like and sooo out of his element.  I really like that Alice is not going to interfere, too much.  LOL This is going to be fun.  (Grinning as I push submit)  

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I knew Alice wouldn't be able to keep out.  He he he.  

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Poor Edward, the guy can't catch a break.  You made me remember all those awkward feelings from high school.  ;)  

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'll say it again.  Poor Edward.  I hope he catches a break.  

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Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

It's so nice to see an Edward that is pro-change.  

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Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I'm not liking Mike.  He's getting under my skin.  And what's up with Charlie, can't he see that Mike's a weasel.  Grrrr!  

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Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I really like EPOV.  Poor guy, but like he says: "Soon....very soon."  Hopefully!  



Author's Response:

Hey! Glad you like!

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Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Grrrr!  Charlie needs a whop on the side of the head.  But it's date night! YAY!  

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Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Yay!  Go Bella!  

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Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Uh oh!  Well at least they got a really, really good kiss in. ;)  



Author's Response:

Glad you like it.  The next chapter should be ready in a couple of weeks.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752792
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Billiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores

I had this story favored in fanfiction.net.  When I saw it here i wanted to re-read it and review.  Now that I've written one of my own.  I understand how important these reviews are.  I loved this story the first time, and I'm loving it all over again.  

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Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Femme Docs and Self -conscious Sluts

Your Bella is great!  Don't worry about the age thing.  I was one of those too, as is my daughter.  More and more kids are finishing high-school earlier and/or getting college credit at the same time.  Your story fleshes out just fine.  

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Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Day From Hell

I loved the imagery of little Bella, straddling Andy on a gurney, giving chest compressions as they cross the street from the bar to the ER.  Thumbs Up!   

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Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Avoidance and Disappointment

Not the sharpest tool in the shed, is he?  

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Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Inner Sanctum

I was so busy getting back into the story that I've been forgetting to review.  I can breathe now, she's sleeping on his Egyptian sheets!  Score!  

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Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Runaway Rollercoaster

Silly Bella, got her panties in a wad for nothing.  

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Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Decoys and Deprecation

Sigh....I can relax my knuckles once again. 

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Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: For The First Time

Now I really remember why I wanted to reread this story.  Most romantic dinner-date and first time B&E ever! I'm just gushing with all the love and, phew, I'm going to have a smoke now.  Great chapter.  

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Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Angel's Kiss

I knew what was going to happen, but you are so vivid with descriptions it brought me to tears again!  (sob, sob) 

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Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: For The Love of Esme

Beautiful Esme, beautifully written.  

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195557
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Billiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: First Impressions are Forever

I love the premise.  I can't wait to read the rest. 

Dragon Stones by katmom Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

 

Edward and his dragon companion, Volterra, believe that Volterra's mate is lost...gone either in death or time. 

Bella, a servant in the castle, discovers and makes a connection with Kathea, a long dead dragon. 

She is asked to help with Kathea's daughter. She and the young dragon, ShayTan, become Bond-Mates. 

 DRAGON STONES was the THIRD PLACE WINNER in the

Once Upon a Twilight Contest! 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55360 Read Count: 2688
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Billiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Beginning

Oh my gosh!  I love this!  My two favorite series being woven together.  You are doing an amazing job.  I'm debating on pushing forward all night long and reading the rest of the chapters you have posted or savoring it over time.  Decisions, decisions, decisions...



Author's Response:

You made me laugh!!!

I hope that you did get SLEEP!!!

It tickles me that you enjoyed it enough to NOT sleep...such a lovely thing to hear...but I hope your next day wasn't toooooo bad!

Kathie

Reviewer: Billiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Jasper, Cathair's Rider

Obviously, I chose no sleep.  I am so giddy about this story.  I can visualize it all.  

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Bella, ShayTan's Rider

Wow, just wow.  This story is amazing.  You are amazing.  Thank you for bringing it to life.  

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Edward, Volterra's Rider

I'm dreading the fact that there are only a few more done chapters.  I'm completely immersed in this world.  

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Bella, ShayTan's Rider

Just letting you know how captivating a writer you are, it's now four am and I just can't stop.  

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Esme

YAY, Esme! Great chapter as always so far.  

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Volterra

No, this can't be it!  How often do you update.  I feel like an addict.  



Author's Response:

Hi, Billiegirl! Thanks so much for reading DRAGON STONES...

So sorry that it took me THIS long to thank you for the lovely reviews...and coffee cups!!!

I've just posted ALICE's chapter...and the next will be Bella again...

Kathie